Writing Legendary Tales-*Pokemon Related*

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This is a story I came up with an idea for a few days ago, and I've started to write it. Here is the Prologue:

Prologue
"QUIET!" Arceus shouted, and everyone in the conference room was immediately silent. "What is it, Mewtwo?"
"I sense a presence, master. There's someone at the door." Mewto said in a dull tone.
"Regirock, take care of that." Arceus ordered Regirock, who was closest to the door.

On the other side of the door, a completely wet Celebi and a flustered Jirachi were talking hurriedly.
"Oh, why did we have to be late to this meeting? Why?" Jirachi complained.
"It's so not fair! It's not our fault I fell in the lake! He'll punish us anyways! He doesn't even care-"
The door flung open. Regirock was standing there, towering above both Jirachi and Celebi.
"Master, It's Celebi. And Jirachi. They are late." Regirock obediently told Arceus.
"Regirock, I already know that. Do you think I do not know how to tell time when I am the one who created the universe?" Arceus said indignantly.
"Master, no, I-"
"Don't say anything. Jirachi and Celebi, you know what happens when you are late." Arceus said snidely, pointing to the corner of the room. With a sigh, Celebi and Jirachi floated to the corner and sat down on the floor.
"Now that we are in full attendance, the meeting-"
"Master, wait. We are still missing one." Cresselia said calmly.
"Who... Ah, Rayquaza. I wonder where he's gone off to."
Suddenly, with a huge crash, a flying green worm burst through the glass on the ceiling and hovered above a seat at the table.
"Sorry I'm late, master." Rayquaza said smugly. "I had a... a prior engagement."
"Ah, that's all right, Rayquaza. Do sit down... can I offer you a drink?"
"No, master, I'm... not very thirsty."
"All right, then. Now that we are in full attendance, the meeting shall begin. Now, I assume you all know why you have been called here today?" Everyone nodded except for Shaymin and Darkrai. "Ah, I see. For those of you who don't know, we have joined here today to discuss whether Rotom would be classified in our superior group that some humans call... legendaries. So, anyone have anything to say? Ah, Rayquaza, I see you already have a greatly prepared report on this subject. Please stand... I mean, um, float... and read."
"Thank you, master. Now, I think..."
As Rayquaza droned on, Jirachi and Celebi whispered in the corner.
"It's not fair! He gets away with everything! He had a 'prior engagement' and I fell in the lake, yet we're the ones who get punished!"
"No talking while others state their opinion, Jirachi and Celebi." Arceus told them sternly.

When at last it was Jirachi's turn to state his opinion, he stood up and began to read.
"My view on this subject is-"
Rayquaza suddenly had a loud coughing fit.
"Rayquaza, are you sure you don't want something to drink?" Arceus asked, obviously pleased.
"I'm fine, master. Thank you, though." Rayquaza said, also pleased.
Jirachi began stating his opinion again.
"My view on this subject is that Rotom is not-"
Rayquaza gave a loud sneeze.
"Never mind." Muttered Jirachi, sitting back down on the floor.
"Cebeli, you're next." Arceus called out. Several Pokemon sniggered. It's Celebi, you dolt, though Celebi, but all he said was "Celebi."
"Oh, do excuse me. Go on, Celibe." Celebi ignored the mispronunciation of his name this time and started stating his opinion.
"I believe that Rotom is not a legendary because it did not do anything important in the history of legendaries..." As Celebi went on, he noticed Arceus and Rayquaza having their own private conversation. In the middle of his speech, he crumpled up his papers, threw them in the trash, and stormed out of the room, Jirachi right behind him.

Chapter I

Chapter II

Chapter III

Chapter IV

Chapter V

Chapter VI

Chapter VII

Chapter VIII

 

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"I sense a presence, master. There's someone at the door."

XD

This is awesome. Keep going. ^__^

 

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Very good writing, if I do say so myself. Try to focus more on plot line, and less dialogue, if you can.

 

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Dialogue is the plotline. This is the best idea anybody's had for a fic in ages. ;o

 

[PokeChamp]

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Dialogue is the plotline. This is the best idea anybody's had for a fic in ages. ;o

I guess so. This is a bit more "lighter" than the usual fanfics, so I guess in this case, I'll let that pass.

