Poed. That makes sence. Anyway PM me the chapters as you write them and keep it up!
Writing (¯`·._.·Pokemon FanFic: The Frontiers of Sinnoh·._.·´¯)
- Thread starter Andyman
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Well thxs
I wish I had an awesome magikarp like that..... is it shiny by any chance??
Seeing as I was almost out of ideas for this Chapter, I actually came up with a good one.
Chapter 5 - Catch and Release!
Finally the gang was of and Specs was talking again.
"So Andy do you even know how to catch a Pokemon?" said Specs acting as smart as can be.
"Well.. Yes," said Andy knowing that he was sleeping the whole presentation.
"Does 2+2=4 remind you of anything."
"Oh, don't get me started, my Magikarp is a lethal weapon!" said Andy clutching his Pokeball.
"Shush, I'm trying to read my book. The small print is really hard to read, and with you guys talking I can't even concentrate," said Karmen turning his head the other way.
"Whatever... I'll show you I can catch a Pokemon!"
"Yeah, and I'm Queen of Sinnoh."
*A Wild Bidoof appears.*
"Ah, here we are, Go Magikarp!"
Bidoof surprised by the Flopping Magikarp rapidly charged with a Tackle.
"Alright Magikarp, use Splash!"
The Magikarp flew high up in the Air, making Bidoof attack miss. Magikarp came flying down on Bidoof. Know Magikarp was flopping on Bidoof."
"Alright know that Bidoof is weakened I'll catch it. Go Pokeball!"
"Yeah know Andy before you do anything. If you catch Bidoof you'll not only have the two worst Pokemon in Sinnoh, and you'll be a laughing stock to us." said Karmen
*Suddenly out of the corner of Andy's eye he spotted a Bedew watching close by. As soon as Bedew saw Andy look at her, she quickly fainted.*
"Alright I'll catch this here Budew!"
Swoosh went the Pokeball as it smacked Budew right in the face.
There was total silence.
DING!
"Alright I caught a Budew! Bidoof you can go out and play."
"Wow." said Specs and Karmen is unison.
And walked over to his new Budew.
"Alright!" said Andy punching the air.
"You have got to stop saying that."
Finally the group took of passing the cave, finally in Oreburgh City.
~Okay, there first Gym Battle, What will be in store for out Trainers as they challenge the Oreburgh Gym?
Next Chapter - A Heart Stone Cold/Oreburgh Gym!
Chapter 5 - Catch and Release!
Finally the gang was of and Specs was talking again.
"So Andy do you even know how to catch a Pokemon?" said Specs acting as smart as can be.
"Well.. Yes," said Andy knowing that he was sleeping the whole presentation.
"Does 2+2=4 remind you of anything."
"Oh, don't get me started, my Magikarp is a lethal weapon!" said Andy clutching his Pokeball.
"Shush, I'm trying to read my book. The small print is really hard to read, and with you guys talking I can't even concentrate," said Karmen turning his head the other way.
"Whatever... I'll show you I can catch a Pokemon!"
"Yeah, and I'm Queen of Sinnoh."
*A Wild Bidoof appears.*
"Ah, here we are, Go Magikarp!"
Bidoof surprised by the Flopping Magikarp rapidly charged with a Tackle.
"Alright Magikarp, use Splash!"
The Magikarp flew high up in the Air, making Bidoof attack miss. Magikarp came flying down on Bidoof. Know Magikarp was flopping on Bidoof."
"Alright know that Bidoof is weakened I'll catch it. Go Pokeball!"
"Yeah know Andy before you do anything. If you catch Bidoof you'll not only have the two worst Pokemon in Sinnoh, and you'll be a laughing stock to us." said Karmen
*Suddenly out of the corner of Andy's eye he spotted a Bedew watching close by. As soon as Bedew saw Andy look at her, she quickly fainted.*
"Alright I'll catch this here Budew!"
Swoosh went the Pokeball as it smacked Budew right in the face.
There was total silence.
DING!
"Alright I caught a Budew! Bidoof you can go out and play."
"Wow." said Specs and Karmen is unison.
And walked over to his new Budew.
"Alright!" said Andy punching the air.
"You have got to stop saying that."
Finally the group took of passing the cave, finally in Oreburgh City.
~Okay, there first Gym Battle, What will be in store for out Trainers as they challenge the Oreburgh Gym?
Next Chapter - A Heart Stone Cold/Oreburgh Gym!
lol loved this chapter as much as chapter 4
They seem so short...
Awsome!
You have a great fic!
You have a great fic!
suspense is killing me
Well it would seem Andyman is temporarely out, so I may do a chapter or two for fun.
i am guessing you have writers block andyman.
Chapter 6 A Heart Stone Cold/ Oreburgh Gym.
"Alright! Time to get my first badge!" yelled Andy.
He began running towards the door at top speed.
*Thud*
"What an entry, running into a locked door, hoping to win a badge with just a Magikarp." scoffed Specs. Joining him at the door.
"I have a Budew you know" muttered Andy as he tried picked himself up.
