Writing Jay's Johto Journey - It's back! New chapters added!

RE: Jay's Johto Journey - Training Spearow

BUMP. Right, moving the plot on now. Introducing a cult of crazy people who believe in a Pokémon that probably doesn't exist. I wonder what they're up to...
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11

In the shadows of the mountain, Jay shivered. The sun had barely crept up above the towering peaks, but he had a feeling that it wasn’t going to get much warmer as the day passed. Dressing while still curled up in his sleeping bag in his tiny tent, Jay zipped up his hoody as far as he could, and joking wished he’d picked an item on headgear that had earflaps. But that would have been silly.

Gently awakening Cyndaquil, who was dozing in a corner, he unzipped the tent flaps and stepped outside, yawning and stretching. He called to Cyndaquil to come out so he could stow the tent, but the little fire mouse just curled up tighter. Jay recalled it instead, because he was too cold to argue. After a hurried breakfast, he set off at a brisk pace to warm up and before long he’d arrived at the impassable bulk of a large mountain. Impassable, that was, except for a large tunnel that had been carved through it. A large signpost was nailed next to it, upon which was written “Cherrygrove City” with an arrow pointing into the tunnel. Even Jay’s wobbly sense of direction would have trouble misinterpreting the way.

The tunnel was twice as high and thrice as wide as Jay, with dim yellowish lamps strung infrequently as far as the eye could see, before it bent around a corner. “Well, this will certainly make a change of scenery. Onwards!” Extracting his torch, he flicked it on and strode forth into the musky depths of the cave, Cyndaquil scampering at his heels.

As his eyes became more accustomed to the gloom, Jay saw that the tunnel wasn’t just a plain and empty passage. In some places, there were large caves deep in murky shadows that stretched back further than he could make out, and in other places the ceiling disappeared, and far above he could hear the high pitched shrieks of Zubat and other cave-inhabiting creatures. For a long time, he didn’t see any other Pokémon, but suddenly the ground a few steps before him cracked open and a shape dug up from below. Jay leapt back in terror, shining his torch wildly and trying to discern what this intruder was. It was a Diglett, which looked curiously at him and then popped back underground. From Jay’s feet came a squeak of laughter, and he sighed, embarrassed. “It looked bigger when I couldn’t see it” he mumbled, by way of explanation.

Carrying on for several more hours, Jay saw nothing more terrifying than a few more Diglett and Dugtrio, Zubat and Geodude. He came to a large hollow in the tunnel, which widened to such a large space as to accommodate a Pokémon battlefield. There were rough wooden benches along both sides of the field, and Jay took a seat on one of them, fishing in his rucksack for lunch. He ate in silence, almost dumbstruck by the forces of nature that had somehow carved out such a phenomenal space so long ago, undisturbed for so long. He wondered who had found it, who had been tunnelling and stumbled across this hidden space. What had prompted them to put a battlefield in the centre, and what spectacular battles had occurred here? Jay could only imagine, seeing scenes in his minds eye of spectacular battles raging, flying around the darkened roves above, element attacks smashing and scorching the surrounding rock.

Finding his voice, he spoke in hushed tones to Cyndaquil, who was gazing around with interested eyes. “Pretty impressive, huh? You don’t see this kind of thing everyday, that’s for sure.” The little mouse squeaked in reply, and then reared up in alarm as its squeak echoed back, eek-eeek-eee. Jay laughed and said reassuringly “No need to worry, it’s just your echo. Listen.” He whistled a loud, high-pitched whistle. It echoed back to him, but just as it should have died down, more screeching could be heard, getting louder. Jay looked about, puzzled. Why could he hear the flap of leathery wings? He looked up and saw several hundred confused and angry Zubat flapping straight towards him. “Oh, damn…”

Roughly grabbing his rucksack and Cyndaquil, to indignant protestations from the latter, he ducked down next to the bench, head in his hands and curled up in a ball to hide and defend himself. He flicked off his torch just before the Zubat swept down all around him, some even flying so low that they cuffed him with their wings. One knocked his hat off his head and sent it tumbling under the bench. Luckily, they didn’t seem to notice him, or didn’t care enough to attack him. Then there was silence once more as the Zubat flapped away into the darkness.

Uncurling, Jay flicked the torch back on and laughed out loud. The beam had fallen on the side of the bench, and someone had carved a crude drawing on it. It looked like a Diglett, but it had fangs and bat-like wings. There was a crude arrow underneath the drawing, pointing towards the cave wall a few meters behind the bench. Curious, Jay walked slowly in the direction the arrow pointed, sweeping the floor beneath him with the bright white beam of the torch. Cyndaquil followed with slightly more apprehension than its trainer. Having reached the wall and found no untoward markings on the floor, Jay set to work on the wall, shining his torch methodically up and down as if he were painting a fence.

Before long, he gave an excited cry. “Look at this! It’s the same… erm… thing.” Reaching out to touch it, he stumbled on a loose rock underfoot and pitched forward into the wall. To his shock, he hit the wall and kept on moving, the wall sliding back in front of him. With nothing but thin air to break his fall, Jay sprawled forward and onto the floor. From somewhere behind him, Cyndaquil squeaked a chuckle. “Quiet you. That was entirely intentional. Except, you know, the whole falling over bit.” Rallying, he said in triumph, “hey now, I’ve found some kind of secret passage. That’s not something you see everyday, huh? Shall we go take a look?”

Cyndaquil reared up onto its hind legs and shook its head. “Oh come on, you coward. It’ll be an adventure! Who knows what lies down this tunnel. We could be the first to set foot in it for hundreds of years!” Still, Cyndaquil remained unmoving. “Fine. You’ll miss out on the fun. But you’ll have to come with me, I’m not going to abandon you in some dark cave. Return.”

And so Jay carried on alone, torch held high, for the tunnel was narrow and unlit. He stopped suddenly, feeling his head. “Oh blast, I’ve forgotten my hat! Eh, can’t go back now, on with the adventure! I’ll pick it up later”, he reminded himself. After a minute or two of slow, careful walking, Jay came to another door. This was small and wooden. Above it, in letters that looked disturbingly like Unown, was written:

“Ye that accept the truth of Most Mighty Digbat be welcomed here. All others, begone!”

Most normal people would turn back at this point, hurrying away with apprehensive backward glances other their shoulders. Jay was not most normal people. He was adventurous, but also blessed (or cursed) with an obliviousness to danger that rivalled that of a lemming. Convinced in his mind that everything was perfectly normal, he pushed at the door. Nothing happened. Bending in closer to look at the door, he saw that in smaller letters on the door itself, the word “Push” was written. Jay sighed, and pulled the door towards him. It opened, and he stepped forward, torch raised.

The first thing Jay saw was a circle of kneeling figures clad in brown looking curiosly at him. They were in a rough circle, arrayed around a small fire in the centre of the small cave. The second thing Jay saw was the massive statue behind them on the far wall. Twice as tall as a man and immaculately carved, it was Diglett shaped, but with wings, fangs and fierce expression. The third thing Jay saw were the two Sudowudo, one of on each side of him. They were as tall as him and looked fierce, a far cry from the occasional wild ones he’d see back at home in Redwood Town.

There was an awkward silence as the eleven robed figures stared at him, and Jay stared back. “Um… hello?” He ventured.

One of the monks threw back his hood. He was bald, but this was compensated for by a spectacularly large walrus moustache, waxed into curls at the ends. His eyebrows, grey like his moustache, were narrowed. “Who are you, and what are you doing trespassing on the holy ground of The Most Sacred and Holy Cult of the Most Mighty Digbat, All Hear Its Name and Tremble!” On cue, the other ten members went “Oooooh!” in spooky voices.

Jay tried very hard not to laugh, but it was hard. He’d run into some crazy cultists who appeared to be worshiping the impossible offspring of two of the most mundane Pokémon in the world. He adjusted the smirk that was forming into an understanding and gentle smile. Humouring the assembled madmen seemed to be best, until he could back slowly away and then run for saner climates.

“So, that’s Digbat is it?” He asked innocently, indicating the large statue.

“Indeed it is!” spoke the moustached one, in tones of great importance. “Yea! It is the mightiest of all Pokémon on this planet, boundless in power and capable of anything! It is a legend beyond all legends, and one day it will return! And then we will rise to power and the world will be ours!” He coughed, aware that he might have said too much. He rallied, puffing out his stomach and glaring more fiercely than ever. “But who are ye, unbidden intruder, what is your purpose here? Speak!”

Ignoring the question, because he didn’t want the crazy guy knowing his name, Jay said “I’ve never heard of this Digbat before, I didn’t know it was a Legendary. Let’s have a look at what my Pokédex says, hmm?” Reaching into his pocket and flipping the dex open, he noticed, too late, that many of the kneelers had risen up slightly. Much too cheerfully for the situation, the dex beeped. “Diglett, the Mole Pokémon. It digs underground and chews on tree roots, sticking its head out only when the sun isn't bright.”

All eleven cultists leapt to their feet with screams of rage. “Oops. I’m sure it’s mistaken…?” Jay was fairly sure he’d just put his foot in it. He started edging backwards towards the door, but he bumped into the solid form of a Sudowudo behind him. He took a few steps forward again, so he was still in his own bubble of space. He felt that things had taken a definite turn for the worse.

Walrus Moustache, purple in the face with rage, snarled at Jay, spraying him with spittle from several yards away. “Digbat is NOT a mere Diglett! It is so much more! You come in here to our sacred retreat and you mock us! You need to be taught a lesson! Seize him!” The other 10 cultists and both Sudowudo headed for Jay, who cursed under his breath, switched off his torch, and dodged to the left. Simultaneously, he reached to his belt and drew a Pokéball, throwing it at his feet.

“Cyndaquil, Smokescreen now!” Bewildered, the little fire mouse obeyed, covering the already dark area with thick black smoke. Hiding close to a corner, Jay heard the humming noise of a computer, and looked down. Indeed, there was a computer and technical sensory typed gizmos attached to it. “That’s odd”, he thought to himself, and was then interrupted by a cursing figure who leapt at him, robes billowing around him. Jay dodged around him and then recalled Cyndaquil, who was being menaced by the Sudowudo, although the sounds coming from the thick smoke indicated a spectacular melee involving at least eight people and four Pokémon. Spotting a safe route towards the door, Jay sprinted for it, shoulder charging the door so hard that it hit the rock behind it with a crash and fell off its hinges with a crackle off splintered wood.

