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Ok, I am happy you like Acanthite. To answer your question, yes there will be more chapters and mabye some new twists. Thanks for the compliment!
 
RE: Jun's Adventure!(A Pokemon Acanthite Fanfic)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kUwmJA79YVg That is the youtube video link for chapter 1. I hope you like it!
 
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Coll but why don't you just post it, I think then more people would actually read it then XD
 
RE: Jun's Adventure!(A Pokemon Acanthite Fanfic)

What do you mean? Post it in the description? Chapter 2 video is here! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jXw80eT1aIo&feature=channel_page

Once I am caught up with the videos, I will continue work on the LONG OVERDUE chapters.
 
RE: Jun's Adventure!(A Pokemon Acanthite Fanfic)

Chapter 7 12-20-2008

Frondilio was telling a group of Pokemon about Knuckout while Professor Willow was doing the same to a group of young trainers. When the crowd dispersed, Professor Willow and Frondilio took a break and sat on the bench nearby.
“It is a beautiful day. Normally Newbloom Bay is always blanketed by rain.” Reptide said, enjoying the weather.
“Yes, this is wonderful weather. I should be expecting a call soon. Wait, this is bad.” Professor Willow said, her mood changing in a heartbeat.
Reptide sprang up, “What is it? What happened?”
“I forgot to give Jun this.” She said as she pulled out a red-tinted cell phone.
“A cell phone? Oh, for him to call you if anything comes up. You know, you could always give that to him through Kestrawk.” Reptide replied.
“I could, but I left my Pokemon and the instructions for the phone at my lab.” The professor said.
“Well that was a bright idea.” Reptide said sarcastically.
“I know. The other phones are at my lab, so I will have to run there. Can you stay here just incase someone comes?” Professor Willow agreed.
“Ok, I will.” Reptide said.
“Thanks, I’ll be back soon.” Professor Willow said, running off to her lab.
Ash, Cynthia, and Kali were walking by and as they started running towards Professor Willow but she had already left. Reptide had ran up to them and explained everything.
“So she left to go get the phones?” Kali asked.
“Yes, she did.” Reptide said.
In the volcano……
Geminega and Diavil threw Kindlejou on the ground and he hit a rock, letting out a yelp of pain. He stood up, letting out a snarl and he curled his lips.
“Shut up!” Geminega said with a heart of ice.
Kindlejou lunged forward at Geminega, raking his claws on his wings, ripping them off. Blood spattered on the ground and Kindlejou leaped again at Geminega, but he grabbed his throat and he started to choke.
“Ain’t so tough now, are ya?” Diavil retorted as he sank his claws into Kindlejou’s belly; blood pouring out.
Kindlejou roared out and lashed out his claw at Diavil, sending him flying into the lava; he would survive, but at least he wouldn’t see what was about to happen. Kindlejou was not fully harnessed by the power of darkness, just the aura and power. Diavil woudn’t witness what was going to happen; if he will see he would have to take his life too, and Kindlejou didn’t want to have to take more lives then needed.
Kindlejou leapt at Geminega’s head and sunk his fangs into his head. Geminega let out screams of terror, flailing trying to get him off of his head. Kindlejou raked his claws against his face and he grabbed his neck. Kindlejou threw him into the lava; Geminega would not be dead, but he would have learned to not mess with the powers of darkness again. He had better tell Diavil unless he wants to get rid of that last thread of his life. Kindlejou’s fur had been matted with blood. The wounds have already been healing; sooner or later the darkness would finally leave. Kindlejou had cleaned himself with the water he found nearby, and took off. He jumped from mountaintop to rooftop; hill side to hillside, and after a few hours, he was home. Kindlejou had reverted to normal and he started to think: Why hasn’t it worn off yet? As soon as he jumped for the bridge where he saw Reptide, it wore off and he was sent flying right into Kali.
“Owwww….” Kali said as she felt the impact of fur on her head; she was lucky he remembered to sheathe his claws. “Oh, hi Kindlejou!”


I didn't finish any of the videos but here is chapter 7.
 
RE: Jun's Adventure!(A Pokemon Acanthite Fanfic)

I am back from my journey searching for new material. Trust me, you are going to love this.

