Writing Bonsly's new fanfic!

LOVE IT! The only thing I have to say that you can improve on, and I am still trying to learn this, is slow down a little. The last chapter seemed to rush. And don't worry. I am still trying to slow it down too. And do you need anymore Trainers?
 
Okay thanks! Yeah I agree on the slowing down part. And yeah I still need two more characters.
 
Ok. Here is mine:

Character's name: Bubba Stallworth
Characters Bio: Bubba is a normal pokemon trainer who started on his journey in Kanto. Actually, his bio is in my Fan Fic. So, everything that happened in my fan fic is now happening in yours, is that all right?
Starter Pokemon:Of Course...GROWLITHE
 

  • name:jake
bio:jake wasnt interested in pokemon until he met an elekid.after he met elekid he was interested.he wanted to be a trainer and get badges.

  • final team:elctivire,magmortar,infernape,staraptor,luxray,any pokemon you want to put in:)
 
*Chills going up my back* A...A...AMAZING! That chapter has everything! It wasn't rushed, it flowed together, and it was a CLIFF HANGER! You better make the next chapter tonight. IT IS SO COOL!
 
Thanks for the comments everyone :D!Okay I am going to post chapter 6 in A little bit. Sorry its taking so long but my hand broke so I can only type with one hand so it takes longer to write something lol.
 
Football lol. Someone stepped on my hand without knowing it and stood there for A few seconds. They were 2 years older than me and at least 20 pounds heavier lol.
 
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