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Pants on the ground...
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Citidark Island:
Greevil: I can't beleve that kid managed to beat me and make off with XD001,
Cipher Grunt: we've found high activity under Mount Battle.
Greevil looks on to the screen.
Greevil: Zoom in, closer... closer... now activate the heat scaner. Yes, it's awaken, that peskey brat might have made of with XD001, but he won't stand a chance against XD002.


Pokemon XD 2: Time of Darkness

2 Years Later at Michel's Mom's House

Chapter 1
Michel: Come on Ace the water is fine.
Mom: i see Lugia is taking a liking to water.
Michel: well he is the "Guardian of the Sea" and mom could you stop calling him Lugia, his name is Ace.
just then the bush near the edge of the lake rustles.
Michel: Zaprong!!! i was looking every where for you!!!
Mom: when did you get an Electubuzz??
Michel: I never showed you???? o'yay i never did.
then he pulls out three pokeballs and throws them and out comes a Shelgon, a Magmar, and an Eevee.
Michel: hey Drago you awake?!? Hothorn (Hot-thorn) are you still tired?!? Lily how many fingers am i holding up??
Mom: your Eevee never evolved????
Michel: it did, this is it's Baby, i call her Lily. Everybody else is at the HQ.
Mom: there's been excavation on Mount Battle, i guess Vander finally realized that battling on a volcano is dangerous.
Michel: O' that reminds me, Mount Battle wasn't that so hard. I thought how you would like to have Lily stay here because she's still young so I got this guy at Mount Battle. Come on out!!!! Hydro.
out popped a Totodile.
then all of a sudden a sudden earthquake happened and lasted for about a second and then then a scream of a pokemon came from the direction of Mount Battle.
Mom: what was that??
Michel: i don't know but i'm going to find out, come on Ace, Drago, Zaprong, Hothorn, and Hydro back into your pokeballs.
Michel sets out to Mount battle to find out what all the fuss is about.
End of Chapter 1

Chapter 2
Mom: do be carefull!!
Michel: i will!
Jovi: i was playing with Plusle when there was an earth quake mommy, where's Michel going???
Mom: I don't know dear but he'll be O.K.
Michel took out Ace's pokeball and threw it, out popped Ace and he jumped on his back and flew to Mount Battle.
Michel: you think you no what's going on Ace????
Ace just looked at him puzzled.
Michel: how come there are so many Helicopters on the top of the Mounta... wait Ace!!!! Vander's at the entrance of Mount Battle, and he looks hurt. Come on Ace!!
They flew down to where Vander was.
Michel: what happened?? Who are these people???
Vander: i don't know who they are but there looking for a pokemon.
Michel: i'll go up there and stop them, you should stay down here and i'll go for help when these people are gone.
Vander: O.K.
Michel: come on Ace!!!
He flies up to the top of Mount Battle and finds himself expected buy the people.
Voice: well, well if it isn't the little pest and XD001
Michel looks down and sees Cipher Admin Gorigan.
Michel: don't call him that!!! Go Hothorn!! Use fire Blast!!
Gorigan: what no hello???? Go Abomasnow!! Shadow Freeze!
Michel: Hothorn use Mega Punch.
Voice: Stop!!!!!
Michel looks behind him and sees Vander.
Vander: can you people stop. you could make the volcano erupt!!! (winks in the corner of his eye)
Gorgain: thats the signal, go Snag Ball!! We need XD001 back.
Michel then turns around just to see Ace get taken away from him.
Michel: How!!! Vander what have you done!!!
Vander: this was all buy me!!
Then he pulls of his face (mask) to reveal Snagem Leader Gonzap.
Gonzap: you probably don't remember this but when we stole your Snag Machine from when you were investigating the Cruiser Libra we copied it right down to the type of metle used for it. then we put this technology into the ball ,only reversed, that your beloved Lugia is in. and i'm not Snagem Leader any more. i'm Cipher Co Leader Gonzap now.
Michel was speech less.
Gorgain: well our job is done, and the others got the pokemon Ciphler was looking for while Vander, i mean Gonzap told you to come up here, the other fleet just obtained our new specimen for our shadow project.
Michel: where's Vander!?!?!?!
Gorgain: why Tell you when we could hold him for hostage.
Gonzap: you idiot you just told him!!!!
Cipher flew off leaving Michel on top of Mount Battle crying for Ace to come Back.
End of Chapter 2

