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RE: Arceus Vs. Darkrai (my first fan fic) prologue up

good prologue....keep writing.

One thing of advice-Try using spell check....you had some errors.
 
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All right then, here's my submission. He can be good or bad, though I would prefur him evil..
 
RE: Arceus Vs. Darkrai (my first fan fic) prologue up

Chapter one


Pandemonium started to set in to the once peaceful city of Eternia. As people ran to where the explosion happened. Kenji and Noah ran towards the commotion to help any hurt by the explosion.

“Darn those whoever did this.” Noah said.
“Yeah I wonder what they were doing here?” Kenji said.
“No clue.” Noah said.

As they ran towards the crowd some screamed kenji’s name.

“Hey Kenji!” Someone said.

Kenji stopped to look around to see who said his name. After a minute someone walked up and tapped him on the shoulder.

“What the…..Oh hey Kaleb what’s up” Kenji said.
“Nothing I was in the area, and I knew about the Tournament, but I saw the explosion and ran here as fast as I could.” Kaleb said.

“Hey well catch up later lets go help those people.” Noah said.

As Kaleb, Kenji, and Noah got there police and the firefighters were already there.

“Darn we are too late to help.” Kenji said.
“Hey Officer Jenny what happened.” Kaleb said.
“A clan called the Darkness Clan attacked here wanting to know about a pokemon called Darkrai.” Jenny said.

Kenji turned around a started to walk away from the scene. He stopped after leaving the crowd, and just stood and stared at the sky.

“Hey Noah do you think that Professor Rowan would know about Darkrai?” Kenji asked.

“Honestly I don’t know, but we could try.” Noah answered.
“Ok Noah, Kaleb you go and find out about Darkrai. I am going to go find more about this Darkness Clan, and we will meet back here in 4 hours.” Kenji said.

Kaleb, and Noah nodded there heads and they went there separate ways for now.

“Salamance go.” Noah said.
“Lets go.” Kaleb said.
“Come on out Pidgeot.” Kenji said.

As Kaleb, and Noah went on there way to Sandgem Town. Kenji went in the way that the Darkness clan went.

An hour later Kaleb and Noah got to Professor Rowan’s Lab. As they walk up the path to Rowan’s lab a ship the same as the one in Eternia City flew away toward where Kenji might be. Kaleb and Noah realizing that they ran to the Lab to see if Rowan is okay. They got into the lab, and looked all around the lab to find Rowan. Finally they found him on the ground holding his arm.

“Professor Rowan are you okay?” Noah asked.
“Yeah I’ll be fine” Rowan said.
“what did the Darkness Clan want?” Kaleb said.
“So that who they were. They want to know about Darkrai for what I don’t know why.”

“Who is Darkrai” Noah asked.
“Sorry, but I don’t know, but there is one thing I have to say, and that is the Darkness Clan are really powerful.” Rowan said.

“Oh no Kenji!.” Kaleb said.

In a forest on Mt. Cornett Kenji has found the Darkness Clan’s hideout, and starts to listen in to the conversation.

“Professor Oak knew about it.” Said one of the grunts.
“Ok, and what did he say?” Said another voice.
“That Darkrai is an ancient legendary pokemon that is extremely powerful.” the grunt said.

“Understood, but if that is a warning I am not afraid of anything.” said other voice.”

“What a legendary pokemon that strong man if they get there hands on it were in trouble.” Kenji thought to himself.

“Hey intruder!” Said a guard.

End of Chapter one

Will Kenji be okey, and what does the Darkness Clan want with Darkrai.
 
RE: Arceus Vs. Darkrai (my first fan fic) Chapter one is done

It looks good.

Please don't PM me, my box is filled. :p
 
RE: Arceus Vs. Darkrai (my first fan fic) Chapter one is done

Sorry for the wait been very busy, but here it is.

Chapter 2

"Oh man busted." Kenji said.

Kenji stood there as all of the grunts surrounded him. They backed Kenji into a corner and each brought out a pokemon.

"Your in trouble kid" Said one grunt.
"Yeah just surrender now" Said another grunt.
"I don't even know the word surrender.?" Kenji said with a smile.

Kenji brought out all of his pokemon to battle all of the grunts. Kenji fought bravely, but in the end he lost to the power of the Darkness Clan.

"No I lost, but I can't lose." Kenji said.
"You can't beat us kid.? Said a mysterious voice.

Out of the shadows came the leader of the Darkness Clan. He walked up to Kenji, and threw him against the wall.

"Why are you messing with our plans?" He said.
"Well lets see you attacked a city packed with civilians." Kenji said.
"Who are you?" He said.
"I am the Sinnoh League Champion Kenji, and you are?" Kenji said.
"My name is Terren I am the leader of the Darkness Clan." Terren said.

He threw Kenji to the ground, and started to walk away. Just before he vanished into the shadows Kenji stood back up.

"You guys are pathetic. You guys actually think you will capture a legendary pokemon?" Kenji said.
"Yes we do think that and we will, but calling us pathetic is crossing the line, and for that you will pay. Attack him." Terren said.

With that command the Grunts sent the pokemon to attack and hurt Kenji. Kenji started to get hit with attack after attack. One grunt told his Metagross to do hyper beam. The beam threw Kenji to the wall. Has Kenji hit the wall he spat up blood, and fell to the ground.

Far at Eternia City Kaleb and Noah are starting to get worried about Kenji. The wait 4 hours and still there is no sign of Kenji any where.

"Man I am worried." Kaleb said.
"Me too." Noah replied.
"Lets go try to find him." Kaleb said.
"Yeah lets go." Noah said.

As they flew off on Salamance,  back at the hideout Kenji lies on the ground bruised and beaten.

"So now what are we still pathetic?" Terren said.
"Your...your...your heartless, and cruel." Kenji said.

Terren walked up to Kenji and picked him up. Threw him against the wall, and glared at him.

"We are heartless, well that new I thought we were little angels.? Terren said.
"Why...why are you doing this." Kenji said spiting out blood.
"Because we are going to rule the world." Terren said.

Terren turned and nodded at five grunts they brought out there pokemon, and had there pokemon start charging for Hyper Beam. All of the Hyper Beams Shot and Kenji raised his arms and tried to block. The Hyper Beams hit Kenji with full force. Kenji started to fall to the ground as the pokemon started to charge up again, but this time they missed cause at the last second Kaleb and Noah grabbed Kenji a flew away on Salamance.

"Thanks guys." Kenji said.
"You ok?" Kaleb asked.
"A little...What took ya?" Kenji said coughing up blood.
"Sorry we thought you got lost." Noah said.

Before Kenji could say anything else he passed out.

"Kenji...Kenji! Hurry get to a Pokemon Center." Kaleb said.
"Okay." Noah said.

End of Chapter 2

Will Kenji be okay, and will the darkness clan succeed find out in chapter 3
 
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