Finished Convicted - (Murder/Mystery Game)

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Chapter Two

Cinccino slings the video camera over her right shoulder and aims the small, circular lens at the green bird in front of her. Natu coughs a little, tells Cinccino to press the play button, and clutches a microphone in her one foot.

“Just in--household cook turned killer? Tonight, watch in detail about how Mayor Victini was murdered within his own walls. Smeargle, do you have any response to the charges brought upon you?” Natu asks, her eyes wide and narrow.

“Shut up, Natu, you’re not a cop,” you groan.

Smeargle ignores you and speaks anyway. "Have you any idea what sort of repetition poisoned food would give a chef like me? I'll be ruined if this gets out! Why would I do such a thing? It must have been Slowpoke! He entered the kitchen, mad at the mayor, and poisoned the tea when I wasn't looking!"

“Ah, steering the guilt away. Things are just not looking good for you, huh?” Natu taunts.

“Um, sorry to interrupt, but they haven’t taken his statement into consideration yet, so you can’t exactly deliver your own verdict, Natu. After all, Slowpoke is a Chemist and knows what could kill someone,” Cinccino frowns.

“CUT! Arceus, you people just cannot be formal in times like these. First the insult on my occupation and now my underling can’t even do the one job she was given. Unprofessional!

“Boy, she’d do anything for a scoop, wouldn’t she?” Smeargle mutters to you. You don’t answer.

Toxicroak takes Smeargle and Slowpoke, both suspects, upstairs to a private location. Natu, Sneasel, Blissey, Cinccino, and Gardevoir remain on the ground floor with you. While your partner finds a good place to interrogate, you have to talk to the remaining guests as you wait.

You see Gardevoir crying in a chair next to the covered-up body. “I just can’t believe he’s gone. I just can’t!”

Sneasel creeps up beside her. “How long have the two of you been...doing whatever you’re doing?”

“We’ve known each other for a while; we’ve always had this sort of closeness, but this was new. It just started.”

“Didn’t you put something in his drink?” asks a curious Cinccino. “I seem to recall you catching his drink and sprinkling something in it.”

“That was...that was simply a love potion I had created through love, tears, and by collecting the little hearts I make when using TM Attract,” she blushes.

“So you’re not his secret admirer from before? I knew he was already cheating on me, but if it wasn’t with you, Gardevoir, then someone else is the culprit!” Sneasel asserts.

“How do we not know you didn’t kill him out of anger? Or in greed? Wouldn’t you be on the receiving end of his will?” Blissey mentions.

Sneasel looks shyly at the ground. “He never showed it to anyone. He claimed that he had special people to bury his money approximately five meters to the left of his favorite restaurant, MooMoo Central. They served the best milk…!” she sniffs before all-out bawling.



Roselia uses a flower petal to open up a small safe through a rugged keyhole. “Flower power is the real power,” she giggles. Roselia lifts the lid and looks through several papers, including love letters, sticky notes, and random documents. She keeps looking, but she does not find the deed to the house. However, she does come along a certain paper with fancy writing...the actual will of Mayor Victini. She begins reading it, hears someone coming from the stairs, and stuffs the letter in between the petals of her flower hands. Roselia then darts from the bedroom she was in to the bathroom and shuts the door. She leans against it, panting, and then decides to read the will.


“Are you threatening me? I can claw your psychic energy right out of your face!” Sneasel screams before throwing her claws aimlessly at Gardevoir.

“Cinccino, get the camera! This is a gold mine!” gasps Natu.

You, annoyed, turn your head and see a shadow moving slightly near one of the exit windows. Before the creature can escape, you sling your arm back, hand glowing black, and Sucker Punch the opponent.

A small, purple cat with scary-looking pink eyelids is thrown against the wall and grits her teeth. She sits, surrounded, and relaxes her shoulders.

“Fine, you got me,” she says.

“Oh yes I did.”


“Togekiss, there’s something I need to admit to you,” Nidoking quietly whispers to her in the same closet as before.

“I’m listening, Nido,” she smiles.

“I got invited to this party for us because I helped Victini rig the election--I got involved in the lottery and made him win enough for his campaign and more. This is his way of repaying me.

“What are you saying?”

“I got the benefits of rigging this town’s election because of my deal.”

“How was he elected, then?”

