Writing Legendary Tales-*Pokemon Related*

[Dark Hariyama]

RE: Legendary Tales: Manaphy is up (and updated)! Please comment and rate!

Well I ead all the articles and they all sounded great. But in the 3 birds article, you said that Jessie was in Victory Road when Moltres is on One Island.

On a side note: Poor Manaphy

 

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Chapter VII
Phione

Phione's eyes fluttered open. He sat up, as he usually did in the mornings, but was immediately stopped by a metal bar strapping him onto a table. His eyes widened as he saw many jars with Pokemon inside them, all of the Pokemon desperate to break free. The jars were labeled with the names of the Pokemon that were inside them. Phione tried to sit up again, but was again stopped by the metal bar. Then the door creaked open and Arceus entered the room. Arceus walked over to a panel on the wall and pressed some buttons.
Phione let out a gasp of realization as five metal flatteners came out of the ends of the table and down from the ceiling and began to head towards him. He struggled to get out, but it was no use. In about five seconds, he would be nothing but a blue rectangle. Phione was one of the first to realize that Arceus, the god Pokemon, was evil.

Cresselia came to the door of Manaphy's house and was surprised to find that it was open. She floated through and turned on the light using her psychic powers. There was an impression in the couch, but not a sound to be heard. Then she saw something blue sticking out from under the couch. She grabbed it and pulled. Surprisingly, no reaction came from the blue body of Manaphy as Cresselia pulled it out from under the couch. Manaphy was not breathing, and his heart was not beating either. It didn't take a rocket scientist to figure out that he was dead. Cresselia experienced a feeling of sorrow for him, but reminded herself that sadness did not change anything. She moved upstairs and went into Phione's room to tell Phione about the death of his father. When Cresselia turned on the light, though, all she found in Phione's bed was a bowl. Inside it, there was a half-eaten apple. That apple would never be finished.

The flatteners came towards Phione faster and faster. He struggled to escape, but the more he struggled the tighter the metal bar held him. With his last ounce of strength he managed to choke out the words "Daddy-save-me." But it was no use, and he was killed by the flatteners, his spirit flowing out of his body to join his father as his body, now just a blue rectangular plate, remained behind for Arceus's use.
Now, thought Arceus, let's see if this works. And he sank his front leg into the blue plate. Immediately the yellow circle on his body changed its color to blue, and water flowed through it. Arceus was elated. He had managed to change his type. Now, he just needed plates for the other fifteen types. He looked around at the jars in the room, thinking, which ones deserve to die? Then, he spotted a jar labeled "Celebi." He had yet to capture this Pokemon, but he knew exactly what he would do with it once he did. He smiled to himself. It was time to visit Darkrai.

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Well I ead all the articles and they all sounded great. But in the 3 birds article, you said that Jessie was in Victory Road when Moltres is on One Island.

On a side note: Poor Manaphy

I was following RBY in that chapter, not FR/LG

 

[Veritas]

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These are really good, I found it interesting that Arceus the god pokemon was evil. I can't wait to read more

 

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The short wait is over! Chapter eight is up!

Chapter VIII
Darkrai

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Arceus landed lightly on the island, which was mostly taken up by an enormous cave. He entered the cave, and called out,
"Hello?" It echoed in the darkness of the cave. A ring of red glowed in the shadows. Then another. Then, the two rings flew around as if someone was juggling them. Arceus breathed a sigh of relief as he realized that Darkrai was indeed there. The red rings then flew at him, lighting up the cave as they passed. Arceus calmly stopped them by holding up his front foot. They fell to the ground and broke in half, the light draining out of them and going into the cave walls to reveal Darkrai. His white hair blew around in the non-existent wind.
"Darkrai! Old friend," Arceus greeted him, yet something was wrong. Darkrai did not speak.
"How have you been?" Arceus asked nervously. Darkrai still did not speak.
"I have a job for you." Arceus said, still nervous. Darkrai's mouth did not move, yet his voice filled the cave.
There will be no more jobs.
"But-"
I saw what you did, Arceus.
"How-"
I am Darkness, Arceus. I am anywhere that it is dark. Manaphy's house was dark. So was your lab.
"But I had to, I-"
You are exiled from this cave, Arceus. Get out.
"You can't! I'll kill you-"
You cannot kill me, Arceus. Have you forgotten? I have no heart. Just like you, you merciless brat!
This was enough. Arceus sped at Darkrai, infuriated, his eyes narrowed. Before he could, though, a ball of shadows flew at him. He dodged it and kept going. Then He was trapped by shadows. They whispered ghostly reminders of his past, causing him to struggle harder. However, the harder he struggled, the tighter the shadows held. It was his own cleverness used against him. He finally managed to break free of the shadows and tumbled out of the cave and into the water. Darkrai watched from the island, blending in with the night sky.