Specs quickly nudged him and he fell back to the ground. She skipped up to the door and knocked politley. A tall, frigenting looking man came out of the building. He took one look at Specs, gave a squeek of a scream, and ran back inside. The door closed and bolted shut again.
"Great, now your uglyness scared away the key Specs." said Andy with a grin.
"You're just lucky your cute, or there's no way I could hang with you"
Before Andy had time to retort, another man, even bulkier then the first came out.
"You here to battle for a badge?" He asked in a rather girly voice.
Andy snorted and noded.
"All 3 of you, show me your Pokemon.
Andy and Specs called out their Pokemon. Karmen was busy poring over his book. After several minutes of trying to get his attention, Andy pulled the pokeball off of his belt and called out his croagunk. The guard looked over the Pokemon for a while before he spoke next.
"All right you 2 can come on in," he said pointing at Specs and Karmen, "And you," point to Andy, get some real pokemon before coming back."
He then escorted, Specs and Karmen into the building. Specs shot him a quick, apoligetic, glance before heading inside. Andy stood there, mouth agape, for several minutes. Finally he kicked a small rock in frustration. He heard a yowl as it landed in a bush. Suddenly, a wild Shinx came out of the bushes.
"I'll show you a real Pokemon, He cried out as he sent out Magikarp. It flopped on Shinx's head a few times, then smacked it with its tail. Shinx fell to the ground cringing.
Now go Pokeball!
The pokeball hit the target and started shaking, one, twice..
Andy remebered in trainer school, that apokeball had to shake 3 times then ding to catch a Pokemon. He ran over to the pokeball and squeezed it as hard as he could. He could feel it trying to open. His hand was killing him from the strain. Suddenly, his Magikarp came and floped on it. The pokeball closed, shook once, then let out a faint "Ding".
As he picked up his pokeball, Specs and Karmen came out of the gym.
"Looky what we got mocked Specs, holding out 2 Oreburgh Badges."
Will our heros new Pokemon get him his gym badge?
Next, Chapter 7 : All Roads Lead to Badges
"Alright! Time to get my first badge!" yelled Andy.
He began running towards the door at top speed.
*Thud*
"What an entry, running into a locked door, hoping to win a badge with just a Magikarp." scoffed Specs. Joining him at the door.
"I have a Budew you know" muttered Andy as he tried picked himself up.
Specs quickly nudged him and he fell back to the ground. She skipped up to the door and knocked politley. A tall, frigenting looking man came out of the building. He took one look at Specs, gave a squeek of a scream, and ran back inside. The door closed and bolted shut again.
"Great, now your uglyness scared away the key Specs." said Andy with a grin.
"You're just lucky your cute, or there's no way I could hang with you"
Before Andy had time to retort, another man, even bulkier then the first came out.
"You here to battle for a badge?" He asked in a rather girly voice.
Andy snorted and noded.
"All 3 of you, show me your Pokemon.
Andy and Specs called out their Pokemon. Karmen was busy poring over his book. After several minutes of trying to get his attention, Andy pulled the pokeball off of his belt and called out his croagunk. The guard looked over the Pokemon for a while before he spoke next.
"All right you 2 can come on in," he said pointing at Specs and Karmen, "And you," point to Andy, get some real pokemon before coming back."
He then escorted, Specs and Karmen into the building. Specs shot him a quick, apoligetic, glance before heading inside. Andy stood there, mouth agape, for several minutes. Finally he kicked a small rock in frustration. He heard a yowl as it landed in a bush. Suddenly, a wild Shinx came out of the bushes.
"I'll show you a real Pokemon, He cried out as he sent out Magikarp. It flopped on Shinx's head a few times, then smacked it with its tail. Shinx fell to the ground cringing.
Now go Pokeball!
The pokeball hit the target and started shaking, one, twice..
Andy remebered in trainer school, that apokeball had to shake 3 times then ding to catch a Pokemon. He ran over to the pokeball and squeezed it as hard as he could. He could feel it trying to open. His hand was killing him from the strain. Suddenly, his Magikarp came and floped on it. The pokeball closed, shook once, then let out a faint "Ding".
As he picked up his pokeball, Specs and Karmen came out of the gym.
"Looky what we got mocked Specs, holding out 2 Oreburgh Badges."
Will our heros new Pokemon get him his gym badge?
Next, Chapter 7 : All Roads Lead to Badges
good chapter i like it
Chapter 7: All Roads Lead to Badges.
"How did you guys get badges so quickly?" asked Andy in an annoyed tone.
"Hey, not everyone is as weak as you, Karmen didn't even stop reading his book." shot back Specs
"You jerk!" Andy yelled at Karmen, "you didn't stop reading that loser book of your for a Gym Leader!" "Gimme that book!"
At this Karmen promptly put down his book, "What are you yelling about!?"
"He's just jealous that we got badges and he didn't." said Specs
"I got a Gym badge?"
After several minutes of explaining, Karmen finally got a clue and joined us in the present.
