Writing The End of Time

Chatot Brains

I didn't do it!
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Prologue:

My name is Guy Halevi. I am a general in the Union. I live in a land that has been in war for many years now. It all started when one of the admirals in the army was assassinated. The man that killed him brought people together and slowly had a whole army on his side. His army was called the Force. They captured Pokemon and turned them into slaves. The strongest ones were taken and sent to fight against us. "Us" is the Union, the remaining people that have not joined the Force. We try and fight their army, while hurting as little Pokemon as we can. But this is no piece of cake. The Force has trained their Pokemon to fight us. The Force's soldiers fight along side the Pokemon and they both have the same target. Destroy the Union.

Chapter 1: Escape!

"This is General Guy reporting from HQ, can anyone hear me? We are under attack, I repeat the enemy has us under siege. We need backup quickly!" I ran over to the only man left alive in the lab. "Len, are you ok?" "I'm fine" he said. Behind us, a hyper beam burst through the wall. Glass tubes and experiments fell on the floor and crashed. "Dusknoir" the Pokemon said. I reached into my pocket but found nothing. I looked around the room and saw my shocker under piles of bricks. I ran across the room and grabbed it. "Dusknoir" it said. I quickly turned around and saw Dusknoir's hand charged and pointed towards Len. "Len run!" He was unconscious. I aimed my shocker and fired at the Dusknoir. It was hit and fell on the floor. I ran towards Len and picked him up. With Len on my shoulder, I ran towards the exit. Shock blasts crashed into the wall in front of me. I looked back and saw Force soldiers running towards me. I kept running but then an Arcanine jumped infront of me. "Arcanine". "Go Feraligatot". Feraligator came out of my pokeball. "Hit him now with Hydro Pump!". Arcanine was blown out of the way. I left the room but couldn't continue. The whole building was gone! I put Len on the ground and looked around. Shock blasts zoomed past my head. I had totally forgotten about the soldiers. "Where am I" Len asked and stood up. A shock blast hit the floor behind us. "The floor is gonna break! Jump now!" Len and I jumped off of the building. We hit the ground hard and I heard something break. "Guy, are you crazy!?" I looked up and saw Commander Dan looking at me. "Nice to see you Dan". "You took quite a fall". "Yes Dan I think I know that". Dan had been my best friend since high school and even now we were never apart for long. A medical team lifted Len and put him in a helicopter. "Is he going to be ok?". Len was my best friend since kindergarten and we were allways together even in the hardest situations. Dan looked at Len and said "He's going to be fine. Suddenly we heard shots behind us. Some of them hit the helicopter. "Get in now!" Dan said. I got into the helicopter and Dan ju ped in after me. He fell into the helicopter. His leg was hit. "Dan's hit help him!". The team took care of Dan and we started to fly. More shots hit the helicopter but we were safe, for now.
 
Chatot Brains said:
Prologue:
My name is Guy Halevi. I am a general in the Union. I live in a land that has been in war for many years now. It all started when one of the admirals in the army was assassinated. The man that killed him brought people together and slowly had a whole army on his side. His army was called the Force. They captured Pokemon and turned them into slaves. The strongest ones were taken and sent to fight against us. "Us" is the Union, the remaining people that have not joined the Force. We try and fight their army, while hurting as little Pokemon as we can. But this is no piece of cake. The Force has trained their Pokemon to fight us. The Force's soldiers fight along side the Pokemon and they both have the same target. Destroy the Union.
Chapter 1 will come today



That is all I have to say. Tears, not years. Good prologue, but I'm hoping for something longer.
 
What's a shocker and a shock and a shock blast. Explain those, because I am totally lost. And that isn't exactly long, but I am hoping for later chapters to be longer.

And why am I so weak and defenseless. I am not stupid, why did I get hit by that, shock, whatever. And if I am right, I am almost sure I am stronger than you 0.o
 
well i wanted to add more to the chapter but the next part is a tottaly different story so I left it out

a shocker is a gun that shoots electrical bolts and a shock and a shock blast is what the shocker shoots sorry if that wasnt clear

you were weak and defenseless because something happened to you but i will not explain that now and why do you think you are stupid

you didnt get hit that was dan (not from pokebeach)
 
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