Writing Ryan Kilgore - Journey of An "Ordinary" Trainer

Ryan Kilgore

Aspiring Trainer
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Okay guys, this is my first attempt at something like this ever. I have a lot of creativity in my mind right now, and I'm in the mood for a story. I've got things planned out in my head and trust me things WILL get better. Don't rag me from the first post, that's all I ask of you.

Thank you for your kindness. Also, I will fix the format. I'm tired and it's past midnight so I know it needs some work. For now at least it's easy to read, I believe.




(*Note, anything mentioning Ash or other parts of his series is mostly referring to the game story rather than the old anime, as I haven't seen that in years (or probably a mix of the two). Also, I do make a few things up here and there to add my own touch to the story. So if you have a problem with that don't complain or anything. (you'll see what I mean) )

(**Also, food is based on typical food here where I live (America), as this is mostly just for the joy of writing a story and I'm not gonna be bothered to explain why he's eating pancakes for breakfast in Japan...or wherever he is...wait...isn't it a made up world? Well, you get the picture.)

Everyone here definitely knows of Ash by now. Those who've followed his story should remember his first steps. His home town. His first pokemon.

But this story isn't about Ash. This story is about Ryan, and his own adventures. Ash's fame slowly grows throughout his adventures, while Ryan...well, he's just an ordinary trainer. Certainly not one you'd expect to read a story about. At least, that's what is widely believed.

Zoom back to a few years ago. Ash is now well on his way to obtaining his first Pokemon. On the other side of Pallet Town, a different adventure is ready to begin...

"Ryan, for the last time, come down and eat your breakfast before it gets cold! I slave myself over the stove and in this kitchen and... ...cant even... ...dumb video games... ...in 3 minutes..."

Ryan yawned. He was hardly paying attention to her voice, he zoned in and out every few seconds to hear that she was still going at it. She was probably complaining about him playing his beloved games all morning instead of going down to eat breakfast, or doing something more productive.

But he couldn't be stopped, it was like a ritual to him. At least, until his stomach began to growl.

"Oh man...I think I'm done...I'm ready for some pancakes!" exclaimed Ryan.

The sweet, syrupy scent had been tempting him for nearly twenty minutes, and he could no longer handle it. He rushed downstairs and jumped into his chair eagerly, at first not even realizing that his oh-so-desired pancakes had been replaced by a rather visually unappetizing health bar.

"WHAT?!" Ryan nearly shouted. He was appalled. He wanted his pancakes!

"Your fault. We ate already. If you didn't have your head so deeply buried into that pillow, or television, or game system, whatever you were doing up there, you could have actually had time to eat pancakes. But now you've used up all your time, so you get to eat that."

Ryan groaned. It's not his fault the games were so addicting. And now he's being starved for it! He ate the repulsive oat bar and went back upstairs, his head hanging. Then he remembered what day it was.

"It's...already noon! Crap! I'd better get dressed and hurry!"

Today was the day that new trainers were being initiated. Him and his pal Brandon, along with a couple of other trainers he didn't know (but seemed to know each other, judging by the way they argued back and forth as if rivals), were to obtain their very first pokemon today.

With his newly replenished excitement and energy, he quickly threw on a solid black shirt, a pair of jeans, and socks and shoes. He rushed over to the bathroom and looked in the mirror. No more time to get ready. He quickly tussled his medium length, brown hair with his fingers for a few seconds, shook his head a few times, and looked into the mirror again. 'That'll have to do' he thought to himself.

He walked back downstairs and began to walk out the door, then was promptly stopped by his mother.

"Leaving, without even saying goodbye? You know better than that, Ryan."

"Sorry Mom...I'm in a big rush, I'm running late, it's already 10 past noon." replied Ryan.

"I know...I just want you to know, you can come home whenever you need to take a break. It's a long journey, and I'm proud of you for being brave enough to travel it. Just like your father was."

"Thanks Mom...hey, tell you what...before I leave, I'll come back and show you my brand new pokemon! That way I can hurry and leave now, and save the goodbye for later. I'm late!!"

"I know, dear. Go for it! Tell your friend Brandon I said hi!"

"I will, Mom. See you later!"