Chapter 8 2-9-09


Kindlejou aroused to his paws and said, “Kindlejou?” He looked at Reptide and he then searched the mini-crowd for Jun. As soon as he realized he wasn’t there, he started to panic and questioned Reptide.
“Kindle Kindle Kindle Kindlejou?!?!?”
“It’s ok, Kindlejou; Jun went out to warn everyone about y-” he stopped mid sentence. “This is bad. He is warning everyone about Kindlejou but he is fine right now. Kali, do you know where he is going?”
“I think he is going to town square first.” Kali said.
“We are right in town, good. Let’s got stop him before he warns anyone.”
“Right, Kali go south, in case he is still coming up. Reptide, take care of east, please. I’ll go north and head to town square, since he might be there already. Cynthia, please go west. Kindlejou, since it is a long way from Jun’s house to Town Square, please go with Kali, since he is probably there. If he isn’t, get a group of Pokemon to help battle Knuckout, then go to town square as fast as you can. If you meet Jun on the way, let him know that you are Kindlejou and then take him to meet up with Kali, then Reptide, then Cynthia, and then come here. We’ll then have lunch at one of the restaurants, and meet up here. By then, Professor Willow should be back. Hopefully, we will be back before her. After all, it is a hour and a half run from here to the lab. I hope you guys can pick good spots where to wait. Any questions?” There was silence. “Ok, then let’s go!” Ash exclaimed.
“Yeah!” Everyone said as they headed off in their assigned directions.
Kindlejou

Christmas Chapter (Secretly Chapter ) 12-24-08
“Leafeon, Picowatt, come on out!” Kali Solaccoon said as she threw two Pokeballs in the air. From the balls emerged a red laser that took the shape of a forest-like creature with a green leaf-like crest on its head and a bird with yellow and blue features, but it mostly white.
“Yes, a battle!” Leafeon said, thrilled to have a double battle.
“Let’s win this!” Picowatt said, confident that he would win.
“Landeep, Iguaqua you too!” Jun Dilophrill yelled as he did the same, he was excited for his battle against Kali, who had been a helpful traveling partner as well as a formidable opponent. He had felt bad for Cynthia who really wanted to travel with him but she had lost in a battle against Kali. At least she would have her friend Chip who was traveling with her along with Ash. They would all be traveling together after they had earned their 5th badge. In a few hours, they will be together. They had still been able to communicate via the video enabled phones Professor Willow had given them before they left. They would also go to school before they headed off to Sinnoh. Kali, Jun, Cynthia, Chip, and Ash will be staying in a hotel called The Gravity Inn. They would be there for 2 and a half weeks, then they would go to their homes for a week. They would spend most of their time with all of their families in one resort called Ashland. It surely was a fun vacation to look forward to, and only one and a half hours until it starts.
“Iguaqua, use Aerial Ace on Leafeon! Landeep, use Mud Claw on Picowatt!” Jun said, excitement spread all over his voice.
“Leafeon, counter it with Leaf Blade! Picowatt, fly over Landeep and use Horn Drill!” Kali said, obviously delighted to have a battle.
Iguaqua’s right arm glowed white, then turned into a sharp blade, still glowing. Landeep’s claws started to be covered in mud, it running up, stopping at his knee, then going out. He started running toward Picowatt and leaped at her. Picowatt had just jumped off of the ground but was too late. Landeep had pinned her to the soft earth and had slashed her. Picowatt had let out a cry of pain and Kali returned her and said, “Good job Picowatt, Landeep has grown in speed. We’ll beat him next time.”
Leafeon’s crest on the top of his head was glowing green. He had raced towards Iguaqua and had slashed him. Iguaqua caught his crest, but it slipped through and cut his stomach; dealing an extreme amount of damage. He then realized that Leafeon had not meant to deal damage, but to stop Aerial Ace. Was that one of Kali’s methods or was it something Leafeon had thought of? It could be either one because they were both very smart. One more hit and he would be done for; Kali had trained him well.
“Leafeon, use Grass Knot on both Landeep and Iguaqua! Then use Energy Ball on Iguaqua and finish Landeep with our signature move!” Kali called.
“Okay!” Leafeon called back.
“Iguaqua, Water Pulse! Landeep, Extremespeed!” Jun said, his amber eyes sparkling with the thought of winning.
“Got it!” Landeep and Iguaqua said in unison.
Landeep disappeared into thin air and reappeared behind Leafeon and lashed out his claw. Leafeon used Grass Knot and grass tied around his 3 feet on the ground and he tripped and fell. Grass rose up from the ground and tied around Iguaqua’s feet. More grass then rose up and brought don Iguaqua’s arms; making him fall and send his Water Pulse at Leafeon. Leafeon then jumped and fired an Energy Ball at Iguaqua. The ball of green spiraling energy had hit Iguaqua and knocked him out. Jun returned him and said praise to him. The Water Pulse had not hit Landeep like Leafeon wanted but had instead followed Leafeon up and hit him. He fell to the ground with a hard thump. The grass around Landeep’s feet had loosened and he had charged towards Leafeon and had slashed his side. Leafeon had begun to fade away. Landeep had realized that Picowatt was staring at Leafeon the whole time. All that time he had been making a substitute. Leafeon must have trotted off into a nearby bush, waiting for it to wear off, waiting for it to wear off and for his time to strike. No wonder Kali yelled out her orders! Suddenly, the grass around Landeep had begun to tie around his feet and he began to sink onto the floor. Leafeon padded up from out of the shadows and fired an Energy Ball at Landeep. The green ball of energy had hit Landeep, knocking it over. Leafeon had then jumped in a flash of light. Then in another flash he was coming down at Landeep; his right claw blazing with a ghost-like purple flame. Landeep knew he couldn’t move; if he did, he would have a broken arm. It was best to let Leafeon use Shadow Claw anyway. Shadow Claw had sank into Landeep’s stomach, but he wasn’t hurt much, just enough to win the match. Leafeon stood panting, trying to keep himself up.
“Leafeon, you did it!” Kali said as she ran up and gave Leafeon a hug.
“Yeah, I overdid it.” He remarked as he fell on the ground and took a few deep breaths. “I couldn’t have done it without Picowatt though; without her, I would’ve been in much worse condition.”
“That is true. Good job, Kali. And you too, Leafeon; I’ve never seen anyone go that fast in attacking. Do you guys want to go get something to eat?” Jun stepped in from praising Iguaqua and Landeep.
Leafeon scuffled earth over his paws in embarrassment and said, “ Thanks.”
“Thanks, Jun. I’d love to go get something to eat. Where should we go?” Kali said.
“I was thinking that we could eat at this place in the hotel. Do you want to?” Jun said.
“Sure, why not?”
 
