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Same. :<
I'll comment on it whenever I have time. I still have to read Apollo's new chapter, so I won't get yours done for some time.
Typhlo decks are more fun with Ninetales.
Awwww :<
As in no, you're not using Ninetales.
Is that a no? :O
Going to be using the Ninetale's engine too?
With Reshi?
Zyflair, Typhlosion deck.
What deck are you playing?
Awwww, thanks!
Secret operation UD
Hi! =3I guess Zyflair and TFO beat me to your fic, but to make sure you know, I normally won't lock fics with chapters that are five hundred words or more unless they're really badly written. Still, like the two already said, lack of description is really the biggest issue with your fics. If you can overcome that hurdle, your stories should be fine.
Hey there! I noticed that you're new around here so I thought I'd stop by and say welcome to Pokebeach. Hope you enjoy it here and choose to stick around. ^_^I should also mention that I did peek at your stories in the Writer's Corner. They're not bad for starters, but I may leave you a small critique on each for what I think you can improve on, if it's alright by you anyways? I'm usually pretty nice about stuff, but sometimes new writers get spooked they're not expecting to have someone point their writing issues out. -
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