Bolting down the tunnel in the dark, Jay heard persuing footsteps behind them, and saw the flicker of fire on the walls out of the corner of his eyes. Suddenly, he heard a shout from behind him, growing quieter as he grew further away. “Let him go! We’ll track him down later, put the word out and find out what the sneak knows!”

Still running, he burst out of the tunnel, pausing only to roll back the fake wall. Then he grabbed his hat from under the bench and sprinted out of the cavern, pulling out his torch and shining it wildly over his shoulder in search of pursuers. His mind was racing, but despite everything he wasn’t too scared. Trying to reassure himself, he thought “Good luck trying to find me. I was wearing dark clothes in a dark room, they can’t even have seen me very well. And I wasn’t wearing my hat. I normally wear my hat.” But there was a darker side to the situation, he knew. Why did they think he knew something? What did they think he knew? What was that computer doing in cave full of crazy cultists? And what was the leader talking about when he was raving about world domination? Surely not real world domination? He thought of the Most Mighty Digbat, the Pokémon that he didn’t think existed. Well, he hoped it didn’t. He really didn’t know.

Confused, and if he was honest, a bit scared, Jay jogged on through the cave, wishing he was in Cherrygrove City already.
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Comment, lest I set the Most Mighty Digbat upon ye!
 
RE: Jay's Johto Journey - Cult of the Most Mighty Digbat

The Spearow chapter was very nicely thrown together. I'll edit this in a bit with more reviewishness stuff.
 
RE: Jay's Johto Journey - Cult of the Most Mighty Digbat

Thanks BB, although I kinda object to "thrown together." All my stuff is carefull juggled, maneuvered, wedged and forced together. :p Anyway, next bit. This is another emotion-y and self-realisation-y bit, but not so angsty as the one I did a while ago. Basically, something to connect one set-piece to the next.
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Eventually, Jay stopped for the night. He wanted to keep on going, but his legs and eyelids felt like they were made of lead. He’d been on the move non-stop since his encounter with the crazy cultists earlier in the afternoon, trying to put as much distance between them and him as possible.

By mid-afternoon he’d left the tunnel and the caves within behind, and he had emerged into foothills with a sparse coating of trees. He hadn’t seen anyone all day, although he had seen a Honchkrow several times. Or more than one of them. It was high in the sky, but Jay thought it was carrying a message. It also seemed to be following the path more than was necessary for a creature that could take the straightest route from point to point. Jay had assumed it had seen him, but there was nothing he could do about it. He’d considered sending Spearow to attack it, but he didn’t think his little bird would make it to the Honchkrow’s altitude before it got tired and needed a rest. Nor would it last very long against a fully-evolved Dark-type.

Jay had briefly considered that the cultists had just spooked him and he had gone crazy with paranoia, but as he knelt down to open his rucksack, he caught sight of a shadow on the other side of the road, swooping over him back towards the tunnel. It was the silhouette of a bird, with large wide wings and hat-like crest. Slinging his rucksack over one shoulder, he leapt up in a sudden panic and hared into a patch of trees just off the road.

For a brief moment he seriously considered sleeping in a tree, but then his sanity returned and he decided to pitch the tent in the cover that the clump of trees provided. Their branches were large and covered in wide leaves, so when Jay had the tent up it was quite hard to see. As a finishing touch, he picked up fallen branches and leaves and scattered them as best he could on top of the tent.

Jay’s stomach rumbled, and he grimaced. “When did I last eat? I’ve not had a snack since lunch… I’m going crazy through lack of food, that must be it.” He searched his bag and found some fragmented crackers, which he quickly ate. Then, lying in the relative comfort of his tiny tent, he summoned Cyndaquil, who popped out, looking disapproving. It was the first time it was out since it had warned Jay against prying in the cave and subsequently covering his retreat. Now, it bounded up onto his chest and started squeaking angrily.

Soothingly, Jay stroked the little mouse’s back. “Yeah, I should have listened to you, I’m sorry. I didn’t think anyone would be there, I thought it was an ancient relic. I didn’t realise that it would still be inhabited by a bunch of nutjobs. Still, the stuff they yelled at me as we escaped, it freaked me out.” Jay sighed heavily, and shifted uncomfortably. He was acutely aware of every sound outside the tent, every whisper from the wind and every rustle in the grey twilight. His eyes were heavy and closed, when suddenly he heard the snap of a twig outside. He sat bolt upright, eyes wide. Cyndaquil had stirred too. It looked over at Jay, who nodded. The fire mouse reared up and its flame ignited. Jay had expressly forbidden any flames in the tent, but he didn’t want to be caught defenceless by a bunch of madmen in robes. A singed tent was better than being caught and made to talk by the cultists.

Jay leaned forward and slowly, quietly unzipped the tent. In a fluid movement, Cyndaquil leapt out and pounced on something a few feet away. It turned out to be a wild Spinarak. With a terrified squeak, it scuttled away. “Oops” said Jay, giggling despite everything. Zipping the tent back up, he lay back and soon fell asleep, comforted by the warmth of Cyndaquil by his feet.

Next morning Jay awoke quite late, and the sun was already high in the sky. Cautiously, he stuck his out. The road seemed deserted and the sky above seemed empty. A contrail from a plane long gone was all that stained the cloudless sky. After a quick breakfast of yoghurt (Supplies were starting to run low again) Jay brushed the makeshift camouflage off his tent and stowed it, setting off towards Cherrygrove City. According to his map and his rough estimations, it would take him another day or so until he arrived.

He let Spearow out, and the little bird flapped along with him. It had been a while since the scruffy bird had been out, but it had at least remembered not to instantly pounce on the first thing it saw. Its flying had improved greatly since Jay had caught it, although by the standards of any other bird it was still quite unimpressive. The only thing it could out fly would be a Doduo. And even then, it’d still be outpaced.

They made good progress for a while, but shortly after lunch Jay came to a crossroads. Two of the arms pointed to Cherrygrove City, and when he consulted the map in confusion, he saw that the road effectively split in two to avoid a large forest. However, the map also featured a small road that seemed to cut straight through the middle, although it was pencilled in very lightly, meaning that it wasn’t maintained and was probably little more than a trail of flattened grass.

Still, Jay was eager to get to the next city on his journey, partially for a sit down and a comfy bed, and partially so he could feel a bit safer from the cult. He’d calmed down a lot since the day before, but he still felt their threat to his safety was something that needed to be taken seriously.

Setting back off, Jay followed the left-most road until it came to a forest, and then he turned off towards the trees on a path so small that it was barely noticeable. The road that ran right of the forest was already well out of sight. Following the path, which was indeed just patches of grass that were more trampled than others, he caught sight of a carved arrow on a tree, pointing inwards. Despite the unfortunate incident that had occurred last time he’d blindly followed a sign into places unknown, Jay followed it.

Half an hour later, Jay was sweating through tall grass and having his head swatted by stray tree branches. He’d returned both his Pokémon to their Pokéballs, there just wasn’t room for them. The thick and clammy air engulfed him, and he was sweating. He’d unzipped his hoody after 10 minutes, but now it was getting caught on trees and branches. He unslung his rucksack and opened it up, but as his attention was diverted to stuffing his hoody in it, he tripped over a tree root. He stumbled wildly sideways, tried to regain his balance, and tumbled back the other way, spinning to try and grab a tree to steady himself, which was hard because he had his rucksack in both hands.. This caused him to plant a foot in a patch of long nettles, which caused him to yelp in pain and leap out of them, banging his other foot on a tree as he did so. Only then did he fall over.

Recovering from this spectacularly melodramatic display, Jay sat down and took a long drink of water. Repacking his rucksack, he stood up, ready to carry on and find a way out of the infernal forest. This was easier said than done. Jay had just bounced around like a pinball, and now he’d lost the trail, which was virtually indistinguishable from the rest of the forest. Worse still, he’d spun through over nine hundred degrees, and wasn’t even sure which direction he was meant to be going in any more.

In the end, he tried to do a re-enactment of his stumble, and carried on following what he assuming was the path. So he carried on, stumbling along through the clingy trees and occasionally spiking himself on thorns, nettles and thistles. It was not a friendly kind of forest, and Jay regretted his hastiness once again. He should have taken the real route and followed it in the longer, but easier to walk, direction. He might even have seen some Pokémon that he could have tried to capture. In here all there were were little bugs. Jay wanted a bug-type, but not a Weedle or something so mundane. He was looking out for a Heracross or Pinsir, something like that.

Limping wearily on, Jay eventually came to a clearing and sat down upon a large rock there. His left foot was throbbing, and as he removed his shoe and turned it upside down, several varieties of thorn and nettled came tumbling out. His heal was blistered too. Putting his shoe back on, he tugged at his sweaty tee-shirt. It had massive sweat patches under both arms, and as far as he could feel, all down the back too. Reaching into his rucksack for some water, he found that he had barely half a bottle left. He raised it to his lips, about to drink, and then a massive orange blur leapt into the clearing.
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To be continued!
 
RE: Jay's Johto Journey - Fleeing the cultists

Bulbabuddy said:
I discovered a typographical error during the process of reading your creative work.
EXCITING!

LOL! Innuendoriffic. Can you point out where exactly I made such and error? Chii, thanks! Have some more!
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Jay leapt to his feet, spilling the last of his water in the process. He fumbled for Cyndaquil’s Pokéball and threw it towards the intruder. At least, he thought it was Cyndaquil. In fact, it was Spearow. “Cyndaargh-Spearow? Fine, let’s go!” Flapping hard, Spearow hovered in front of the sweating and limping trainer, facing another large Pokémon. It was a quadruped, but it easily came up to Jay’s waist. It had orange fur, with black stripes and cream coloured fur that billowed out behind and around it. Its fangs were bared now, eyes narrowed as it surveyed the boy in front of it and the little bird above it. Opening its mouth, it barked and growled, never taking its eyes off the pair in front of it.

“Easy Arcanine! It’s alright!” From the direction the large dog had appeared, a woman appeared. Middle aged, she was lightly dressed in a vest, shorts, stout boots and a large hat. All of the garments were cream coloured and well worn. The woman strode into the clearing and stopped next to the Arcanine, which she began to stroke.

