Writing Choose your Destiny: A pokemon Adventure for the Ages
- Thread starter B-Ray
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well, i'm glad to see the great responses...i'll be keeping myself up to date on the story here, but, since, i wont have to write a chapter for a while, i'll be focusing on my own writings. good luck to whoever writes the next chapter!
your very right Tormence.....In fact, I was planning on it from the beginning. One person from each team will write the same chapter from the two teams perspectives. Im writing my teams Chapter 3, its on paper right now, but I can type it later or tommorrow. As an added bonus, we will be having special quest writers come into the story, only to write a chapter or two for us. I have one special guest confirmed [MPM dont say ANYTHING] so keep posted for that!
Black Rayquaza said:
hehe....I KNWO WHO IT I-.....i know nothing.
Shard your already a character so It can't be you. der
Anyway people useless noob talk anywhere but the game corner is considered to be bumping or spamming.
Anyway people useless noob talk anywhere but the game corner is considered to be bumping or spamming.
tormence said:
i do not believe B-Ray ended his first story, and if he did, i didnt read it...sorry... anyway, i cannot wait for the next chapter!
and shard, dont post that again....its just plain SUPER DUPER ANNOYING
Well, since theres going to be 2 chapters in a chapter heres my Chapter 3.....I need someone from the other team to write their side of Chapter 3 so first post, first write.
Team Veterans Chapter 3-The City of Lights!
"Whoa! Thats a Rush!"Sam shouted over the loud, sputter of the motorcycles.
"You bet it is!" I shouted back as I turned the corner.
"You know, Im not just saying this because I want to, but lets stop and enjoy Vegas for a couple days,we NEVER get a break!"James said.
"Sounds good to me.....I've never been here!" I said.
"Me too!" Sam said.
"Then its settled......well stay in Vegas for awhile.....Now, What hotel should we stay at?" Max said.
"How bout the Mirage?" Sam asked.
"No, what about the Belaggio?" James said.
"Neither.....The MGM grand.....biggest hotel and casino in Las Vegas!" I said.
"I agree.....the MGM it is."
"Wait a minute now.....Area 51 is only like 20 miles from here according to my tracking application......we should stay here.....why would Deep Throat look HERE? Theres so many people in this city he'd never find us. Whatta say Max?" I asked.
"We need to Penthouses then.....lets go."
The gang go directions and made their way to the huge casino. The glowing fountain looked amazing. You know the end of Oceans 11, when their all sitting by the fountain.....thats how I felt. I wish that music was there.....good orchestra is hard to come by these days....Well, we parked the bikes and made our way to the reception desk where a lady was standing.
"Good evening, welcome to the world famous MGM Grand Hotel and Casino!" she said. "How may I help you?"
"Hi, my name is Max Shade. I would like to buy two penthouses, next to each other." Max said.
"Buy them as in RENT them or buy them as in BUY them as in by the acual penthouses for ever?"
"I'll buy the whole thing....were gonna need to stay here for awhile and theres good property value in Vegas....why not?"
"Well, its gonna be around 750,000 dollars.....you still wanna buy them?"
"Yes, I do. Now do you take credit cards here? If not, then I'll have to make a quick stop to the bank" Max said chuckleing at his last remark.
"We can take credit cards, sir. Whenever your ready."
"Here it is," Max said. He pulled out a Black American Express card.....you know the one moviestars and famous/really really rich people get so that they can spend outragous amounts of money at a time. He handed the card to the lady.
"Thank you, enjoy your well stay...erm new house thing."
We all walked fast to the elevator. James pushed the button, and as soon as they entered the elevator and the door closed, everyone busted out laughing at the girls shaky response. The elevator stopped on the top floor, and there was two doors.....one on the left and one on the right.
"Heres what were gonna do...."Max said. "The house on the left.....is the meeting house. We will discuss all plans/ideas in the meeting house.There should be two beds somewhere in the penthouse. James and Sam, I'd like to to take those beds out and put them into the other penthouse. Also, if everyone didnt notice, the other penthouse will be used to sleep, cook, etc. Basically everything else we DONT do in the other room....."
"The beds are moved!" Sam reported.
"Good, Good.....now tell James that I need the number of the company we use for our meeting room supplies. I'll do the rest." Max said.
Once, everything was settled and things were set up, the pace of the day really calmed down......I mean, think about it. This afternoon, we were launched from aircraft onto motorcycles and poped into an entire new city. Now, were just watching TV.....the news is on. I wonder if the Rookies left base yet......they better hurry.....they need to leave by tonight.....Hey, whats this? Hey, listen to this. Its sayin on the news that some guy broke into the Diamond Exchange in Las Vegas......at that moment we all froze. It was him.
*End of Chapter 3* Team Veterans
Team Veterans Chapter 3-The City of Lights!
