I was paying attention to that, that really gets me mad. People have to post in the old threads, not the new ones...
Writing Ash&Dawn (PG-13)
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My computer had some issues...so here's the next chapter....
As Dawn and Ash paddled to the island they spotted, their clothes were soaking wet
"Oh man ! We didn't bring out suitcases! They were still on the ship!" Dawn complained
"Well, at least we have each other" Ash replied. Dawn furiously rummaged for her cell phone in her purse. It got all wet and it shorted out the battery
"Great ! My phone's dead!" Dawn said, throwing it onto the white sand. Ash took out his from his pant pocket. Like Dawn’s it got all wet and the battery shorted out
"Now what do we do?" Ash wondered
"We search the island. We try and survive until we can call for help" Dawn stated
"Don't we have a Flying Pokemon?" Ash questioned
"I left my Dragonite back at the Lab. I wonder how the kids are doing..." Dawn replied
As Uncle Joe and Aunt Georgia put the kids to bed, there was a knock at the door
"Yes, can I help you?" Aunt Georgia questioned
"Ma'am, it pains me to say this but here it goes. Ahem, Mr. and Mrs. Ketchum have perished as their cruise ship, the S.S Waverider capsized in a storm" a coast guard official stated
"My god, I can't believe it!" Aunt Georgia said, flabbergasted. The coast guards' radio went buzzing off. He listened to them radio. And then continued speaking
"Wait. They’re alive. I just got radio transmission saying they're located on an island with no name" the coast guard official replied
"Well, that's good to hear!" Aunt Georgia replied
"But, they’re on a secret island hidden from explorers for thousands of years. I just hope they're going to be all right" the coast guard official replied, closing the door
Meanwhile, back on the island...
"I found some food!" Dawn stated
"And I got a fire going!" Ash replied
"Ash, there's something you have to see" Dawn replied. Dawn led Ash to an opening of a cave
"Did you check inside?" Ash questioned
"No, I can't put my finger on it, but something in strange with that cave" Dawn said. Then red eyes appeared. Dawn, frightened, grabbed Ash's shirt
"Dawn, what's wrong?" Ash questioned
"L-l-look I-i-in t-t-the c-c-cave!" Dawn said, stammering. Ash stares at the red, glaring eyes
"We'd better get out of here!" Ash shouted. But it was too late, a Pokemon, that appeared to be the evo of Kabutops, rushed out of the cave and grabbed a hold of Ash and Dawn! It then turned around and stomped back into the cave. Ash and Dawn continued screaming hoping that SOMEONE would hear them, but no one could...
END Chapter 8!
As Dawn and Ash paddled to the island they spotted, their clothes were soaking wet
"Oh man ! We didn't bring out suitcases! They were still on the ship!" Dawn complained
"Well, at least we have each other" Ash replied. Dawn furiously rummaged for her cell phone in her purse. It got all wet and it shorted out the battery
"Great ! My phone's dead!" Dawn said, throwing it onto the white sand. Ash took out his from his pant pocket. Like Dawn’s it got all wet and the battery shorted out
"Now what do we do?" Ash wondered
"We search the island. We try and survive until we can call for help" Dawn stated
"Don't we have a Flying Pokemon?" Ash questioned
"I left my Dragonite back at the Lab. I wonder how the kids are doing..." Dawn replied
As Uncle Joe and Aunt Georgia put the kids to bed, there was a knock at the door
"Yes, can I help you?" Aunt Georgia questioned
"Ma'am, it pains me to say this but here it goes. Ahem, Mr. and Mrs. Ketchum have perished as their cruise ship, the S.S Waverider capsized in a storm" a coast guard official stated
"My god, I can't believe it!" Aunt Georgia said, flabbergasted. The coast guards' radio went buzzing off. He listened to them radio. And then continued speaking
"Wait. They’re alive. I just got radio transmission saying they're located on an island with no name" the coast guard official replied
"Well, that's good to hear!" Aunt Georgia replied
"But, they’re on a secret island hidden from explorers for thousands of years. I just hope they're going to be all right" the coast guard official replied, closing the door
Meanwhile, back on the island...
"I found some food!" Dawn stated
"And I got a fire going!" Ash replied
"Ash, there's something you have to see" Dawn replied. Dawn led Ash to an opening of a cave
"Did you check inside?" Ash questioned
"No, I can't put my finger on it, but something in strange with that cave" Dawn said. Then red eyes appeared. Dawn, frightened, grabbed Ash's shirt
"Dawn, what's wrong?" Ash questioned
"L-l-look I-i-in t-t-the c-c-cave!" Dawn said, stammering. Ash stares at the red, glaring eyes
"We'd better get out of here!" Ash shouted. But it was too late, a Pokemon, that appeared to be the evo of Kabutops, rushed out of the cave and grabbed a hold of Ash and Dawn! It then turned around and stomped back into the cave. Ash and Dawn continued screaming hoping that SOMEONE would hear them, but no one could...