Chapter 3
Michel:......
Michel just sits there watching Cipher make off with Ace.Thyen Michel notices the valcano is very close to erupting.
Michel: That volcano is very close to erupting.
then he looks over the ledge of the volcano
Michel (Astonished): how am i going to get down!!!!! The only way is to fly down and Ace is the only one who can fly.
the volcano started to rumble.
Michel: ahhhh!! i'd better find a way down and quick!!! Everybody come one out i need your help!!
he sends out all of his pokemon. Then he notices Ace's pokeball is gone.
Michel: They knew that i could get Ace back if i just returned him to his pokeball. Forget it we have to get off this volcano now. Come on guys!!!! I need ideas to get down from here!!!
all of the pokemon look at Drago.
Michel: o' thats right!!!! Shelgons evolve into Salamences. And i have a Rare Candy in my bag..... which i left at home. Any other i deas???
the volcano rumbled violently.
Michel (Thinking): i could us Zaprong... no, maybe... no.
Hydro starts to sweat so it uses water gun to cool itself off
then michel notices some of the water that drizzled onto the magma hardened the magma.
Michel: I'v got it!!! Hydro use Hydro Cannon on the Magma over.... there.
Hydro uses Hydro Cannon and the Magma hardened.
Michel: everybody back into your pokeballs!!! except you Hydro.
He rushes across the hardened Magma before it breaks. and does this all down Mount Battle.

Mean wile on Citidark Island
Gonzap: Master Greevil we have obtained XD002 and is now in the Shadow Chamber.
Gorgain: and have obtained an escapee.
then Gorgain points to the far left screen of the control screens.
Greevil: Good work, now that we have both shadow pokemon to lead are army. With Lugia and Dialga leading it.
Gonzap: and the pesky boy on top of the volcano ready to be chared by the lava.
Greevil: good, now to enter Phase Two, capturing the pokemon to fill the part in being XD003!! No one will stop us when weve captured him!!! (evil laugh) muahahahahahahahahahhaha.
End of Chapter 3

Chapter 4
Back to Michel on Mount Battle
Michel: hang on Hydro were almost done.
KABOOOSH!!!!!! The volcano exploded and rained Magma
Michel: Ahhhhhhhhh, go Hothorn!!!! Use reflect
Hothorn used reflect and protected Michel from the falling Magma.
Michel: nice job Hothorn!!!!! O.K. let's... Ahhhhhh!!!
He slipped on a rock and fell toward the Magma. Then Hydro used Water Gun saving Michel from a fiery doom.
Michel: Hydro, your a life saver, we better get down before...
The rock started to break.
Michel: Ahhhhhhhh!!!! Come on guys, Hothorn back in your pokeball!!! Hydro keep that water flowing!!!
Hydro kept on using Water Gun all down Mount Battle
After many hours and water Michel finally made it down the volcano.
Michel: wow i've forgotten how soft the grass was. Now to head for home.
At Home.
Mom: is that you Michel???
Michel: Yay.
Mom: So what was all the fuss???
Michel Paused
Michel (thinking): i can't tell Mom that Ace is gone, i was almost killd two times and Ciphers back and kidnaped Vander.
Michel: Nothing happened, Vander was doing some remodling, thats all
Mom: O'... Where are you going????
Michel: i don't Know but i'll be fine, i have my PDA if you need me.
Michel's Mom was puzzeled, but then remembered the last adventure he did.
Mom: just be carefull.
Michel picked up his bag and set out to find Ace.

On Citidark Island
Greevil: How are our specimens
Cipher Researcher: Dialga Has a maxed out reading on the scans but lugia is still fighting off the Shadowy Aura
Greevil: set Lugia's chamber to max
Cipher Researcher: but that could kill it!!
Greevil: that was an order!!!!!
Cipher Researcher: setting XD001's chamber to max.
Greevil. and put Dialga back in it's ball, i have the perfect persont to take him on a test drive.
End of Chapter 4

Chapter 5
Michel pulls a map out of his bag
Michel (Mumbling): i'm glad i didn't forget to bring my bag.
Starts pointing at the map.
Michel: So if i go this way and then go that way, or go that way then this way... which way is the fastest???
he keeps on mumbling to himself untill he passes a bus stop. And a man is waiting there.
Man: are you lost????
Michel: kind of, do you know the way to Gateon Port????
Man: Yes i do but the road is blocked, your going to have to go through Agate Village, then go to Oasis Poke Spot, then make your way to Gateon Port.
Michel: thank you!!!! so i'd better get ready for this... um i'll stop in Agate Village to stock up on supplies then i'll go to Oasis Pokespot, maybe find a pokemon and then get to Gateon Port to take the Robo Kyogre to Citidark Island... that's where i assume there keeping Ace and Vander.

Back At The Bus Stop:
Dark Figure: hay old man have you seen this boy!?!?
The figure holds up a picture of Michel.
Man: why yes i have seen him, he is going that way... why????
Dark Figure: the things i do don't involve you.
then the figure walks the way Michel went.
End Of Chapter 5

Chapter 6
As Michel was walking on the road he saw a flier being blown around in the wind. Michel picked it up. The flier said: Pokemon Tornament. first prize is an egg of your choice along with a complete set of an elec.... and a magm....
Michel: Wow this should be good!!! And.... The contest is today!!!. In Agate Village.
Michel crumpled up the flier and rushe down the road.
Not to long after the dark figure pucked up the crumpeled piece of paper, mumbled something to himself and threw it back on the ground.