“It’s because Victini is a legendary Pokemon and he represents power. He had a lot of money before the election, so he stood out as one who could make a difference. Arceus knows he never cared about the middle evolutions, but the highest percentage of Pokemon were his best friends. Look at who all is here--doctors, lawyers, the press. This is just one big show. We’re invited because I screwed this town a million times over. If I could reverse my actions, I would.”

Togekiss frowns but doesn’t say anything.

“Despite Victini’s popularity and mild success, my friend Nidoqueen--do you remember her?--had to move out of Bafu due to unemployment. She wasn’t the only one laid off--do you remember Charmeleon, the bag boy over there are the PokeMart? Yep, he’s gone. He lives in the west now, or so I’ve heard. Victini’s ruined this city, and I came to this party to set things straight. Will you go to Victini with me? I want to end this. Now.”

Hearing Nidoqueen’s name hurt, but Nidoking seems concerned for the town. Togekiss closes her eyes when he mentions ending things, as she wonders to what extremes he would go to do so.

“Please?”



“Alright, Smeargle, you’re free to go,” you tell the poor cook.

“I figured I would be,” he remarks. Smeargle exits the small guest room and heads toward the stairwell.

“Slowpoke,” you say, redirecting your attention to him. “What do you know about the poison that killed Victini?”

Slowpoke cocks his head to the side and looks blankly at you. “Is Victini really dead? Did you make sure?”

“....Yes, yes I did. Over two hours ago. Seriously, Slowpoke--the question isn’t hard: what do you know about that poison?”

“I know poison is easy to make. Just about any Pokemon can do it with the use of a single TM,” Slowpoke says. “However, are you sure poison killed him? Not old age?”

You stare at him with a sour look in your eyes and allow him to return downstairs. “Now, Purrloin,” you continue. “Why are you here?”

Purrloin snootily shuts her eyes and swings her head to the side, much to your dismay. You lift an arm and your hand glows purple.

“One Poison Jab per question you don’t answer. Fair?”

Purrloin turns her head back toward you and smiles. “Hardly.”

You lower your hand and keep your eyes on the mysterious Devious Pokemon.



Roselia hears mostly everyone go down the stairs and returns to the empty master bedroom. She shuts the door gently and opens that note out. She then redundantly opens the door slightly to peek out after hearing movement and sees that Cinccino has now entered the bathroom next door. She hides herself well in the room and looks at the will once more.

“Oh my roses! Five million dollars given to--”



Natu hops around and squeals after seeing suspects coming back from the interrogation. “Cinccino? Where are you? Let’s get rolling!” she calls out, but no answer. “She must be in the bathroom or something. Don’t Cinccino have bladders the size of peas? Or was that the Tyranitar from Unova? Ugh, I don’t even know anymore.”

Nearby, Sneasel and Gardevoir think about all the women that were invited to the party.

“Well if you weren’t the one he was cheating on me with, then it was either Natu, who is annoying, Roselia, who only loves flowers, Togekiss, a happily married woman, Blissey, someone who was insulted by him, and…” Sneasel lists out the people, eliminating each and every one of them.

“Does that mean?” Gardevoir asks with her eyes bulging.

“Was he seriously cheating with--”



“...Cinccino? Five million dollars to the maid? This will is recent, too--it was updated just last month! He and the maid must have had some sort of hidden romance,” Roselia giggles.

Nearby, she hears a weird gurgling sound, a scream, and silence. Roselia hides the will in her rose petals again and runs to the bathroom to make sure Cinccino is okay.

The door is ajar. She opens it and listens to it creak with every millimeter of movement. The sink and toilet looked fine, but then Roselia glances over at the tub and sees a figure submerged in deep red bath water. She screams “murder” out loud repeatedly and runs down the stairs to join the suspects, the arguers, and everyone else who crowded the foot of the steps.

Why is everyone at the one place the killer would be? Roselia asks herself.

It was clear, though. She sees you walk down the stairs holding a Purrloin. You say that you found an intruder, but she is not the murderer. You throw her into the crowd and announce that the bathroom houses Cinccino’s corpse. It’s unclear who the murderer is, but every single one of the ten guests, twelve including you and your partner, though you do not think your partner is the culprit, is a suspect.

“Are you saying I have to find a new cameraman? Ugh, the life of a reporter is a hard one indeed,” Natu groans.

Several people cry. Blissey pulls a tissue out of her pouch and wipes her face, while Togekiss cries into Nidoking’s shoulder. Even Smeargle senses a tear on his face, though he swipes it with his tail and goes to the kitchen.

“She was a good friend while she lasted,” he says.