RE: Jun's Adventure!(A Pokemon Acanthite Fanfic)

MAJOR SPOILER ALERT!!! READ AT YOUR OWN RISK! IT WILL TOTALLY MESS UP THE MERTO PART OF THE STORY IF YOU READ!!!



Jasmine is Phoebe's daughter.

Sky was at the Flower Bearing for too long and reverts to his Land Forme once a year in May During the full moon.

The starters have nicknames: Jun-Splash; Cynthia-Puddles; Jasmine-Forge; Chip-Twig; Kali-Torch; Ash-Blaze

The bad guys kidnap their Pokemon and go to one of their hideouts in the Sinnoh Battle Frontier

Team Rocket is apart of this too.

When this is over, Team Rocket becomes good adn Meowth evolves.

Team Din Sun was actually framed and the new Ciper and Team Galactic are behind it; with a Cyras at the head of this new orginazation called Team Dusk.

The gang hears about Team Dusk and decide to train harder in order to overthrow Team Dusk from power. First they must got to Arceus and tell it to seal itself and the other deitys of Merto, Sinnoh, Hoenn, Johto, and Kanto in a dimensional portal only openable by it to prevent them from being cloned as Shadow Pokémon.

Two months later, it is almost time for the war; the gang has formed a team Team Twilight and they will be pitted against their Pokemon's clones in Shadow form and fully evolved.

One week before the war, Team Dusk reveals that anything that damages the Shadow Clones damages the originals as well. As a result of that, Team Twilight is forced to call off the war.

Team Twilight must locate the Azure Flute to summon Arceus to disable the clone's ability.

