HoS's Card Fakes *Ghost of Days Gone By - Solrock? I don't know what I'm doing*

RE: HoS's Card Fakes *Miracle! For the first time 3 new cards in one day! 15/1*

These are awesome! But in Seismitoad's scan, I think it is "doesn't" instead of don't in its attack.
 
RE: HoS's Card Fakes *Miracle! For the first time 3 new cards in one day! 15/1*

Ugh, stupid quote button...
Anyway, those are awesome cards with awesome blanks...
Great and interesting poke-bodies! (I've never seen anything like that, but maybe I just don't have enough cards of my own...)

Ugh, the first card is the final evo of that ugly blue thing after homodoe city or something, in route six...
 
RE: HoS's Card Fakes *Miracle! For the first time 3 new cards in one day! 15/1*

@CMP
Thanks a lot bro, and *fixed* :D

@Osha
Thank you very much. Of course I could accept your request. However I will need proper artwork of Possu. Not the sprites that appear in the battle screen. When you can provide me that, I will gladly do a card of it. :).

@Yoshidude
Thank you very much. Also, *fixed*
Btw ... Politoed does equal to life.

@Nod3
Well haven't seen you in quite a while. :D. Thanks bro and yeah, that frog IS ugly
 
RE: HoS's Card Fakes *Miracle! For the first time 3 new cards in one day! 15/1*

Seismitoad's abilities are good, definitely unique, and the template is great.
Oshawott is an interesting basic since it has 3 abilities, but still a good template.
Woobat is just creepy. Who would want that thing guarding their bench?!
Nice stuff and keep going, ~AoH
 
RE: HoS's Card Fakes *Miracle! For the first time 3 new cards in one day! 15/1*

These 3 cards look great man. Few minor errors though, but nothing too big. :)

Seismitoad:
- For Seismic Toss, I'm pretty sure you can get rid of the last sentence completely. You don't really need it because it's kinda restating the obvious, if you know what I mean. Like if your opponent didn't have any Benched Pokemon you wouldn't be able to choose them in the first place, therefore you don't need to say that it does nothing. Poke-Power looks great, however.

Woobat:
-I would reword the Poke-Body like this: "As long as Woobat is your Active Pokemon, prevent all effects of attack (including damage) done to any your Benched Pokemon by your opponent's Active Pokemon." I really like Knock Out a lot.

Oshawott:
-The Poke-Body is worded a tiny bit awkwardly. It should sound like this: "If Oshawott has 2 or more damage counters on it, each of its attacks do 10 more damage to the Defending Pokemon.
-I think you can afford to give this kind of card a +10 HP boost, making it a base of 60. It's not overly powerful for a Basic Pokemon capable of evolution, and I think the extra addition would be good for it.


:D I think I covered what was there to cover. Kinda had to go all nitty-gritty on it since there are hardly any real mistakes to it. Overall these cards look great. Keep it up bro.
 
RE: HoS's Card Fakes *Miracle! For the first time 3 new cards in one day! 15/1*

@MVX360
Why does your critique remind me of WV? Only god knows.
Anyway, thanks a lot bro, I will get to them ASAP.

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Right now, I have 2 presents for you guys. It's Snivy and Tepig!!

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Check the front post for printed out style screenshot of Project OCM.
 
RE: HoS's Card Fakes *Miracle! For the first time 3 new cards in one day! 15/1*

Can't help to notice Snivy's attacks' text are somewhat blurry. Great work, though. Keep 'em coming.

I still don't know what OCM stands for ...
 
RE: HoS's Card Fakes *2 new cards! Snakes and Piglets! 22/1*

@Billy
Blurry? They seem fine to me :/, maybe reload and try it?

Also, OCM stands for ... Original Card Making ... pretty dumb I know.
 
RE: HoS's Card Fakes *2 new cards! Snakes and Piglets! 22/1*

Oh, I love the Pokabu and Tsutarja cards!! The artwork is amazing as well!
 
RE: HoS's Card Fakes *2 new cards! Snakes and Piglets! 22/1*

@LostVoice
Thank you, nice to see someone appreciate the artwork once in a while.
A big thank you out to Rukaria and JezzTheHedgehog for the amazing artworks.

However, the Tepig art is slightly altered by me to blend in with the card blank.
 
RE: HoS's Card Fakes *2 new cards! Snakes and Piglets! 22/1*

I've no idea what you did to the tepig but its diffuse lighting is all screwy. The left part of the tepig's image is unnaturally red for instance, and it's supposed to be facing away from the light source..
 
RE: HoS's Card Fakes *2 new cards! Snakes and Piglets! 22/1*

@XieRH
I dunno about that, I just duplicated the layer and messed with some smokey like things. Just to get that lava mist feel to it ;).
 
RE: HoS's Card Fakes *2 new cards! Snakes and Piglets! 22/1*

...but there's no reddish mist in the air... you could've airbrushed something.
 
RE: HoS's Card Fakes *2 new cards! Snakes and Piglets! 22/1*

Snivy's Ivy Strangle might be OP. I don't know how to limit it, but seems it to me. Well, maybe Gengar SF can repay it for being a tech... The other parts of both I haven't seen on other cards. Truly, a revolution artist.

~AoH
 
RE: HoS's Card Fakes *2 new cards! Snakes and Piglets! 22/1*

@AoH
I don't know much about the mechanisms. I haven't played TCG competitively after the EX-Series. If you do have any suggestions I gladly take them :).
Thanks.
 
RE: HoS's Card Fakes *De---WOTT? 25th January : Update!*

Would love to see a holo version of that Tepig HoS! Tis grand :)
 
RE: HoS's Card Fakes *De---WOTT? 25th January : Update!*

@Asche
Thanks bro, you can definitely expect Enbuoh in holo though also, I have the ideas to create Holo versions of the basic stages :D.
What do you think of Dewott?
 
RE: HoS's Card Fakes *De---WOTT? 25th January : Update!*

Well Dewott certainly wasn't that popular here :(
I hope Chaoboo will be :D.

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Feedback is appreciated with open arms :).

EDIT : Updates will be fairly slow seeing that school is slowly killing me.
 
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