Arceus swam through the water, now fully aware of his surroundings. He needed to know who to consult next, to capture Celebi- and then he knew the answer. Celebi could travel through time, but this Pokemon could too- and it could do more than travel through it. It was able to destroy it. Arceus kept swimming.

 

[Dr4g0n]

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Nice! At least more than one Pokemon now hates Arceus.

Perhaps add a few sentences or a paragraph of a battle scene. It is sort of odd just having Darkrai only talk and hide, not fight...

 

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Chapter IX
Dialga & Palkia

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"I want you to destroy time."
"Destroy time?"
"Yes. It is possible, is it not?"
"Of course. It is quite easy, actually."
"What do you mean, easy to destroy time?"
"It has been done before."
"What... happens when time is destroyed?"
"Minutes, days, years, centuries will cease to pass but life will go on as usual."
"If you destroyed time, could someone still travel through it?"
"Well, me, of course. But that's it, really."
"What about... Celebi?"
"You dare speak that name, Arceus?"
"Yes. I am the alpha Pokemon. It is not possible for any Pokemon to defy me, for I shall always win."
"What about Darkrai? I know he's mad at you. So is Cresselia. And Palkia. And many others."
"Who is not mad at me?"
"Rayquaza, of course. Me. And... that's pretty much it."
"But... why? Why are so many mad at me? Death is an inevitable thing."
"Yes, but you killed those two, Arceus."
"Never mind about this. What about the destruction of time?"
"I have already done that."
"How would I get Palkia to destroy the dimension of space for me?"
"Well, if you challenged him to a one-on-one battle to the death and won, you would gain control over space."
"Perfect." Arceus said, turning to leave Spear Pillar.
"Wait a second, what about-" Dialga yelled, but Arceus was already gone.

Dialga ran down the steep slope of Mt. Coronet as fast as he could, running to the battlefield. When he finally got there the battle was about to start. Dialga quickly jumped into the stands supporting Arceus. The side supporting Palkia was so crowded that there was hardly space to move, but in the stands supporting Arceus there were only two Pokemon, Rayquaza and Dialga. Rayquaza took up two-thirds of the bleachers.
Palkia walked onto the battlefield and let out a terrifying roar. There was thunderous applause from the stands opposite Dialga. Then, Arceus calmly walked onto the field. Dialga and Rayquaza's clapping was drowned out by boos from the opposing side. Then, the battle begun.
At once, Arceus launched a hyper beam at Palkia. Palkia dodged it by blending in with the surroundings. Then, from all sides of the stadium he let out a majestic waterfall, drenching both the crowd and Arceus. Arceus retaliated by launching a mud bomb at the center of the stadium, covering everything with mud. Palkia then landed back on the stadium ground. Before Arceus could do anything, Palkia gathered Space, twisted it into a sphere, and threw it at Arceus in a Spacial Rend attack. Arceus took the full force of the impact and fell onto the ground, unmoving. Everyone gasped. Had Palkia killed its creator, the evil god among Pokemon, with a simple Spacial Rend?

 

[~Magma King~]

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The battle needed to be longer. :F

But I'm betting he's not dead.