“Who could do such a thing?” asks Sneasel, obviously surprised by the attack.

“So Victini is really dead, too, then. Man, I don’t think this is a party anymore,” Slowpoke tells the group.

“Roselia just came downstairs not too long ago. She acted sneaky, too. I think she’s hiding something from everyone,” suggests Blissey.

Every pair of eyes shifts to the Thorn Pokemon, whose face burns with embarrassment. She has no words and can only put her hands behind her back.

“Roselia, is there something you’re not telling us?” you ask the Pokemon.

Dead: Cinccino (Twisted Turtwig)

Accused: Roselia (Reinforce)

*Another long chapter, but I thought it was pretty good. I'll hopefully make them shorter, sorry! Remember that you cannot PM me your final determination of the killer until next chapter, but you don’t have to do that at all. It’s optional until the very end, where you’ll have to if you want to win. Keep in mind that I will only look at the first submission per chapter because multiple people aren’t going to die. Reinforce, you must PM me your alibi and who you cast your blame on by November 23rd!. Thanks for the support and popularity of this thread!
 
Nidoking: Cincinno now, too? This is just... terrible. Why would anyone do this?
Tokekiss: I knew it was Smeargle! *sniff* He was up there when... y'know.
Nidoking: But what about Roselia? I didn't even know she was at this party. She could've been doing anything while we weren't looking.
Togekiss: It could've, but...*sniff* Oh, this is all too much! Too sad to think straight. I think I need to lie down.
MTC: As usual, great chapter, Turtwig! Really enjoying this story so far. Even I didn't know Nidoking rigged the election.
Nidoking: Hey! When did a Machamp get in here?
 
A Note flutters from the ceiling. It says:
Every seems to love me! Oh dears. And Turtwig is such a great writer. I believe the stories are a good length ATM. And, I must remember to pass a generous 1/10 of my fortune to Turtwig.
 
I guess since my secrets out, the rumors are true, I'm a witch, but im not the murderer. Hmm I wonder where Toxicroak was this entire time...
 
Poor Cincinno, I lost a dear pal today, without her help, I would probably left that good for nothing Mayor the moment I knew Lic was dead, but she convince me to keep working for the sake of honoring Lic's final wish for me not to betray the person who once helped me
 
King Xerneas said:
I guess since my secrets out, the rumors are true, I'm a witch, but im not the murderer. Hmm I wonder where Toxicroak was this entire time...

TOXICROAK was interrogating people, trying to make SOME kind of sense out of this CHAOS! YOU were too busy denying your WITCHCRAFT!

WHO HERE knows of ANYONE with the motive to kill both MY HUSBAND and HIS MAID? Cinccino never made a single enemy... She was a sweet girl... :'(.

I SAY, SEARCH THE BLACKENED ROSE NOW! If Roselia is the murderer, maybe she still has the weapon somewhere!
GM DracLord said:
Poor Cincinno, I lost a dear pal today, without her help, I would probably left that good for nothing Mayor the moment I knew Lic was dead, but she convince me to keep working for the sake of honoring Lic's final wish for me not to betray the person who once helped me

Oh, how INTERESTING! Do you have any... REGRETS about staying in this career path?
Natu, would you care to tell us your thoughts? For a tiny bird Pokémon you sure do have a loud voice, but I haven't seen you use it too much yet...
 
C-Cinccino... D-dead?
An affair with the mayor, no less...? I... I...

* Smeargle used Sketch!
* Smeargle learned Struggle!
 
Celever said:
GM DracLord said:
Poor Cincinno, I lost a dear pal today, without her help, I would probably left that good for nothing Mayor the moment I knew Lic was dead, but she convince me to keep working for the sake of honoring Lic's final wish for me not to betray the person who once helped me

Oh, how INTERESTING! Do you have any... REGRETS about staying in this career path?

Not as much i regret that you are not dead instead of dear Cincinno
 
"The joke's on you, murderer!" laughed Cinccino, from beyond the grave. "Now I get to party with my babe, Victini, as much as I want. Although the afterlife could use a little bit of straightening up, it seems..."

Anyway, it was good while it lasted (which wasn't too long)! I'll be keeping up with the story though. Thanks for making such a cool game, Turtwig!
 
Celever said:
Natu, would you care to tell us your thoughts? For a tiny bird Pokémon you sure do have a loud voice, but I haven't seen you use it too much yet...

