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CHAPTER ONE
CHAPTER TWO
I will also update about two to three new chapters a week!
Chapter 1: Bulbasaur
Hi, my name is Ryan. Today is my tenth birthday. As many people know, kids get their first Pokémon on their tenth birthday. Let me tell you a little about myself. I’m about 4’8 and I weigh 100 pounds. I have short brown hair; I also spike my bangs. I am a little tan but not pale. My eyes are green just like my dad’s, at least that’s what my mother tells me.
“Ryan, breakfast is ready!” my mother called.
“Okay! I’ll be right down.” I replied.
My mother is a little weird. She hasn’t been the same since my father left. She always talks about him like he is a hero. My neighbors tell me not to get too exited, because he left her for something else. My neighbors won’t say, but one of my goals for my journey is to find him.
I run down stairs. My mother is sitting the table up. She is 5’3 and has brown hair like mine. She cuts her hair down to her shoulders. Her eyes are a dull gray color and her facial expression looks dreary and tired. As she set the bacon on the table she saw me.
“Honey, it’s time for breakfast. Hurry up and eat quickly, for you have to pick up your first Pokémon at Professor Oak’s lab,” she said, “You don’t want to be the last one and end up with a Pikachu or a Rattata!”
“Mom, don’t worry!” I replied, “We don’t have to be at the lab until 10:00 a.m., its only 8:56!”
“Ryan, are clock is a hour late … it’s actually 9:56,” my mother started, “Good thing I bought you a new bike! Hurry up and leave, I packed up spare clothes, and all the materials you’ll need to go on this adventure.”
“Thank you Mom! Now I have to go, I love you.” I said.
I gave my mother a hug and left. I live in the village of Pallet town, home to the famous Pokémon trainer Red. I hope to like him one day. Thankfully Pallet town is fairly small and it would only take me 5 minutes to get to the laboratory. As I pulled up, a man in white coat run up to me.
“YOUR LATE, GET INSIDE NOW!!!” he screamed in my ear
We went up the winding hill to a big building with a windmill at the top. We opened the doors and saw three people around a table with three pokéballs. The oldest one was no doubt Professor Oak. He looks about 60 and is pretty pale. His hair is gray but towards the side burns it is a tan color. He is about 5’8 and was wearing a lab coat that covered his whole body.
There was also a girl and a boy. The girl was about my height and had blonde, crinkled hair. She wore a bright yellow dress and carried a pink bag. Her eyes were a bright sky blue, it matched her attitude. The boy was 5’1 and wore dark clothes. The clothes were as dark as his jet black hair. The mood on his face showed that he wasn’t the happy camper. His eyes were pitch black, but you can still see the pupils.
“There you are, I was beginning to wonder if you would show,” Professor Oak said, “Well, you all turned ten today and you all get your first Pokémon. The last time I had three trainers get their Pokémon on the same day, one of them became the strongest trainer in the world.”
“When do we get are Pokémon!!!” the Girl blurted out.
“Mera, even though you’re Daisy’s child doesn’t mean I won’t scold you for childish things like that.” Professor Oak replied.
“Okay Great-Grandpa …” Mera said.
“Now, since Ethan was here first, he gets the first choice,” exclaimed Oak, “There are three Pokémon, each representing the three main types. There is; Bulbasaur, the Grass Type; Squirtle, the water type; and Charmander, the Fire type.”
The table in front of us had three Pokéballs. Each one had a little symbol on it, corresponding with the Pokémon inside of it. The table turned a little and Ethan reached out for the Pokéball with the fire mark on it.
“Professor, I would like this one.” Ethan said. He threw the ball into the air and a little reptile popped out.
“Charmander! Char! Char!” the creature said.
“Ahh, Charmander, good choice Ethan.” Oak said, “Now it’s Mera’s turn. Sorry Ethan, if you weren’t late you wouldn’t be last!”
Mera looked at the three balls. She reached out and picked up the ball with the water mark on it. She took it and ran out.
“I GOT A POKEMON!!! LETS GO SQUIRTLE!!!!” she screamed.
“Hehehe, she can get carried away sometimes,” Oak said, “Now Ryan, you get Bulbasaur, the grass type.”
He went to the table and picked up the Pokéball that was marked with the leaf. He handed it to me. I threw it and a little green creature popped out.
“Bulba! Bulbasaur!!!” It said.
“That’s Bulbasaur, unlike the rest of the starters, it has a second type. The other type it has is poison. So be careful and not sniff it’s bulb!” Oak exclaimed.
Ethan came up to me. Up close, he is a lot scarier. I swear though, it looked like he had eye liner.
“Let’s battle, I bet my Charmander could beat your Bulbasaur.” He told me.
“You’re on!” I replied.
“REALLY, NOT IN HERE THOUGH” Shouted Oak, “I will be ref. and I will also put out pointers to the both of you!"