Looking up to Jay and Spearow, she gave them a friendly smile. “Sorry if this big boy scared you. He smelled you and didn’t recognise you, so I thought we should check it out. My name’s Helena. Are you alright?” She looked at his bedraggled state and the fact that he was shifting his weight off one leg with some concern.

Jay hesitated a moment before answering. He had no idea who this woman was, but he sensed she was trustworthy. And he didn’t want his current state to make him come off as rude. Returning Spearow to his belt, he forced a smile in return. “My name’s Jay. I’m a trainer, just started. I’m heading towards Cherrygrove now. And yeah, I’m okay…ish.”

“Well Jay, if you’re heading towards Cherrygrove, you’re going the wrong way. And I have to say, you don’t look okay to me. I live quite close to here, on the road to Cherrygrove as it happens. Come back with me, you can get yourself sorted. And if you’re a trainer, maybe we could battle? I used to be a trainer myself.”

Jay nodded. “Yeah, that sounds good, thanks. Your Arcanine here scared me, I dropped the last of my water. Oh, that reminds me.” He reached for his Pokédex. “Arcanine, the Legendary Pokémon. Its proud and regal appearance has captured the hearts of people since long ago.”

Helena snorted in disbelief. “Scared? Of an Arcanine? What kind of trainer are you, boy?”

“Not what I meant” Jay replied. “Startled is more what it did. And something happened yesterday, it’s left me a bit jumpy.”

“Oh, right-oh. Sorry, I’m just teasing. It sounds like you’ve got quite a story, but I won’t interrogate you as we walk, ahaha. Follow me then, and sing out if you can’t keep up.” Helena’s Arcanine had already set off, leaping and darting gracefully through the trees. She followed it, exhibiting the same grace as the large dog. Jay hobbled after them with all the grace of a sleepwalking Snorlax.

They walked in silence for half an hour or so, Jay grimly keeping pace despite the fact that his entire foot was throbbing. He silently cursed every species of plants that had the indecency to grow spikes, thorns, thistles or spines. There certainly seemed to be a lot of them in this wild little patch of woodland. Before long, the forest started to thin and a large, single-storey house came into view, surrounded by fields full of long grass and the occasional tree.

Aracanine sprinted away, leaving the two humans to follow at walking pace. “He’ll be off to lie in front of the fire” Helena chuckled. “He’s a big softy, but a great battler. He won most of my Johto badges.”

“For a Legendary Pokémon, he sure is cute. I thought that most Legendaries were all talons and fangs and haughty rage” Jay smiled.

“Ah, you mustn’t be confused. Aracanine isn’t a Legendary Pokémon like Entei or Lugia, it’s just the name of the species. I don’t know why they couldn’t have just called it ‘Dog Pokémon’ or something like that. It’s pre-evolution, Growlithe, is the puppy Pokémon after all.”

Jay nodded, slightly confused but determined not to show it. “I see.”

The two had arrived at the front door to the house now, and Helena opened the door. “In you come then. Just leave your boots here, and follow me into the kitchen. How does a snack sound to you?”

It sounded great to Jay, and before long he was working his way through biscuits, fruit and plenty of water. Cyndaquil and Spearow had come out and were eating heartily too. At last, Jay finished eating, and they moved into the sitting room, each sitting on a comfy, overstuffed sofa. Helena stretched and propped her feet up on a stool, and turned to Jay. “So,” she said, green eyes twinkling. “You have a story? I do like taking in travellers, they have all kinds of tall tales.”

Jay looked around the room awkwardly, avoiding her gaze. He’d forgotten about yesterday for a while. “Oh, yeah. Right. Well, I was on my way here from Ivyville, and I had to pass through the tunnel in the mountain a while back…” He told Helena the whole story, noting with dismay that as he spoke, her smile faded more and more.

“So yeah. I’m either being hunted by some kind of cult or I think I’m being followed by Honchkrow. I’ve no idea what’s going on, if I should forget it and dismiss it as a bad day or if there is actually more to the cult then eleven robed guys and the Honchkrow actually was sending messages and looking for me.”

Helena sighed. “Of all the inquisitive trainers, you are by far the worst.” Ashamed, Jay hung his head, and focused intently on the complex patterns of the sofa. Her stern face melted away, and she smiled slightly. Then it faded again. “As it happens, this cult is bad news. I’ve heard of them, they used to just be harmless crazies worshipping a Pokémon that didn’t exist. But recently, they’ve changed. You can see their grunts, minions, in major cities and even small towns. They travel around, searching for relics and things like that. That’d be fine, if they weren’t doing it by stealing and plundering from museums and the like. They’re recruiting members all the time, and having them commit crimes in the name of the group. But if someone gets caught, the cult abandons them and lets them take the fall alone.”

“Oh. Damn.” Jay really didn’t know what to say. He’d accidentally invaded and insulted a known criminal organisation that had access to a steady supply of goons to do the dirty jobs. “What… what do I do? If they know who I am…” He gulped, and couldn’t finish his question.

“You could always change your clothes. But I know how it is with trainers, you want to create an identity and all that. You’ve got quite a muted colourscheme going on, and if you didn’t have your hat I’d say you’d be quite hard to recognise in the dark. So don’t worry yourself about it. They’re mostly harmless anyway, from what I hear. The occasional grunt will bully some trainer for fun, but I don’t think you’re in much danger.”

“I heard them say, on the way out. They wanted me found, like I was important. They thought I was there for a reason.”

Helena frowned “Yes. Well, they probably thought that you were sent in there by the police, undercover. Or that you were the chosen one as indicated by prophecies long past written, for all I know. It’s all nonsense, Jay, just forget it for now. If you’re really worried, go over and make a statement to the police when you get to Cherrygrove. Just tell them everything you told me, although I don’t know what they can do about it. Anyway, I have some chores to do, will you help me?”
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Yeah, it's more talky, but it's necessary to establish the reputation of the Cult of Digbat.
 
RE: Jay's Johto Journey - Cult of the Most Mighty Digbat

Yakob's Typographical Error said:
Next morning Jay awoke quite late, and the sun was already high in the sky. Cautiously, he stuck his out. The road seemed deserted and the sky above seemed empty. A contrail from a plane long gone was all that stained the cloudless sky. After a quick breakfast of yoghurt (Supplies were starting to run low again) Jay brushed the makeshift camouflage off his tent and stowed it, setting off towards Cherrygrove City. According to his map and his rough estimations, it would take him another day or so until he arrived.


After Jay wakes in the morning, he sticks his innuendoifficness out the tent.


Yakob said:
Jay nodded. “Yeah, that sounds good, thanks. Your Arcanine here scared me, I dropped the last of my water. Oh, that reminds me.” He reached for his Pokédex. “Arcanine, the Legendary Pokémon. Its proud and regal appearance has captured the hearts of people since long ago.”

New paragraph for Dextaaaa, homedawg.
 
RE: Jay's Johto Journey - Helena + more talky.

OK, I'm back with moar writingz. This took me a while, I kinda hit a wall. It's mostly talking, kinda my views on stuff, voiced through Helena. But yeah, action-packed bit next.
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14

When you are a guest in someone else’s house and they ask you to help them with chores, there is a tendency to awkwardness. However, since Helena’s chores consisted of looking after the vast amounts of bug-type Pokémon that she raised and bred, Jay was thrilled to be able to help.

Of course, “helping” pretty much equalled following Helena around and watching while she explained what she was doing, but still, Jay was participating. All the Pokémon, of which there were lots, (from Johto natives like Skiploom to exotic foreign bugs such as Mothim and Shedinja) needed feeding, bedding, and checking for eggs. Jay’s Pokédex was constantly out in between dragging massive buckets of Pokémon food to hives of hungry Pokémon that cheerfully buzzed around him.

“Suit up” said Helena to Jay, as they both donned garments that looked like a cross between traditional beekeeping garb and body armour. “We’ve got to check on the Beedrill now, and they can be quite aggressive. But on the plus side, we might get some honey.” Stepping into the large shed-greenhouse that housed the Beedrill with some apprehension, Jay looked around. He rather like most bug types, but being in a large box with an aggressive species with stingers as long as his arm did worry him. But then he calmed down, trusted in his suit, and walked over to where Helena was busying with the hives, extracting some oozing liquid into bottles she’d brought in with them. As she was doing so, an enraged Beedrill zoomed towards her, tail stinger outstretched.

Before Jay even had time to shout a warning, the zooming bug had hit Helena heavily in the bag, and she fell forward. She quickly regained her feet though, and swatted a heavily armoured arm at the Beedrill, catching it around the head. It retreated, buzzing angrily. She felt her armour, and smiled. “It’ll leave a dent, but I’m fine. Got to love this gear. Anyway, we’re done here. Let’s head back in and have a meal, if you’d like.”

Jay did like. He noticed now that the sun was beginning to set, and was amazed how the past few hours had flown by. Heading back inside, Jay fed his Pokémon while Helena cooked a quick meal up. Mercifully, Spearow wasn’t any trouble. Cyndaquil never was, and it ate quickly and then went to introduce itself to Arcanine, lying in front of the fire. Jay, seeing its intention recalled Spearow and said to Helena “erm… is Arcanine friendly? My Cyndaquil’s going to say hello. I can recall him if it’s a problem.”

From the kitchen, Helena laughed pleasantly. “Oh, don’t worry about him, he’s a lazy old boy, he won’t be any trouble to you or your Pokémon.” And indeed, Cyndaquil had curled up next to the big dog and exchanged squeaks and barks, both basking in the fire’s warmth together. Sitting on a couch, Jay watched the two of them, enjoying the peace and amiability of the little cottage. It was a nice change from constant walking. His feet ached, but the one that had been prickled, nettled and spiked earlier had already stopped hurting.

After a brief tea of roast Farfetch’d with leek and honey, they returned to the couches in front of the fireplace. “Have you been following the League?” Helena enquired, turning on the TV.

“Nope, it started just after I left, so I’ve not seen any. Normally I try to watch them when they’re on. I saw the last Sinnoh League, watched all the matches. It was great fun to watch, maybe I’ll make it there someday.”

“I’m sure you will. Focus on beating those gym leaders first though, they’re a tough bunch. I should know, I used to be one!”

Jay turned to look at Helena in surprise. “Wow. Why did you stop?”