That's because I'm not role playing and we're not supposed to share our thoughts. But since I'm of the mind that this is a team effort, I'll tell you guys some of what I've figured out. Take all this with a grain of salt because it's still early.

Roselia was nowhere near Victini the day he was killed, and she was too busy reading the will to have violently drowned Cinccino in a tub. Not to mention she would be wet from the struggle.

Toxicroak is like the most likely suspect at this point, since his Dry Skin ability would prevent him from being wet, his knuckle claws could explain why Cinccino's body was bloodied, and he is conveniently the only one not at the scene.

Of course, that could be exactly what Turtwig wants us to think.
 
On the bright side I'm not really a suspect anymore since I wasn't on his damn will, now I kinda wish I was the one to sack that rat of a maid for stealing what should've been mine.
 
Other Pokemon which are very unlikely to have killed Victini:

Blissey. She threatened to have Victini's reputation ruined. If she planned on killing him, she would not need to stress trashing his rep.

Gardevoir. She claimed that she brainwashed Victini and Victini confirmed it when he told Natu he didn't remember kissing Gardevoir. Gardevoir went through a lot of trouble to make Victini fall in love with her. Killing him wasn't part of her plan. Although I do want to know what Gardevoir said to piss Sneasel off so badly.

Natu. Natu was pissed off at Cinccino and was unresponsive to the news of her death. Remember, though, that the same Pokemon is committing these murders. Natu spent all of chapter one with Victini, so she could not have had time to poison his drink. And while she may have been angry with Cinccino, Natu sounds like she genuinely wants to get the story out; killing Cinccino is a direct hindrance to this goal. Yesterday's chapter was made to put Gardevoir in the spotlight. This chapter, it's Natu, but she's clean.

Purrloin. Croagunk confirmed that Purrloin didn't do it.

Nidoking. He spent all of chapter one banging Togekiss in the closet, and he spent all of chapter two telling Togekiss how bad he feels about siding with Victini. His behavior thus far doesn't really suggest that he would kill Victini to make amends because that is some weird logic.


Top tier suspects:

Smeargle. He feels incredibly strongly about how Victini treats other Pokemon, even going out of his way to show Croagunk firsthand what Victini is like. When Natu questioned him, he immediately blamed Slowpoke, then turned around and tried to suggest that Natu did it, though I can't tell if this is Smeargle's anyone-but-me mentality or Turtwig finding a way to make Natu look guilty. As a Pokemon with access to nearly every attack as well as a top-tier chef, it wouldn't be unbelievable to have Smeargle poison the tea and then add something to mask the taste. Like Slowpoke said, almost any Pokemon can poison. It would take a Pokemon with Smeargle's culinary talents to poison tea and make it taste normal (since Victini obviously drank the tea and didn't comment on the taste). The line "Even Smeargle senses a tear on his face" is particularly damning because it implies that there's no reason Smeargle would cry (having committed the murder, he would not be remorseful). Notice also how his first reaction was to wipe the tear with his nasty greasy painty tail and then leave.

Toxicroak. I feel like this is another red herring, but based on what we know, it's natural to consider him a suspect. Who or what did Sneasel hire him to kill?

Meh tier suspects:

Slowpoke. I found it odd that Slowpoke would ask Croagunk to confirm that Victini is actually dead, and also to confirm the cause of death. Like, who cares, dude? Then I remember that Slowpoke is one smart guy, and he's also underestimated. It would be pretty cool to have your plan go off without a hitch and have an awesome detective like Croagunk sleuth it out. Without catching you, of course. All part of the game. All that said, when Victini made fun of him, his response was to go in the corner and cry, and that doesn't sound like a guy whose next step is tea murder.

Sneasel. I don't even know what to think about this crazy old bat. Get it? Cause she used to be -- never mind. Super shady in chapter one and then is bipolar in chapter two, going from threatening to rip Gardevoir's throat out to casual conversation with her about who Victini was cheating on Sneasel with all in a single page. She seemed genuinely saddened by Victini's death, and was surprised to see Cinccino wind up dead. Tea murder doesn't really seem like Sneasel's MO, though. After all, she threatened to disembowel Gardevoir and paid Toxicroak to kill someone or something.

Togekiss. More information is needed. She got boinked by Nidoking and then... what? That's it? Maybe we will find out in chapter three.
 
Haha PMJ, I never said what they did in the closet. These deductions were both serious and hilarious. I'll definitely mention some of these ideas in the next chapter!

Togekiss' character will definitely be explored in chapter three.




