Writing Pokemon - -Trainers and Rangers alike (I intend to finish this one)

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"Thunder strikes and the wind shouts, rain drops and hail hit the rooftops. The Howl of a new beggining emerges. The town stays in terror. As the great god rising from the mountain to do great carnage on the land. The rock slides fall and avalanches tremble.
The beast teleports from the mountains in front of the great hall, it charged up it's beam and threw it's head down. Suddenly the ancient ruins were reduced to a steaming pile of ash. He turned to the Village. His eyes glowed wild red, he roared and charged through the empty village destroying it as it went.
A new creature has been born...
This is the legend of Arceus with the lords of time and space"



Chapter 1
Discovery

Drew walked down the street, Pidgeys tweeting the night. Taking his Ranger jacket off, he yawned as he waltz up to the door of the ranger base. The lettering on the side 'FTRB' standing for Fuschia Town Ranger Base. Drew walked through the automatic doors and scanned his keycard through the side. He threw the jacket on the chair and sat down at one of the desks
"Good evening Mr. Drew, you have 1 new message awaiting, would you like to read it?", A lady pleasently greeted.
"Yeah, might as well have a bit of company.", Drew replied in a tired voice.
"Coming right up sir.", The lady smiled while her hands clamped together.
Drew filed his paper just in time for the table to open up in the middle, and a small TV came up in front of Drew. The Television tuned in and a man with glasses and blonde hair came up in the middle of the screen, sitting on a green Ranger Base couch. He pushed his glasses up to the top of his nose and took a deep breath.
"There is an ergent matter to our leaders attention, town Snowpoint has been entirely destroyed."
"What!?", Drew Questioned
"An unrecognised pokemon has rampaged all over the the town. Amazingly no-one was killed or hurt. They were evacuated before the creature came due, a bad thunderstorm had hit before hand, and a stronger was recorded (Recorded?) to attack"
The man pushed his glasses up again and spoke.
"We need you to come up to the Town with us, even though it still may be unstable, if we delay, it may be valuable time waisted. We will have powerfull trainers included just to be sure no powerfull creatures attack."
"Hmmm, what about the people, are they in a safe area?"
"Well", the man said pushing his glasses up once more "That is also a problem, we are discussing how much we need to donait for this sudden expression. How also much funding we need to get to grips with this. And of course, where to put them, before there homes can be rebuild"
"Well, yes I will get there as soon as I can", Drew explained
"Glad to hear, we are already at Snowpoint, just finishing off the paper work"
The TV folded into the desk, and Drew walked over to the chair were his jacket lay.
"Glora", He talked to the woman at the desk "Cancel all my missions, I have to get somewhere urgently"
"I heard sir, don't worry, I will explain it all myself"
"Thanks, your a star"
Drew put on his jacket as the door to the elevator opened. A few minutes later he appeared right next to the dark blue sky. A man turned and nodded at Drew, he nodded back and jumped onto the large Pidgeot.

Half an hour later, Drew appeared just outside of the SnowPoint City Ranger Base. The man with the blonde hair turned as he was talking to some trainers about the breifing.
"Drew, I am glad you made it", The man said
"Well I have to, I am the leader of most of the Kanto ranger bases, I have to come, Jack"
"Good, these trainers will fil you in.", Jack explained, pushing his glasses up
Drew walked over to the two trainers that Jack was talking to. A pair of trainers that could easily face up to the elite four.
"Drew, how long has it been?", The trainer with the white hair asked with crossed arms.
"RHYS!, Hey man...", Drew replied.
They both shook hands and patted each other on there backs.
"So what's the talk?", Drew asked, flexing his wrists
"We don't really know, the only thing we know is that this wasn't made by a hord of ravaging Ryhorn's."
Drew smiled and nodded.
"What time did this hapen?", Drew asked
"Well all we know is that it happened during the second storm, of which I am sure general Jack has already told you about, soooo around 6:00 PM to 3:00 AM.
Drew bit his upper lip as the two trainers walked off.
"Jack, when are we going to start the investigation?", Drew said walking passed the soft snow that fell from the air.
"Whenever, just inform me and the other general and take at least two other people along with you" Jack explained
"Thanks, I'll take Rhys and Joanna", Drew replied

They both nodded and Drew turned around, he walked towards the two trainers and asked if they could go with them, they agreed and Drew talked to the other General. They both made there way to the mountain and soon made it to an open cave, by this point the snow had picked up with the wind and became stronger. They made it into the dark cold cave, Rhys pulled out a poke ball and out came a helpfull Magmortar, he ordered it to use flash, and keep it out to keep the team at a reasonable temperature.

