I don't know if you make these with the intent of having them be played (and if you didn't then forget this post), but I always like a discussion of card-making strategy and I did have some suggestions about some of the cards. Granted, I've been out of the game for long enough now that I am not at all familiar with the metagame (and have no idea what format these are even supposed to be played in), so some of this suggestions may be off base.
I don't see these cards ever being played, unfortunately, but critique always helps! ^.^
1. Shelmet/Karrablast: I like this idea. But I'm not sure exactly how this card is supposed to be treated while it's on their Bench. Can I attack it while it's there? Does it have HP? Can either one of us put a Pokemon Tool on it? Is it still a Grass type? If there's an attack or effect that changes based on how many Benched Pokemon my opponent has, does Shelmet count toward that effect? (On a side note, if it does, that could be a cool idea for another fake to combo with this... something like an attack that does 30 or 40 damage times the number of Benched Pokemon your opponent has in play.)
Basically, Shelmet/Karrablast is a Pokémon without HP, type, attacks, Weakness, Resistance, retreat cost, or really anything else. You can damage it, but without HP it will never be Knocked Out. The only way for your opponent to get rid of it is to get it off the Bench (and once you get one off the Bench, you get 'em all off the Bench; just keep promoting Shelmet/Karrablast until they're all gone). Because of how easily you can get rid of them, I don't think it's too overpowered.
As for putting the text about having no HP, type, etc on the card, let's just say that I ran out of room
really quickly, and having any more text on the card would require players to bring magnifying glasses.
2. Accelgor: I made a fake similar to this once. But I didn't make it draw 2 cards, I put it on a 50HP Pokemon-EX with no attacks, and I added a special rule: Only 1 copy can be put in the deck and when it would be discarded it goes to the Lost Zone instead. Maybe the game has changed so much since I last played that this wouldn't be broken, but unless the format is overrun with snipers, I don't see how it's possible. Once you build up an attacker, a focus on this card in your deck lets you preserve it for virtually the whole game. If you're attacking with an EX and then not submitting it to harm thanks to this card, that gets even more broken. Not to mention this card completely negates the effect of stuff like Pokemon Catcher (if stuff like that is still in the format). The only drawback (aside from taking up deck space) is the relatively low HP but my assumption is that whatever attacker you build up is capable of knocking out most Pokemon in one hit so you're just trading OHKOs without trading resources.
Accelgor could easily turn overpowered, but besides the obvious, it's difficult to consistently build up Accelgor, every turn, to take every attack. (There's always Forest of Giant Plants, except not in whatever format this would be played in.)
3. Stoutland: If it's possible to get a few Stage 2 Pokemon on your Bench (which, when I left the game, it wasn't, but based on your Hawes card it seems like it is now), this card is probably going to be pretty broken. It almost completely negates any spread strategy. And if you stack 3 or 4 of them of them, any deck that doesn't hit for an absolutely obscene amount of damage is pretty screwed. Throw some bulky high-HP Pokemon up there to attack and the situation isn't much better than where we're at with Accelgor. If the Pokemon has at least 150HP (could be Stoutland itself), then any attack doing 100 damage is at best a 4HKO. Then combine this with whatever damage manipulation you have in the format... Eviolite, Defender, Max Potion, Super Scoop Up, Damage Swap, even your own Heatran or Truth Energy and you have a deck that once set up won't go down unless your opponent is able to lock Abilities when they attack. With Stoutland's bulky HP, there's no way any snipe or Catcher-like attack is going to take one of these down in 1, probably not even 2 hits. So once the swarm is up, it's not going down.
I didn't actually pay too much attention to the other cards in the set when I designed new ones––Forces of Truth and Power of Ideals, I regret, were very poorly planned out on my part. So I completely forgot about Hawes when I made Stoutland.
That said, though, getting 3 or 4 Stoutland out requires constant Hawes-ing for 3 or 4 turns, without using any other kind of Supporters to get the cards you need. I could see getting one or two out, but that doesn't make too much more of an impact than Assault Vest.