 

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RE: Legendary Tales: Chapter Nine (Dialga and Palkia) is up! Please comment and rate!

The battle needed to be longer. :F

But I'm betting he's not dead.

SPOILERS The battle isn't over... and you're right. END SPOILERS

 

[Argetlam]

RE: Legendary Tales: Chapter Nine (Dialga and Palkia) is up! Please comment and rate!

Toatally AWESOME! Only poor Manaphy.... I want more!

 

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this is actually the 1st fanfic that got me intrested, great job!

 

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Mufufufufu... I seem to have gotten a disease...

Yes, it seems the evil Writer's block has befallen me. If you have any ideas for the next chapter, please PM them to me or this story shall slowly die...

 

[Dr4g0n]

RE: Legendary Tales: Chapter Nine (Dialga and Palkia) is up! Please comment and rate!

Next chapter idea: Rayquaza!

All about Rayquaza's point of view of this battle!

 

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Next chapter idea: Rayquaza!

All about Rayquaza's point of view of this battle!

i would, but...

I'm saving him for a chapter towards the end. :F

I have the end all planned out, and the beginning, but not the middle.

Chapters at end (planned):

Cresselia (Parts I & II)
Rayquaza
Regigigas
Arceus

 

[Shining Suicune]

RE: Legendary Tales (Might change name)

Chapter I
Mew

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Riiiiing! An alarm clock sitting on a light brown bedside table went off, reading five o' clock a.m. A small pink hand reached out towards the alarm clock, fumbled for a bit, then pressed a tiny black button reading "Snooze."
Riiiing! The alarm clock went off again, this time reading six o' clock a.m. The tiny pink hand reached out yet again and smashed the alarm clock.
"Mew, wake up!" A voice yelled through the door. The grandfather clock on the other side of the wall read seven o' clock a.m. Mew got out of bed slowly and floated lazily towards the door. He put his hand on the doorknob, turned it, and swung the door open. On the other side of the door were two Pokemon, an Elekid and a Magby.
"You two?" Mew asked drowsily. "Oh, what did I promise you this time?"
"You promised you would take us to the Fair!" Elekid shouted excitedly.
"I did... when did I..."
"Yesterday!" Magby yelled, and Mew faintly recalled the previous day.

Mew walked out of the red double doors of the legendary meetingplace and saw his two favorite kids, Elekid and Magby, waiting for him.
"Hi, kids! What can I do for ya?" Mew asked.
"Mew, guess what!" They said, jumping up and down with excitement.
"I dunno... what?" Mew asked them, grinning."
"The fair is in town!" They shouted together. "Will you take us to it?"
"Well, only if your parents agree." Mew said. "Oh, and I'd like to talk to them myself, actually, because I still remember the theme park incident."
"Okay!" Magby said. "My house first!" He shouted, pulling Mew towards his house.
"No, my house first!" Elekid yelled, pulling him in the other direction.
"Kids, kids!" Mew said hurriedly. "I'll fall apart if you do this! Why don't you get your parents to come here and I'll talk to them both at the same time."
"Okay!" Both Elekid and Magby yelled, running as fast as they could in opposite directions.

A Magmortar and an Electrivire came walking towards the Meetingplace, and Mew greeted them formally.
"Hello," he said, "I am Mew. You probably already know me and my personality from your children, but you have never met me face to face. I just wanted to make sure with you that it is okay for your children to go to the fair with me, because of the theme park incident in March."
"Of course!" Magmortar said, "I trust you completely."
"And me." Electrivire said. Mew thanked them both and they walked away. The kids, however, stayed.
"Mew!" Magby shouted. "When will you take us to the fair?"
"Tomorrow." Mew said.
"Promise?" Elekid asked.
"Promise." Said Mew.