"But I don't want a Gym Badge.." Karmen started
Andy reached out to grab it out of Karmen's hands, "Mine then.."
Suddenly Andy stopped at the realization that there was a claw in his face.
"Well then" said Specs, "You want it so bad, you'll have to battle us for it. Me and Karmen verses you. You win, the Badge is yours. You lose, you stop atting like a baby."
Naw, I'm out, you can use my Croagunk if you want to thought, I'll be the judge."
*A few minutes later*
Karmen: This match will be a double battle, the first trainer to knock out both of their opponent's pokemon wins. Begin.
Specs: "Sneasel, Croagunk, I choose you!"
Andy: "Shinx, Magikarp, let's do this!"
Specs: When did you get a... who cares, Sneasel hit Magikarp with your claw! Croagunk Poison Sting on Shinx!
Sneasel, ran up to smack Magikarp, but Magikarp quickly flopped out of the way.
Andy: Now Shinx, dodge Poison Sting and use Tackle....
Magikarp smacks Sneasel with its tail, Sneasel goes flying, taking the poison sting attack.
Karmen: Sneasel is unable to battle!
Specs: Croagunk, ram shinx with your fist!
Andy: Bite it!
Croagunk runs up to hit Shinx and gets bitten. Croagunk then starts smacking Shinx on the ground.
Andy: Shinx, let go. Magikarp! Do Something!
Specs: Now finish it Croagunk!
Shinx releases its grip on Croagunk, who tries to hit Shinx point blank..
"Magikarp"
Magikarp rams croagunk's fist, knocking itself out and knocking down Croagunk.
Andy: Shinx, ends this!
Shinx jumps in the air and sends its tail crashing into Croagunk's stomach. Croagunk lets out a cough and faints.
Karmen: And Andy is the winner! Give him his badge Specs..
Specs: Are you gonaa tell me what to do?!
Karmen:...
Specs just 'cause you beat me doesn't mean i'm gonna give you the badge!
Specs starts running away and Andy fallows, yelling in vain.
"well, they'll be back soon" said Karmen, "I''ll just read my book for a while."
*10 minutes later*
Guys wait up!
Next Chapter: ?
"How did you guys get badges so quickly?" asked Andy in an annoyed tone.
"Hey, not everyone is as weak as you, Karmen didn't even stop reading his book." shot back Specs
"You jerk!" Andy yelled at Karmen, "you didn't stop reading that loser book of your for a Gym Leader!" "Gimme that book!"
At this Karmen promptly put down his book, "What are you yelling about!?"
"He's just jealous that we got badges and he didn't." said Specs
"I got a Gym badge?"
After several minutes of explaining, Karmen finally got a clue and joined us in the present.
"But I don't want a Gym Badge.." Karmen started
Andy reached out to grab it out of Karmen's hands, "Mine then.."
Suddenly Andy stopped at the realization that there was a claw in his face.
"Well then" said Specs, "You want it so bad, you'll have to battle us for it. Me and Karmen verses you. You win, the Badge is yours. You lose, you stop atting like a baby."
Naw, I'm out, you can use my Croagunk if you want to thought, I'll be the judge."
*A few minutes later*
Karmen: This match will be a double battle, the first trainer to knock out both of their opponent's pokemon wins. Begin.
Specs: "Sneasel, Croagunk, I choose you!"
Andy: "Shinx, Magikarp, let's do this!"
Specs: When did you get a... who cares, Sneasel hit Magikarp with your claw! Croagunk Poison Sting on Shinx!
Sneasel, ran up to smack Magikarp, but Magikarp quickly flopped out of the way.
Andy: Now Shinx, dodge Poison Sting and use Tackle....
Magikarp smacks Sneasel with its tail, Sneasel goes flying, taking the poison sting attack.
Karmen: Sneasel is unable to battle!
Specs: Croagunk, ram shinx with your fist!
Andy: Bite it!
Croagunk runs up to hit Shinx and gets bitten. Croagunk then starts smacking Shinx on the ground.
Andy: Shinx, let go. Magikarp! Do Something!
Specs: Now finish it Croagunk!
Shinx releases its grip on Croagunk, who tries to hit Shinx point blank..
"Magikarp"
Magikarp rams croagunk's fist, knocking itself out and knocking down Croagunk.
Andy: Shinx, ends this!
Shinx jumps in the air and sends its tail crashing into Croagunk's stomach. Croagunk lets out a cough and faints.
Karmen: And Andy is the winner! Give him his badge Specs..
Specs: Are you gonaa tell me what to do?!
Karmen:...
Specs just 'cause you beat me doesn't mean i'm gonna give you the badge!
Specs starts running away and Andy fallows, yelling in vain.
"well, they'll be back soon" said Karmen, "I''ll just read my book for a while."
*10 minutes later*
Guys wait up!
Next Chapter: ?
Well that was a good chapter but andy did not get his badge until the next ten min. the gym leader did not accsept that he loss fair and square
Who says he gets thaat badge? He's still chasing Specs from our view...