Smiling vaguely, Helena gazed up at the ceiling as if daydreaming. “Oh, there were good times. I was the bug-type leader, if you haven’t already guessed. It was great fun at first, I’d just won the league, went up against the Elite Four too. I didn’t do too badly and one thing led to another. I spent ages assembling a great team of my favourite battlers, focusing on them instead of others, like Arcanine there.” She nodded at the dozing dog by the fire. “The competitors came flooding in. I beat lots of them, and lost to plenty too, because no matter how good you think you are, there’s always someone better. After ten years, maybe less, maybe more, I got fed up. I realised that I’d become torn between loving winning and disliking having to hand over badges to people who beat me. I realised I’d lost sight of why I started my Pokémon journey all those years ago: to interact with Pokémon. Trust me when I say there’s more to Pokémon then having them attack each other, young man.”

Jay glanced over to the fireplace where Cyndaquil was contentedly curled. He stared at the little fire mouse and replied quietly “yes, there is.”

“If someone tells you the whole point of Pokémon is to fight for you, then you’re facing a very sad individual there, unfortunately. There are people who train hard to be strong, but never give their Pokémon a kind word or a smile. Lots of them beat me in the gym, and I was loath to give them the badges that they boasted about. The badge is meant to mean something, each one is special and each gym unique. It’s not just eight parts of a token to get you into a league, it’s meant to show you something about yourself and your Pokémon. Every battle is.”

Jay nodded solemnly, and Helena continued. “So I realised the time was right for me to leave. I came down here and brought my Pokémon to somewhere they could enjoy. I don’t battle much any more, but sometimes I do, and I still enjoy it. I still loving watching it too, but I find I have a tendancy to be over-critical of the contestants, and shout advice at the TV.” She chuckled. “That, young man, is the road to madness. But look at that man there. He’s having his Feralligatr use Bite on that Gengar. No effect!”

Jay laughed, and the two spent the rest of the evening watching the battles, with Helena predicting the results with remarkable success and offering advice to the participants. Soon, Jay’s eyes felt heavy, and even a spectacular quarter-final brawl between a Blazing Infernape and a Charizard couldn’t keep him from nodding off.

“Alright, I think that’s enough. I’m sure you’ve had a long day, and I certainly have. I’ll show you to the guest bedroom you can have for tonight, and the bathroom’s over there and the laundry room’s over there. Throw your clothes in and they’ll be clean for you to get all sweaty and dirty again tomorrow.”

Smiling, Jay thanked her. Lying in bed shortly afterwards, he thought about what Helena had said. He also thought his feet felt colder than usual, and then he remembered that Cyndaquil was asleep in front of the fire, instead of occupying the end of the bed. Staring around the room in that hazy just-before-sleep feeling that you get just before you drop off, Jay yawned deeply. The room was about as big as the room he’d stayed in back in the Pokémon centre in Ivyville, but more tastefully upholstered, in light blue this time. The darkness made it look a calming grey, except for a strip of light that Jay had left by opening a curtain slightly. Along with the bed, the only other items of furniture were a large wardrobe and a table with an accompanying chair. All of them were wooden, dark and polished. Hanging on the far wall opposite the window to Jay’s left was a large picture. The picture showed a young woman brandishing a badge, flanked by a Scizor on the left and a Heracross on the left. A Ledian hovered above and behind her. All four looked proud and determined, Helena (for it was obviously her) in particular. Jay smiled and turned over, and was soon asleep.

He was abruptly awoken the next morning by a cheerful squeaking and a heavy weight on his face. There are worse ways to be awoken then to be sat upon by a Cyndaquil, but not many. “Aargh! Oh, hello you. Sleep well by the fire with your new friend, hmm?” Jay smiled. Cyndaquil was often awoken by being rolled off of him onto the floor of the tent, and he assumed that the cheeky fire mouse was simply getting its own back. Cyndaquil squeaked repeatedly, and gestured back to door from which it had just entered.

“Breakfast time, eh?” Stretching and yawning, he strolled out of the bedroom and through the lounge into the kitchen, where Helena was indeed making breakfast. Unlike him, who was wearing his light blue Pyjamas, she was fully dressed. Pinned to her lapel was a badge that she hadn’t been wearing yesterday. Jay recognised it from the picture he’d seen the previous night.

“Good morning Jay, sleep well? How’s porridge sound to you?”

“Mornin’! Yep, porridge is always good, thanks.”

Sliding a bowl full of steamy porridge across to Jay, she took a seat. In between hungry mouthfuls, Jay asked “so, is that your gym badge that you’re wearing? I saw it on the the picture in my bedroom last night. ”

“Well noticed, it is indeed. The Buzz Badge.” Taking it off, she held it out in front of Jay, who examined it closely. It had a round centre, coloured gold, and shooting off at diagonals were four round wings, each a different colour “Each wing represents one of my Pokémon. Green for Scyther, blue for Heracross, red for Scizor and yellow for Beedrill. They let the leaders choose their own designs.” She smiled, and replace the badge.

Once he’d eaten, Jay retrieved his clothes and changed quickly before heading out back to say goodbye. Slinging his rucksack onto his shoulders, he found Cyndaquil with Helena. She saw him, and raised a hand. “Wait a minute before you go, young man. There’s some other things around here I think you’d like to see. Follow me, if you please” Jay shrugged curiously, and he and Cyndaquil followed Helena out of her garden and around the side of the house that Jay hadn’t seen. The grass was cut back neatly, revealing an immaculately kept battlefield. Helena strode to the far side of it, and grinned.

“What do you say, up for challenging an old gym leader? I’d like to battle you, and you wouldn’t refuse and old lady a simple offer, would you?”

Jay grinned even wider, and Cyndaquil bounded forward, igniting its flame as it ran.
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Yay, now I get to write a battle. Should be good.
 
RE: Jay's Johto Journey - Helena + more talky.

Lol, nice chapter again Yakob.
Can't wait for the BATTLE!
 
RE: Jay's Johto Journey - Helena + more talky.

Very nice and interesting.
This is encouraging me to write more stories. :)
 
RE: Jay's Johto Journey - Helena + more talky.

Thanks both, glad you enjoy it! OK, another battle. This was quite tough, doing a convincing battle with one Pokémon having a Quad weakness to the other. :p
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15

Helena reached into a pocket and withdrew a Pokéball. Throwing it, she called out “Scizor, let’s fight!” In a flash, a tall red insect had appeared, snapping its metallic pincers. As usual, Jay reached for his Pokédex.

“Scizor, the Pincer Pokémon. It has a steel-hard body. It intimidates foes by upraising its eye-patterned pincers.”

Jay raised an eyebrow. “Cool, but I thought bug-types were weak to fire. Doesn’t it kinda give me the advantage?”

“There’s more to battles than textbook weakness and resistance, young man. And for the record, Scizor is part Steel, which means that it’s weak to fire from that part too. Call it a quadruple weakness, in theory. But like I said, in theory. Let’s see you!”

“Right! Cyndaquil, let’s go! Smokescreen to Quick Attack, now!” As usual, the little fire mouse used its signature opening combination, billowing out smoke, and then hurtling into it in a squeaking white blur. It leapt, but there was no sound of collision. Sticking its head back out in confusion, it looked around.

Suddenly, from above, Scizor struck, claws glowing scarlet as Helena called out “Fury Cutter, now!” Both claws slammed into Cyndaquil’s side one after another, sending it skidding backwards. It leapt back up instantly, and blasted a searing jet of fire at the metal bug as Jay commanded a Flamethrower.

Helena was ready, and shouted out “counter with Double Team!” Instantly, Scizor blurred, and then the battlefield was covered by multiple Scizor. The flames hit the spot where the original used to be, but it was simply an illusion, and it faded away.

Once again, Cyndaquil was looking around, uncertain of where the next attack was going to come from. Jay ordered more Flamethrowers, but each time it hit a Scizor, the illusions vanished. Then the real Scizor struck and Helena called out “Steel Wing”. Unable to dodge in time, Cyndaquil was struck heavily once again. But once again it struggled back onto all fours.

“Come on Cyndaquil, hang in there! You can do it! Flamethrower, once more!” Simultaneously, Helena ordered another Double Team, but Jay had a plan. He waited, patiently, until Helena ordered X-Scissor. 10 Scizor copies, and one real Pokémon advanced on the little mouse, and just as they were about to hit Jay shouted out “Use Smokescreen around you!” As soon as they were hit by the smoke, the charging copies faded instantly. The real Scizor took a Flamethrower at point blank range, unable to dodge as it tried to use its move. It fell back and crashed into the ground, tumbling back towards its trainer, the former gym leader. Jay called for another, and Cyndaquil’s blast knocked Scizor back down even as it struggled back to its feet.

“Impressive, young man. Up you get Scizor, you’re doing well.” But Jay wasn’t stopping for a chat, as he smiled at his opponent and sent Cyndaquil rocketing towards the still down bug, which had made the mistake of trying to get back up again, with a Quick Attack. Cyndaquil’s little skull connected with the struggling red bug, and it was knocked back down, where it lay still. Squeaking cheerfully, Cyndaquil ran back to Jay, and he was just about to cheer when he saw Scizor rising to its feet jerkily, surrounded by a glowing aura.

“What’s it doing?” Flipping his Pokédex open, Jay pointed it at Scizor, now glowing crimson. The dex beeped almost instantly. “Swarm. This ability powers up Bug-type moves in a pinch.” “Abilities? That’s new. Cyndaquil, get back out there and finish the job, you can do it! Flamethrower!”

“Dodge and use Fury Cutter!” With surprising speed for a Pokémon on the brink of unconsciousness, Scizor leapt upon the bewildered mouse and hit it harder than last time it had used the move. Cyndaquil was slammed backwards, but struggled upright with dogged determination. Flames on its back flickering fitfully, it gathered breath for another flamethrower as Jay commanded, but the feeble fire flitted off the charging bug, wings aglow.

The Steel Wing impacted with Cyndaquil, and it was sent skidding back again. This time, it didn’t get up. “Wow. What just happened? That was amazing, Helena!”

The old gym leader nodded in acknowledgement and smiled, praising Scizor and returning it to her pocket. Turning to Jay, she said “you fought well, I see you’re already developing your own strategy. Speed will work for your Pokémon now, but remember, as they evolve they tend to get bigger. Look at my Scizor for example. As a Scyther, it was blindingly fast, but when I evolved it I realised it had lost that speed. So I switched its tactics to evasion and sneak attacks.”