And with that, he was finally out the door. He ran for a few minutes until he finally reached the professor's lab, eager as ever to get his new pokemon! But when he got there...

"Huh...? Where is everyone? Oh, they're probably all inside..." Ryan thought to himself, slightly worried.

He walked into the lab to see Professor Oak hunched over at his desk, deep at work it seemed, as usual.

"Professor...? What's going on? Where is everyone..?"

The professor raised his head and, upon seeing Ryan, rose from his wooden chair and walked over to him.

"Glad you made it, Ryan. Ever heard of daylight savings time?" he said, amused.

"WHAT?! You've got to be kidding me! You've got to be! I can't have...missed the ceremony again...I was ready this time...." exclaimed Ryan, in disbelief.

"I figured it would happen. I forgot to send out reminders to you all yesterday afternoon. So it's partially my fault." said Oak, moving his hands around in his coat pockets, "so, I think it's fair to cut you a break this time. Three is enough, and I believe you actually would have made it here this time. So you get a break. There's just one problem..."

"Whew...thank you so much...and...what's the problem?" asked Ryan.

"Well, I seem to be out of Pokemon!" said Oak, with a grin on his face that puzzled Ryan deeply.

Ryan began to interject, when Oak stopped him with a hand motion.

"...except for one." He walked over to the computer he had set up in the corner near his desk. "I recently received one from an old friend over in Sinnoh...nearly across the world from here. It's a new type they've discovered, and I've been reluctant but I think you'll get along with it well."

"I see...wow! Okay!" exclaimed Ryan, energetic again.

Oak smiled, and clicked a few things on his computer. Suddenly, from some strange tube attachment by his computer, a small pokeball materialized as if from thin air. He reached for it and tossed it over to Ryan. "Catch!"

Ryan caught it with his hand, and looked at it in wonder. It was his first time ever actually holding a Pokeball, and it was a great feeling.

"Go ahead, Ryan...release it!" exclaimed Oak, smiling.

"Yeah...well, here I go, then!" said Ryan, excited as ever. He did as he had seen people do it before. He quickly tapped the small button on the center of the pokeball, and it enlargened slightly, the pokemon now on standby to be released. "Ok...this is it...Pokemon...I, Choose, YOU!" he shouted, as if in a battle, the largest grin on his face that he had ever had in his life. He threw the Pokeball onto the ground, it shook for a split second, and began to open up. A bright, whitish light shot out from the ball a few feet in front of it, and began to form into its own shape.

Oak's eyes gleamed. He was happy. He loved to see new journeys begin, and to be part of that beginning. And somehow, as he watched Ryan nearly wet himself with excitement over the newly materialized Pokemon, jumping around holding it in his arms ecstatically (though scaring the poor creature half to death), he knew that he had been a part of the birth of a legend.

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So yeah. Here his journey begins. There's some parts I'm not sure about, and I do think I'll be receiving heavy critism for certain areas where I lack knowledge , and stuff like that, but I know my writing will get better as time goes. And if this peaks your curiousity in the slightest, I ask that you stick with it. I'm planning to make this a huge/epic story, and I will update at least once a day or two. Thank you for your support.


- Ryan
 
Sounds good to me! Well constructed stuff... easy to read, and easy to get into as well. I see this one going far... and you can bet I'll keep my eyes out for this one! When my work is done... I'll be back to mine as well. But until then, fics like these will keep me occupied :p
 
Really? :D Thanks, that's really encouraging. I've got school for the next 7 hours [ x_x ], but when I get back I'll be ready to start up on the next part. It's really fun and keeps my mind off of things. Thanks for the encouragement! :)
 
Oak's eyes gleamed. He was happy. He loved to see new journeys begin, and to be part of that beginning. And somehow, as he watched Ryan nearly wet himself with excitement over the newly materialized Pokemon, jumping around holding it in his arms ecstatically (though scaring the poor creature half to death), he knew that he had been a part of the birth of a legend.

After a while, Ryan set the poor, dazed Pokemon onto the ground in front of him.

"Shinx...!" it responded gratefully.

