Writing Fanfic: Naruto Rensuugen

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Naruto Rensuugen Prologue

12 Years ago, Sasuke Uchiha, the last known member of the Uchiha Clan, set out for a final attempt to destroy Konoha. Like Madara before him, He succesfully stole the 9-tailed fox spirit from Konoha during his last attempt to destroy the village. And just like before, there was only 1 ninja who had a chance of stopping him. A Jounin by the name of Naruto Uzumaki...

Safely in Konoha, Sakura was the last person left capable of personally protecting the Hokage. She was only able to watch the battle from afar. Once she saw a giant toad appear next to the demonic fox spirit, she practically knew what was going to happen.

"There has to be another way" she thought to herself, trying to prevent herself from crying.
Kakashi saw her crying, turned to Sakura and said, "There is no other way, and trust me, i don't like it any more than you do."

"But....", Sakura's sentence was interrupted by a bright flashing light, as both of them faced the window, watching the scenery. The Nine-tailed fox was gone, as well as the giant toad...it was done...

Naruto never became Hokage, but despite that fact, he was given a funeral that hasnt been seen since the death of the Fourth Hokage. Kakashi also insisted that Naruto would be put on the mountain next to the other Hokage faces.

Sasuke hasnt been seen ever since...


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this is just a prologue to my fanfic, currently counting 8 chapters. If you're somewhat bright, you can see where to find the rest of it. (i won't be posting it all here, too much work :p)

If you're interested in Naruto, this is a fanfic you want to read! no, it's THE fanfic you want to read :)

note that actual chapters are WAY longer than this prologue
 
Rykeus said:
Like Madara before him, He succesfully stole the 9-tailed fox spirit from Konoha during his last attempt to destroy the village.
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Get your facts straight. When a demon spirit is extracted the human vessel dies. He doesn't stand up and get it back. The vessel dies! Some spelling errors was all I caught. I am just tired so I didn't get any grammar issues.
 
Yes, but when the demon is extracted the vessel dies. In this case your saying that Sasuke and Madara extracted the Nine Tailed Fox during a raid and then it seems like your saying Naruto died trying to get it back which is not suppose to happen

Naruto was supposed to die after the extraction not get it back then die in the process.
 
you havent even read the rest of it yet. so what if a few small details arent entirely correct, everyone who's read it so far liked it alot.

i've seen tons of fanfics about pokemon of which the writers didnt even know what a pokeball was, but it was still good.
 
Then why would they be Pokemon fans? Oh and yes I have read the rest when I posted the first time. It was confusing.
 
awesome Rykeus

phoenix first get your facts straight lol, second lets say for a SECOND he's wrong its a fanfic get over yourself
 
How the heck did Kakashi even appear? Please this is confusing, but most of my confusion is probably because I am tired, but it is confusing though.
 
i've checked multiple websites for info, and none of them specifically say a host dies if his demon is extracted.

and what do you mean by "how did Kakashi appear?"

but i guess you might be right about the whole "tired" thing. get some rest and then read it again lol :p
 
Read anime and the manga you should know. If you watch Shippuden then you should already know if you don't go to instantz.net.

Oh and that is because I am Japan right now, and it is like 4:45 in the morning.

I will check this story from time to time.
 
Well, i live in Belgium, and we don't even get Naruto on tv, what i know about Naruto is about the first 50 episodes of season 1 (from Youtube), the last 20 Manga's on onemanga and a bit of background info from Wikipedia.

so excuuuuuuuuuuse me if some details arent 100% correct :p
 
It might be a good thing to read the Character Descriptions before anything else. It clears up a whole lot of stuff :)

as for timeline, which i didnt officially add yet.

the prologue takes place 10 years after what happened in Shippuuden. so Naruto would be like 25-26 years old here.

however, Chapter 1 starts 12 years after the prologue, so thats a total gap of 22 years between Shippuuden and this Fanfic.
 
good writing is all about making a good plot that keeps people reading.

in turn, a good writer can realistically alter the plot in unimaginable ways.

so, basically, what i'm saying is. IF the host really dies after he loses his demon spirit, i'll find a realistic way around it eventually :p

(this is what makes writing fun :))
 
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