As they walked on they bumped into a dead end with weird carvings on the wall.
"Huh!", Joanne, stared with her mouth wide open
"Hmm, must be some ancient carvings", Rhys said, putting his hand on the wall.
"A picture of a weird four legged Pokemon stands before two other four legged Pokemon, and another Pokemon, but this time floating, and with multiple arms. The crude drawing is weird", Drew frowned
Drew took a deep breath, he roled his black shirt sleeve up and he pressed a few buttons on his arm band.
"What's that?", Joanne asked
I am sending Jack a text message, he should know about this.", Drew said, cricking his neck.
Drew rolled his sleeves back up and shivered.
"Why does it have to be so cold", Drew complained "And why didn't I bring a coat, I knew it was going to be snowpoint."
"So where is your main Pokemon, I heard the Rangers had there very own Pokemon to travell with...", Rhys questioned
"Look on your shoulder", Drew smirked
Rhys looked on his shoulder, only to find a Ditto was lying on both his shoulders.
"Waah!", Rhys shouted in shock
"Calm down calm down, here....", Drew settled
Drew carefully took the ditto of Rhys's shoulders and placed him on the floor. It slid away into one of the corners, since it didn't meet any other pokemon much, aspecially a big Pokemon like Magmortar, due to the fact that Drew almost always worked alone, of course if neccersary with helper Pokemon but just not with other people. Finally Jack came in with the 2 other Rangers. Drew came to the corner and picked up the goo like Ditto. It then scurried it's way into Drew's ticket pocket on his jacket.
"Oh christ, why is everyone a ranger these days," Joanna moaned as Jack and the other two people followed.
One of the rangers snarled at the Magmortar, and Rhys instantly frowned at him.
"Tch, idiot", Rhys muttered
As Jack walked onwards his eyes widened, suddenly he grew to a stop and took a minute to look at the sculpture.
Under it it had this exact writing -
A war between Matter, Time, Space and a god shall rage before the human's eye's
"Hmmm, we need experts, get me on the phone to Chlore, NOW!", Jack ordered "Ken, take pictures of this and send it to her. The Ranger took out his stylus and pressed a few buttons and a few flashes beamed out, the other Ranger took out a phone and passed it to Jack as he walked passed.
"Hello, yeah it's Jack, I have some important news to take care of.", Jack exposed as he walked straight out of the cave.
"What do you think it's about Drew?", Asked Joanne
"I dunno, I guess it's about...I dunno", Drew repeated "But it's clearly important."
"For your information, this is an ancient carving of a war that took place hundreds of years ago. It explains the tale of what happened at the beggining of the universe and the leftovers, was the universe. That's the theory anyhow, but being such a pack of rookies I wouldn't expect that you would know about this stuff!", Ken laughed as he put his stylus back.
Drew grew annoyed and just barely kept his mouth from opening.
Jack instantly came in and said to all of them in the cave
"All of you, come with me, Chlore has just told me a town has sustained injuries, but they can easily be repaired, one team come with me, the other, examine the mountain.

"You better go, considering a rookie shouldn't check this type of terrain or problem.", The Ranger commented
"GRrrr", Drew growled as he walked passed the two rangers
"Get over it Drew, we need to act fast and seal of the area", Jack frowned walking out of the cave yet again.
"Mind me asking but what city is this?", Drew said, raising an eyebrowe
"It's Vermillion", Jack grunted, crashing down the stairs.
Drew stopped in his place with wide eyes opened, Vermillion city was his home town and he had been there just the week before. Rhys puleld his hand from his pocket and lifted it on top of his magmortar's head pattinglighttly he pulled his other hand which of holding a pokeball and placed the Pokemon inside. Drew came to and ran towards the two pidgeots await of which they were to fly to Vermillion. Of courtse the weather had picked up, but these were specially trained Pidgeots....
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What do you think? :)
 
Chapter 2
Disbelieve​
The four arrived an hour later, near the S.S. anne and surprisingly it could still sail, but L.t. Surg acting as the mayor, told them not to set sail, due to bad electrical problems that may sink the ship. As the four walked passed, L.t. Surg was mending some of the houses with a machamp helping. Jack walked over and started to talk to him. As Jack walked onwards Drew looked around as the semi- destroyed houses still in wreck. Familys, checking inside for valuables and the massive trauma that had been caused.
"What a mess", Joanne gasped
"This was my home town", Drew stared with his mouth slightly open.
"Unlucky...", Rhys turned his head "How about your par-"
"Dead", Drew interrupted as he looked down "They moved when I was 17, I had already moved to Fuschia and they moved to the village in 3 Island, they past away just 2 years ago.", Drew continued
Drew lifted his head up and turned his head to the walking Jack coing towards them.
Jack coughed and took a little breath
"Drew, since your the only Ranger here, come with me"
Drew walked forwards two steps, turned around and said
"See ya", As he walked off
The two trainers walked towards LT. Surg and began to talk to him.
Drew caught up with Jack.
"We need you, as the only qualified Ranger around here then we need you to help out in the darker area's of the S.S. Anne. Not only is it for Holidays and leisure but it can be used for disasters also. Many inhabitants found there bway out thanks to this, so many injuries was reduced.", Jack stated as they walked inside.
The silence of the ship was disturbing as the sailors was transported out.
Drew walked off and shouted.
"I know what to do", As he closed the door nehind him.
Jack smirked and turned around, he walked out into the cold, now raining electrical city
Jack pulled out a pokebal from his jacket and looked at it. He smiled and pushed his glasses up to the top of his nose.

