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Prologue

it was very sunny day and Kenji woke up on that warm Sunday morning .
Kenji had been very excited because he was getting his first pokemon today. He went to his drawers and thought what he would wear today “my black t-shirt or my white and red t-shirt”
He ran downstairs grabbed some toast. On his way to professor rowan he saw Lirra the girl who lives next to him. Then she saw Kenji and said “hey Kenji are you going to professor rowan for your first Pokemon”. Kenji said “yes I am but I need to hurry or I’ll be to late as always”. Kenji started to run to professor rowan’s lab when………

To be continued!!


I hope you guys like it
if there are any spelling mistakes please tell me.

all the places in the story are filled


Name: Kenji
Age:15 (he starts of late)
Gender: male
First Pokemon: aipom
10 favourite Pokemon without the legendary ones: (so you get your favourite Pokemon and I still get to choose)
• Ambipom
• Gallade
• Froslass
• Mothim
• Ursaring
• Weavile
• Roserade
• Espeon
• Chimcho
• Raichu
Coordinator, breeder or trainer: coordinator
City you start from and region: Jubilife city in sinnoh
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Lirra:
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Name: Jason
Age:14
Gender: male
First Pokemon: Ralts
10 favourite Pokemon without the legendary ones: (so you get your favourite Pokemon and I still get to choose)
• Gardevoir
• Gallade
• Staraptor
• Ledian
• Meganium
• Butterfree
• Typhlosiion
• Furret
• Empoleon
• Espeon
Coordinator, breeder or trainer: breeder
City you start from and region: Canalave city in Sinnoh, but originally from Violet City in Johto.
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Name: Nick
Age: 10
Gender: male
First Pokemon: Porygon-Z
10 favourite Pokemon without the legendary ones: (so you get your favourite Pokemon and I still get to choose)
• Porygon-Z
• togekiss
• Electivire
• Empoleon
• Magmortar
• Magnezone
• Houndoom
• Umbreon
• Staraptor
• Weavile
Coordinator, breeder or trainer: Trainer
City you start from and region: Twinleaf town (sinnoh)
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Name: David
Age:11
Gender: Male
First Pokemon: Turtwig
10 favourite Pokemon without the legendary ones: (so you get your favourite Pokemon and I still get to choose)
• Torterra
• Wailord
• Steelix
• Ariados
• Mr. Mime
• Electrode
• Venusaur
• Beautifly
• Dustox
• Espeon
Coordinator, breeder or trainer: co-ordinator
City you start from and region: Petalburg City in Hoenn

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Okay sorry to double post but is my fan-fic that bad I hope not
So I now think it’s maybe because of the name so I’m changing that
To Pokemon the mysteries of the stars.

chapter one

Trees and leaves, poke balls and new adventures.

Kenji started to run to professor rowan’s lab when he stumbled over an Aipom
The little monkey Pokemon was dazzled by the sound of the hard fall.
Kenji had a little wound on his knee.
He stood up when all of a sudden professor Rowan came running.
Professor Rowan yelled at Kenji “catch that Aipom before it gets away”.
Kenji jumped after the Aipom and caught it by it’s tail
But the little Aipom moaned so Kenji let it loose.
Strangely enough Aipom didn’t run away in spite of seeing professor Rowan running after him he first gave Kenji a hug and then he was caught in the poke ball of professor Rowan.
Rowan took Kenji with him to his lab and looked trough Kenji’s registration form.
“ahah” he said “so you want to be a coordinator”.
“yes” replied Kenji
Kenji got a ribbon case and a black and purple pokedex.
He got to choose out of three Pokemon a Ralts, a Snorunt, and a Aipom
he recognised the Aipom as the Aipom that hugged him a while ago
so he picked Aipom as it’s partner.
Kenji and Aipom left Rowans lab.
The were just outside when Kenji saw Lirra then he saw that she also had a poke ball
He ran up to her and asked if she just became a Pokemon trainer.
Lirra replied “yes I am when I saw you this morning I already got my Pokemon”
Kenji asked Lirra “what Pokemon did you choose”
Lirra threw her poke ball and a little Snorunt came out of the red light.
“nice Snorunt “ Kenji said Snorunt and Aipom were good friends you could see that they
Knew each other from somewhere.
Lirra all of a sudden decided to go on the journey with Kenji.
And so they headed towards Jubilife city together with Snorunt and Aipom.

