RE: champion island!
Darn it!
I didn't see!
Also check out my fic:http://pokebeach.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=18763
Darn it!
I didn't see!
Also check out my fic:http://pokebeach.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=18763
champion island!Please comment!
- Thread starter hypertech
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RE: champion island!
Yea,and everyone keeps thiking it's going to be Aipom!
Yes,I know my username is CrazyAipom,but it's not Aipom!
Yea,and everyone keeps thiking it's going to be Aipom!
Yes,I know my username is CrazyAipom,but it's not Aipom!
RE: champion island!
Im Im bored so ill do a chapter!
Chapter 6:A battle and an explosion!
VS
"NURSE JOY???" Screamed crazy aipom and MOT6K
"No not really"Replies Hypertech
VS
"LETS GO TORTERRA!" Cried Jack.
"COME ON OUT VENASAUR!"Shouted Jason.
"Venasaur, use SOLARBEAM!"
Venasaur powered up using the sun.This was Jacks chance.
"TORTERRA USE LEAF STORM"
A bonbardment of leaves and twigs came rushing towards venasaur.
Venasaur was thrown back off its feet.
"NOW VENASAUR UNLEACH YOUR CHARGED POWER!!!"
Venasaurs leaf suddenly burst an extremely powerful beam of sunlight
"HANG IN THERE TORTERRA"
Jack cried out.
"NOW USE GIGA DRAIN!!!" Torterra use its tree to suck up power from venasaur.
"VENASAUR SHOW THEM YOUR GIGA DRAIN!!!" Venasaur used a harsh giga drain back.
"TORTERRA NOW USE EARTHQUAKE!" Torterra bent its tree down to slam the ground into a heavy earthquake.
Venasaur fell on its back and Jason called it back.
"ALRIGHT JACK" Dan cried but then stoppped because the strange looking plant opened an eye.Then another one then a mouth!It was a carnivine!Then it started spitting bullet seeds al around the place causing mini explosions!
Nurse Joy rushed everyone out as Jack recalled his torterra.
Then carnivine followed them.
Carnivine spat 1 final seed at the pokemon centre and it exploded.
Carnivine started to float away.
"CATCH THAT CARNIVINE!" Jason cried and they al started running after it.
Im Im bored so ill do a chapter!
Chapter 6:A battle and an explosion!
VS
"NURSE JOY???" Screamed crazy aipom and MOT6K
"No not really"Replies Hypertech
VS
"LETS GO TORTERRA!" Cried Jack.
"COME ON OUT VENASAUR!"Shouted Jason.
"Venasaur, use SOLARBEAM!"
Venasaur powered up using the sun.This was Jacks chance.
"TORTERRA USE LEAF STORM"
A bonbardment of leaves and twigs came rushing towards venasaur.
Venasaur was thrown back off its feet.
"NOW VENASAUR UNLEACH YOUR CHARGED POWER!!!"
Venasaurs leaf suddenly burst an extremely powerful beam of sunlight
"HANG IN THERE TORTERRA"
Jack cried out.
"NOW USE GIGA DRAIN!!!" Torterra use its tree to suck up power from venasaur.
"VENASAUR SHOW THEM YOUR GIGA DRAIN!!!" Venasaur used a harsh giga drain back.
"TORTERRA NOW USE EARTHQUAKE!" Torterra bent its tree down to slam the ground into a heavy earthquake.
Venasaur fell on its back and Jason called it back.
"ALRIGHT JACK" Dan cried but then stoppped because the strange looking plant opened an eye.Then another one then a mouth!It was a carnivine!Then it started spitting bullet seeds al around the place causing mini explosions!
Nurse Joy rushed everyone out as Jack recalled his torterra.
Then carnivine followed them.
Carnivine spat 1 final seed at the pokemon centre and it exploded.
Carnivine started to float away.
"CATCH THAT CARNIVINE!" Jason cried and they al started running after it.
RE: champion island!
Woah!
Woah!
RE: champion island!
Chapter 7: The avalanche.
As they all started chasing the carnivine, Dan couldnt help noticing that the plane had started to move towards them...
