Aoki

Aoki

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    TyphloWolf, XD Don't forget the broccoli, kids.

    Hey, I've been reading some of your stuff in the WC. I love your descriptions of things.
    Thanks! :D

    It's supposed to be N from the Pokemon Black and White games. I just happened upon the pic a while ago when I was search for avatars, so I decided to use it (This is actually the third time I've used it since I found it. I like it a lot!).
    Sorry, I just didn't want you thinking I was blowing off your critique when I'm actually going to do it. Some people have gotten upset with me in the past when I said I was going to write stuff up for them, but didn't get to it until like a day or so after saying that.
    I'll try and have a critique for posted for Shark Wars either tomorrow or Sunday depending on when I can get online to post it. I usually prewrite my reviews via MS Word, and I take extra time out to try and weed out whatever mechanical issues I spot as well as general things pertaining to plot/development and the like.

    Edit: Ick, I should note something quick now that I've spotted it. You can't overuse font colors in your actual submissions. I noticed you have your chapter two preview all in blue, which is fine since it's just a preview. But when you make your actual chapter post, you can't do that (unless it's for just the chapter's title or so). Again, it's not a huge issue in previews, so don't think your in trouble or anything. I just wanted to run it by you.
    Cool. Regretably, I've had to put my own story on haitus again until I get caught up with side projects and my IRL work.
    Ick, I just noticed your profile message from last night.

    I'm good! How are you doing?
    I usually have a tendency to focus almost strictly on describing what happens during fight scenes in my stories without a lot of dramatic build-up or insight into characters' thoughts and emotions right at the moment of conflict. However, I've had Zyflair point out time and again that my method is sort of spartan and doesn't always do things proper justice. I really don't have a lot of experience beyond that, though, since I'm still trying to learn better writing techniques myself in that area.
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