Drew entered the Kitchen, the light didn't work, but luckily there was a poster of a Pikachu on the wall with a sunny background and the text under it saying.

Every cloudy day always brightens up
Drew got the Ditto out of his pocket and it went over to the poster. It looked at the happy pikachu and changed it's shape to make a joyfull, purple pikachu. He clicked his fingers and the Ditto used a thunder shock on all of the light bulbs.
Suddenly the room lit up an it revealed a room of dirty and broken plates.
"Hm!", Drew raised an eyebrow and lowered the other. "Ditto, C'mon"
"SQUIT SQUIT SQUIT", The Ditto Pikachu ran has he made a weird noise that he always does.
Drew opened the door to the Cafeteria as 3 Ariados dropped from the ceiling.
Again, Drew ordered the Ditto to use a thundershock on the Light bulbs, but this time he was shocked to find a sailor passed out on one of the desks.
Drew clenched his teeth and grunted, and ran towards him.

"SQQQUUIIIT!!", The Ditto shouted.
Drew stopped just before a massive hole in the ground, with Sharpedo's swimming around.
Drew turned to the Ditto and stuck his thum up at him and smiled. He carefully shimmeing across the gap, with a few drops of water flying to his face. Drew grunted and made it to the end of the hole.
He got to the unconceouss sailor and turned it around to face him, only to find it was a Gengar in the same clothes, it laughed and in Drews face. Drew turned around and saw dozens of Spinerack and Ariados sourrounding him. Ditto climbed up his shoulder and Drew ordered the Ditto Pikachu to use Thunder. Al of a sudden in a flash, ten Ariados were gone and 5 more charged towards Drew.
"Stylus ON!", Drew shouted as he pulled out his Stylus.
'Swish Swish', in a few lengths of the Stylus, 3 Ariados were caught. The Ariados became furios and started to spit more and more toxic. Drews Stylus took a strong hit and almost broke in one.
"Huh!?, these are no ordinary Ariados!", Drew panted
Finally Drew came to an end after catching the Ariados and spinerack, he then set them free.
He asked Ditto to use the last of his electric energy to fuel his Stylus back of to full and set off outside of the ship, back the way he came.

Just outside Jack was talking on the phone to someone.
"Yes...I will get onto it right away..."
Jack closed his phone just after Drew came out.
" Ah Drew!, How was it? Safe to go in?", Jack went on
"No way man, It's like a spiders nest in there...In fact it is!", Drew said, with his eyes wide open.
"Hmm", Jack mumbled, pushing his glasses up
He turned around and smirked, following by saying
"Go find Rhys and Joanna again, since you are a qualified trainer"
"Yeah, I will head to the pokemon center first though.", Drew replied
"Of course, of course"
Drew nodded and ran towards the pokemon center just passed Rhys and Joanna.
A few minutes later he came out ith a belt full of 5 pokeballs and his Ditto on his shoulder.Drew smiled and started to run over to Rhys and Joanna.
"Hey, you guys", Drew panted, as both of them turned around. "I need your help, the S.S. Annes being torn apart by some ... weird Ariados."
Joanna smirked and chuckled while running her hand through her Voilet hair.
"Ariados, eh?"
"Hmm?, Drew questioned
"Oh yeah, I forgot to tell you, Joanna, not only a great trainer, who can stand at least in the top five of the Indigo Plateu but she also is an amazing pokemon specialist.
"And, Johto is just my specialty", Joanna boasted "Be carefull of there swarm ability, it can cause trouble for most of your pokemon, Rangers and Trainers alike. They are fast on there feet, so be sure for your pokemon to be on the highest guard, and usually they form in groups, just like the pokedex says - It attaches silk to its prey and sets it free. Later, it tracks the silk to the prey and its friends. so they can be a lethal asset or enemy to your team."
"Cooooool", Drew said, with his mouth wide open.
Rhys walked off to the S.S. Anne as Drew and Joanna, talked and followed behind him.

"So be on your tip toes", Joanna said as they arrived just outside the enterance.
"Thanks", Drew smiled
"No problem", Joanna smiled back.
 
It's a nice story, however, you should shorten the dialogue, and increase the number of plot points. If we want text, we'll read a comic :p
 
Yeah, I was thinking that as well. I seem to like dialouge...I think I read to much manga XD
But the next chapter has a lot more action in it, I ill go into detail for less dialouge.
 
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