She reached into a pocket and brought out a small box. “This is for you. I know you didn’t win, but you battled well. Consider it more a token of friendship than a prize.” Jay opened it, and nestled in the cushioned fabric was a Bug Badge, wings gleaming and sparkling. He stared at it, mesmerized for a moment by the glistening. Then he closed it, and thanked Helena. She smiled and said “well, if you’re really going to be worthy of the badge, you’ll have to beat me in a real, fair battle. And for that…”

She walked over to the side of the house, and Jay followed, interested. Along the wall was long shed. Opening the door, she beckoned Jay inside. Looking around in the gloom, he saw eggs. “For that, you need a bug-type Pokémon. Choose one, but I won’t tell you what it is. It’ll be a surprise.”

“Wow, really? Great!” Jay set off up the shed, and then back down. He stared at the eggs, so many different types and colours. Some sparkled and gleamed with bright colours, others had intricate patterns on them. But Jay found himself drawn to a plain green egg. There was a grey mark on the front, almost like a scratch, but apart from that it was as green as the grass outside. Lifting it carefully, he went back to the door. “I’d like to take this one, please.”

“An excellent choice. This should hatch in a few days. Raise it well, and bring it back here one day. Then we’ll see how good a trainer you’ve become. Speaking of, you’ve got a journey to be on! I don’t suppose that you packed the food and water I left out for you in kitchen?” Jay had not. He went in to pack it, and then the time to leave had come. “Follow this trail, you’ll be in Cherrygrove by evening. Best of luck on your journey, have faith in yourself and you’ll go a long way. Goodbye!”

“Goodbye, and thanks for everything! I’ll see you again sometime for that battle, and it’ll be a good one!” So saying, Jay set off, rucksack on his back, egg in his arms and Cyndaquil perched on his shoulder, resting after its narrow defeat to the old gym leader.

The final stage of Jay’s journey to Cherrygrove City passed quickly and uneventfully. Cyndaquil had regained its strength after a spot of lunch, and Jay had sent out Spearow to get some exercise. Midway through the afternoon, having spent the day forging onwards through fields and pastures, Jay came within sight of his first city in the Johto region. As his Spearow and Cyndaquil circled and dodged (mostly playfully, as the constant training seemed to be getting into Spearow’s head), he passed judgement on Cherrygrove City.

“Well, it’s smaller than I expected.”

Indeed it was. Aside from the obligatory Pokémon Centre, Pokémart, police station and residential houses, there were few other buildings, none of them larger than five storeys tall. It did have a harbour, but not a very large one.

Half an hour later and up closer, it didn’t look any bigger. The Pokémon Centre was close to the path Jay was on, so he resolved to check in and take a break before exploring the city. Stepping up to the glass doors, they opened with a smooth hiss, and he stepped inside, feeling like one more milestone in his journey had been accomplished.
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Not quite sure what to do next, might introduce a jerkish rival who's a jerk, maybe introduce the girl who'll travel with Jay (although they wont do that until after the first gym) or maybe something completely different. We'll see.
 
RE: Jay's Johto Journey - Battle against Helena!

This is the best pokemon fanfic I have ever read. It's AWESOME. Unfortunately I can only enjoy it; I can't critique due to my lack of pwnage writing skillz.
 
RE: Jay's Johto Journey - Battle against Helena!

Thanks! Always nice to know my writing's appreciated by people other than me. :D Anyway, next bit.
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16

In the lobby of the Cherrygrove City Pokémon Centre, Jay looked around. It was bigger than the Ivyville one, but similarly upholstered, lots of shiny glass and metal, and some semi-comfortable chairs. Jay hoped that the guest room decors would be different though. At the very least, not quite so green.

He returned both of his Pokémon to their Pokéballs, one at a time as one hand was always encumbered by the grass-green egg that he’d received earlier in the day. Approaching the reception desk, he smiled at the Nurse and said “hello, I’ve just arrived. Could you check out my Pokémon, please. Oh, and can I get a room, too. Probably just for tonight. Well, it depends on what there is to do here, I might stay longer.”

The Cherrygrove City Nurse Joy smiled back and took the proffered Pokéballs. Like all Nurse Joys, she was virtually indistinguishable from any other nurse, (except to the occasional extrememly talented/creepy doctor) and Jay was feeling quite disconcerted, kind of like the feeling you have when you’re meeting someone you’ve not met for a long time and you can’t remember much about them.

“Alright, I’ll check on your Pokémon, just the two? That’s no problem. Room for one? No problem, stay for as long as you like. Oh, and you might find this interesting. It’s the city’s guide brochure, there’s plenty in there. We’re a bigger city than we look!”

Thanking her, Jay took the brochure and the key to room 20 and headed in off in the pursuit of the room. Arriving at the room via a long corridor, he unlocked the door, hoping for an absence of green once he opened the door. There was no green, but there was red. Cherry-red, to be precise. “I think I’m starting to see a theme.”

The room was arranged virtually identically to the Ivyville room, with a bed, table plus chair and wardrobe, with a view. This time, the view looked out onto the harbour. He heard a loud caw from outside, and looked up in time to see a small white and blue bird swoop past. Quick as a flash, like a gunslinger, the Pokédex had been drawn and aimed. This time, however, the dex stayed blank and silent, not having been shown the Pokémon quickly enough before it swept onwards. “Blast. I’ll go out later and see what that was.”

Jay sat down at the table and took out the guide. Then, with the complimentary pen that the room thoughtfully provided, he went through and circled everything that he thought looked interesting. First on the list was the boat tour, which went out in the evenings and circled a small island full of Pokémon. Jay also noted that there was some kind of unofficial pseudo-gym that was open daily. Carrying on down through the list, he decided he was hungry, and that he should probably go and retrieve his Pokémon too. Crossing the museum of the history of basket-weaving off the list (after considerable internal debate), he rose and got ready to leave.

Abandoning the unnecessary items in his rucksack, like the tent, sleeping bag and picnic blanket, Jay headed back down to the lobby and over to the wall of vending machines. He spent a few minutes pacing up and down, trying to recognise the miniature pictures of food on the buttons but eventually gave up and pressed a few at random. It was for that reason that his tea that evening was Yorkshire pudding, mashed potato and bacon-flavoured waffle, with hot chocolate. It was the most unusual combination of foodstuffs that Jay had ever tried, but it tasted nice and filled him up, which was all that mattered to him.

Placing the egg on the table, Jay released his Pokémon and fed them. They ate happily, until they were rudely interrupted by a Munchlax. As the interruption came in the form of an aggressive body slam, Cyndaquil and Spearow were both understandably angry. Cyndaquil demonstrated this by skidding to a halt under a chair and then leaping back out to face the intruder, reared up with flame burning bright.

Spearow was less subtle, and had taken off immediately, circling around the room, squawking in anger. It swept down at the blue-furred creature that was now stuffing its face out of its bowl, beak glowing and visibly extending.

“Wait!” A trainer had leapt in front of the creature, shielding it from the angry bird. Spearow swept up at the last second and flapped back to Jay, who quickly returned it. “Really sorry about this fellow, he eats far too much and gets a bit aggressive when he wants more. I’m Todd, and this is Munchlax.”

Jay smiled. ”No harm done. I’m Jay. This is my Cyndaquil, the patient one. The crazed bird that attempted to disembowel your… uh… Munchlax is my other Pokémon, Spearow. Sorry about that. Training in progress, you know how it is.” Pulling out his Pokédex for the second time that evening, he pointed it at the blue-haired, humanoid figure. It was about as tall as a toddler and it hadn’t even looked up since it had shoved his Pokémon aside. Even as the dex beeped it was still busy shovelling fistfuls of food into its mouth.

“Munchlax, the Big Eater Pokémon. It gobbles up its own body weight in food each day, and it swallows its food without almost any chewing.”

“Cool, never seen one of those before.” Jay looked Todd up and down as he pulled out his Pokédex and pointed it at Cyndaquil. He was dressed in floral-print shorts and an aqua-blue teeshirt. His hair was blonde, long, and tied back out of his face, and he wore sunglasses that were currently perched atop his head. As he stowed his red Pokédex back in a pocket, Jay chuckled and said “you’re really dressed for the beach, huh? It’s barely even summer.”

“It’s warm enough, and besides, I spend most of my time in or on the water. It’s quicker to change, ahaha. My dad runs the tourist boat, and when he’s not doing that we’ll be out in the bay fishing and whatnot, you see” he clarified, noting Jay’s confused expression.

“Oh, that’s cool. I was going to head over there now, the tour sounds interesting.”

“Interesting? It’s great fun! Well, I’m going over that way now, you should come along with me. Lucky timing huh, I was only here to ask Nurse Joy to check on ol’ fatty here-” he gestured at the Munchlax, which had finished Jay’s food and had moved on to bully food from others, to faint cries of alarm. “Munchlax, return!” he called, and the big eater Pokémon was enveloped in red light and returned inside the Pokéball.

“Alright Todd, lead on. I’ve not had chance to explore the city yet, so you can be my guide, if you don’t mind.” Calling to Cyndaquil, who had curled up on Jay’s vacated seat, he left with Todd, and the little mouse cheerfully scampered after them.

“We’ll take the scenic route, along the docks. We could go through the city centre, but the view’s nicer and this way’s a bit longer. We’ve got plenty of time until departure. So, tell me about yourself, what’re you doing he all kitted up like an explorer?”

Jay laughed. “Explorer? I dunno about that. I’m a Pokémon Trainer. On a journey to get badge, compete in Leagues, and learn everything I can about Pokémon. I’ve not been going long, I’ve only got the two Pokémon, and this egg. I’ve not even reached a gym yet. But I’ll get there soon, and when I do… well, we’ll see, won’t we, Cyndaquil?

The fire mouse, who had been bounding along at Jay’s feet, gave a squeak of excitement. Todd looked impressed. “Yeah, that’s cooler than being an explorer. I’m actually kind of jealous. I mean, I interact with Pokémon all the time, I have my own too. But he’s more of a pet, I’d never dream of having him battle in leagues or anything like that.”

“Well, you sound like you’re happy here, on your boat and out at sea, like you said back inside. Me, I was raised in a tiny village in a forest. My best friend moved away a few years back, and I got bored. I started becoming more and more interested in Pokémon, and here I am.”

“Yeah, I guess. No point dreaming about stuff like that anyway, it’s never going to happen.” Todd looked dejected, but Jay stopped in his tracks.

