Writing The One

Shadowblade2

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((My first story, might not be that good))


Chapter I
The roaring winds and sounds soared all over the Sinnoh region, followed by pulses of pure enrgy. Back at Spear Pillar, Dialga stood there, roaring as load as he could. "Hahaha! Soon, this world will be crushed, and a new world will be created, my world!" Cyrus screamed. The heavy downpour of rain continued to fall from the sky. Suddenly, a person stood before Cyrus, a person named DYLAN. In a few seconds, Mars and Jupiter were standing, back to back, infront of DYLAN. "You want to fight the boss, you're going to need to go through US first! I'll pummel you into the ground, then Mars can finish off whatever little scrap is left!" Jupiter shouted. "Not so fast!" A voice eminated from the cave where DYLAN cave from. Suddenly, a figure came out from the cave, into the pouring rain. It was LUCAS, DYLAN's rival. "We'll face them together, DYLAN" LUCAS said, his voice booming. DYLAN sent out Empoleon and LUCAS sent out his Torterra. Mars and Jupiter sent out two Bronzor and the fight was on! "Bronzor, Extrasensory!" Mars said, loud enough for Bronzor to hear over the rain, wind and sound of Dialga. Bronzor tried to use Extrasensory on Empoleon. "Empoleon, dodge and use Hydro Pump!" DYLAN struggled to say over the wind and rain. Empoleon used Hydro Pump and smashed Bronzor through one of the crumbled pillars. Bronzor was knocked out cold. "Torterra, use Solarbeam!" Lucas commanded, of course, it was hard to take in sunlight through the clouds and rain, yet, Torterra managed to take sunlight in, little by little. "DYLAN, cover me while Torterra is defenseless!" But DYLAN was ahead of him, his Empoleon was already infront of Torterra, readying for Bronzor's attack.


EDIT: Some of the battle between Mars and Jupiter vs. DYLAN and LUCAS was edited in because it was too short

Chapter II coming soon!

What do you think?
 
I like it but you might want to make it longer chapters that just seemed like paragraph
Lots of explanaiton I like that 4/5
 
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