LOL, Rayquaza coughing and sneezing all the time

 

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Chapter I
Mew

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Riiiiing! An alarm clock sitting on a light brown bedside table went off, reading five o' clock a.m. A small pink hand reached out towards the alarm clock, fumbled for a bit, then pressed a tiny black button reading "Snooze."
Riiiing! The alarm clock went off again, this time reading six o' clock a.m. The tiny pink hand reached out yet again and smashed the alarm clock.
"Mew, wake up!" A voice yelled through the door. The grandfather clock on the other side of the wall read seven o' clock a.m. Mew got out of bed slowly and floated lazily towards the door. He put his hand on the doorknob, turned it, and swung the door open. On the other side of the door were two Pokemon, an Elekid and a Magby.
"You two?" Mew asked drowsily. "Oh, what did I promise you this time?"
"You promised you would take us to the Fair!" Elekid shouted excitedly.
"I did... when did I..."
"Yesterday!" Magby yelled, and Mew faintly recalled the previous day.

Mew walked out of the red double doors of the legendary meetingplace and saw his two favorite kids, Elekid and Magby, waiting for him.
"Hi, kids! What can I do for ya?" Mew asked.
"Mew, guess what!" They said, jumping up and down with excitement.
"I dunno... what?" Mew asked them, grinning."
"The fair is in town!" They shouted together. "Will you take us to it?"
"Well, only if your parents agree." Mew said. "Oh, and I'd like to talk to them myself, actually, because I still remember the theme park incident."
"Okay!" Magby said. "My house first!" He shouted, pulling Mew towards his house.
"No, my house first!" Elekid yelled, pulling him in the other direction.
"Kids, kids!" Mew said hurriedly. "I'll fall apart if you do this! Why don't you get your parents to come here and I'll talk to them both at the same time."
"Okay!" Both Elekid and Magby yelled, running as fast as they could in opposite directions.

A Magmortar and an Electrivire came walking towards the Meetingplace, and Mew greeted them formally.
"Hello," he said, "I am Mew. You probably already know me and my personality from your children, but you have never met me face to face. I just wanted to make sure with you that it is okay for your children to go to the fair with me, because of the theme park incident in March."
"Of course!" Magmortar said, "I trust you completely."
"And me." Electrivire said. Mew thanked them both and they walked away. The kids, however, stayed.
"Mew!" Magby shouted. "When will you take us to the fair?"
"Tomorrow." Mew said.
"Promise?" Elekid asked.
"Promise." Said Mew.

"Oh, now I remember!" Mew said, now alert. "Just let me get ready and I'll take you." And he closed the door. He headed towards the bathroom and firstly got in the shower. It was probably the quickest shower he had ever taken. When he got out from there, he grabbed his toothbrush, hurriedly globbed some toothpaste on it, and brushed his teeth. Next, he grabbed a peice of floss and shoved it in between his teeth. He washed his face and put on some deoderant, grabbed a random T-shirt and shorts, put them on, and then finally went to the door and opened it.
"Let's go!" Magby yelled, and he and Elekid ran in the direction of the fair, Mew floating as fast as he could after them.

When they finally arrived at the fair, they saw a Politoed behind a colorful stand supporting a sign reading "Welcome to the Pokefair." When the group arrived at the stand, the Politoed said, "Welcome to the Pokefair. Ten Pokedollars for an adult ticket, five for a child!"
"Hold on," said Mew, fumbling in his pocket, "Let me get my wallet... My wallet!" He cried out suddenly. "I forgot my wallet!" And he raced towards his apartment without even thinking about the kids. When he got there, he thrust the key into the door, turned it, and yanked the door open. He grabbed his wallet from the bedside table and raced back towards the fair. When he got back, the kids were gone. So was the Politoed.

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I will be posting what the first five chapters are called, even though I have not written them yet. Look in the first post.

 

