Writing Superhero Member story thing? Chapter 2 Is up People :)

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Dark Marc

is the name of my Lickilicky, not me <3
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Right it's a differant world, world where there is no such thing as pokemon and no civillians but there are superheros! The super hero's suits are based on pokemon, what a coincidence! The city is Pokebeach a pleasent city where no one bothers it! One time when a scientist was experimenting with nequelar phsyics he accidentaly sets off a radiation. Making everyone in Pokebeach have super powers...

So then if you wanna bes ion the story then fill out his form:
[Name]
[Good or evil *Not Godd any more wooh*:p]
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around]

Ok so then fill out the form now!

Please no legendarys! ^_^

These are the pokemon that your suits can't be based on:
[Name]Flare
[Godd or evil]Good
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around]Typhlosion

[Name] Valk
[Godd or evil] good works for me
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around]umbreon please.

[Name] The Magma King
[Godd or evil] I'll be the first evil. BTW, I'm not entirely evil, just swayed to the side with the most advantages. I'm not really eeevviiiill, but I just want money and power.
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Magmotaaaah. Need a crown and coat too though.

[Name] Meowth
[Godd or evil] Evil! >=]
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Meowth!

And just so you know, I am a girl.

[Name] Celebi23
[Godd or evil] I doubt that many people will go for evil, so evil. If you need more goods, I'll be that. Whatever works best for you.
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Um... Celebi if that isn't what you consider legendary. It is OU after all. If not that, Empoleon.

[Name] Shadow Star (Sounds scary, no?)
[Godd or evil] Evil
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Raptor, duh. =P

[Name] Daren
[Godd or evil] Good
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Infernape (Or Gallade since you've got a lot of fire types already!)

Sounds Cool

[Name] Matteo
[Godd or evil] Since there is more Evil then Good right now, Good!
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Raichu

Heheheh...will you allow double agents? If so...

[Name]Dr4g0n
[Good or evil] Double agent if allowed (pretends to be good but turns out he's evil), if not good
[What pokemon do you want your suit based around]Draipon

[Name]Omnigod
[Godd or evil] Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeevil
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Metagross. Duh.

Agent Fridge
Evil
Rotom (can take control of appliances D

[Name] Flames
[Godd or evil] Evil
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Infernape

Sorry if this is too late >.<

[Name] Kayrin
[Good or evil] Neither. Too simple. Something like Dr4g0n suggested maybe.
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Absol

[Name]: Does not have one
[Good or evil]: evil... until I am needed.
[What Pokemon do you want your suit based around]:Lucario
*looks up sadly at his username*

[Name]: Brett
[Good or Evil]: I am on Matt's side. Good.
[What Pokemon]: Charizard...DUH

[Name] Anthony
[Godd or evil] Good
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Gallade, Celebi, Chomp, Jolteon


[Name] LV (But use: Sakura)
[Godd or evil] Good
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Luxray, Leafia, Glacia & Vaporeon.
Edit: They all have ribbons that looks like Skymins "flower".

Name: Musical
Good or Evil: Good
The pokemon I want my suit to be based off of: Crobat


[Name] Danny
[Godd or evil]Gooood
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] What else?! Chimchar!
If its not too late

[Name] Toxic
[Godd or evil] Evil
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Toxicroak

I know it might be too late to join, but I willing to be in this story. So, if you want me, take me! Please, I beg you! You can use me a evil guy in the coming chapters, please?
*Looks at Darc Marc with the cutest face he can possibly put on*


Name: TorterraBoy
Good/Evil: Good!
Pokémon: Guess *Guessed- Caterpie!*

[Name] Lickfrey ( don't ask...)
[Good or evil] Undecided
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Lickitung... I'm a guy who mooches from side to side if that's okay, so you don't know if you can trust me or not... I spend a lot of time eating when I sould be doing something important ( as lickitung does xD)

Hope mine isn't too complicated... Please tell me if it is @__@

Also ( yah I know more XD) If I could be your kinda... minion, thatwould be cool not a sidekick, a minion... and I like pepperoni pizza too!)

[Name] Z
[Good or evil *Not Godd any more wooh*] Can I be in between?
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Weavile


[Name]Lunace(Luna was my first choice but it sounded weird for a boy)
[Good or evil *Not Godd any more wooh*] Evil
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Shiny Umbreon or Regular Espeon, please.



