Writing Heroes An Untold Menace (PG-13!)

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WARNING: THIS STORY IS RATED PG-13 FOR VIOLANCE, POSSIBLE GORE, CHARACTER DEATHS, AND CERTAIN INAPPROPRIATE LANGUAGE (THE LANGUAGE WILL BE WRITTEN AS H*$|) ​


Volume 3
Chapter 1: Fulfillment (Part 1)​


There are 9 planets in the Milky Way. Out of those 9, Earth is the most fascinating.

Here, people can experience many emotions. Some can grieve

Some can be happy

Some can even lose their temper, and make fatal mistakes.

And sometimes, when we dont' even want to, we lose control completely, and take the lives of those we love.

It's sad how often we forget this.

But, those pure of heart only want to help. However, even those can go out of control, and hurt, nay, kill, others.

And some try to stop the hurtful ones.

Sylar
Downtown Queens​

A lone, sweating, and cursing man sat in a deserted alleyway, holding his blood-covered hand over his side where he had been wounded before in a fierce battle. This man was Sylar.

Sylar took his hand off his wounded side just for a moment, and rose it up to his head. He focused on an empty tomato can stationed at the top of a garbage can. Sylar concentrated, and, as he did, eventually, the can had moved!

Sylar looked at his hand, and a evil smile perked upon his face.

"I'm back..." He murmured, and then he blacked out.

Peter Petrelli, Hiro Nakumora, and Ando
Odessa, Texas​

3 men, all about the same size, stood in front of a large, brick-lined building. 2 of the men were Japanese, the other was a tall man whose bange's covered his face. The tall man nodded to the Japanese men, and the Japanese men nodded back. These three were Peter Petrelli, Hiro Nakumora, and his friend, Ando.

After the 3 had nodded, Peter began to glow brightly! As he did, he started to go next to the building. He put his glowing, almsot radioactive hands on the building, and, in the blink of time, the building exploded like a nuclear bomb! Hiro & Ando covered their faces with their hands and ran from the building, while Peter stood in front of it and kept his hands on what was left of the building.

Once the smoke cleared, Hiro & Ando slowly walked towards Peter, who's body was black from the explosion. Hiro's worried look was soon wiped off his face when Peter's body healed instantaneously!

"The... the cheerleader? You have, her power, yes?" Hiro asked smiling at Peter.

Peter nodded back, and looked at his normal, non-glowing hands.

"I thought time-traveling was weird" Ando began, "But a healing, radioactive man is just about enough for me".

"That's the last of the company, and the shanti virus." Peter said, while Hiro and Ando smiled, and Peter than began to say again,

"Let's go, the cops will be here soon" Peter took Ando & Hiro's arms, and ran away from the building.

"Umm, why don't we just teleport?" Ando asked in a sarcastic tone.

Peter looked at Hiro, and laughed under his breath.

Hiro concentrated, and, in less than a second, they were in a small, closed off room.

Peter looked around, and said, "Where are we? WHEN are we?" in a whispered tone.

Hiro looked at a large white sign with black writing, and said

"The whitehouse closet. 2121"

----------------------End of Chapter 1, Part 1---------------------
 
Chapter 1: Part 2​
(WARNING: CHARACTER DEATH)

Monica Hawkins & Micah Sanders
Location unknown​


"MOM!" A small, tan boy yelled at a building that was lit on fire from an explosion from gasoline spread on the floor.

The tan boy was Micah, and his cousin was Monica. Micah quickly rushed towards the building, but Monica ran after him and pulled him back, "No! It's too dangerous!" She yelled.

The two looked in horror as they saw the building burn to nothing. Micah quickly pulled out an iPhone, and turned it to a video titled "Fearless Cheerleader saves man in burning building". This video showed a tall blonde girl, Clair Benett, rescueing a man from a burning building and returning without a scratch on her. Micah showed this video to Monica, and, being a copycat, she was able to watch the video and almost perfectly imatate it!

"Hurry! Save mom!" Micah yelled at Monica, who yelled at her letting go of her hand.

Monica ran into the building, and looked through the bright flames & smoke for Niki, Micah's mother. It was proving diffucult to find her through the smoke, and kept yelling, "Hello??! Is anybody there!?"