"Whoa! Thats a Rush!"Sam shouted over the loud, sputter of the motorcycles.
"You bet it is!" I shouted back as I turned the corner.
"You know, Im not just saying this because I want to, but lets stop and enjoy Vegas for a couple days,we NEVER get a break!"James said.
"Sounds good to me.....I've never been here!" I said.
"Me too!" Sam said.
"Then its settled......well stay in Vegas for awhile.....Now, What hotel should we stay at?" Max said.
"How bout the Mirage?" Sam asked.
"No, what about the Belaggio?" James said.
"Neither.....The MGM grand.....biggest hotel and casino in Las Vegas!" I said.
"I agree.....the MGM it is."
"Wait a minute now.....Area 51 is only like 20 miles from here according to my tracking application......we should stay here.....why would Deep Throat look HERE? Theres so many people in this city he'd never find us. Whatta say Max?" I asked.
"We need to Penthouses then.....lets go."
The gang go directions and made their way to the huge casino. The glowing fountain looked amazing. You know the end of Oceans 11, when their all sitting by the fountain.....thats how I felt. I wish that music was there.....good orchestra is hard to come by these days....Well, we parked the bikes and made our way to the reception desk where a lady was standing.
"Good evening, welcome to the world famous MGM Grand Hotel and Casino!" she said. "How may I help you?"
"Hi, my name is Max Shade. I would like to buy two penthouses, next to each other." Max said.
"Buy them as in RENT them or buy them as in BUY them as in by the acual penthouses for ever?"
"I'll buy the whole thing....were gonna need to stay here for awhile and theres good property value in Vegas....why not?"
"Well, its gonna be around 750,000 dollars.....you still wanna buy them?"
"Yes, I do. Now do you take credit cards here? If not, then I'll have to make a quick stop to the bank" Max said chuckleing at his last remark.
"We can take credit cards, sir. Whenever your ready."
"Here it is," Max said. He pulled out a Black American Express card.....you know the one moviestars and famous/really really rich people get so that they can spend outragous amounts of money at a time. He handed the card to the lady.
"Thank you, enjoy your well stay...erm new house thing."
We all walked fast to the elevator. James pushed the button, and as soon as they entered the elevator and the door closed, everyone busted out laughing at the girls shaky response. The elevator stopped on the top floor, and there was two doors.....one on the left and one on the right.
"Heres what were gonna do...."Max said. "The house on the left.....is the meeting house. We will discuss all plans/ideas in the meeting house.There should be two beds somewhere in the penthouse. James and Sam, I'd like to to take those beds out and put them into the other penthouse. Also, if everyone didnt notice, the other penthouse will be used to sleep, cook, etc. Basically everything else we DONT do in the other room....."
"The beds are moved!" Sam reported.
"Good, Good.....now tell James that I need the number of the company we use for our meeting room supplies. I'll do the rest." Max said.
Once, everything was settled and things were set up, the pace of the day really calmed down......I mean, think about it. This afternoon, we were launched from aircraft onto motorcycles and poped into an entire new city. Now, were just watching TV.....the news is on. I wonder if the Rookies left base yet......they better hurry.....they need to leave by tonight.....Hey, whats this? Hey, listen to this. Its sayin on the news that some guy broke into the Diamond Exchange in Las Vegas......at that moment we all froze. It was him.
*End of Chapter 3* Team Veterans
very nice. but if i may make a suggestion:
type it up in Microsoft Word first. even though there are few spelling errors, it was enough that i had to re-read a few things. other than that, I'M LOVING IT!
type it up in Microsoft Word first. even though there are few spelling errors, it was enough that i had to re-read a few things. other than that, I'M LOVING IT!
Torrmence gets the write Chapter 3 Team Rookies.....I'll PM the details in a moment.
MPM- I usually do.....but this time I was copying my work off paper, and it was easier to just type it in the new reply then the type it into word, then copy paste. I did spell check it but I guess it wasnt perfect.....then again it was midnight and I was very tired. I just woke up ehhhh 10 mins ago,so yeah.
MPM- I usually do.....but this time I was copying my work off paper, and it was easier to just type it in the new reply then the type it into word, then copy paste. I did spell check it but I guess it wasnt perfect.....then again it was midnight and I was very tired. I just woke up ehhhh 10 mins ago,so yeah.
1. Please dont double post.....just edit.
2. Dont post it without showing it to me.....thats a rule. If ANYONE, posts a new chapter without running it by me, I dont care who it is, they will not write another chapter. I want to to be different, but it you cant change the way I'd like things to run.
2. Dont post it without showing it to me.....thats a rule. If ANYONE, posts a new chapter without running it by me, I dont care who it is, they will not write another chapter. I want to to be different, but it you cant change the way I'd like things to run.