"Oh, now I remember!" Mew said, now alert. "Just let me get ready and I'll take you." And he closed the door. He headed towards the bathroom and firstly got in the shower. It was probably the quickest shower he had ever taken. When he got out from there, he grabbed his toothbrush, hurriedly globbed some toothpaste on it, and brushed his teeth. Next, he grabbed a peice of floss and shoved it in between his teeth. He washed his face and put on some deoderant, grabbed a random T-shirt and shorts, put them on, and then finally went to the door and opened it.
"Let's go!" Magby yelled, and he and Elekid ran in the direction of the fair, Mew floating as fast as he could after them.

When they finally arrived at the fair, they saw a Politoed behind a colorful stand supporting a sign reading "Welcome to the Pokefair." When the group arrived at the stand, the Politoed said, "Welcome to the Pokefair. Ten Pokedollars for an adult ticket, five for a child!"
"Hold on," said Mew, fumbling in his pocket, "Let me get my wallet... My wallet!" He cried out suddenly. "I forgot my wallet!" And he raced towards his apartment without even thinking about the kids. When he got there, he thrust the key into the door, turned it, and yanked the door open. He grabbed his wallet from the bedside table and raced back towards the fair. When he got back, the kids were gone. So was the Politoed.

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Yep, I always knew frogs were evil. When I was about 3, frogs were my worst nightmare. I wouldn't even go in my room cause of a frog book. Looks like my past self was right to be afraid of frogs.And Politoeds.

 

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RE: Legendary Tales: Writer's block is occuring! PM your ideas!

All right people, I can't let this story rot in a grave. But I don't have any ideas for it. So I'm going to start a new story for now, and try to get ideas for this one. I may even have the stories coincide. So I'm going to ask a mod to lock this. For now. Because I have the ending planned out, just not the middle. >.<

 

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RELEVANT REVIVAL: EXCEPTION TO THE RULES

Chapter X
Deoxys

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Everyone watched intensely as Arceus lay motionless on the ground. Suddenly, Dialga cried out.
"He's breathing!"
Indeed, Arceus' chest was rising and falling, indicating that he was, in fact, alive. He stood up, but then wobbled and immediately fell to the ground. Rayquaza jumped from the stands and wrapped himself around Palkia's neck. Palkia struggled, but he was too late, and he fell to the ground, dead. Suddenly, Dialga's eyes widened.
"Time-cannot live-without... space." He choked, and fell out of the bleachers, also dead. Deoxys stood up.
"You can't do that! It's cheating!" he claimed.
"What does it matter now? He's dead." Rayquaza said smugly.
"You don't care about anything!" Deoxys yelled. To this, Rayquaza's eyes narrowed.
"What did you say?" He asked, stressing every syllable slowly and deliberately.
"I said you don't care about anything, you inconsiderate son of a-"
Rayquaza lunged at Deoxys, his teeth thrashing. Deoxys dodged out of the way and grabbed a meteorite from his pocket. He held it to his chest and transformed into his speed forme. Then, he dashed away, faster than the speed of light.
"I'll get that little brat." Rayquaza said through his teeth, "I'll kill him."

Deoxys breathed heavily, in his mind telling himself that Rayquaza would never be able to find him where he was. He was in the middle of a huge desert, an isolate bare wasteland. He grabbed another meteorite from his pocket and held it to his chest, causing him to transform into his defense forme. He was waiting for Rayquaza, and when the green worm got there, he would have the battle of his life.

Two days later, Rayquaza arrived. Deoxys had already charged up a Hyper Beam, and he immediately fired it at Rayquaza. Rayquaza used protect to block it, and then sent it back at Deoxys. Deoxys dodged, then fired countless Hyper Beams at Rayquaza. While Rayquaza was blocking them, Deoxys transformed into his speed form and ran further. And that's when he ran into Mesprit.

 

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RE: Legendary Tales has come back from the dead! Chapter 10 is up!

yay, favourite fanfic evurrr

 

[fortegoddx]

RE: Legendary Tales has come back from the dead! Chapter 10 is up!

cool. like it.

