Writing the free life (pokemon journey and sort of bio)

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twin tails

** being myself everyday**
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Welcome to my 2nd fan-fic in this story I’ll be on a journey but in the story there will be info about me that I would like to share with you guys so please keep reading I would really appreciate it.

So let’s start with the prologue

19 may 2003. It was a sunny morning in Eterna city when suddenly there was a big explosion in the Eterna Gym.
Everyone in the city was there looking at the battle between Eterna Gym leader Gardenia and a boy named Simon. It was a rough fight Gardenia already lost both Cherubi and Turtwig while Simon still had his Scizor and his Magnezone. Gardenia’s Cacnea was totally exhausted but it was still on it’s feet the Scizor came running and used a X scissor, hitting Cacnea right on the flower on it’s head, that made Cacnea faint. “Roserade go!!” Gardenia yelled while throwing the poke ball at the battle field. A red light appeared and then a beautiful Roserade appeared on the field. “this is as easy as pie” Simon said “Bug Buzz” he yelled at Scizor. The Scizor used the attack and the Roserade fainted everyone in the city was both disappointed as happy because Gardenia didn’t win but Simon, the strongest trainer in the city, did. Everyone was screaming well done Simon. Then suddenly a boy about the age of 9 came running to Simon saying “wow big brother you won from Gardenia your awesome” not knowing what would become from him later in his life.

I hope you guys like it
This is still the prologue but Simon really is the name of my older brother.
 
I really like it. You should carry on this. I don't mind Anime related fan-fics :p
 
Oke next time that i'm on i'll post the first chapter so keep this fan-fic alive pls and keep reading everyone
 
Phoenix_Assassin said:
Spelling and Grammar really is bad and you don't get into detail with this story. Maybe a 5/10 at best.

P_A

1) I use spell check for mistakes and my grammar, hello i haven't learned a lot of grammar yet.
2) It's a prologue it is supossed to make you want to read mor because you don't give a lot of details.
3) i'm almost finished with the 1st chapter
 
Looking forawrd to it, i hope that it's a bit longer than the prolouge, i know that this sopund s abit silly but it was kinda short, even for a prolouge? :S
 
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