I hope you like this chapter better then the prologue
Please comment about what you think should change.
 
Name: Nick
Age: 10
Gender: male
First Pokemon: Porygon
10 favourite Pokemon without the legendary ones: (so you get your favourite Pokemon and I still get to choose)
• Porygon-Z
• togekiss
• Electivire
• Empoleon
• Magmortar
• Magnezone
• Houndoom
• Umbreon
• Staraptor
• Weavile
Coordinator, breeder or trainer: Trainer
City you start from and region: Twinleaf town (sinnoh)
 
Suppose I should join too. ;)
Good luck with this story. :D

Name: Jason
Age:14
Gender: male
First Pokemon: Ralts
10 favourite Pokemon without the legendary ones: (so you get your favourite Pokemon and I still get to choose)
• Gardevoir
• Gallade
• Staraptor
• Ledian
• Meganium
• Butterfree
• Typhlosiion
• Furret
• Empoleon
• Espeon
Coordinator, breeder or trainer: Hmm.. I don't really mind..
I guess I'll be a breeder since you don't have one yet. :p
City you start from and region: Canalave city in Sinnoh, but originally from Violet City in Johto.
 
Name: David
Age:11
Gender: Male
First Pokemon: Turtwig
10 favourite Pokemon without the legendary ones: (so you get your favourite Pokemon and I still get to choose)
• Torterra
• Wailord
• Steelix
• Ariados
• Mr. Mime
• Electrode
• Venusaur
• Beautifly
• Dustox
• Espeon
Coordinator, breeder or trainer: Trainer
City you start from and region: Petalburg City in Hoenn
 
darkrai:your in but you will start off with porygon if that's okay with you (you will be in the story when i get confirmation about porygon)
piplup:your in as a breeder then (you will be in the story from the next chapter)
6294:i already have trainer i only need a coordinator now

chapter 2 coming in a zippy
 
frozengallade said:
darkrai:your in but you will start off with porygon if that's okay with you (you will be in the story when I get confirmation about porygon)
piplup:your in as a breeder then (you will be in the story from the next chapter)
6294:I already have trainer I only need a coordinator now

chapter 2 coming in a zippy
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Yeah I won't mind :D! But how will it evolve *system crash, ERROR!!! ERROR!!!*
 
Chapter 2
Are you nuts or confused

On they’re way to Jubilife city Kenji and Lirra were talking about the past
about how they met, how they grew up and how they hoped they be the best.
They talked until Kenji saw a wide open field Kenji said to Lirra “let’s rest here a while”
And so they unpacked some food and rested a while then Kenji got the idea to start
With some training for his first contest in Jubilife city.
“go Aipom “ he yelled and aipom came popping out of the ball with a red glow
“Aipom us swift and move your tail up down up down” Kenji said
The stars shined everywhere but even though Aipom was practising he was a little absent because he heard something strange
And before Kenji could ask what was going on a cute little Ralts jumped out of the bushes.
The
Ralts instantly used confusion and Aipom lost control over itself.
Aipom started to use swift against every tree every bush every flower in the open field.
The whole field was ravaged and then a trainer came running along
He said “oh no Ralts did you confuse those Pokemon”.
The trainer was a kid named Jason he was 14 years old and lived in Canalave city
But he just moved away from violet city in Jotho.
“I’m so sorry sometimes Ralts just goes out of control and then he* confuses everyone”
Jason said Kenji began thinking and then he said “maybe you just need to train your Ralts and the best way to train a Pokemon is by battling so Jason I want to battle you” Kenji said
Jason accepted and so the battle began

He* spoiler : Ralts + male = figure it out

I have made some tc for the charachters
 
6294 your character come sin at the jubilife contest the same for darkrai you two travel together

ps thx fr the tc
 
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