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Prof.Octillery

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This fanfic is what I came up with after a long time imaging this story:

One day,I was out on a walk with my first pokemon"Octillery"
that I named Saknon.A guy came by and handed me a note.I was invited to an island named"Cohana"."Saknon look,I was invited to a luowl on Cohana Island"I said,"isn't this great!" "Octill!"Saknon said.

I couldn't wait till the yotch arrived."Hey,you!"A voice shouted,"It looks like you have a pokemon.I challenge to a battle!"
"Sorry I'm busy."I replied,"Go find someone else."And then he said the phrase that would make any body angry,"Your to chiken to battle."
"Oh, your on."I yelled.

"Go,Saknon!" "This is way to easy."He said,"Go,Sroomish."
Right when I sent out Saknon,Saknon did somthing unbeleivable for a water type.It used Flame Trower a fire type move.It hit Shroomish,then Shroomish fainted.

"Wow!Did Saknon just do that?"I said.
"No,I never lost what happened?!"He yelled."Who's the chicken now."
"Stay away from me loser"He blurted out.

Finally,the yotch arrived."It'll take some time to get to Cohana Island."The captain said."The beds are qiet soft.Your cabin is room"2".I went to room"2"There I fell to sleep.

"Ha,ha,ha"a voice said.I looked behind me and nothing was there.I turned my head around and I saw this black pokemon."You."It said,"Are you Saxon?"."You can talk?" "No,I'm useing telepathe.But thats not the point the pokemon Arsues is trying to take my position as god pokemon." "So what do you want me to do about it?" "I want you to kill Arsues." "So how do I do that?" "Go to the castle in the sky."Then it faded away.I went back to sleep.

A ding woke me up."We're at Cohana Island"the captain said.

END CHAPTER ONE(Other chapters will be in other posts.Any ideas PM me your ideas might be in this story)


I was having fun on Cohana Island.Icecream
hotdogs,hot babes,and a nice hotel that I didn't have to pay for.It
was paradise.The ceramony began."Welcome to the annual festavle
of the cloud people"A guy said when I went in."Have a seat"

A girl walked on the stage."Saxon"A voice said.
Come out here.I went out and I saw that pokemon again."Don't fail me Saxon" "What do you want me to do" "Kill Arseus"It faded away again.

I went back inside.The girl on the stage pointed at me to get on the stage."Whats your name chosen one" "Saxon" "Thats a neat name will you dance with me" "Sure".

She started to play a tune on her flute that seems familliar.

END CHAPTER 2


The ground started to shake violontly."Aaaah"She sceamed.A stair case rose up from the ground."The passage to the castle in the sky?"A guy said."What's happening"A spiked,black haired kid said.The stare case kept on rising."Excellent"The black pokemon said in my mind.

The stair case stoped."Go up the stairs" the black pokemon said."Hey,what is he doing?"The spiked hair kid said.He started to go up the stairs.I finally got up the stairs."Whoo,that was tiring"I said."Woh" "Octill"Saknon said.The kid made it."wow"he said.

Then a green pokemon came up."RAAAAAAAAAH"it roared.The black pokemon showed up."I'll hold it off...Go!" I went in.

END CHAPTER 3

Meanwhile,(credit to dawnfanboy)Dawn and Ash were at the festavle,too."Kenny,"Dawn said,"Kenny!".Back to me,I was inside of the castle."Otill" "What's wrong?" "You sense somthing ahead?" "Octill" "AAAAAAAAAHHHH!"A sound came from above.Tap."Who's there?"I said franticly."This place is amasing!"the black haired boy said."What the heck are you doing up here!" "Just curious"
"Hi,my name is Kenny what is yours:)" "Go away." "Your not the boss of me." "Get out of here you brat!" ":p"

"AAAAAAAAH"A gostly pokemon came down."I told you to get out of here." "Aaaaah,mommy!" "Uh-oh,Saknon run" We ran up a nearby stairs.Up there the black pokemon spoke to me in telepathy."Right here is Arseus." I froze not knowing what to do.I took out a knife.Right before I struck it I felt icy.It was to late I was frozen.

END CHAPTER 4

When I woke up Arseus was right in front of me!
"Darkrai told you to do it."It said,"Darkrai has been aiming to take my place as god." "Why?" "I bannished him from hevan.Catch Darkrai in this ball and then burry it."
"This will only happen in the future when darkrai shows up."

It had been 11 years since.
END CHAPTER 5
 
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