At Agate Village
Michel: Excuse me sir but do you know where is the Tornament being held
Man: in the Agate Colosseum over there.
Michel: Thank you.
Then Michel rushed to the counter.
Michel: Am i too late????
Tournament Assistant: To sign up, then your right in time. I just need your name and....
1 minute later
Tournament Assistant: Thank you, you will be number 4935. the tournament starts in about an hour so that'll give you time to prepare o and i forgot but you can only use 3 Pokemon in the final round so i'd get your pokemon ready!!
Michel: Thank You.
Michel: o.k. well preliminaries start in about 5 minutes so i better get ready. Come on out Hothorn, Zaprong, Hydro, and Drago!!
out poped his pokemon Then a voice came over the loud speaker
Voice: would #4935 and.... #0021 make there way to the battle zone 00554.
Michel: i guess thats me.

At battle zone 00554
Official: this'll be a 2 on 2 battle between contestents #0021 and #4935.
Contestents #0021: Call me Trent
Official: let the battle begin!!!!!!
Trent: go!!!!!!! Porygon Z!!
Michel: Go!!! Hydro
Trent: Porygon Z, Thunder Bolt
Michel Hydro Dodge and use....
It was too late the Thunder Bolt Was too fast
Official: Totodile is unable to battle, #4935 choose your next pokemon.
Michel: it's time to fight electric with electric, Ge Zaprong!!!!!! Cross Chop!!!!
Trent: Porygon Z!!!!!!! no!!!!
Official: Porygon Z is unabel to battle, #0021 chose your next pokemon!!!
Trent: Go Garchomp!!!!!!
Michel (thinking): Great i'm about to be creamed by a Ground Pokemon....
Michel: Zaprong use Ice Punch!! then Cross Chop!
Trent: no!!!
Official: #4935 is the winner!!!!!
Battle after battle Michel won every one and made it to the finals.
Official: This is a 3 on 3 battle between Contestant #4935 and #4936... begin!!!!!!
The crowed cheered
#4936: go Gabite!!!
Michel: Go Zaprong!!!!
#4936: Gabite Dig
Michel: Zaprong, use Protect.
#4936: Gabite use Sandstorm!!!!
Michel: Zaprong use Ice Punch!!!!
Gabite was taken down
Official: Gabite is unable to battle, #4936 choose your next Pokemon
#4936: Go!!!! Charmeleon!!! Use Earthquake!!!!!
Zaprong Was taken down.
Official: Electubuzz is unable to battle, #4935 choose your next Pokemon
Michel: Go!! Hothorn, use sustitute.
#4936: Charmeleon use Earthquake
Michel: Hothorn use Focus Punch
Official: Charmeleon is unable to battle, #4936 choose your next Pokemon
#4936: Go the Guardian of time... Dialga or XD002.
Out came XD002 standing higher than the stadium
Michel: who are you?????
#4936: you worst nightmare!!!!!!!
End of Chapter 6
 
RE: Pokemon XD 2: Time of Darkness

more more more need to know more!
 
RE: Pokemon XD 2: Time of Darkness

you like it or are you just saying that, i'm waiting to get a lot of posts then i'll do chapter two
 
RE: Pokemon XD 2: Time of Darkness

yes i like it and im not just saying that!!!!! Its really cool! MAke the new chapter soon please?
 
RE: Pokemon XD 2: Time of Darkness

ok, ever since i got pokemon XD gale of darkness and beat it i said to my self, if there's a XD001, why not an XD002?? you know what i mean
 
RE: Pokemon XD 2: Time of Darkness

i know what xd002 is already (Ho-oh '_')
 
RE: Pokemon XD 2: Time of Darkness

you shure??? i ain't sayin nothing untill the part in the story comes along

plese people comment on my sequel to gale of darkness... TIME of darkness
 
RE: Pokemon XD 2: Time of Darkness

do you really need more comments? ON my first few chapters of my fanfic i had only 2 readers and commenters. Just make the rest of the chapters and more people will come along you will see im telling you! And could you read my fanfic and see if you like it? I will give you the link in a private message.

PS: (This PS has nothing to do with the topic): Whats going on with the swinub bussiness?
 
RE: Pokemon XD 2: Time of Darkness

TIME of darness... hmmm with that, I thinks it's dialga, or groudon for being at mt. battle. Anyways, your fanfic is really PWNsome!
 
RE: Pokemon XD 2: Time of Darkness

Celebi - XD002. There's a Celebi Shrine, and Time in the title. Also both are from Johto.
 
RE: Pokemon XD 2: Time of Darkness

ssb4ever said:
ok, ever since i got pokemon XD gale of darkness and beat it i said to my self, if there's a XD001, why not an XD002?? you know what i mean

There was no XD002 because Michael stopped Cipher before they could create any more Pokemon like Lugia (XD001).

Had Michael sat on his duff and twiddled his thumbs rather than go save the world, XD001 wouldn't have been the only one.

I'm curious as to where this story will lead.
 
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