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Chapter II
Heatran

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Soc the Pokemon Trainer was climbing up Stark Mountain, his Squirtle, Totodile, Mudkip, and Piplup following him eagerly. He reached the second to last flat place on the mountain and pulled himself onto it. After a few seconds his Piplup climbed onto it. After that came Squirtle, then Totodile, and finally, Mudkip. Soc noticed that Totodile was eyeing a nearby rock suspiciously. He looked and saw a beady red eye staring at him. It's just my imagination, he thought, but then he was proved wrong.
A silver and orange lump on four legs burst out from behind the rock, landing so hard that the entire mountain seemed to shake. Totodile was knocked of its feet and fell down the steep slope of the mountain.
"Totodile!" Soc called out, and threw its Poke Ball down the mountain to return it. The Poke Ball, however, stuck in a crack in the mountain, and Totodile kept sliding. "Squirtle, use Hydro Cannon on that thing! Piplup, Mudkip, use Hydro Pump!" Soc yelled, and the three Pokemon obeyed. The silver and orange Pokemon dodged, and the three jets of water bounced off of the rocks repeatedly until two of them hit other rocks and fell apart, and the third one hit Mudkip right in the face, knocking him down the mountain also. Soc was angry now.
"Piplup, Hydro Pump again! Squirtle, Hydro Cannon again!" He yelled, and this time only two jets of water raced towards the silver Pokemon. The Pokemon dodged again, and the jets of water again went flying, bouncing off nearby rocks. "Squirtle, Piplup, protect!" Soc yelled, and the two Pokemon obediently put up invisible shields. After the jets of water fell apart, Soc yelled, "Now, both of you, Headbutt!" The Squirtle and Piplup obeyed, both racing towards the silver Pokemon, which was now on the edge of the Mountain. It jumped at the last minute, but Squirtle and Piplup kept running, causing them to fall down the mountain as Mudkip and Totodile had before.
Soc gritted his teeth. It was time to use his secret weapon.

On the inside of Stark Mountain, Magby and Elekid were tied to the stone wall.
"When do you think Politoed will be back with our secret mission?" Elekid asked Magby.
"I don't know," Said Magby, "But I sure hope he gets back soon. I'm getting lonely here."
Suddenly, the boulder at the entrance to the hidden room inside stark mountain, and a shadow across the wall showed a huge Pokemon with fangs sharper than knives. Elekid Screamed.

"Go, Wailord!" Soc yelled, throwing out a fifth Poke Ball. Out emerged a huge whale the size of a cruise ship, almost bigger than the top of the mountain itself. "Wailord, Surf!" Soc yelled, and the whale Pokemon obediently created a wave and rode it towards the silver beast, but then Soc realized why that had not been a good thing to do. The great whale slid down the wet mountain, slipping and sliding everywhere, until it was out of sight and Soc heard it land on the bottom with a loud thump. He only had one Pokemon left, and he did not even know what it is. He recalled when he had caught it about ten minutes ago.

Soc was climbing Stark Mountain when he pulled himself up to a ridge and saw a Golden Steelix. All he had on him was his Master Ball, which he was saving for Cresselia. However, he was so awed by the giant golden monster that he quickly threw the only Poke Ball on hand at it. Unfortunately, it caught a Pokemon behind the Steelix that could not be seen at the time and the Steelix slithered away.

That was so stupid of me,, Soc thought, and he sent out the unknown Pokemon. A Politoed in carnival clothes emerged from the Poke Ball, and immediately shot a jet of water directly in Soc's face. Soc went tumbling down the mountain after his Pokemon and Politoed jumped to the top of the rock Heatran was standing on.
"Have you got them?" Heatran Growled.
"They're tied up inside the secret room." Politoed said smugly.

"Hi, I'm Totodile." A voice echoed through the room, and Magby and Elekid breathed a sigh of relief as a small blue Pokemon with large fangs wobbled into the room, followed by a shelled blue Pokemon with a very round head, a blue Pokemon with a yellow beak that looked like a penguin, and a final blue Pokemon with a fin on its head, the latter's shape completely different than the others.
"Can you chew through these ropes?" Magby asked Totodile.
"Sure." Totodile said, and he walked up to each of the two tied up Pokemon in turn and chewed through their ropes.

"I thought they were here..." Politoed said, staring wide-eyed at the wide, empty room.
"You dare to play jokes on your master?" Heatran said, fuming. "I'll show you what you get for that!" And he pushed Politoed into the empty secret room and pushed the boulder in so hard that it stuck there, and no Pokemon would ever be able to take it out. Heatran walked away, almost satisfied, and a pink laser sueednly hit him in the face. He toppled down the mountain, Mew pursuing him swiftly, and finally hit the trainer's Pokemon, Elekid and Magby, and the trainer. Mew latched onto Heatran and they all fell to the bottom of the mountain and into the mouth of Wailord.