The carnivine suddenly stopped in its tracks, and turned around.
"NOWS OUR CHANCE!, GO WALREIN!" Dawn said has she sent out her walrein.
CARNIVINE VS WALREIN!
Carnivine launched its deadly bullet seed at walrein, walrein recieved the damage full on.
"Walrein try your ice beam!"
Walrein opened its mouth to launch a powerful beam of ice at carnivine.
Carnivine stopped levitating, it seemed like the carnivine was digging his roots into the ground.Then out of the ground beneath walrein carnivines roots came rushing out to grip walrein.
"Walrein, use ice ball!"
But walrein did not respond, it was being clung onto by the roots like bess and honey.
Carnivine spat more bullet seeds at walrein.
carnivine loosened its grip on walrein...
"Walrein, quick, ICE BEAM!"Walrein launched another beam of ice at carnivine.
Carnive ran round a corner, they all followed. But when they looked round, they couldnt see carnivine, but they looked closer and there carnivine was, on am mountain top.
It took about 10 minutes to get half way up the mountain. Then the plane launched a giant laser straight at the mountain!
There was an explosion, then boulders started falling. They all tripped up and started falling down,down down to the ground,Dan was falling right underneath a boulder and if he didnt act soon the boulder would crush him. He screamed, this was surely the end.
Then a hyper beam came out of nowhere and smashed the boulder!It was Lance on his dragonite. Lance then caught Dan with his dragonite, Dan looked around, the rest were safely mounted on Lances other pokemon.
Once they reached the ground. Jack cried: "LOOK ITS MY BROTHERS TRAINER CARD, AND TIMS TOO!"
"There probably fake, bait."Lance said.
"Can I rip then then?"Asked Jason picking up the trainer cards.
"NO"
But Jason had already started.
Meanwhile...
"Tim, have you seen my trainer card?"
"I was gonna ask you the same thing Bill."
...
Chapter 7: The avalanche.
As they all started chasing the carnivine, Dan couldnt help noticing that the plane had started to move towards them...
The carnivine suddenly stopped in its tracks, and turned around.
"NOWS OUR CHANCE!, GO WALREIN!" Dawn said has she sent out her walrein.
CARNIVINE VS WALREIN!
Carnivine launched its deadly bullet seed at walrein, walrein recieved the damage full on.
"Walrein try your ice beam!"
Walrein opened its mouth to launch a powerful beam of ice at carnivine.
Carnivine stopped levitating, it seemed like the carnivine was digging his roots into the ground.Then out of the ground beneath walrein carnivines roots came rushing out to grip walrein.
"Walrein, use ice ball!"
But walrein did not respond, it was being clung onto by the roots like bess and honey.
Carnivine spat more bullet seeds at walrein.
carnivine loosened its grip on walrein...
"Walrein, quick, ICE BEAM!"Walrein launched another beam of ice at carnivine.
Carnive ran round a corner, they all followed. But when they looked round, they couldnt see carnivine, but they looked closer and there carnivine was, on am mountain top.
It took about 10 minutes to get half way up the mountain. Then the plane launched a giant laser straight at the mountain!
There was an explosion, then boulders started falling. They all tripped up and started falling down,down down to the ground,Dan was falling right underneath a boulder and if he didnt act soon the boulder would crush him. He screamed, this was surely the end.
Then a hyper beam came out of nowhere and smashed the boulder!It was Lance on his dragonite. Lance then caught Dan with his dragonite, Dan looked around, the rest were safely mounted on Lances other pokemon.
Once they reached the ground. Jack cried: "LOOK ITS MY BROTHERS TRAINER CARD, AND TIMS TOO!"
"There probably fake, bait."Lance said.
"Can I rip then then?"Asked Jason picking up the trainer cards.
"NO"
But Jason had already started.
Meanwhile...
"Tim, have you seen my trainer card?"
"I was gonna ask you the same thing Bill."
...
RE: champion island!
Chapter 8: The plot thickens...
"JASON!I DIDNT SAY THAT THEY WERE FAKE, I SAID THEY WERE PROBLY FAKE, WHAT IF THERE NOT?!" Lance screamed at Jason.