Soon after, Monica heard a moan from a corner of the room. She followed the moan, and, through the smoke, was able to find Niki lying on the ground, fainted from the burns. Monica sighed, and ran up to Niki while picking her up. However, having a greater body mass, Monica had to greatly strugle to pick up Niki.

Outside the building, Micah starred with horror at the building as it started to burst in flames. He picked up his phone to call for help, realizing that he doesn't know where he was! Monica was taken to a back alley, but which back alley? Micah ran around the alley to look for clues, but none of the buildings had any signs! Finally, Micah turned around and saw Monica emerging from the building, cluching Niki in her arms.

"MOM!" Micah quickly ran up to his mother and Monica, taking Niki from her hands and gently putting her down on the ground. Monica put her head next to Niki's heart, and heard it barely beating.

"M-Micah" Niki said under her breath.

"Mom! You're alive! We can get help! I'll tell the phone to-" Micah was cut off mid-sentance by Niki, who said faintly,

"No, no. Micah, listen to me. There's *cough cough* not much time left. Just remember, I love you, ok?" Niki said as her heartbeat started to grow more faintly.

Micah started to have tears run down his cheek, and through his tears, he was able to say,

"Ok *sniff*, I love you too mom" Micah said sadly, and hugged his mother. As he hugged her, she dropped out of his arms, and Micah and Monica sat there, as 2 police cars drove into the alley with 1 Firetruck.

Chapter 1, Part 2 comin' soon :)!
 
I love Heroes, and I like this story too! Also, there were some grammar and spelling mistakes, but they weren't too bad.

(Can't Wait Until The New Season of Heroes!)
 
Yeah, I wrote both these chapters relatively late. I'll eventually correct the mistakes.

I can't wait for the new season either =]! I just got Season 1 on DVD, and read most of the outlines of Season 2 on the website, so I know the show relatively well.

Each chapter will have 5 parts =].
 
I've seen it all on TV from the first to last episode so far. So each Ch. with 5 parts? Well, I don't think you should make it always 5 parts, because I bet there will be some times when you just can't think of another part to fit in, in the same chapter. Make it like 3-5 parts, because you can't be sure all the time.
 
Hmm... yeah, that's probably best. Ya' can't plan the future!

Expect a new hero this chapter... the "Menace". He has a REALLY cool power :D :D. Can't spoil it, well, maybe a little. I'll give one word

Absorption

Part 3 coming very soon.

I was debating on whether to kill Niki off or not. I think that it was a wise choice, because now I can mold Micah & Monica's storyline.

SPOILER AHEAD:

Micah & Monica run away from New Orleans because of their powers :)

And another "Lindermin" appears :D
 
Linderman=Evil. He was really evil. Micah's dad killed him by shooting his hand through his head or heart (don't remember). And don't spoil anymore, I like surprises.
 
It was through his head. I think he squeezed his brain or somethin' :p.

DL was awesome. He was my favorite character in Season 1 for his power, but then I started to like Sylar for the way he used his powers in such a creative way.

Okaydokey, no more spoilers =] =]
 
I like Nathan, but he's dead *sniff* *sniff*

Nathan was the best, but he was shot. Most likely by Sylar, but we will have to find out on the next Season of Heroes! I can't wait till it returns! It's killing me inside!
 
Ahhh, dumb writers strike =/. I wonder when Heroes is back... maybe next September =[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[

Nathen was cool. I liked his power. That's why they introduced Wes. They needed a flying guy I guess :D :D.
 
Oh, ya, I forgot about Wes. I like him too, he's awesome! Flying is awesome! Go flying!
 
You know guys, I'm not mini-modding or anything, can you put up a sign of *SPOILER OF SEASON 2* or something, cause, I know some people, you haven't watched season 2 yet, and even I didn't know Nathan died.It's just a suggestion though :D

BTW: I really like the story, it's cool, but try fixing your grammar and spelling :p
 
Sorry, Borcay_Jason. I'll add a warning =]

Part 3 up tomorrow night :) Sorry for the delay. Big weekend with brawl and stuff...
 
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