Art Gallery Delta's Magical Art Factory - Amelia & Yeward

[SuperArtNinja]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Semi-Quality Artwork? Preposterous!

I like dynamic poses like in the second spoiler tag, but be careful about the leg positions. The leg on her left looks longer. If you tilt her right knee down (the knee in front), and show the left thigh tilt up from her waist it would make the legs look more even in length.

Good work though!

 

[Delta]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Semi-Quality Artwork? Preposterous!

Arcticwhite: At the time I wasn't entirely sure of where I wanted it to be so I understand that it looks a little strange. The images below should clear up any confusion though.

SuperArtNinja: Oh...oh god yeah. How did I think that was correct? Thanks for pointing that out!

It's coming along. Still unsure what I am going to do with this so it could come out as two separate images.

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[Delta]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Semi-Quality Artwork? Preposterous!

Another tutorial. A pretty short one.

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[Arcticwhite]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Semi-Quality Artwork? Preposterous!

Things looking good so far, and those Pokémon are underwater

 

[Delta]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Semi-Quality Artwork? Preposterous!

Thanks Arcticwhite.

A few more sketches.

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I promise this will look better when it goes digital.

 

[SuperArtNinja]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Semi-Quality Artwork? Preposterous!

These look nice, you have shown a huge improvement on heads I think. However, something to keep in mind is that necks aren't straight, they lean forward a little. The shoulder is also not perfectly centered on your side either. It should be placed a little higher and to the right, it would help the chest look broader too. I feel the jaw is just a little too square, but it seems more like a style choice.

Hydreigon looks pretty good. The proportions feel a touch off, though.

Haunter looks a little messy, but I like the style.

I would recommend turning the picture of the robot guy. It's kinda hard to see him clearly.

 

[Delta]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Semi-Quality Artwork? Preposterous!

All of that duly noted. Thanks for the critique!

Workin' on some...

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Deadpool!

Also an hour free at college is normally spent doing work...

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[SuperArtNinja]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Pen tool in SAI...pretty useful...

I'm not by any means trying to advertise myself, but you should check out my How To on heads . The dome of Deadpool's head is a little too elliptical, I think, and it makes the neck look a little strange. I like your practice page and all the notes.

Keep up the work!

 

[HolyMackerel]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Pen tool in SAI...pretty useful...

Wow, you have taken some big steps since I've been here! I see the improvements in anatomy, but like SAN said, there could be some improvements. Keep working at it.

 

[Delta]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Pen tool in SAI...pretty useful...

SuperArtNinja: The head has been bugging me ever since I first sketched it out. Thanks for the advice, I'll look into it for next update,

HolyMackerel: Welcome back HM! Good to hear from you again. Don't worry I'll get keep working on it. Thanks!

Here's a quick update. The pointing hand is bugging me a little bit. Mostly it looks fine but I can't help but think the way it connects to the wrist and arm is weird.

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[SuperArtNinja]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Pen tool in SAI...pretty useful...

The many times I've drawn poses and those freaking hands... GAH! I hate drawing hands... I always sketch the pose then do them last cause they take so long... My advice for hands... Hmmm... Well, the angle on the wrist is a little too sharp, it hurts if I try to bend my wrist that far. Also, the hand needs a little more palm, I think.

His left shoulder and forearm are off. The shoulder is long and makes his forearm start too low on the body and also makes the forearm too short...

Keep it up!

 

[Delta]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Pen tool in SAI...pretty useful...

Gotcha. I'll sort those out. Thanks again!

In the mean time...it...it was just bound to happen c'mon. And don't laugh at my typography.

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[Teal]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Pen tool in SAI...pretty useful...

I don't laugh at the typography, but at the character as it looks like a buffed Red. xD

 

[Guts]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Pen tool in SAI...pretty useful...

Deadpool and JoJo are looking great, but as many have said, Wade's head needs a little work. His mask is so hard to do. Also, Jotaro looks a bit starved judging by those ribs lol.

All kidding and useless criticism aside, great work man, I'm glad to see you still enjoy keeping us updated.

 

[Delta]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Pen tool in SAI...pretty useful...

Teal: I started drawing as soon as I read your post.

Some Loser: Haha. Thankies. I always love updating this thread.

Clear line Jotaro, more anatomy, new thread banner?

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Maybe I'll get good at drawing damaged cyborgs one day...maybe. I'll update with more Deadpool if I can find the wire that links to my tablet .-.

 

[HolyMackerel]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Pen tool in SAI...pretty useful...

I would study some more of the torso and how the wrist connects to the hand, those places seems to be the parts where you struggle the most, but I like this all so far, keep it coming!

 

[Delta]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Pen tool in SAI...pretty useful...

Will do. Thanks!

A few things here.

Spoiler: May + Ribbons

I hope to do this digital.

Spoiler: Dawn and friends WIP

Spoiler: Also this company...this...this festering pile of soul destroying shit

If you haven't already guessed, proud EA hater here.

Games that EA have ruined:
Sims, Final Fantasy, Medal of Honor, Ultima, Spore, Command and Conquer, Battlefield, Dead Space, Tetris. Bioware is there too.
The dude below is labelled: Video Game Industry

I'll update with more Deadpool if I can find the wire that links to my tablet .-.

 

[Guts]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Pen tool in SAI...pretty useful...

May's + Jotaro's faces are TOO good. 5 stars.

 

[Ice Arceus]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Pen tool in SAI...pretty useful...

LOL at May's face. Awesome job with that, Delta.

The "Dawn and friends" piece is just impressive. You've captured a moment of playfulness and totally caught my attention with the poses and the overall drawings of Dawn's Pokemon. Mamoswine has got to be my favorite on there. Can't wait to see how it looks at the end. ^_^

 

[SuperArtNinja]

RE: Delta's Magical Art Factory - Pen tool in SAI...pretty useful...

EA had nothing to do with Final Fantasy. Square Enix wrecked that train... May's face... It kinda disturbs me (Not that that's any different from her regular face)... That Mamoswine's pretty cool though.