“Oh, come on. Dreaming is great, anything’s possible. If you’re really lucky, you get to live your dreams. No need to give up on a pipedream.” Jay drew breath for more encouragement, but he was interrupted by a familiar call. Another bird was flying over, identical to the one he’d seen out of his window. Once again Jay drew his dex, and this time he got a response.

“Wingull, the Seagull Pokémon. Wingull will fly through the sky as though surfing waves.”

Todd chortled, and gasped in between gasps of laughter “you’re the first person I’ve ever seen to be excited by a Wingull! Wow, they’re everywhere, I can’t believe how fast you scanned it.”

Jay shrugged. “Hey, I live in a forest. And I saw one of them fly past my window in the Pokémon Centre earlier, but I didn’t get a chance to ID it.” The two boys carried on along the jetty, idly chatting as the sky grew dimmer around them. Before long, the two had arrived at a jetty, above which was hung a large and bright poster, advertising the evening boat tour. Standing outside a small hut on one side was a tall man, also in shorts. Unlike his son, he was attired in an eyepatch and a funny nautical hat.

“That’s my dad there, I’ll introduce you if you like. Just as a warning, he gets very in-role as a pirate captain, he really sells the trip.”

Jay laughed. “Sounds fun!”
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So yeah, I didn't go with any of the ideas I suggested at the end of the last part. Teeheehee. Comment, ye pasty landlubbers!
 
RE: Jay's Johto Journey - At Cherrygrove

I may be a landlubber but I'm tan :p. I love the detail in the beginning of the section. It just flows. You got skillz dude! Can't wait for some battling and evolving. Tbh this is more fun than playing the games or watching anime.
 
RE: Jay's Johto Journey - Boat tour

Thanks! Battling there's plenty of, but I don't know about evolving yet. Cyndaquil won't evolve until after a few gym battles, and I have no idea when Spearow will evolve. As for the egg, it can evolve, but it won't, because the basic Poke in an old favourite. Anyway, more writings!
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17

Standing on the docks with Todd, Jay was introduced to his father, Nate. “Hey dad, we got room for one more on the tour?”

Nate, who had been doing nautical things with a bit of rope outside his hut, looked up and smiled. “Ahoy there son, we do. There’s a few passengers that’re back there, we’ll be ready to cast off soon. And who’s yer friend?”

“This is Jay, he’s a Pokémon trainer who’s in the area. Met him at the centre, he said he was looking to take the tour.”

Realising that he was a customer, Nate switched from English to Pirate. Tipping his hat at Jay with a flourish, he nodded and spoke in vastly overdramatic tones. “Ahoy thar young sir, so ye be in search of a vessel for the exploration of the open seas? Look nae further! Me vessel be as spick and span as any ye can hope to find. Passage would normally be a few pieces o’ silver, but any friend o’ the cabin boy ‘ere is a friend o’ mine. What say ye? Are ye brave enough to set sail on the voyage of a lifetime, or will you renege and remain a pasty landlubber ‘ere ye pass into Davy Jone’s locker? Aharrr!”

Jay opened and closed his mouth a few times as he worked out the grammar, and then nodded. Aye- um… I mean yes. Yes, I’d love a ride on your boat. It sounds very interesting.

Nate beamed and spoke in a more normal voice. “Great. It means I can drop the voice at least, it really hurts the throat. Still, customers love a show, and I love giving it to them. I’m Nate, pleased to meet you.” And he proffered a large weather-beaten hand, which Jay shook. “We’ll be departing soon, so just hang around. Oh, and you’d best return your Cyndaquil. And put that egg in your rucksack, unless you want it to get wet”

“Dad, Nurse Joy says that Munchlax always eats as much as it does, I told you there was nothing to worry about.” Todd, who had been hovering, spoke to his father in a resigned tone.

“Normal? Normal? It ate a week’s worth of food in seconds, son! There’s nothing normal about that. I don’t know why you even agreed to look after the blasted thing. I know I agreed, but why didn’t your mother put an end to the sillyness?”

“It was her idea in the first place, dad. She wanted to try and teach it Surf.” Todd chucked, and Nate sighed, turning his attention back to the rope. Jay, who had followed Nate’s advice, strolled over to the waterfront, where Todd had taken a seat.

“What was that about? The same Munchlax that I met earlier, I assume?”

Todd grimaced. Yeah, that’s the one. Like I said, it’s a friends. He’s gone off on a cruise, and he didn’t want Munchlax to come with him, you can understand why. So we said we’d take care of it while he went away for a week. Only five more days to go…”

“Rather you than me” Jay chortled. The two sat and gazed out at the sea for a time, watched the Wingull circle and dive. Looking up and down the pier, Jay saw a few other people, mostly just sitting or standing around idly. He guessed that they were also waiting for the tour. Suddenly, Nate’s voice rang out.

“Okay ye pasty landlubbers, the tour’s about tae begin! Step sharp and look lively now, and follow me to the boathouse, where we’ll begin!” He turned and headed down the dock to where a small, pristine boathouse was situated. He vanished inside, leaving the door open. The small crowd followed him, Jay and Todd somewhere in the middle.

Jay didn’t really know what to expect as he walked into the boathouse. Part of him was half expecting some kind of pirate galleon, although he was mostly expecting some generic tourist boat that was basically a hull and lots of seats. What Jay saw was neither. It was basically an inflatable dinghy, but bigger. There were barely any seats, but along the sides, handholds were attached to the sides of the boat at regular intervals.

The line of passengers made their way onto their boat, each person being handed a life jacket by Nate as they boarded. By the time Jay stepped on, all the seats in the middle of the boat were full, but at Todd’s prompting, he took a seat on the left hand side of the boat, quite near the front. He had a great view of all around him, and the improvised seat was actually quite comfortable, being full of air.

“All right then me hearties, keep in ye seats at all times, lest ye be tossed into the murky depths! Ye brave souls who sit on the sides, hang on tight! And away we go!” Nate bellowed, gunning the engines. Smoothly, the boat sailed out into the open water. It rapidly picked up speed, and shot forwards, leaping over the waves with bumps and great splashes. Jay held on tight, and hoped he wasn’t going green. He felt like he might be, this wasn’t the gentle tour he’d imagined.

After a few minutes hurtling along the choppy waves, Nate slowed the boat down. They neared the island, and an anticipating silence gripped the passengers. The island was quite small, with long sandy beaches glittering in the half-light. As they got closer, they could hear loud hoots, barks and yammering. Slowly, large and fat bodies became visible on the beach.

“Here we have a colony of Seel, Dewgong Spheal, Sealeo and Walrein.” Nate spoke in a loud whisper, all traces of funny accent gone. “It’s not really their preferred temperature around here, too warm even in winter, but they seem to like it. I’ll take us closer. Please stay quiet, and don’t startle them.” Expertly, he glided the boat closer still, and a few of the Sealion Pokémon looked up and hooted interestedly They were silvery white and pale blue, some sleek and agile, others round and blubbery.

“That Walrein over there” Nate pointed at a particularly large and fat Pokémon that was rolling in the sand, “is the leader of the colony. You can tell because it has the largest tusks.” Jay stared, enthralled at the Pokémon, enjoying how their presence wasn’t disturbing them in the slightest. “Let’s move on further along the island.”

The boat moved on slowly, and Nate guided the party onwards, occasionally pointing out the occasional Pokémon, like the Kingler on the rocks and the school of Tentacool that swarmed around the boat. “Nobody panic now” he said reassuringly. “Tentacool are cowards, they won’t attack us. Besides, they’re probably just curious. All the same…” He moved the boat on, hoping that his passengers didn’t notice the rubbery black tentacles that were beginning to rise lazily out of the water.

“Alright, before we head back, we’re going to head into a cave, and see what we can see. It’s about as dark as it is in there as it is in here, so your eyes should adjust pretty soon. Keep an eye out for low flying Zubat!” The boat idled on, and Jay caught side of swooping shadows in the darkness far above his head. Luckily, none flapped down too close to them. On one side, what Jay had thought to be a craggy grey rock had sat up and walked away. “There’s a Graveller over there, and just to the left of it, a Dugtrio’s popped up-oh wait, it’s gone again.” And even as Jay turned his head, the tip of the last brown head vanished back underground, with a faint echo of trio-trio-trio.

The boat soon left the cave, and skirting around a shoal of Remoraid and Mantine, soon left the little island behind. Jay stared back contentedly, and tried to recall all the Pokémon he’d seen, to take his mind off the lurching of the boat. Before long, the boat returned to the harbour and Nate skillfully reversed back into the boathouse, ready to make the next trip out. Disembarking, the passengers filed off, praising and thanking Nate for the tour. He smiled and nodded, saying “thank ye! Come back soon, ye never know what Pokémon ye’ll catch a glimpse of ‘ere you visit ‘em!”

Jay stepped off the boat, feeling a bit queasy. “That was great, thanks very much for the tour! It was great, seeing all those Pokémon, up close and in their natural habitats. Not sure I’m a great fan of boating though…” he admitted ruefully.

Todd chuckled “well, it’s not for everyone. Personally, I don’t much like heights. I’ll walk you some of the way back to the Pokémon Centre, if you like, and if Dad doesn’t mind.”

He glanced towards his father, who nodded and said “not a problem, glad you enjoyed ye’self. Have a great time in the city!” He turned away, and headed back to the boathouse to do nautical things.

Jay and Todd set off back into the city, chattering away about the tour. “You know, I’ve been on the tour so many times, and it never gets boring. This is how I like my Pokémon, best viewed in peace from a distance. You seem to have a more hands-on approach” chuckled Todd, noting that the egg was back in Jay’s hands, having remained safely dry in his rucksack throughout the tour.

“Well, I guess. I’m all for interacting with some of them. I mean, I’ve seen more than two Pokémon on my journey so far. I’ve tried to catch a couple and failed, as well. But some Pokémon I saw and thought ‘do I really want that Pokémon? Is a Pineco really what I want to raise and train to defeat gym leaders, for example.’ Not really. So I left it in the tree. I hear of some people capturing every Pokémon they see and just shipping them off to a professor to collect dust. I don’t like that, there’s nothing personal about the connection between you and the Pokémon.”

