Writing The Adventures of Lucario

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A dog-like creature with blue fur, a black mask and tear-drop shaped hair hanging out of the mask, paws with sharp points, a sharp point on it's chest, and blue pant like bottoms was running. It's red eyes searching for something. It was running through Lumadio Desert. It's paws barely touching the ground, it was very swift. It stopped in front of the Great Lumadio Pyramid. It sighed and quietly went in. It was very silent, no noise except this Pokemon's footsteps. No Pokemon were living in here, nor people either. It looked around and looked around, as if it were looking for something it dearly loved and lost.

"Come out, O Great Meowth!" It muttered. Nothing came out.
"Please, O Great Meowth." It said, getting crossed. Still, the Pyramid was still and silent. The Pokemon's eyes flashed a deep red, as it was very very angry. It clenched it's paws.
"OH MEOWTH, COME OUT, OUR TOWN OF BLEZLEHEM NEEDS YOU!" It shouted, crying. A rumbling sound echoed through the Pyramid. The creature smiled.
"What shall you need?" A Giant five foot Meowth said, coming out of her chamber.
"I need it to rain in Blezlehem. Do you know where a Pokemon that produces rain lives?" The Pokemon asked.
"Yes. But the closest one is five hundred and seventeen feet away." The Meowth said, with deep concern and sorrow.
"Noooo!" The creature cried, banging it's paw on the solid ground.
"But, go to the Genie of Pokemon. She's a Mew. She can probably do a Rain Dance for you." Meowth said calmly, and went back into the chamber.
 
I rofl'd at the part where it said 517 feet. don't edit that part out, its like, the best part in the entire thing
 
Hatman said:
I rofl'd at the part where it said 517 feet. don't edit that part out, its like, the best part in the entire thing

From where I'm standing that sounds really insulting.
It's quite good obviously she's just forgot about it or hasn't got time at the moment.
But don't come into someone's thread telling them that the best bit was a mistake they made.
 
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