RE: Writer's Lounge
To be honest, you gave me tips for the future. When I re-make it, I'll use what you said. I still need more ideas and stuff. Thanks for the tip! Soon I'll re-make it with your advice.
The Yoshi said:ok now I feel terrible
I didn't think it would make you delete your piece. I mean, I guess I was being a little harsh, but that's how you get better, right? I think you do know what you are doing, but you just rushed the first chapter. That was all I meant, and I didn't want you to delete it. Now I feel like a jerk. :[
To be honest, you gave me tips for the future. When I re-make it, I'll use what you said. I still need more ideas and stuff. Thanks for the tip! Soon I'll re-make it with your advice.