I will update this when people have put in new entry's please don't use any of the listed, please or it will ruin the story! D: Anyway please enjoy this story ^__^
 
RE: If you wanna be in the story then sighn up NOW!

[Name]Flare
[Godd or evil]Good
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around]Typhlosion

But try to type better when you're writing the story.
 
RE: If you wanna be in the story then sighn up NOW!

[Name] Valk
[Godd or evil] good works for me
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around]umbreon please.
 
RE: If you wanna be in the story then sighn up NOW!

Ok cool I'll probably make the story when I have at least 4 people sighning up, two more to go. Thanks guys! ^_^

Please no legendarys
 
RE: If you wanna be in the story then sighn up NOW!

Come on people, SIGHN UP!
 
RE: If you wanna be in the story then sighn up NOW!

Sign.

And seriously, your last post was 4 hours ago. People don't usually sign up at supersonic speeds. :p

Some points on the story. Nobody'll like it if it's all spelt horribly and it's chock full of grammar errors. Make sure you spell check and proof read it. If there's no civillians, who are the heroes saving? No civillians, no heroes. If everybody's a hero, that makes everybody a civillian. And finally, make longer chapters. With all that cleared, I think I'll sign up XD:

[Name] The Magma King
[Godd or evil] I'll be the first evil. BTW, I'm not entirely evil, just swayed to the side with the most advantages. I'm not really eeevviiiill, but I just want money and power.
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Magmotaaaah. Need a crown and coat too though. :p
 
RE: If you wanna be in the story then sighn up NOW!

I'll sign up.

[Name] Meowth
[Godd or evil] Evil! >=]
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Meowth! :p

And just so you know, I am a girl.
 
RE: If you wanna be in the story then sighn up NOW!

[Name] Celebi23
[Godd or evil] I doubt that many people will go for evil, so evil. If you need more goods, I'll be that. Whatever works best for you.
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Um... Celebi if that isn't what you consider legendary. It is OU after all. If not that, Empoleon.
 
RE: If you wanna be in the story then sighn up NOW!

Meh, I guess I'll be evil too.
My pokemon choice kind of suits a dark feel anyway...

[Name] Shadow Star (Sounds scary, no?)
[Godd or evil] Evil
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Raptor, duh. =P
 
RE: If you wanna be in the story then sighn up NOW!

[Name] Daren
[Godd or evil] Good
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Infernape (Or Gallade since you've got a lot of fire types already!)

Sounds Cool
 
RE: If you wanna be in the story then sighn up NOW!

I haven't done this in so long, probobly when I first joined a year ago, so this should be fun, thanks for the opprotunity!

[Name] Matteo
[Godd or evil] Since there is more Evil then Good right now, Good!
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Raichu :D
 
RE: If you wanna be in the story then sighn up NOW!

Heheheh...will you allow double agents? If so...

[Name]Dr4g0n
[Good or evil] Double agent if allowed (pretends to be good but turns out he's evil), if not good
[What pokemon do you want your suit based around]What do you think? Caterpie!
 
RE: If you wanna be in the story then sighn up NOW!

[Name]Omnigod
[Godd or evil] Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeevil
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Metagross. Duh.
 
RE: If you wanna be in the story then sighn up NOW!

Agent Fridge
Evil
Rotom (can take control of appliances D:)
 
RE: If you wanna be in the story then sighn up NOW!

Actually it was just... Short. Very short. :S

Make sure your chapters are at least a page of size 11 font in MS word.
 
RE: If you wanna be in the story then sighn up NOW!

[Name] Flames
[Godd or evil] Evil :p
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Infernape

Sorry if this is too late >.<
 
RE: If you wanna be in the story then sighn up NOW!

Yes I agree, the premise is good but it needs to be longer, it would help a lot! Also remember commas are you're friend, better over used then under used. Anyway this has potential, good luck.
 
RE: If you wanna be in the story then sighn up NOW!

Add me if possible.

[Name] Kayrin
[Good or evil] Neither. Too simple. Something like Dr4g0n suggested maybe.
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Absol
 
RE: If you wanna be in the story then sighn up NOW!

Dang it, my mum has banned me from the laptop for 1 day >_< so I won't be oosting up chapter 1 until tommorow sorry guys.
Remember if you wanna be in the story don't post a pokemonn that someone has already request please ^_^. I will post up on the 1st page who are already in it and stuff and what pokemon they have decided to basew their suit on!
 
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