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  1. SavatheWolf

    Writing Waves

    Sorry I'll fix it later. I've been really sick and I haven't had time to post the next bit of story, I'll get to it soon. I should have it up tomorrow, I have tons of stuff to catch up on. (Worst part about being sick is all the stuff you have to make up afterword, groooan)
  2. SavatheWolf

    Writing Waves

    Chapter Two Alone Is A Good Thing I gently put out a hand, letting the door swing open, and stepped into the brightly lit facility. The wide, spacious area made me feel a bit exposed, and I had mentioned this to my parents more than once. It must have been naptime for the young pokemon...
  3. SavatheWolf

    Writing Waves

    Actually I posted the art to help them get a better feel for the character, I did the art before I even started writing this... will do, I will split it up right now. Thanks for the comment! And yes I would skim through the top to, there's nothing really interesting about it, but it's SLIGHTLY...
  4. SavatheWolf

    Writing Waves

    Will try, as I said above, "please help point out my mistakes!" I was never good with grammer, paragraphs, essays and such, but I CAN weave a good story. So hopefully with the help of you guys I'll get it right :3
  5. SavatheWolf

    Writing Waves

    Sorry, I'll go back and try and fix it a little bit :) Thank you, and it will get a little clearer as the story goes on. My stories almost always start out as a confusing puzzle, so please be patient. And yes, I know it's a bit short, but I will be posting often in an attempt to make the...
  6. SavatheWolf

    Writing Waves

    Chapter Two The Real Beginning Slowly the memories of those first years yielded up before my probing mind. Lightly I thought back to that day. That terrible, wonderful, just plain different day. Sunshine had laid itself across the floors, in our tiny two bedroom house. It was small, and...
  7. SavatheWolf

    Writing 'Brock' Rhymes With 'Rock' ~trial basis~ If you read it, please post.

    Love the story, great description and I cackled when I found out it was from BRock's point of view. Poor Brock, so in love with one girl and then another one walks by and then he's falling over her instead.
  8. SavatheWolf

    Writing Waves

    A quick note before reading! I decided to check out the writers' corner, as I wanted to be around pokebeach more, and I needed something to motivate me to log in more often. Quite a lot do I go "Oh I really should post on this..." and then I am lazy. I have been thinking about doing a story on...
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