END Chapter 8!
Evo of Kabutops... I can't wait to see how this turns out!
Unforunately....this is how far I got...so, I'll have to write the rest of the chapters out...just so you know...
What does it look like?
Also, I know this is a nooby question, but what is a PEARLSHIPPING Fanfic?
A Pearlshipping fic features Ash (Satoshi) and Dawn (Hikari) as the main couple...
In Japan, this also call this pairing SatoHika (Satoshi-Hikari)
In Japan, this also call this pairing SatoHika (Satoshi-Hikari)
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I think the cruise ship captain might be Darkrai in disguise, plotting in secret to thwart our heroes. Read on:
- Ash and Dawn paddled to the island? That one that wasn't even visible on the horizon when they first looked? Never mind the weirdness of that, they paddled there? I kinda find that hard to believe... perhaps their strength is merely borrowed... from Darkrai, who wants them to get captured and eaten by a freakish evolution of Kabutops??? That fiend.
"BUT PMJ WHY NOT LET THEM JUST DROWN LOL???"
Because Darkrai is one sick, twisted Pokemon. That's why.
- How did the Coast Guard know Ash and Dawn were missing? The captain of the cruise ship said everyone was accounted for, so what reason was there to believe anyone was missing at all? Simple. The captain (Darkrai) obviously lied. Ash and Dawn are good people (I suppose), so of course a stand-up guy like the captain of a cruise liner would not intentionally leave Ash and Dawn behind.
- How were Ash and Dawn found in the first place? Better yet, why didn't Ash or Dawn see or hear the aerial vehicle (most likely a helicopter) in the area? And why didn't said aerial vehicle (most likely a helicopter) go get them and save Ash and Dawn the trouble of getting captured by an evolution of Kabutops? This sounds like it's all part of Darkrai's plot to kill our heroes.
"true facts," as they say.
- Ash and Dawn paddled to the island? That one that wasn't even visible on the horizon when they first looked? Never mind the weirdness of that, they paddled there? I kinda find that hard to believe... perhaps their strength is merely borrowed... from Darkrai, who wants them to get captured and eaten by a freakish evolution of Kabutops??? That fiend.
"BUT PMJ WHY NOT LET THEM JUST DROWN LOL???"
Because Darkrai is one sick, twisted Pokemon. That's why.
- How did the Coast Guard know Ash and Dawn were missing? The captain of the cruise ship said everyone was accounted for, so what reason was there to believe anyone was missing at all? Simple. The captain (Darkrai) obviously lied. Ash and Dawn are good people (I suppose), so of course a stand-up guy like the captain of a cruise liner would not intentionally leave Ash and Dawn behind.
- How were Ash and Dawn found in the first place? Better yet, why didn't Ash or Dawn see or hear the aerial vehicle (most likely a helicopter) in the area? And why didn't said aerial vehicle (most likely a helicopter) go get them and save Ash and Dawn the trouble of getting captured by an evolution of Kabutops? This sounds like it's all part of Darkrai's plot to kill our heroes.
"true facts," as they say.
Nice part of the story when is chapter uhhh 9?
You should Post pictures.
I suck at drawling. I'd had to draw to show you the pictures, and I suck at it...
I am good at drawing for my age.
I'm alright, I'm good at drawing Robots, you know, the ones that are 30 stories tall?
My theory is that the Captain is Kenny, he faked his own death so Dawn and Ash don't expect him coming back and killing them (He wants to kill Dawn because of what she said to him). When he heard Ash and Dawn were on the ship, he crashed on pupose. He made sure everybody EXCEPT Ash and Dawn were not there, then, deserted the ship. He purpously crashed it near that particular island, knowing there was a Kabutops evolution on that island, which would kill them.
PS: How do they know where Ash and Dawn are if they said the island had been hidden from explorers for centuries?
My theory is that the Captain is Kenny, he faked his own death so Dawn and Ash don't expect him coming back and killing them (He wants to kill Dawn because of what she said to him). When he heard Ash and Dawn were on the ship, he crashed on pupose. He made sure everybody EXCEPT Ash and Dawn were not there, then, deserted the ship. He purpously crashed it near that particular island, knowing there was a Kabutops evolution on that island, which would kill them.
PS: How do they know where Ash and Dawn are if they said the island had been hidden from explorers for centuries?
Because they're would've been a flag from whatever country landed their first...
For centuries, the Grand Islands (made-up) were a 8-island chain...now there's a 9th...
For centuries, the Grand Islands (made-up) were a 8-island chain...now there's a 9th...
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