I went ahead and posted the Prologue. Oh, and take your time in critiquing. I just realized through a bunch of Freshman papers I've had to read today (12 5-6 page papers) that being a critic is hard work Haha, anyway, let me know what you think whenever you can.
Okay! Sorry, I've been having a slump in my grades so far (first time that's ever happened...I think it's because of X and Y ) but I'll update it. If I can find my little notebook of information, that is. I've forgotten almost everything.