 

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Chapter III
Shaymin

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Shaymin was lying in Floaroma Meadow, calmly smelling in the wonderful aura of Gracidea flowers as he slept peacefully. He was dreaming about the most wonderful things he could dream of: walking in the meadow, smelling in the beautiful smell of the Gracidea flowers, proposing to Cre-
A sudden beep came from Shaymin's watch and he awoke with a start. He was so angry about being woken up that he took his watch off and threw it across the meadow, forgetting what it meant when the watch turned red like this. He turned and started to go back to Floaroma town, but the watch came back and hit him in the head.
Now very angry, Shaymin rubbed the back of his head repeatedly and finally pressed a button on his watch so that a screen appeared on it and Shaymin could see a Garchomp sitting at a chair on the other end.
"Ah, there you are, Shaymin." the Garchomp said in a pleased voice. "Now that everyone is 'tuned in', I can tell you what I called all of you for. First of all, I need to know where you are currently." A jumble of voices mixed in the conversation. "I see. So, Pidgeot, you, Staraptor, Noctowl, and Taillow are at Mt. Coronet, correct?"
"Correct." Pidgeot answered firmly.
"And Shaymin, you are in the Floaroma meadow. I'lll need you to transform into Sky Forme for this mission." Shaymin lazily grabbed a Gracidea flower from its fur, ate it, and transformed. "Good, very good," the Garchomp said, "Now, this mission is at Stark Mountain. Eight Pokemon and a human have all fallen into the mouth of a Wailord at the bottom of the mountain. I need you to get them from there. You may go now." He said, and the watch turned into a regular watch. Shaymin propelled himself into the air and soared across the air towards Stark Mountain, the wind blowing in his face, his fur waving wildly.

When Shaymin arrived at the bottom of Stark Mountain, the other Pokemon were already there, trying to lift the Wailord. It would not budge.
"Obviously, you guys need a little extra strength." Shaymin said, surprising all the others. Then, he helped them to lift Wailord and put it in a lake so it could move. "Now, to go insi- hey!" Shaymin yelled as the Wailord sank to the bottom of the pond slowly. "Fine, we'll have to go underwater. On the count of three. One... two... THREE!" Shaymin yelled, and they all plunged into the icy cold water. A bit after that, Arceus arrived on the scene.
"I never did like Shaymin. Or Mew, for that matter." He said, and he shot an Ice Beam across the pond surface, freezing it completely.

Far away, in a land known as Kanto...

James was walking through the Power Plant, electricity jolting at random times and the Poke Ball Pokemon floating past every so often. Finally, he got to the room he was planning to get into-the room with the generator. He looked up and was startled when he looked up from his map, as there was a large yellow bird standing directly in front of him. He started to run, but it was too late. The bird hit him with a mighty Thundershock, knocking him out on the spot, then burst through the ceiling, flying in the direction of Saffron City.

Jessie walked nervously through Victory Road, declining all challenges that trainers offered. Finally she got to the secret room-the room, according to the map, that Moltres was in. She pushed open the door, and though she knew what was behind it, she was still a bit surprised to see the magnificent orange and red bird twice her size.
"Go, Poke Ball!" She shouted, throwing a Poke Ball at it. The bird simply knocked the Poke Ball away with its wing and hit Jessie with a flamethrower for good measure. She was burned right away, fainting immediately. Moltres burst through the roof of the cave and flew towards Saffron City.

Meowth excitedly walked towards the final room in the Seafoam islands, happy to finally have a chance to show off to the boss. He was not surprised at all to see a light blue Pokemon about ten times his size, waiting for something to happen. Before Meowth could speak a word, however, the bird shot an Ice Beam at Meowth, freezing him on the spot. Then, the majestic Articuno broke through the ceiling of the cave, rocks crumbling everywhere, and started to fly towards Saffron City.

In Saffron City, unsuspecting pedestrians saw three majestic birds land on the roof of the Silph Co. manufacturing building.
"They cannot know about this." Zapdos said.
"Very well then." Articuno responded, and he turned everything to ice with his powers. After that, Moltres burned the ice, melting it, and all that was left in Saffron City was water.
"You have killed the people?" Zapdos asked incredulously.
"No," said Articuno, "I have merely moved them to different cities and wiped their memories."
"Good." Said Zapdos, and the three birds jumped out of the water and flew towards Sinnoh, having just received a message from Lugia about a terrible event happening at Stark Mountain.

 

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People... anyone want to share their opinion? Anyone?

 

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Cool stuff. I like this chain-reaction type thing all because Mew forgot his wallet.

 

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Sock>Soc. You should've called him sock.

This is interesting indeed. :F

 

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Sock>Soc. You should've called him sock.

This is interesting indeed. :F

It's short for Socrates.

