Writing Rage's Story: A Tale of Despair, Misery, and Sadness

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Chapter 1: The Prologue

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It was a stormy day on the island of Kenji-Kaito 8D. Rage the red hedgehog who was Shadow's brother looked out the window distressed.

Rage: Wow today is going to be bad I can sense the power levels, and these are not your normal every-day power levels!

Peaisy(Rage's girlfriend
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) came up to rage and put her hand on his shoulder.

Peaisy: I can see in your eyes that something is very wrong. What's wrong?

Rage: It's my friend... he's in trouble...

Peaisy: Oh my goodness your should help your friend. Which of your friends is it?

Rage: It's...

Rage took a deep breath, knowing that this specific friend who was encountering trouble was one which had been able to fend off for his own for years without the need of assistance, and in knowing that knew that this new threat was going to be one the likes that nobody on the planet had ever seen before. Things were going to get bad. FAST!

Rage followed with another deep breath.

Peaisy could tell by Rage's face that thing weren't good. FAST!

"...Goku", spoke Rage.

And in the blink of an eye Rage blasted off to help Goku. Leaving Peaisy to gaze at the tail of his flight as he hyper boosted into the distance.

Peasiy knew it was serious.

First a little back-story, when SPOILER ALERT Goku died at the end of Dragonball GT his spirit wasn't transported to the King Kai's Planet but rather to Kenji-Kaito 8D for some mysterious reason. And while Goku has been satisfied with his stay for the most part his reasoning for being there seems to be mostly unanswered. For now.

Rage caught up to Goku (It didn't take long, he is a hedgehog after all).

Rage: What's wrong Goku, you look beat up but I don't see anything.

Goku was lying unconscious on the ground.

Rage: Goku NO!

Goku had been killed. Again. But how and by whom, Rage said.

Out of the corner of Rage's eye he caught a glimpse of a large beast that quickly thrusted itself underground.

Rage: You're not going to get away from me, you friend-murderer!

Rage didn't get a clear look at the creature itself, he had absolutely nothing to go by he had never seen or heard of anything of the sort and had no way of figuring out what it was.

Then he knew what it was.

It was...




TO BE CONTINUED IN CHAPTER 2
 
Great story so far. So... some DBZ + Sonic action, eh? I have an idea for you.

DBZ

+ Sonic

+ Anything from Sparta

Seriously. Win.

I hope we'll see some "OVER 9000" action goin' on soon. Great read ;P
 
Hahaha

Is... is the dreaded friend murderer... Knuckles (or perhaps Fisty the Echidna)?
 
My money's on Big the Cat. I can't wait for Ch.2.

dmaster out.
 
I love how interesting and original the main character is. Actually, come to think of it, the character originality is truly what makes this story one-of-a-kind. This 1st chapter was short but very sweet, there truly are no words to express how very impressed I am.

Needs more Parasect, though.
 
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