Aware that he was probably ranting a bit, Jay shut up and glanced sidelong at Todd, who was looking at him with an impressed expression. “You know, that makes a lot of sense. I’m going to turn back now, just follow this road for a few minutes and you’ll be back. Good luck on your journey, mate.”

“Thanks. Have fun here too, keep checking out that island. It’s a brilliant little spot, I know I’ll never forget it.” Shaking hands with Todd, Jay watched as the boy turned around, and then made his way back to the Pokémon centre.

As he walked in through the automatic doors, Nurse Joy greeted him. “Good evening! How’ve you found Cherrygrove so far?”

“Very nice, thanks. I went on the boat tour out to that little island.”

“Ah, it’s beautiful there. Oh, excuse me!” Jay looked on as the nurse bustled off, and then went to get himself a supper of crisps, ice cream and toast, with a milkshake. This wasn’t a particularly unusual supper for him, as it was his favourite meal of the day, often spanning several courses. Having finished eating, Jay went to bed via the bathroom and the laundry room. Opening the door and fishing the Pokéballs out of his pyjama pockets, Jay released Cyndaquil, putting the empty ball and the one that housed Spearow on the bedside table.

“Hello you. The island was great, so many Pokémon. Tomorrow, we’ll do something you’ll enjoy. We’ll head over to the training gym here, and get some practice in. Sound good to you?” The little fire mouse squeaked happily as Jay stroked its back for a while, before turning out the lights and falling asleep, with Spheal and Dewgong swimming in his dreams.
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And there we go, next chapter to probably feature a semi-serious battle.
 
RE: Jay's Johto Journey - Boat tour

I can't wait :D If you have time in your life, I would love to see this story go to the pokemon league and beyond. On another note WOOOOOOT battle!!
 
RE: Jay's Johto Journey - Training Gym

Heh, thanks. I'll keep going until I get bored, I guess. I've got quite a few plots and storylines before that happens though! And plenty more that I'll probably make up on the spot. Anyway, I'm introducing Jay's future travelling partner now. Enjoy.
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18

Jay woke up abruptly, in that nasty way that you do when you suddenly realise that you don’t know where you are. He sat bolt upright and stared around wildly, before remembering that he was in a guest room in the Cherrygrove City Pokémon Centre. The sun was up, so Jay decided to join it, rolling out of bed quietly so as not to awake his sleeping Cyndaquil, who did not enjoy mornings.

Wandering out to the bathroom in his pyjamas, he bumped into a few other trainers in similar states of drowsiness, but one long shower later and he was wide awake and looking forward to the day ahead. Retrieving his clothes from the laundry room, he made his way back along the corridor to his room. As he let himself back into his room, he noticed movement out of the corner of his eye. Spinning around, Jay saw the green egg that he’d been given a couple of days ago twitch and wobble. He rushed over to inspect it, and indeed, there were hairline cracks on the shell. “Not long until it hatches now!” Jay murmured to himself, excited. As Violet City grew ever closer, Jay knew he’d need three Pokémon in great fighting condition to stand a chance of winning his first badge. “I hope I chose a good Pokémon…”

Dressing, Jay consulted his list of things he wanted to do in Cherrygrove City. He’d already done the tour, and next on the list was the training gym. It wasn’t official but Jay wasn’t bothered. He just wanted to gain some more experience. Rousing Cyndaquil gently, he returned the yawning mouse to its Pokéball, attached it to his belt along with Spearow’s, and headed to the lobby, rucksack on back and egg in his arms. Receiving a disappointingly normal breakfast of cereal from the vending machines, and filling a bowl of Pokémon food, Jay took a seat and released his two Pokémon. Before long, man, mouse and bird were enjoying a hearty breakfast in the airy lobby. The weather outside was sunny, but there were ominous dark clouds on the horizon. For the moment though, it looked to be a fine spring day.

As he ate, he looked curiously around, for he was a great minder of other people’s business. Trainers bustled around, leading, carrying, and on one occasion chasing Pokémon around. One girl about Jay’s age took a seat on the opposite side of the lobby to him, and he thought she looked just a bit familiar. He cast his mind back to Ivyville, and wondered if she’d been there too. She had a Chikorita, Johto’s grass-type starter, and wore very short jean shorts and a light green jumper, open over a tank top. Her hair was long and glossy brown, with hints of deep scarlet, in a ponytail and kept neat with a black hair band.

Jay would have kept on staring, but a trainer sprinted in between him and the girl, closely followed by an angry Doduo. This was in fact the same trainer who’d been chasing the Doduo a minute earlier. Jay wondered what had made the situation change, but then shook his head as if to dislodge a strange thought. He recalled his Pokémon, who were watching the rampaging bird with interest, and walked quickly out of the Pokémon Centre before things got really strange.

Just behind him came at least ten trainers, including the girl. They had all decided to give the Doduo and its unfortunate trainer some privacy, as was evidenced by the screeches and muffled yells.

Walking into the city, Jay soon found the training gym. It was a large building, but only in terms of length and width, being dwarfed by larger office buildings and multi-storey blocks of flats in terms of height. Above the door was a large logo of a Pokéball, with a fist on each side, punching the Pokéball. The sign on the door said “OPEN FOR TRAINING – today: DOUBLE BATTLES.” Interested, Jay stepped in through the doors and found himself in a lobby, upholstered in dark red and grey, with hints of gold. There were several seats around the sides of the room, and a reception desk against wall. Above the reception desk were several televisions that were playing Pokémon battles. Thankfully, there were no rampaging Doduo in here.

Turning left as he stepped through the doors to the desk, he was greeted by a receptionist, a stocky man wearing a tight shirt with the gym’s logo on it. He spoke noisily and cheerfully “Hello! Come to train?”

“Hi! Yeah, I thought I’d try some double battling, I’ve never done it before.”

“Ah, a beginner! Now’s as good a time to learn as any! Alright, there’s already a group of sixteen trainers in there” – he indicated the room behind a set of double doors, where the sounds of battle could be faintly heard - “so you’ll have to wait for them to finish, in about fifteen minutes. By then we should have enough for another session to begin! You see, there are two kinds of double battles, where the trainer commands two Pokémon at once, and where two trainers work together, each commanding one Pokémon. As you’d expect, the latter is the more challenging, because in addition to requiring teamwork between trainer and their Pokémon, it also demands that the two trainers work together too. So that’s what we’ll be doing today. You’ll be paired with another trainer, ideally someone you’ve never met before. That’s when you’ll learn most about your Pokémon’s strengths and weaknesses, not to mention your own!”

“Alright, I understand. Sounds great!” Jay took a seat and started watching a television, staring intently at an in-progress match between an Infernape and a Garchomp (although he didn’t recognise either Pokémon). It was a thrilling match, both Pokémon really going at their opponent. Infernape launched a barrage of many-limbed blows with Close Combat, but the dragon Pokémon expertly dodged and smacked the infuriated monkey in the head with a glowing fin. The Brick Break knocked Infernape back, but it leapt into the air and raised a fist that slammed into Garchomp’s midriff. The Mach Punch hit hard, but it retreated and then charged forwards, blurring as it activated Giga Impact. Infernape countered with Flare Blitz, and the two Pokémon collided in the centre of the arena. The dust cleared, and both battlers were standing still. Then, crashing like a felled tree, Infernape dropped to its knees and fell face forward and collapsed.

Jay breathed out and leaned back in his seat, thoroughly impressed. At that moment, four more people entered the gym, and headed for the reception desk. After a brief conversation, they took seats too. Jay returned his attention to the television, watching a brawl between a Charizard and Magmar, snapping out of it only briefly as he heard an ambulance siren screeching in the direction of the Pokémon Centre. The room began to fill up, and by the time the third battle (Pikachu versus Elekid) ended, the room was quite full. He looked around, and vaguely recognised some of the trainers from the Pokémon centre, including the girl. She looked quite nervous, and was sitting in a corner.

The double doors were thrown open, and a man strode into the lobby, closely followed by sixteen cheerfully chatting trainers, who made their way out. The man was wearing the same shirt as the receptionist, and the two spoke quietly to one another. After a brief discussion, the one who had been manning the desk switched places with the newcomer and spoke up.

“Alright trainers! Here we go, if you’d be so good as to follow me into the dojo, we can get things started!”

With that, he executed an about-turn and strode into the larger room, bowing deeply as he crossed the threshold. There was a general surge as everyone tried to be first. This is a common symptom of over-excitement, and tends to lead to several of the most eager being wedged into doorframes. Once he and everyone else were in, the doors were closed by another instructor. Looking around, he saw that there were four battlefield outlines drawn on the lacquered floor and a quick headcount confirmed that there were sixteen trainers in the group. Along the walls were large flags and pictures, depicting silhouettes of Pokémon and trainers in a variety of dynamic poses. Jay stared around, but then another man started, so Jay paid attention.

The man was dressed in flowing robes with the gym logo embroidered on the left breast, and he carried himself with an air of importance. “Good morning, trainers! I am Sensei Daniel, and I will be instructing you in the basics of double battling.” He took a deep, solemn breath. “Double battles with another trainer is the most complicated form of battling you will find in Johto, and in many other regions. You must know yourself, your Pokémon, and your partner. It also helps to know their Pokémon, so you can learn to anticipate their moves. You must learn to adapt your own unique battling style to someone else’s, and you must learn to work together as a team! Teamwork is what double battles are all about. Teamwork and co-ordination! Teamwork, co-ordination and co-operation! And many other things besides! Now then, I will assign you all partners randomly, and then you will be directed to a pitch by the instructors. Obey their instructions at all times!”

Dan, as Jay had already abbreviated his name to, looked down at the assembled trainers, and then started pointing. “You!” He jabbed a finger towards an apprehensive looking boy, who leaned away from the digit as if it were a weapon. “And you!” The finger blurred through the air and came to rest on a girl on the other side of the crowd.

“Pitch one!” Shouted an instructor from behind them, and the entire group jumped.

The organisation continued, and to his surprise, Jay’s partner was the girl who he’d noticed in the Pokémon Centre lobby earlier. They were directed to pitch two, and stood facing a pair of boys who were talking amongst themselves quietly. Jay turned to the girl and smiled. “Hi. I’m Jay, from Redwood Town.”

The girl smiled back, and replied “Hey. I’m Kari, from Meadow Vale. Nice to meet you. Have we met before, I kinda recognise you. You’re kinda cute.”

