Hello, my name is 4puppies4 and this is a song i wrote and i would like to see if you guys like it..i hope to be the next hannah montana..Lol...and this is copy right (c)
(Verse one)I walk into the Carnival and i see all the faces,
They all look so happy and excited,
All the little kids are holding there parents hands,
You can tell they are having a good time because...
They have smiles on their faces
They are pionting their fingers and you hear them ask why, why cant we ride that ride?and the parents say..
(Chorus)You dont meet up to their standard, your not tall enough.
I'm sorry little girl you no that you mean everything to me.
All i can think is,
Isn't that so true, Maybe your not tall enough
Just remember in your parents head your just fine...
(verse two)I just keep on walking,
I pass a group of teenagers,
Picking on a little kid, (talking this) Maybe he was 14
(singing now)All they were saying was..
(chorus..The chorus sometimes changes alittle)
You arn't good enough,
You can't hang out with us,
They pushed him down,
In his head he was probablly thinking:if im not good enough for them then i guess im not good enough for anyone else...
(Verse three)I walked up to him and said,
Your just fine the way you are, dont worry.
He looked up and smiled,
He said, Thank you ma'am but you wouldn't now how i feel right now..
Then he walked away,
(chorus)Poeple always think that they arent good enough for other poeple but i want you to remember that you are always good enough for those who love and care about you
....
thats my song its not that good but its a start please say what i could improve on!..its copy right(c)[/color][/size][/font]
(Verse one)I walk into the Carnival and i see all the faces,
They all look so happy and excited,
All the little kids are holding there parents hands,
You can tell they are having a good time because...
They have smiles on their faces
They are pionting their fingers and you hear them ask why, why cant we ride that ride?and the parents say..
(Chorus)You dont meet up to their standard, your not tall enough.
I'm sorry little girl you no that you mean everything to me.
All i can think is,
Isn't that so true, Maybe your not tall enough
Just remember in your parents head your just fine...
(verse two)I just keep on walking,
I pass a group of teenagers,
Picking on a little kid, (talking this) Maybe he was 14
(singing now)All they were saying was..
(chorus..The chorus sometimes changes alittle)
You arn't good enough,
You can't hang out with us,
They pushed him down,
In his head he was probablly thinking:if im not good enough for them then i guess im not good enough for anyone else...
(Verse three)I walked up to him and said,
Your just fine the way you are, dont worry.
He looked up and smiled,
He said, Thank you ma'am but you wouldn't now how i feel right now..
Then he walked away,
(chorus)Poeple always think that they arent good enough for other poeple but i want you to remember that you are always good enough for those who love and care about you
....
thats my song its not that good but its a start please say what i could improve on!..its copy right(c)[/color][/size][/font]