End of Chapter One
CHAPTER ONE
CHAPTER TWO
I will also update about two to three new chapters a week!
Chapter 1: Bulbasaur
Hi, my name is Ryan. Today is my tenth birthday. As many people know, kids get their first Pokémon on their tenth birthday. Let me tell you a little about myself. I’m about 4’8 and I weigh 100 pounds. I have short brown hair; I also spike my bangs. I am a little tan but not pale. My eyes are green just like my dad’s, at least that’s what my mother tells me.
“Ryan, breakfast is ready!” my mother called.
“Okay! I’ll be right down.” I replied.
My mother is a little weird. She hasn’t been the same since my father left. She always talks about him like he is a hero. My neighbors tell me not to get too exited, because he left her for something else. My neighbors won’t say, but one of my goals for my journey is to find him.
I run down stairs. My mother is sitting the table up. She is 5’3 and has brown hair like mine. She cuts her hair down to her shoulders. Her eyes are a dull gray color and her facial expression looks dreary and tired. As she set the bacon on the table she saw me.
“Honey, it’s time for breakfast. Hurry up and eat quickly, for you have to pick up your first Pokémon at Professor Oak’s lab,” she said, “You don’t want to be the last one and end up with a Pikachu or a Rattata!”
“Mom, don’t worry!” I replied, “We don’t have to be at the lab until 10:00 a.m., its only 8:56!”
“Ryan, are clock is a hour late … it’s actually 9:56,” my mother started, “Good thing I bought you a new bike! Hurry up and leave, I packed up spare clothes, and all the materials you’ll need to go on this adventure.”
“Thank you Mom! Now I have to go, I love you.” I said.
I gave my mother a hug and left. I live in the village of Pallet town, home to the famous Pokémon trainer Red. I hope to like him one day. Thankfully Pallet town is fairly small and it would only take me 5 minutes to get to the laboratory. As I pulled up, a man in white coat run up to me.
“YOUR LATE, GET INSIDE NOW!!!” he screamed in my ear
We went up the winding hill to a big building with a windmill at the top. We opened the doors and saw three people around a table with three pokéballs. The oldest one was no doubt Professor Oak. He looks about 60 and is pretty pale. His hair is gray but towards the side burns it is a tan color. He is about 5’8 and was wearing a lab coat that covered his whole body.
There was also a girl and a boy. The girl was about my height and had blonde, crinkled hair. She wore a bright yellow dress and carried a pink bag. Her eyes were a bright sky blue, it matched her attitude. The boy was 5’1 and wore dark clothes. The clothes were as dark as his jet black hair. The mood on his face showed that he wasn’t the happy camper. His eyes were pitch black, but you can still see the pupils.
“There you are, I was beginning to wonder if you would show,” Professor Oak said, “Well, you all turned ten today and you all get your first Pokémon. The last time I had three trainers get their Pokémon on the same day, one of them became the strongest trainer in the world.”
“When do we get are Pokémon!!!” the Girl blurted out.
“Mera, even though you’re Daisy’s child doesn’t mean I won’t scold you for childish things like that.” Professor Oak replied.
“Okay Great-Grandpa …” Mera said.
“Now, since Ethan was here first, he gets the first choice,” exclaimed Oak, “There are three Pokémon, each representing the three main types. There is; Bulbasaur, the Grass Type; Squirtle, the water type; and Charmander, the Fire type.”
The table in front of us had three Pokéballs. Each one had a little symbol on it, corresponding with the Pokémon inside of it. The table turned a little and Ethan reached out for the Pokéball with the fire mark on it.
“Professor, I would like this one.” Ethan said. He threw the ball into the air and a little reptile popped out.
“Charmander! Char! Char!” the creature said.
“Ahh, Charmander, good choice Ethan.” Oak said, “Now it’s Mera’s turn. Sorry Ethan, if you weren’t late you wouldn’t be last!”
Mera looked at the three balls. She reached out and picked up the ball with the water mark on it. She took it and ran out.
“I GOT A POKEMON!!! LETS GO SQUIRTLE!!!!” she screamed.
“Hehehe, she can get carried away sometimes,” Oak said, “Now Ryan, you get Bulbasaur, the grass type.”
He went to the table and picked up the Pokéball that was marked with the leaf. He handed it to me. I threw it and a little green creature popped out.
“Bulba! Bulbasaur!!!” It said.
“That’s Bulbasaur, unlike the rest of the starters, it has a second type. The other type it has is poison. So be careful and not sniff it’s bulb!” Oak exclaimed.
Ethan came up to me. Up close, he is a lot scarier. I swear though, it looked like he had eye liner.
“Let’s battle, I bet my Charmander could beat your Bulbasaur.” He told me.
“You’re on!” I replied.
“REALLY, NOT IN HERE THOUGH” Shouted Oak, “I will be ref. and I will also put out pointers to the both of you!"
End of Chapter One
