Writing Destiny's Chosen

[Vergere]

Prologue


Inteli Miarre walked between the enormous trees of Viridian Forest, silent. A young Ralts stumbled along beside her, tripping in the carpet of fallen leaves.
"It's good to be away from Saffron for a while, isn't it, Kyrith? But, something seems wrong..." she finally commented, looking at the small Pokemon at her feet. Kyrith cocked his large head, then nodded, slowly, cautiously. Then, a huge bang resounded throughout the forest, and wild Pokemon ran scurrying in every direction, terrified.

Inteli listened for any clues as to what had happened, and heard the slight murmur of human voices, chattering nervously. Another bang came, closer, and it sounded as if the sky had fallen. Inteli saw a man in a black uniform run by, appearing not to have seen her, then Inteli ran, spurred on by a trace of foreboding.
Just as she got out of the way, a tree fell, knocking away everything in it's path. Branches flew everywhere, and more Pokemon ran, horrified by something they had no knowledge of. Inteli gasped as she realized what was happening, and ran along with the wild Pokemon in horror, grabbing Kyrith when he couldn't keep up.

Rockets were cutting down the trees! Viridian Forest was believed to be the home of Mew, and considered a sacred place by many for this reason. "Team Rocket... in the forest... hurry!" she shouted when she reached the city, breathless.
Alan Miarre, Inteli's father, ran out of one of the small houses, heading toward Viridian Forest, with three other men following him. Inteli ran along behind them, unable to keep up, but determined to try. Several children ran out of the Trainer's School and stared after her, bewildered.

Almost to the other side of the forest, Inteli saw a circle of gigantic stumps, with branches strewn across the ground. Alan leaned against a taller stump, struggling to stand up with one broken leg. Inteli noticed that most of the Pokeballs were missing from his trainer's belt. "I'll make Team Rocket pay for this... if it's the last thing I ever do..." he growled.
Inteli would remember that day for a long time.

 

[Staraptor]

So far it's intriguing. Also I really like Ralts and your decsription of Kyrith was interesting.
I will be reading the story as it progresses.

 

[Vergere]

Thanks, Piplup 321.

Prologue is finished now.

 

[Flygon492]

Even though I prefer TF stories rather than adventure, this is really good prologue! And as piplup said, very intriguing. I can't wait till it's done!


yours truly,
SLX.

 

[Vergere]

Chapter 1 : Inteli's Story; Enemy Territory​

Inteli Miarre crept toward the Viridian City gym, preparing to launch a surprise attack on the secret Team Rocket base hidden inside. 14 year old Inteli was the leader of Alakazam Force, an organization created 4 years earlier by Inteli's father to bring about the downfall of Team Rocket.

Inteli had been given leadership at her father's request when he died, killed in an attack on Saffron City. Originally the members of Alakazam Force were skeptical of a mere teenager being in a position of authority, but Inteli soon proved herself more than capable of handling the responsibility, and did not share her father's superior attitude.

At that moment, Inteli was holding onto her Starmie, which was using Camouflage to hide them, and started to signal to the adults behind her to follow, when she spotted a Rocket Grunt patrolling the area, an Absol at his side.
He whispered something to the Pokemon, and the Absol looked around intently, it's eyes gleaming red with the power of a Foresight attack. Inteli immediately became visible, and tried to run, but the Absol ran forward and leaped at her, knocking the girl over and pinning her down, while it unleashed a Dark Pulse attack.