"Simple, they start there journey all over again!"Jason replied cheerfully."EXACTLY!" Cried Dan."Thats the least of our problems, why did the plane shoot at you?"Said Lance.
Meanwhile, on the plane.
"Anymore hypertech full trainer cards?"
"Yes boss, a little girls and a teenaged boys, I think his name was... Lewis?"
"Good work"
"Thankyou boss, did the laser hit?"
"Yes, but Lance saved them, how I hate that Lance..."
"Dont worry boss, very soon you will have enough trainer cards,"
Another man went into the room.
"Boss, those kids destroyed two trainer cards I think there onto us..."
"NOOO! Jordon, James, destroy them!"
"Yessir,"Jordon and James said together, and hurried out of the plane.
"My walreins kinda weak, i mean after the fight it had with carnivine,"
Dawn complained.
"Im more worried about my torterra," Jack replied.
"To bad the pokemon centres out of buiseness, and I expect it will be for a long time,"Dan replied.
"Gee, do you think that the people on that plane are stealing the hypertech?" Asked Jason quizzickly.
"Hold it right there!" Jordan and James had ran out of nowhere!
"Who are you?"Dawn said scaredly.
"We just want your hypertech, then well leave you alone, just after we destroy you, MWAHAHAHHAHAHAHAA!"James laughed evily.
Suddenly, a cage dropped from the plane!
Dan and Lance managed to dive out of the way just in time, but Jack, Dawn and Jason were trapped!
"Let them go!"Cried Dan.
"Theres no way that we are letting them go!"Jordan said, he then pulled three pokeballs out of his belt and said:
"How about kid, Me and James VS You and Lance!Double battle, 6 pokemon on each team!3 each!"
"Your on!"
PLEASE COMMENT IM BEGGING YOU!
Chapter 8: The plot thickens...
"JASON!I DIDNT SAY THAT THEY WERE FAKE, I SAID THEY WERE PROBLY FAKE, WHAT IF THERE NOT?!" Lance screamed at Jason.
"Simple, they start there journey all over again!"Jason replied cheerfully."EXACTLY!" Cried Dan."Thats the least of our problems, why did the plane shoot at you?"Said Lance.
Meanwhile, on the plane.
"Anymore hypertech full trainer cards?"
"Yes boss, a little girls and a teenaged boys, I think his name was... Lewis?"
"Good work"
"Thankyou boss, did the laser hit?"
"Yes, but Lance saved them, how I hate that Lance..."
"Dont worry boss, very soon you will have enough trainer cards,"
Another man went into the room.
"Boss, those kids destroyed two trainer cards I think there onto us..."
"NOOO! Jordon, James, destroy them!"
"Yessir,"Jordon and James said together, and hurried out of the plane.
"My walreins kinda weak, i mean after the fight it had with carnivine,"
Dawn complained.
"Im more worried about my torterra," Jack replied.
"To bad the pokemon centres out of buiseness, and I expect it will be for a long time,"Dan replied.
"Gee, do you think that the people on that plane are stealing the hypertech?" Asked Jason quizzickly.
"Hold it right there!" Jordan and James had ran out of nowhere!
"Who are you?"Dawn said scaredly.
"We just want your hypertech, then well leave you alone, just after we destroy you, MWAHAHAHHAHAHAHAA!"James laughed evily.
Suddenly, a cage dropped from the plane!
Dan and Lance managed to dive out of the way just in time, but Jack, Dawn and Jason were trapped!
"Let them go!"Cried Dan.
"Theres no way that we are letting them go!"Jordan said, he then pulled three pokeballs out of his belt and said:
"How about kid, Me and James VS You and Lance!Double battle, 6 pokemon on each team!3 each!"
"Your on!"
PLEASE COMMENT IM BEGGING YOU!
No way man it's awsome. People are just lazy. The post by voting on your poll and think that's enough. Your story's pretty darn good. Can't wait to see the 3 Pokemon everyone chooses.
Sorry, I haven't been on lately if I was I was working on my fan-fic but I just read the latest part great job man it's better than mine