 

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Chapter IV
The Three Birds

Three birds were soaring through the air in Sinnoh, heading towards Stark Mountain. One bird was yellow, with zigzagging wings that jolted with electricity at random times. Another was orange, fire lining its wings, and the third was blue, and was holding up a bubble of ice to protect the other two. The birds finally arrived at the giant, snow-peaked mountain and landed by the edge of the frozen lake. Moltres, the fire bird, thought he saw a figure fleeing in the distance. Zapdos, the lightning bird, was Drill Pecking through the ice. His yellow beak broke through the ice a final time and a circle of ice was separated from the rest of the frozen lake. Moltres shot a Flamethrower at it and burned it, creating a hole in the ice. All three birds jumped into the ice-cold water.
Articuno, the ice bird, was the only one who was not cold as they plunged underwater. They all immediately spotted the giant Wailord, and swam towards it. Articuno grabbed the top lip, Zapdos grabbed the bottom one, and together they pulled the massive mouth open and swam in.
As soon as they were there, Wailord closed its mouth again. Zapdos, Articuno, and Moltres all saw the eight Pokemon and the human clinging to the inside of the mouth intensely.
"We're here to rescue you." Zapdos said, but in speaking his tounge clicked against his teeth, letting out just a tiny jolt of electricity. But that was enough.

Arceus had turned around to take a look at the lake once more and decide whether or not to let the others live. Suddenly, the entire lake was illuminated, almost blinding Arceus. After that, there was a huge explosion that made the ground tremble. Arceus ran for his life.

Meanwhile, in Kanto...

"Jessie! James! Meowth! Who did this to you?" The boss yelled, though he already had a situation in mind. Two Grunts had brought in Jessie, James, and Meowth, who were frozen, burned, and electrified. There was a trio who could do this.
"The... legendary birds." James said, who had regained consciousness.
"Hmm..." Giovanni pondered, "I think I know who ordered them to do it. Usachi, get my private helicopter! I'm going to Sinnoh! But stop by the Cerulean Cave on the way." He ordered one of his grunts. His eyes narrowed. It was time to begin the search for Mewtwo... and Arceus.

 

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Arceus ran for his life.

LOL.

 

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Chapter V
Mewtwo

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Ditte the Ditto bounced happily through Cerulean Cave, watching the Machokes lift weights and the Kadabras bend spoons. He felt like transforming into something, but couldn't decide what. He had already transformed into every Pokemon that could be found in Cerulean Cave except...
No. He was not transforming into Mewtwo. Mewtwo had explained to every Pokemon in Cerulean Cave that he was superior to them, although...

Ditte walked through Cerulean Cave, transformed into Mewtwo. It felt good to walk on two legs instead of bouncing around all the time. Mewtwo was away, so he decided to have some fun. He made his way through the maze of Cerulean Cave and finally arrived at the place where Mewtwo waited to be challenged. He stood there, pretending to be Mewtwo and enjoying it too.
A few hours later, he heard voices just outside the room.
"The map says it's here!" One voice yelled, and it was evident in their voices that they were arguing.
"But what if it's not?" The second voice said.
"Let's just try here!" The first voice hissed, and they opened the doors.
Two men in black outfits with a red 'R' on them burst into the room. The first one just stared, glued to the spot, but the second one threw a Master Ball at Ditte. It was game over for the Ditto.

Mewtwo's leg hit the ceiling of Cerulean Cave and he burst through it, landing on the rocky ground.
"I... need... Ditte." He said breathlessly, trying to sense the Ditto's presence. It was not in the cave. "WHERE IS HE?!" Mewtwo bellowed, panicking. "WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH HIM?!" His voice boomed.
"Sir... he was taken by two Team Rocket grunts a few hours ago." a Machoke said, frightened.
"What would they want... oh, no." Mewtwo said, remembering what had happened after his great clone battle. "He has found me... again."

"Sir, we have your Mewtwo right here." Usachi said, handing Giovanni the Master Ball.
"Excellent." Giovanni said, sending out the Pokemon. What emerged from the Master Ball, however, was a Machoke. The two grunts looked at each other with stunned looks on their faces and Giovanni turned his chair to yell at them. When the three looked at the Pokemon again, though, it was a Kadabra. All three were very confused.

Ditte was having fun confusing the humans, and eventually he turned into a Pidgeot and flew out the window back towards Cerulean Cave, but before doing so, he blew the humans out the twelfth-story window.

Ditte arrived in Cerulean Cave to find Mewtwo in a panicked state and explained to Mewtwo what he had done. A wave of calmness fell over Mewtwo as he told Ditte to fly him to Stark Mountain. Ditte happily obeyed.

Stupid Mattress, Brock thought, staring at the mattress tied to the top of his car. Why do I have to carry the mattress, anyways? It's not like someone's going to fall out of the sky or anything.
Suddenly, three humans fell from the building above and landed right on top of the mattress.