Guys, there has been a question about the murderer's knowledge. The person who created the murderer knows it. Sorry for the confusion.
 
Well thank you for defending me Natu. It's nice to see some people don't think I'm a crazed murderer. Plus I was accounted for during the time Cinccino was killed, fighting with that crazy Sneasel -_-
 
Discussing and debating over mysteries is fun.

PMJ said:
Natu spent all of chapter one with Victini, so she could not have had time to poison his drink.

Poisoning someone's drink doesn't need to be done far away from that person. You could even do it in front of them or beside them. All it takes is a sleight of hand and making sure no one's looking. That's why I don't think anyone's completely clean on Victini's murder yet.

PMJ said:
He spent all of chapter one banging Togekiss in the closet, and he spent all of chapter two telling Togekiss how bad he feels about siding with Victini. His behavior thus far doesn't really suggest that he would kill Victini to make amends because that is some weird logic.

He was going to make amends with the townspeople who were victims. While it may have been debated over, for the victims the death of your tormentor would being some relief and ambiguous sense of satisfaction (temporary or permanent). We don't have the details yet, but I'm not counting that out as one of the possible ways that Nidoking might have intended to "make amends".
 
Omega Soul said:
[Roleplay off]

PMJ, how exactly did croagunk confirm i'm not the murderer?

[Roleplay on]

He carried you downstairs and said "hi everyone I found a puddy cat! He's not the murderer though!"
 
For anybody willing to take my word on the current chapters:
Smeargle. He feels incredibly strongly about how Victini treats other Pokemon, even going out of his way to show Croagunk firsthand what Victini is like. When Natu questioned him, he immediately blamed Slowpoke, then turned around and tried to suggest that Natu did it, though I can't tell if this is Smeargle's anyone-but-me mentality or Turtwig finding a way to make Natu look guilty. As a Pokemon with access to nearly every attack as well as a top-tier chef, it wouldn't be unbelievable to have Smeargle poison the tea and then add something to mask the taste. Like Slowpoke said, almost any Pokemon can poison. It would take a Pokemon with Smeargle's culinary talents to poison tea and make it taste normal (since Victini obviously drank the tea and didn't comment on the taste). The line "Even Smeargle senses a tear on his face" is particularly damning because it implies that there's no reason Smeargle would cry (having committed the murder, he would not be remorseful). Notice also how his first reaction was to wipe the tear with his nasty greasy painty tail and then leave.
I would also be quite inclined to believe Smeargle did it, based on the story so far. He did not, however, get to draw the murder card.

Time to analyze the murder weapons.

Murder #1: Victini
Place: Bedroom
Weapon: Poison
Method of Death: Toxins added to tea

Slowpoke rummages through some shelved items and Smeargle readies the tea, so you leave the room and go to the bathroom, only to see a small purple cat dart out suspiciously.
The preparation of the tea. Slowpoke had just entered the kitchen, claiming he wanted a snack, but instead went to cry in a corner. Shortly later, he is left searching the shelves (for his snack?) while Smeargle prepares the tea. In the same sentence, we see who I can only assume is Purrloin moving around. Could she have just come from the kitchen?
In the preparation of the tea alone, both Purrloin and Slowpoke could have tainted the drink while Smeargle was busy with Victini's brunch (which was not noted anywhere in the kitchen, but was ordered by Victini).

You exit the bathroom and begin up the stairs of the mansion when, all of a sudden, you look down at the ground floor and see Smeargle bringing the tea out. In the middle is a large glass, presumably for the mayor, and you see Gardevoir casually knock into Smeargle, catch the tea tray, and quickly sprinkle some sort of substance into the cup. You narrow your eyes, take a mental note, and go up the stairs to investigate the theft above.
Tea is being brought out of the kitchen, when Gardevoir deliberately adds something to it. She claims it was a potion of sorts? No matter, we can't take any claims seriously just yet. But this adds Gardevoir to the list of pokemon that could have tainted the tea.

Now here we have a sort of... Interlude. Croagunk went upstairs, but the action happened downstairs. The only things we know for certain are:
Smeargle delivered the tea.
Nidoking, Togekiss, Roselia, and Ciniccino are accounted for upstairs. Far from the tea or bedroom.
Sneasel hired Toxicroak to do something. At first, she seems to want something, or someone, dead, going so far as to threaten him. But then claims he was hired simply to follow Victini.
Toxicroak was the first to enter the room, and my have had the opportunity to poison the tea.
Sneasel followed, yelling out. Couldn't have done it, as she was too busy with her... Confrontation.
Natu was also in the room, but supposedly at the same time as Sneasel, or, more likely, after she yelled out.
Sneasel, was, for a few moments, left alone with Victini just before he died. It is, however, unlikely that she poisoned him in anyway, and he had probably drank his tea before their "chat." This does prove though that the poison was slow-acting.

