Writing Ash x Misty (chapters 1-19) 13+

What would you rate this story???

  • VG (very good)

    Votes: 7 58.3%

  • G (good)

    Votes: 3 25.0%

  • S (satisfactory)

    Votes: 1 8.3%

  • W (weak)

    Votes: 1 8.3%
  • Total voters
    12
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RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-18) 13+

I knew you were English! I just went into year seven (then left for home schooling) and everyone said OMG s/he's well fit and we had form rooms also congrats on the gf i said to some i like Pokemon and they said: ERRR! your just a like kid... bruv. so yeah anyway keep writing the obscure Pop and Internet references are great!
 
RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-18) 13+

high school musical heroes some other movies i forgot if thats not obscure then what is???
 
RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-18) 13+

are you gonna keep updating this version or are you only gonna update the other version on your website?
 
Sorry i haven't been adding much lately i've been busy making my harry potter rpg forums, anyway i'll most likely let my stories die then add them later on in the year when i've added alot more...
 
Awesome needs more action in it though(Where is Pikachu?) Cant wait till next update.
 
Kk look i have stopped updating as i am writing alot more stories and adding alot more to existing stories, they'll be up by summer 2009, earliest...
And pikachu, nor any other bpokemon is in this story... It is Human only...
 
I like the plot, but the chapters are way too short. I enjoy a long read, and this is certainly not that. I like to see good grammar, especially correct punctuation, but this is also lacking in that department. There's a saying that a short time in a crisis will bond people better than a few months in normal circumstances. If you take that into account, I doubt you will ever run out of ideas. Several dozen are running through my head already, and I'm not even the writer.
 
pmj was here and deleted this post because it was linky and sucky
 
Sorry, Pokegamaker25, but this thread's last post was in 2008, and the forum rules state not to post in threads that haven't had new posts for two weeks or more.

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