During the Christmas chapter, everyone goes on a trip to Almia to finish their vacation, but Team Dim Sun supposedly steal their Pokemon and flee to Sinnoh. The group goes to Sinnoh to look for their stolen Pokemon, leaving the family in Almia and waiting for them to go back to Merto. First they go to the Champion Cynthia, who might have an idea where they are. Sadly, Cynthia has no clue but a Sky Forme Shaymin named Sky comes to help. One night, everyone is starving and they find nine eggs. They take the eggs in and leave them in the corner of a hotel room that they are staying in. Sky says that they are Pokemon eggs and they can be of use for a team. The next day Cynthia and Jun find 2 Mudkip next to them; Chip and Jasmine find 2 Treecko next to them and Ash and Kali find 2 Torchic next to them. Everyone is wondering what these Pokemon are doing next to them. They go and check on the eggs and realize that these Pokemon are the eggs. They then battle the babies and catch them. They are one step closer to defeating Team Dusk.
 
RE: Jun's Adventure!(A Pokemon Acanthite Fanfic)

I finally finished Chapter 8! Chapter 9 will be up soon!

Chapter 8 2-9-09


Kindlejou aroused to his paws and said, “Kindlejou?” He looked at Reptide and he then searched the mini-crowd for Jun. As soon as he realized he wasn’t there, he started to panic and questioned Reptide.
“Kindle Kindle Kindle Kindlejou?!?!?”
“It’s ok, Kindlejou; Jun went out to warn everyone about y-” he stopped mid sentence. “This is bad. He is warning everyone about Kindlejou but he is fine right now. Kali, do you know where he is going?”
“I think he is going to town square first.” Kali said.
“We are right in town, good. Let’s got stop him before he warns anyone.”
“Right, Kali go south, in case he is still coming up. Reptide, take care of east, please. I’ll go north and head to town square, since he might be there already. Cynthia, please go west. Kindlejou, since it is a long way from Jun’s house to Town Square, please go with Kali, since he is probably there. If he isn’t, get a group of Pokemon to help battle Knuckout, then go to town square as fast as you can. If you meet Jun on the way, let him know that you are Kindlejou and then take him to meet up with Kali, then Reptide, then Cynthia, and then come here. We’ll then have lunch at one of the restaurants, and meet up here. By then, Professor Willow should be back. Hopefully, we will be back before her. After all, it is a hour and a half run from here to the lab. I hope you guys can pick good spots where to wait. Any questions?” There was silence. “Ok, then let’s go!” Ash exclaimed.
“Yeah!” Everyone said as they headed off in their assigned directions.
Kindlejou and Kali walked off toward the south. They walked for about 14 yards, then stopped.
“Well, I think this is far enough. And Jun isn’t here. I will stay here. Can you go and get more Pokemon for help?” Kali said, sitting on a nearby bench. Kindlejou nodded his head and then padded off. Kindlejou had walked into the forest and saw some nearby Pokemon. It was a pack of two tailed wolves with purple features and golden rings on its tails. Nearby was a pack of similar Pokemon except they were human-like, had one tail, and droopy ears. Kindlejou picked his best bet and chose the wolves first.
“Hi, I am Kindlejou and Knuckout is back, and we are gathering a group of strong trainers and willing Pokemon to defeat his army. Do you want to help?” Kindlejou introduced.
One of the strange foxes stepped forward, Kindlejou noticed a cut in his right ear. “Hi, and welcome to the Mongaze pack. Us small foxes are only Monglances, though. We would love to help, but you have to talk to our Alpha Mongaze, Glare.”
“Thanks, Monglance.” Kindlejou said as he bravely sought out the biggest Mongaze and walked up to it. He had a scar on his right eye. “Hi, my name is Kindlejou, and Knuckout is back. My trainer and his friends are gathering strong trainers to help defeat his army. Us Pokemon are gathering willing Pokemon. I asked the Monglance and they said they would love to help but they told me that I would have to ask you, Glare.”
“Greetings, and welcome to the Mongaze tribe, or pack. Your story seems true, since no one comes to the forest unless with a trainer. You have the Mongaze tribe on your side. I will tell the others to get ready to follow you.
“Thank you.” Kindlejou said as he bowed his head.
Glare walked up to a purple rock and said, “Let me call a meeting! All Monglance and Mongaze step forward! We are about to follow this Kindlejou on a journey to defeat Knuckout once and for all! We might have to get someone to fly us wherever he flees or where his boss is! With that in mind, are there any questions?” There was the same silence. “Then let’s go!” A roar of cheers came from the crowd and the tribe started to follow Kindlejou. He had led them to the bench were Kali was.
“Kindlejou, I see you are back. And you seem to have brought Glare’s tribe. I have gotten a flock of Kestrawk and Felbin to join us. Falco, Glare is here.” Kali said, stepping aside to let the flock of Kestrawk and Felbin to meet the Mongaze tribe.
“Greetings, Kali, Falco. It’s a pleasure to see you again. If only it was on better terms. How is your flock going? The Mongaze tribe has been doing well.” Glare said, stepping forward.
“Hello, Glare. That’s good to hear. You’re right; if only it was on better terms. The flock is going well.”
“Kindlejou, I think Jun is coming, and he has your translator. Let’s go.” Kali said as she stood up from the bench.
Jun came forward, talking to this girl that Kindlejou knew from somewhere. Could it be? No It couldn’t be! It is! It’s Jasmine! Frost must be here too! Kindlejou ran up to Jasmine and started meowing.
“Kindlejou, is that you? What’s up? Oh, I guess you want to know where Frost is, aren’t you? Come on out, Frost!” She said as she started to reach onto her belt and then she stopped. “Kali, is that you?”
“Yep, it’s me. How are you? How’s Frost?” Kali said as she stepped forward to hug her past friend.
“I’m fine. Frost is ready to join you guys. I heard Ash and Cynthia were coming too. Chip, Kali and Kindlejou are here!” Jasmine said, throwing a Pokeball in the air. From it emitted an icy Pokemon that floated.
“Kali, Kindlejou? What’s up?” Chip said as he came up the hill. He then gasped and said, “Kali, watch out!”
 