“I highly, highly doubt that,” the politician smirks, the guests smirking and giggling. Natu, Gardevoir, Cinccino, and Toxicroak now surround the host.
This actually comes from before Slowpoke entered the kitchen. It is, however, the only point that Toxicroak is near the mayor. Being a poison type, is it possible that he poisoned the mayor another way, maybe not from the tea? His whereabouts, however, are unaccounted for after the tea is made, probably due to Croagunk going upstairs and us losing our POV. As he was stalking the mayor, it isn't a stretch at all that he saw the tea before or after it was being delivered and had the opportunity to poison it.

With that, Blissey storms off to another part of the house and you begin walking across the living room again once Victini rejoins the crowd.
And we don't hear from Blissey again. Where did she go? Not the kitchen. Not upstairs. The room where Victini and Gardevoir were found? Doesn't matter. Unless she entered the kitchen after Croagunk left, she couldn't have touched the tea.

Pokemon that could have touched the tea:
Smeargle (made the tea - inno, if you believe me)
Slowpoke (in the kitchen while tea was being made)
Purrloin (left the kitchen right after tea had been made)
Gardevoir (sprinkled something in the tea after it left the kitchen)
Toxicroak (stalking the mayor)

Post-Murder:

“Didn’t you put something in his drink?” asks a curious Cinccino. “I seem to recall you catching his drink and sprinkling something in it.”

“That was...that was simply a love potion I had created through love, tears, and by collecting the little hearts I make when using TM Attract,” she blushes.
Gardevoir claims it was simply a love potion. Not that it proves anything in and of itself.

“How do we not know you didn’t kill him out of anger? Or in greed? Wouldn’t you be on the receiving end of his will?” Blissey mentions.
The first time we see Blissey since she stormed off in Chapter 1. And her first action is to point fingers?

“Alright, Smeargle, you’re free to go,” you tell the poor cook.

“I figured I would be,” he remarks. Smeargle exits the small guest room and heads toward the stairwell.
Smeargle leaves, not appearing again until after the next murder... Really? Makes it hard to prove innocence with that...

Murder #2: Cinccino
Place: Bathroom
Weapon: ???
Method of Death: Stabbed/Drowned

Found in red water. Presumably from her own blood, meaning she was cut or stabbed, most likely accidentally, while being drowned. That alone narrows the suspects to... Nidoking, Toxicroak, Roselia, Sneasel, and maybe Gardevoir. Each one of these pokemon has horns/claws of one kind or another. Of these pokemon, Gardevoir and Sneasel were together, and we had Roselia's POV, meaning none of them could have done it.
Toxicroak literally only appears once in the chapter, questioning Smeargle and Slowpoke.
Slowpoke is too slow to get all the way downstairs in such a short time, and has nothing but his teeth with which to cause Cinccino's bleeding. Probably not our murderer, which means he must not have caused Victini's death either.
Smeargle was unaccounted for, but has even less than Slowpoke when it comes to fangs or claws. He was, however, unaccounted for during the murder, and was already downstairs. His reaction doesn't help either, but it is more than some...
Nidoking is seen talking to Togekiss... Then what happens? He and Togekiss appear after the murder has taken place, so I assume they were together the whole time.
Purrloin is also accounted for, being held by Croagunk most of the time.

Comparing the lists of suspects from both murders, the only one that matches up would be Toxicroak. But I'll wait for Chapter 3 for the final verdict.
 
At the moment Toxicroak sounds the most guilty, but I feel that's too obvious...then again poison types make me really uncomfortable, especially as of late.
 
Chapter Three

“Roselia, is there something you’re not telling us?” you ask the Pokemon.

Roselia looks around the room of skeptical eyes. A tear rolls down her green face and she shakily exhales. “I have been upstairs this whole party. I tried avoiding any conversations so people wouldn’t ask of my whereabouts. I came to this party looking for, uh, something, but I couldn’t find much of anything. I wouldn’t have had the time to poison Victini or slice up Cinccino. Croagunk--”

“That’s Sir Croagunk, to you,” you glare.