Jay, who had opened his mouth to reply that perhaps they’d glimpsed each other earlier in the morning, simply opened and closed his mouth a few times. Kari giggled at his impromptu Magikarp impersonation, and Jay could feel himself going red. At that moment, Dan’s voice cut through the idle chatter, giving him something else to thing about.
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Kudos if you got the references to the televised battles. ;)
 
RE: Jay's Johto Journey - Training Gym

That's so deja vu for me. Sigh if only I hadn't moved, I still would have had a girl :(. Anyways, this is turning out to be really intricate. I appreciate the detail and emotion from Jay. Can't wait for double battles and yes, I did enjoy :D
 
RE: Jay's Johto Journey - Training Gym

D'aww. :p Alright, here's the next bit. Since I've had no interwebz for the past few days, I've got quite a few more chapters done. For now, here's that double battle.
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19

“Now then, you have all been given a partner. You now have five minutes to get to know your partner’s battling style, and their Pokémon, starting now. Release your Pokémon!” Sensei Daniel shouted grandly.

Jay and Kari both reached for their Pokéballs. Jay went to his belt, but Kari reached for the strap of her rucksack, which went diagonally across her chest. Both of them threw their Pokéballs in tandem with the other fourteen trainers. Around the room, the pop and hiss of a Pokémon being released was multiplied sixteenfold, and there was a brief din of squeaks, roars and hoots as the Pokémon greeted their trainers. Jay had chosen his Cyndaquil, and Kari had gone for her Chikorita. Across the pitch, the boys had a Teddiursa and Gligar.

“Right, let’s have a look at your Chikorita’s moves” said Jay, reaching for his Pokédex in the back pocket of his jeans. Kari did likewise, but reached into a side pocket of her aqua-blue rucksack, and drew out identical dex, but in green. She pointed it at Ash’s Cyndaquil, which had come bounding over to the pair, followed by Chikorita.

“Chikorita, the Leaf Pokémon. Chikorita uses the leaf on its head to scan for warmth and humidity in its surroundings, and loves to sunbathe. Chikorita currently knows Tackle, Razor Leaf, Vine Whip and Light Screen.”

“Yeah, that’s my Chicky. She’s pretty defensive. “I’m thinking that from your Cyndaquil’s moves, you’re not though?” She grinned and knelt down, first stroking her Pokémon affectionately, which cooed contentedly, and then stroked Cyndaquil’s back. The little mouse squeaked with pleasure, pleased to have a new friend.

“Yeah, me and Cyndaquil don’t really do defense. Mostly charge at the opponent, hit them hard and retreat. We go for speed and heavy hitting. Sometimes it works, other times… not so much. But hey, we’re just getting started.”

Kari looked interested. “Oh, that’s pretty cool. Mostly we just bash them and then hide behind Light Screen when they try to counter, or just dodge out of the way. Say, have you ever had a double battle before?”

Jay shrugged awkwardly. “Not really. That… thing… that happened at the Ivyville Pokémon Centre, that was mostly two battles that happened to be simultaneous. We didn’t really plan it, you know? Oh, what’s light screen do, by the way? I’ve never heard of it before.”

“It’s basically an almost-invisible forcefield that keeps the Pokémon inside it safe. Depending on how strong the Pokémon using it is, and how strong your opponent is, it’ll last longer. At least, that’s what Professor Elm said when I picked Chicky.” Kari stopped talking, and frowned, clearly remembering something. She brightened up again though, and carried on. “This is my first double battle, but I’ll bet Chicky can protect your Cyndaquil too, can’t you?” The Chikorita at her feet looked up and gave a chirrup, then returned to what appeared to be a conversation with Cyndaquil.

“Definitely sounds like something worth trying. So, what I do when I start my battles, is use Smokescreen and then follow it up with a Quick Attack. It works most of the time, because the opponent’s blinded by the Smoke and Cyndaquil just leaps in, hits, and then jumps out again.”

Kari nodded. “I’ll bet it only works once though.”

“Yeah, it’s not something you fall for more than once. And sometimes it can be a disadvantage, because you can’t see either. Oh, wait a minute!” Jay had just remembered his first battle, how Cyndaquil’s smokescreen had backfired. The Bellsprout that he’d been facing hadn’t been able to see Cyndaquil, but it had shot a flurry of Razor Leaves into the smoke. Cyndaquil hadn’t been able to see them coming, and was hit by some.

“Your Chikorita knows Razor Leaf, right? Why not try shooting it into the smoke before Cyndaquil runs in?” And he quickly recounted the situation where the technique had worked against him.

“Hey, that’s a pretty nice idea! Smart and cute!” Kari giggled as Jay blushed again.

“Time!” The sensei spoke up. “All right, you have all had five minutes to learn about your partners. You will now fight a double battle against your opponents. Each instructor shall referee a battle, and their word is final. Now, begin!”

Grinning at the sensei’s timing that had, once again, saved him from further embrassment, Jay nodded at his Cyndaquil. It ran forward, flames spurting from its back as it readied itself for the battle. “Go Chicky, you can do it!” kari added, and the leaf Pokémon bounded forward to meet Cyndaquil.

A little way back, the two boys had sent their Pokémon forward. Now the Gligar and Teddiursa had moved forward too, ready for the battle to begin. The instructor, who had until now been lurking on the sidelines and observing the two pairs, stepped forward. “This will be a standard double battle. The first team to knock out both of the other team’s Pokémon will be declared the winner! Ready… Begin!”

Jay was quickest off the mark. “Cyndaquil, Smokescreen, but don’t run yet!” Cyndaquil obeyed, belching out thick black smoke that covered the other two Pokémon. “Wait for it, Cyndaquil… and…”

Kari called out “Razor Leaf, Chicky!” and Chikorita jerked its head so that its leaf flickered and shot out a clump of sharp-edged leaves. They shot into the smoke just as Jay called for a Quick Attack. Cyndaquil shot forward, glowing white, and darted into the smoke. There was a muffled thump, and then it zoomed back out.

Teddiursa staggered out of the cloud and ran towards Chikorita, who was closest. Its fists glowed as its trainer commanded a Focus Punch. “Chicky, dodge!” Kari called.

“Cyndaquil, Flamethrower!” Jay shouted, and Cyndaquil shot a jet of orange-yellow flame where Chikorita had been standing before it dodged. Unable to stop in time, Teddiursa ran into it. “I’ve got your back” Jay grinned, and then he turned serious as he saw the Gligar bearing down, about to use Cross Poison. Tail glowing, it blasted purple needles at the two starter Pokémon. Jay was about to call to Cyndaquil to dodge, but Kari had a better idea.

“Chicky, get next to Cyndaquil and use Light Screen!” The leaf Pokémon obeyed, and just as the needles would have hit, Chikorita’s leaf glowed and a golden bubble formed around it, enveloping Cyndaquil too. “Now I’ve got your back” winked Kari.

The Gligar had taken off and was hovering above Teddiursa as their trainers hurridly coordinated an attack. Both Pokémon attacked simulataneously, Gligar using Arial Ace and bearing down on Chikorita, and Teddiursa attacking Cyndaquil with Slash.

Neither trainer hesitated. “Vine whip!” called Kari, and Chikorita sprouted vines from the buds around its neck. They lashed up and whipped Gligar on the wing, bringing it crashing back down to earth.

Simultaneously, Jay commanded a Quick Attack, and Cyndaquil blazed towards Teddiursa in a white blur. It gracefully leapt over the clumsy slashes, and headbutted the bear back. Jay was about to have Cyndaquil attack Teddiursa again, but an unfamiliar screech rang out, and Jay saw that Chikorita had gotten too close to Gligar. The flying scorpion had Chikorita trapped in a tight Guillotine, and nothing Kari shouted was helping it to escape. Chikorita tried to form a Light Screen, but it had no effect since it was already trapped in the Gligar’s claws. However, it did protect it from Cyndaquil’s Flamethrower, which blasted Gligar backwards, landing at its trainer’s feet. It tried to get up, but stumbled back down and passed out.

“Gligar is unable to battle!” The referee interjected, and the Teddiursa suddenly looked very alone.

“Right, let’s finish this up!” Kari cried. “Chicky, Razor leaf, one more time!”

“Cyndaquil, Flamethrower, go!” Jay added. Both Pokémon let loose their attacks on the Teddiursa, and the leaves hurtled towards it, joined by the Flamethrower. Instead of the burning the leaves to cinders and negating the attack, it gave the leaves a halo of flame, and they sizzled as they hit the beleaguered bear. It went down like a rock, and stayed down.

“Wow” was all that the two trainers could say, as they witnessed their impromptu combination attack. The referee leapt forward. “Teddiursa is unable to battle; the winners are Cyndaquil and Chikorita!”

“Nice work!” Jay enthused. “Teamwork for the win!” He turned to Kari, who was equally excited, and they shared a high five. Their Pokémon returned to their feet, and received much praise.

They looked around the room, and realised that they were the first to finish a battle, and the others were still going. In one corner, a Mankey and Tyrogue were engaged in a brawl, whilst a Beautifly and a Butterfree danced around one another, both struggling to hit the other. The concept of teamwork seemed to have passed them by, since the trainers were entirely focused on their own Pokémon. Theirs was the last battle to finish, and eventually the Mankey was the only Pokémon still standing, having beaten down both the Tyrogue and the Butterfree.

“All right, return your Pokémon to their Pokéballs and gather round!” Dan shouted out, and the trainers hurridly assembled in front of him. “On the whole, that was quite good. Some of you-” he shot a glare at the Mankey’s trainer “need to be much more observant of the entire battlefield. Both partners should play an equal part in the battle.” Suddenly, he jabbed a finger at Jay and Kari. “You two did a good job, very good indeed. Have you battled together before?” They both shook their heads, mutely.

“Well, you did very well, as did many others of you! That’s all we have time for today, but we hope that this class was helpful to you, and will be helpful as you go your separate ways. Goodbye, and good luck on your journeys!” The assembled trainers chorused thanks and turned to leave, following an instructor back out of the doors and into the lobby.
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It was actually quite hard finding basic-level Johto pokes that didn't have weaknesses etc to fire and grass types. :p
 
RE: Jay's Johto Journey - Training Gym

Awesome a Scyther! Nice :D Lot of actin going on there, are you slowly building up some kind o plot? I like how his emotions are displayed. I think it's really cool how you remembered that newly hatched pokemon don't have eggs
 
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