So that is what this species is known as. Though never having one of his own, Ryan knew quite a few Pokemon, either from his cousin (who had ascended to become one of the Elite Four...a high honor in its own regard), or from watching the heart-capturing stadium battles so often shown on the television. In fact, it's all he ever really watched, though he didn't watch much to begin with. Point being, though...he had never seen a Pokemon quite like this.

Ryan reached down and pet it gently. It responded gratefully, nudging its head against his hand and even giving it a tiny lick.

"Well, it looks like you two get along remarkably well. Typically the sight of a new human would frighten such a frail and small Pokemon, particularly after being flung around like a doll for two minutes. But it seems to like you already. It's accepting your friendly gestures and isn't flinching one bit. That's impressive." Oak observed.

Ryan grinned.

"I must be a natural! Look out, I'm the next Pokemon Master!"

The small Shinx cocked its head slightly staring up at its new owner.

"Haha, sorry Shinx...I guess I got carried away. It's just...that's my dream. Then again, that's probably the dream of every other trainer in existance..." he sighed, "At any rate...I'm just excited I'm finally able to begin my journey. I'm tired of being a failure. I'm tired of being lazy...it's time to start...my life."

"Well, you sure sound determined. I'm afraid I don't have a Pokedex to give you right now, I'm working on a new prototype though, you'll be able to use that when I get done with it. Until then, you'll have to stick it through without one. Don't worry, you seem fairly well-versed in Pokemon knowledge, I think you can last a while without one. Anyhow, as proud of you as I am, I'm bogged down as ever with work, and I really must be going back to it." explained the Professor.

"I understand. I should go visit my mom then...and make up for lost time so I can catch up with Brandon!" Ryan responded.

The Shinx nudged up against Ryan's leg and rested on his foot, closing its eyes for a few moments, sending an involuntary smile to Ryan's face.

"Oh, that's right. I almost forgot! Brandon told me to tell you, if you showed up that is, that he would be staying in Viridian City for a day or so to prepare for the journey through the Forest. He wanted to meet you there at the Pokecenter...a couple of hours from now. He said he wanted to travel with you for a while, especially through Viridian Forest...I hear he's quite afraid of bugs."

"Hahaha, that's him...alright then, I'll meet him there. I better be going now, Mom may get worried that I left without saying goodbye!" said Ryan.

"That's true. Well, good luck to you two, I'm sure you'll become the best of friends in your journey. Take care of this Shinx, Ryan. She's seemingly VERY rare, especially here, in fact she's most likely one of a kind to this region. So don't place her in any danger. Now, get out of here you two! I've got work to tend to! Oh! And don't forget to come pick up your Pokedex from me...I'll say...two weeks? That should do it."

"Yes sir! See you soon Professor Oak." responded Ryan.

He gently picked up the tired Shinx and pet its head gently.

"You're probably tired, Shinx. You should get some rest. I hope these Pokeballs are actually comfortable for you."

Shinx nodded. Ryan held the Pokeball up to the Shinx and watched as it nudged the center button tiredly, and in an instant it was safe inside its warm ball again.

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Okay this one is cut off at a bad spot but I've gotta get going really soon, the next part will hopefully make up for it. I have a feeling it's not quite as good as the first part, but I'm satisfied over all. I'll update again later on tonight.

I appreciate comments of any nature, minus mindless bashing. Criticism is definitely welcomed...I know I'm not the greatest writer in the world, and I do make mistakes. But thank you in advance for your kindness.


Ryan
 
...Okay...I'll be updating when I can...I can't right now. I'm really going through personal hardships right now, namely my girlfriend of nearly a year breaking off our relationship...so I don't feel inspired and I don't have the will to write anymore...I'll get back to it soon. It won't be more than a couple of days, in fact I'll probably still update regularly to keep my mind off of things...but yeah. Thanks guys.
 
Man... these things can really get a guy down. But don't give up entirely! I know how you feel with the lack of will to write, as I've been through similar myself (but for different reasons), but sometimes writing can be a release from the real world for a bit, allowing you to empty your mind of all the hardships you have and just let yourself go...

That sounds a little gushy/whatever, but it's true. Just let your mind wnader with your story for a while, and you'll feel better for it. That's about as much as I can say... good luck with everything.

Calum
 
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