 

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MAJOR UPDATE :O

Chapter XI
The Pixies​

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Section A
Mesprit

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Deoxys skidded to a halt, coming to a complete stop right in front of Mesprit, almost crashing into him. Mesprit's eyes were closed. Upon sensing Deoxys, he opened them, then floated around happily.
"Hello, sir! What can I do for you today?" he asked cheerfully.
"Mesprit, are you even aware of what's going on?" Deoxys asked him.
"Nope, nopearoozas!" Mesprit cheered. Deoxys sighed.
"All right... I need to get rid of Rayquaza."
"Sorry, but you'll need Uxie for that."
"And how am I supposed to find Uxie?"
"How am I supposed to know? He's constantly on the move."
"Don't you pixies, or whatever you are, have a Psychic connection or something?"
"Kinda sorta.. why?"
"Couldn't you ask him where he is?"
"Maybe... if you gave me a little Ching-ching."
"You want a Chingling?"
"No, some bang-bang!"
"You want an explosion?"
"No! Money!" Mesprit yelled, frustrated.
"You want money? Never mind, I'll just find Uxie by myself." Deoxys said, walking away.
"I'll come with you!" Mesprit cheered, floating beside him.
"No, you won't." Deoxys muttered. Mesprit appeared not to notice.

Section B
Azelf

Azelf concentrated on his reflection on the surface of the lake, silently willing it to disappear. He closed his eyes.
C'mon... c'mon...
He opened his eyes, and was dissapointed to find that his reflection was still there. He sighed.
I'll never be able to do it. I might as well give up. I'll never be accepted into the Psyclub. It's only for Pokemon who can truly use their Psychic powers to their fullest advantage.
In the distance, he heard singing. He used his Psychic powers to focus on it.

"76 bottles of lemonade on the wall, 76 bottles of lemonade! Take one down and pass it around, 75 bottles of lemonade on the wall! 75-"
"ARGH! Will you quit it with that stupid song? You've been singing it for the whole trip, it's driving me crazy, plus, you haven't even got the syllables right!" Deoxys yelled. Mesprit looked at him for a brief moment, then continued to sing.
"75 bottles of lemonade on the wall..."
Deoxys sighed.

"Hey! That's Mesprit! But who's that with him?"
Azelf focused on the figures in the distance to see Deoxys and Mesprit. Deoxys, from his face, was extremely annoyed. Mesprit continued to sing. Azelf teleported to in front of them.
"Azelf! Good to see ya, ol' buddy!" Mesprit yelled, squeezing Azelf in an extremely tight hug."
"Oof! Good to see-you-too!" Azelf shouted, prying Mesprit off of him. "What brings you here?"
"I'm following Deoxys!" Mesprit cheered.
"And he's been extremely annoying along the way." Deoxys said.
"That's Mesprit for you." Azelf responded, as Mesprit continued to float around and sing. "So what brings you here, Deoxys?"
"I'm trying to find Uxie, but with Mesprit on my tail, I might as well give up."
"Why? I'll just call him here now!"
"Really? Fantastic! Thank you! Mesprit would've done it, but he wanted money..."
Azelf raised his eyebrows.
"Well, he was right to ask for it. You think you're getting this for free?"

Section C
Uxie

Suddenly, a blue light appeared in between Azelf and Deoxys and Uxie teleported in.
"What is it this time?" He asked Azelf.
"We've got a customer." Azelf replied, pointing to Deoxys.
"And what do you want? Psychic powers? The power to shape-shift?"
"No. I need to get rid of Rayquaza."
"I see. Of course, I completely understand why. He is a horrible beast that this planet would be better off without, after all."
"Okay then... so, how does this work?"
"Simple. You give us money, we do what you want."
"I don't.. have... any money."
"Then you help us. And I don't mean just stand around and travel, I mean battle."
"I'm fine with that."
"All right. Azelf-Mesprit-let's go."
And so, the trio departed, along with Deoxys, out into the open plains in search of Rayquaza, Mesprit continuing to sing.

 

[Argetlam]

RE: Legendary Tales has come back from the dead! Chapter 10 is up!

Really good! Funny, totally awesome plot, and LOL at mesprit