Sir Croagunk, you saw me prowling. I wasn’t doing anything downstairs. I found the body, but I didn’t put it there!”

You look around the room and see the staring eyes turn into saddened expressions of guilt. They all attacked her, ten against one. Wait, ten? You look around the room and count the heads. Where is your partner?

“Who did it, then?” you ask her while wondering about Toxicroak in your head.

“It had to have been Nidoking or Togekiss! They were chatting privately in one of the closets of his rooms! They had the access, the quietness, and the power!”

Gardevoir turns around and uses Imprison on Nidoking and Togekiss, who were toward the back of the group. The move creates this psychic jail cell. The two Pokemon, trapped, hug each other and stay quiet.

“A new murder, a new blame. I sense a trend, here,” you mutter.

“Where is your partner?” asks Natu, leaning her microphone into your space.

“That’s none of your business!” Sneasel asserts as she slices the top of Natu’s microphone off.

“Blissey, did you get that on camera?” the small bird asks her new cameraman.

“Uh, no,” the large Pokemon frowns.

“Figures. Nothing’s going right in this stupid party, anyway. I think it’s time for me to go.” Natu starts walking to the door, but you Sucker Punch her and slam her into the wall.

“Would you like to be imprisoned with the suspects, Natu? Walking away from the crime makes you seem awfully guilty.”

“She’s a Psychic-type, too. She could have used Psychic on weapons and kill Cinccino! Or, or, or, maybe she made Victini implode and...and…” a quiet, unfamiliar voice says in a rather accusative tone.

“Nice of you to say a word, Purrloin,” you remark.

“You already cleared me of the murder charges, so can I just leave?”

“I said that I don’t think you’re the murderer. With more and more cases coming up, you could somehow wind up the bad guy just as much as anyone else.”

“I resent that statement.”

“Deal with it.”

Purrloin shies away as Slowpoke steps in the front of the crowd. “What if we all tried to come together and figure this thing out? We could ask people what they’ve seen and gather evidence.”

The whole crowd laughs at the ridiculous remark--even Sneasel, one of the most miserable Pokemon in existence. Croagunk stops the laughing with a loud croak and settles himself a couple of steps higher on the stairs.

“He’s right. We could work out what we know.”

Slowpoke, face red and tail between legs, scoots back a little in his place and hides his eyes from view. Smeargle walks up to the middle so he can have his turn of information to share.

“You people always blame the cooks. You under-appreciative dogs are probably all murderers in your own rights. It’ll serve you all justice if you get sliced up like Cinccino,” he groans.

“You really aren’t helping your case right now,” you slap your forehead and slowly stroke your head over your scalp, which is starting to tense up from a deep headache.

Down the stairs comes a tall, lanky creature. Toxicroak goes step-by-step downward with a hand on the railing. He smiles at everyone, sees the tension in the room, and slowly turns around to start going back up the stairs.

“No, Toxicroak. You are to stay right with us. You’re just as much the murderer as anyone else.”

“And so are you,” he smirks.

You raise an eyebrow and he stands by you like a sidekick. You think about the possibilities. Roselia was in another room, but did she kill Cinccino? Who was up there with you before she died? Smeargle, Slowpoke, Nidoking, Togekiss? Heck, any of them could have slipped up to the top without him knowing. Anyone but him or Purrloin. He knows Purrloin isn’t the murderer. However, he can’t say it--it would lead to her probable demise.

“I have something to say to you people,” Togekiss says from the psychic cage.

“And what would that be?”

“I was talking to Nidoking about his life, and he said that Victini was a bad person, and so was he. However, he wants to change his life and end Victini’s reign!”

“So he killed the man, his maid, and is stuck in a box?” laughs Sneasel.

“No, he was with me the whole time.”

“So you are co-conspirators,” suggests Smeargle.

“No! We were alone.”

“Yeah, alone with Cinccino and a sharp object.”

Natu runs around frantically in search of an instrument for her live broadcasting. She finds a candlestick lying on a nearby table and slams it into the cage, demanding Togekiss to tell her side of the story.

“Well, like I’ve said at least twice before, my husband and I were having a private conversation in the closet. Nothing happened. We were in the closet the whole time.”

Natu brings the candlestick back to her mouth and asks, “And what did you, uh, do in that closet? I heard some people muttering something about--”

“We were just talking,” Togekiss hastily announces. “Smeargle was the suspect for the first case, and now he is the most likely candidate for this one! Can you people not put two and two together?”