4. Garbodor: Unquestionably broken. Being able to recycle all your Item cards is just too strong. In the last format I played, we had a Sableye card that let you recycle just 2 item cards as an attack, not a power, and that was a very popular and playable card. Granted, it offered an element of consistency that Garbodor doesn't, but that doesn't make Garbodor any less broken. Not to mention that a late-game Garbodor could easily get a clutch knock out when played in any deck, without even using your attack for the turn. So even a deck that doesn't desperately need to recycle Items would probably play Garbodor to get a free late-game knock out. And you can split this damage across multiple Pokemon to KO multiple weak/damaged Pokemon. It seems like Gothitelle was maybe supposed to be a counter to this but it's not useful in other situations so nobody is going to want to tech a Stage 2 into their deck just to counter one card. Also, the way Garbodor is worded, the damage would still be done even if Gothitelle was in play, the cards just wouldn't be returned to the deck.
Agreed on every point here. I'm never going to live down making a card this broken. >_<
5. Alder: Very cool card. In my past experience with cards like this, there is no need to require the player to reveal the cards they are choosing before they put them into their hand. It seems like the convention is to only require a reveal if there is some constraint on the type of card that can be chosen.
6. N: Another cool card. You could save the players some time by changing the wording to: Each player puts their hand on top of their deck. Then each player searches his or her deck for up to 3 cards and puts them into his or her hand. Each player shuffles their deck afterward.
I didn't have too much wording experience when I made these cards. That's my only excuse.
7. Beartic: Although not broken because so few Pokemon have resistances, I think this would be bad for the metagame because it would require decks to be too type-diversified. Any monotype deck would autolose to a Beartic deck assuming there's some Pokemon in the format that can resist the type.
I don't mind diversifying the metagame.
It's not hard to tech in one or two Pokémon that KO Beartic, plus Lysandre/Pokémon Catcher and such.
8. Sigilyph: At the very least, this Ability probably shouldn't stack. Even then I think it's a little strong for a Basic. I know Set Up was reprinted. One copy of this card on your Bench can completely shut down that engine unless they play multiple copies of their card on the same turn, which is a very big waste. This card reminds me of Power Spray and the last Pokemon that could use Set Up, but Power Spray was an Item that was difficult to search, could only be used once, and was restricted to only one type of deck. In addition, at that time, Abilities like Set Up were very common so it was hard to choose which to stop (there were cards with come-into-play effects that let you modify your Prize Cards, do damage to your opponent's Pokemon, and even serve as a Pokemon Catcher) and for much of the time it was legal, there were even better forms of draw than Set Up that could be used every turn.
Alright, so first of all, I misworded this. I did say I was bad at wording.
Second of all, if the wording said, "When your opponent's Pokémon uses any Ability, you may prevent all effects of that Ability. Then, put 2 damage counters on this Pokémon", what if I Miscommunication'd my opponent's Miscommunication, allowing me to use Set Up?
9. Elgyem: Abduct. Yikes. This card can pretty much shut down any Stage 2 engine for 1 Psychic Energy. It's a cool idea though. I think it would probably be better suited on an evolved attacker though.
Abduct is shut off by a single Tool attached to your opponent's Stage 2's. But I do see your point.
10. Mewtwo-EX: This might be my favorite card that you made.
11. Bisharp: I suppose Endgame isn't broken because it's on an evolution and it's so situational, but it seems like it would cause a lot of otherwise close games to end in a very anticlimactic and relatively non-strategic way.
Slowbro BKP 20 has a pretty similar effect –– if they're not banning Slowbro, I think Bisharp's OK.
12. Hawes: If the state of the game is the same as when I left it, this card isn't broken and I think it could be exactly what the last format I played in needed. But in most formats I've played it would be pretty broken. Regardless, it should specify whether to treat the played Pokemon as a Basic Pokemon or Evolved Pokemon while it's in play.
It's a bit late for me to change the text on the card; all my files for the set are gone by now.
It would count as an unevolved Evolved Pokémon, though, if that makes any sense. Stuff like Espeon-EX wouldn't devolve it, but it counts as an Evolution card for attacks that do 20x the number of Evolved Pokémon, for example.
Also, I have to ask. Did you make these manually with Photoshop or something, or did you use a generator? I was considering making my own fake set but I don't think I have the patience to design every card manually. But all the generators I've tried are limited and don't produce great-looking cards.
I used Photoshop, though I know
@Reggie McGigas uses GIMP and
@bbninjas uses Corel Draw. It takes less than ten minutes per card, if you use .psd font guides like
@aschefield101 makes.
If that doesn't suit you, you could always just write the text for the cards and post that. Text-based fakes are very popular among those without the patience for PS.