RE: Jun's Adventure!(A Pokemon Acanthite Fanfic)

Not bad. Separate the paragraphs more, and try to improve the wording a bit.
 
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Vergere said:
Not bad. Separate the paragraphs more, and try to improve the wording a bit.

Thanks, I will. At least I have 2 readers.
 
RE: Jun's Adventure!(A Pokemon Acanthite Fanfic)

I didn't leave for nothing! Ch 9 is halfway done! Here is an excerpt:

“Yin, Volt, come out!” Chip yelled as he threw two Pokeballs into the air.
From the first pokeball emitted a Yinyanda, a raccoon Pokemon with purple features and it was mostly white. From the second Pokeball emitted a Filamelt, which was yellow with red-orange stripes and a flame on his head, like a torch.
“Woohoo!!” Volt yelled as it leaped into the air and did a front flip then landed, in a guarding stance.
“Let’s go!” Yin yelled as it landed on the ground in a crouched position behind Volt, ready to strike.
“Yin, use Dark Pulse! Volt, absorb the Dark Pulse and use Dark Thunder!” Chip called out his orders alongside his Pokemon, almost as if he was the one using the moves.
“Okay!” Yin replied as he rose up and slammed the ground, a dark pulse emanating from it into a huge circle, almost enough to trap Gremleye. Volt was already in the air and did a backflip into the circle, becoming swallowed in it.

http://www.pokemonacanthite.com/images/pokemon/625.png Yinyanda
http://www.pokemonacanthite.com/images/pokemon/627.png Filamelt
 
RE: Jun's Adventure! Chapter 9 Halfway done!

No, that's his evolution, Pandoom. He actually looks like a raccoon. YOUR BACK!! What did you think of the excerpt?
 
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It's still a panda, even if it looks slightly like a raccoon, it looks more like a panda. Yinyanda is also a big giveaway. :p

And yes, the Excerpt was very well done. I'm much looking forward to the next chapter. ^__^
 
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I think the story is very interesting. And I agree with Magma King, it's a panda :O
 
RE: Jun's Adventure! Read first post!

Oh, well the next chapter should be done within the next hour or so.
 
RE: Jun's Adventure! Read first post!

Ok, my cousin is over and she gave me an awesome idea for the spoiler chrystal for the special pokemon: Amethyst Chrystal.
 
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