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    Writing A Rhyme That Words With Orange

    The line is talking about acid rain, but it's a play on words, since acid rain isn't literally "acid" rain, but i depict it as such. In the line i've been thinking about dropping "like nothing" since i cant quite remember the flow i had before, using nothing. xD
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    Writing A Rhyme That Words With Orange

    Another one of my songs, I've been getting a lot better as far as songwriting, and I think you guy's are gonna notice it, maybe. Idk. Now please sing me a song Where I know i'll hum along Nothing intricate, so how's the weather? --- Write a poem or two About how you're feeling blue...
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    Finished Count to 50 Before Staff Posts

    3. now i can play this game, lol
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    JaySee Premier *Updated 1/26/13*

    RE: JaySee Premier PMJ is full of win. Do me! /joke protect.
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    Yes, I was. Don't mind it though.

    Yes, I was. Don't mind it though.
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    Or just avoid my PM, thats cool too.

    Or just avoid my PM, thats cool too.
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    ShadowLugia, if its up invite me

    ShadowLugia, if its up invite me
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    Also, lets go on smogon, since pokerealm is down.

    Also, lets go on smogon, since pokerealm is down.
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    ShadowLugia, It's fine, you're not.

    ShadowLugia, It's fine, you're not.
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    Pokerealm

    Pokerealm
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    Writing 68 Aurora [Song]

    Fine, I'll just say it cause you guys are close, but aren't at the same time. It's about her suicide. She's already dead. He's in her ocean, which is my way of saying he's obsessed with her, can't get her out of his head. He doesnt want to drown, which means he doesnt want to follow her, fall...
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    Writing 68 Aurora [Song]

    Not quite, I'm tempted to tell. :b
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    Writing 68 Aurora [Song]

    Aurora, is Aurora bridge, a suicide site in Seattle. 230 sucessful suicides. Now that's figured out, relate that to the song. :b
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    Writing 68 Aurora [Song]

    It's the average temperature of Seattle.
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    Community The Beach Member Picture Thread

    RE: Beach Member Picture Thread (Please don't quote images!) Hahaha I busted out laughing reading this, cause I was just coming on to post another. (: I like taking pictures, sorry. :3
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    Writing You had my heart (Watch me fail at song writing)

    Very straightforward, typical breakup, I want you back, song. Nothing wrong with that, kinda like it. You have a melody/Progression in mind? I'm trying to figure it out, having some trouble xD I see this song having a strong resemblence of Weatherman by +44, just by the way the syllables...
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    Writing 68 Aurora [Song]

    I play piano so i'll just press down harder, lol. the previous chord progression goes great with another one of my incomplete songs, :DD and ill check this one out when everyone in my house isn't asleep. :3
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    Writing 68 Aurora [Song]

    Hmmm, I like the progression, but it's just that that is one of the most overused progessions ever, and you know me, I don't like OU. ;o
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    Writing 68 Aurora [Song]

    Everyone is seeing the fast paced poppy, song, i saw it as a more, slower, MCR esque, song. Haha. and that part there is the bridge, it's supposed to be real broken down, slow, doesnt matter the rhyme. Anyways, thanks guys. I appreciate it. Any chord progressions or anything? Right now this...
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    Writing 68 Aurora [Song]

    Another song of mine, wanted to see what you guys thought. Maybe suggest some ideas for chord progressions. --------------------------- A walk in the park Was all I asked for Then, you turned around And looked at me with That fear in your eyes That this would unfold Save me from...
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