Mewtwo and Ditte arrived at Stark Mountain, at the bottom of which was a huge crater where the lake used to be. Out of the crater climbed a trainer, who had obviously been shocked, a Piplup, a Totodile, a Squirtle, a Mudkip, a Magby, an Elekid, Mew, and Heatran. The three birds of fire, ice, and lightning flew out of the crater and towards random places in Sinnoh. The four water Pokemon worked together to put water back in the lake.
"So," said Mew, lying down by Elekid and Magby, "what ride do you guys wanna go on first?"

 

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DARN!
I had the whole thing planned out...
and then I realized Froslass wasn't a legendary. >:[
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DARN!
I had the whole thing planned out...
and then I realized Froslass wasn't a legendary. >:[
-_-

That stinks, dude. I can't wait for chapter 6! Or can I...

 

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Chapter VI
Manaphy

Manaphy awoke with a start to a knock on his door. He stood up, walked over to the door, and slowly turned the doorknob, still half-asleep. He pulled the door open to see Rayquaza floating outside the door.
"What do you want?" Manaphy asked coldly.
"Is Phione here?" Rayquaza asked kindly.
"No. Now go away."
"Where is he then?"
"I said go away."
"Arceus needs to gather child Pokemon for an-experiment."
"What kind of experiment?"
"I'm afraid that's confidential."
"Well, I'm afraid I can't tell you where Phione is if you don't tell me exactly what Arceus is doing."
"Arceus will be m-" Rayquaza did not get to finish his sentence, as the door was slammed in his face. Rayquaza turned around and headed towards the park, knowing many child Pokemon went there to play. Arceus was not actually gathering child Pokemon, he was looking specifically for Phione.

Manaphy went back to the couch and lied down. He hated Rayquaza, and hated Arceus for liking Rayquaza. Phione was actually in his room sleeping. Manaphy always lied to Rayquaza, as he did not trust him or Arceus. Eventually, Manaphy fell asleep again, loud snores echoing across the room.

The door creaked open quietly. Arceus slowly walked into the room and looked around. The light had been left on and was now flickering on and off, as a result of low batteries. Arceus continued to walk, not paying attention to the ground as he did, but gazing straight towards the stairs, determined on capturing Phione, no matter what it meant. Then, Arceus tripped over an object on the floor and crashed into the wall, which emitted a loud bump.
Manaphy woke with a start and looked around, wide-eyed. He knew there was someone in his house, but could not see. The light had finally flickered off a few seconds ago, and Manaphy's eyes were just adjusting to the darkness.
He cannot know of this, Arceus thought. Suddenly there was a flash of bright white light. Manaphy, still wide-eyed, froze. He put his hand to his heart. It was beating slower and slower every second. He knew what this was. It was- but then he fell, toppled off the couch, and lay dead upon the floor.
I did not think it would come to this, Arceus thought, feeling no sorrow as he kicked Manaphy's body under the couch and headed towards the stairs, using his powers to see through the darkness. Judgement, Arceus's signature attack, would kill the Pokemon or human that it was used against by making their heart beat slower and slower, and eventually stop. Arceus had used it on Manaphy because Manaphy could not spread the word about the experiment, which he was planning to test first on Phione.

Arceus walked instead of creeping now, since there was no Pokemon except Phione in the house to hear him, and Phione was the Pokemon he was planning on kidnapping. If Arceus had a heart, he would have realized that he had killed the only legendary Pokemon that could breed and experienced a pang of guilt. However, Arceus had no heart. He was born that way, and not capable of feeling normal Pokemon emotions such as sorrow, happiness, guilt, and anger. He had learned from Rayquaza what these were and how to pretend he was feeling them, but never actually felt them.
Arceus reached the door upstairs leading to Phione's room. He entered. There was a small bed there, with Phione resting peacefully in it, unaware that when he woke up the next day, everything would change.

 

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Short but funny. I'd say to extend a bit on it, and show Manaphy's anger towards Rayquaza a little more in their conversation.

 

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Short but funny. I'd say to extend a bit on it, and show Manaphy's anger towards Rayquaza a little more in their conversation.

Yay! A comment! Okay, will do!

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Update: extended on it. It's not that funny anymore (because of the character you-know-what) but I had to. Otherwise, you-know-who would have stepped in and saved everything, and we would've had an early ending, and a lot of legendaries wouldn't get their chapters done. So that's why I you-know-whatted him..