“I can,” Slowpoke smiles.

“Shut up, Slowpoke. Obviously I am the smartest one here. As a Psychic-type and an emotion sensor, I should be able to tell some sort of guilt, correct?” Gardevoir suggests to the crowd, but the best answer she gets is “I ’unno?”

“That’s a sharp horn you have, Gardevoir. Careful, you could slice the body of a poor Cinccino, leading to a sloppy murder in which you are the killer,” Sneasel says.

“That’s preposterous.”

“No, you’re preposterous.”

The shouting causes the chandelier above to swing slightly. One of the chain links up top seems to be rusting, and you focus your thoughts on it momentarily.

Toxicroak narrows his eyes and sees a sharp nose twitch from Sneasel. He nods, taking the hint, and walks into the kitchen. He opens the door and gently closes it. He then proceeds to begin looking under tables, in cabinets, anything.

“Where is it? If I don’t find any evidence, Sneasel is going to kill me. Apparently Cinccino isn’t the one we’re looking for after all. Victini’s been up to something serious.”

He slams a cabinet loud, freezes, and looks at the kitchen door as if to expect someone to come open it. No one comes. He sighs, relieved, and continues looking.

“Where….?”



“My client, Togekiss, has nothing else to say until we get a proper trial,” Blissey shouts as she walks over to the psychic-made cage.

“This isn’t a court, Blissey. You aren’t on the clock.”

“Oh, but the clock never stops for Blissey. The clock keeps moving, keeps ticking, with every little tick, every little motion piercing the mind and causing excruciating pain. Do you know how hard my life has been? How I have had to overcome adversity and become successful? No, you don’t. The clock keeps moving, and so do I. My client, Togekiss, has nothing else to say until we get a proper trial.”

“This is insane!” you shout, flailing your hands into the air. “What next? Is a mysterious noise going to distract me from everything?”

Suddenly, the sound of a cabinet door’s slam can be heard in the distance. You groan and walk, slouching, to the kitchen.

“That’s what I thought,” Blissey giggles.

“When I make it out alive, I’m moving far, far away.”

“You do that, because you probably won’t,” Sneasel says.

Everyone looks at her blankly.

“What?”



You enter the kitchen and find nothing. No one. Not even a trace of existence. Annoyed, you turn around to exit the kitchen. You think about everyone and how you noticed Toxicroak wasn’t there...again. You turn back around, walk a little deeper in the room, and see a door left ajar.

“Toxicroak, you’re awful at sneaking around,” you say as you open the door.

Inside the room lie two corpses. Both were of Victini and Cinccino, much to your relief, and you examine their corpses. Cinccino wasn’t cut up at all, actually. There were gashes from the struggle, but they weren’t big enough for her to be killed. She died somehow, but how? Did she first drown? Did the killer scrape her up after?

BOOM!

You close the door and run back into the kitchen, and then back into the room. What’s going on? As you enter the room, you hear more shouting and banging.

The room is a disaster. The couches are turned over, the TV has a large crack down it, and....and the chandelier has crashed onto some of the guests! Under the large structure are Nidoking and Gardevoir. Nidoking’s legs have been crushed, however he is still alive. You notice a nervous Toxicroak hiding behind others in the background. You roll your eyes.

“Someone get him out!” his wife cries as she struggles to free her husband.

No one notices Croagunk. He is behind them all, but he sees the worst part: Gardevoir. Her body makes no movement, no breathing. Blood is scattered on the floor and trickles down her body. She lies, already cold, among a group of suspects.

“Eh-hem,” you cough.

The whole group, previously arguing and shouting, goes silent. No one speaks, breathes, or even blinks. You hear one inhale and look for the noise.

“....She did it,” Smeargle says with a tail pointing straight at Togekiss.

Dead: Gardevoir (King Xerneas)

Accused: Togekiss (Machamp the Champion)

Unexpected? I thought so. However, I’m glad the randomizer chose a more prominent character to die. Anyway, you’re now allowed to PM me your guesses starting on this chapter. Keep in mind that after your guess, you either win the game or die, so it would be smarter to wait (however you’ll only win if you eventually guess). I will only take the first guess given after a chapter is sent out, so even if someone guesses the right character, I won’t do any action if someone guessed beforehand. Happy reading! Your comments are really shaping the characters themselves.

Also, don't be afraid to reaccuse someone if you're chosen to further the story!
 
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