Looking forward to locals with an Undaunted Bellossom free build

[AggroAmpharos]

Hey everyone, AggroAmpharos here. I have no idea what exactly it is that I am doing with this deck, but my intention is to take it to locals and get absolutely destroyed, just so I can say I did.

Anyway, this is also a little intro thing as well. I am AggroAmpharos from YouTube, and my links are in my signature, so you can check out what I am up to!

Getting to the point of this post... I am intending to go to locals this weekend, for the first time ever! (Not even kidding, I am 17, and I have never been to a local league...) Anyway, I fashioned this deck out of what I had left that was playable, because I really don't have the time or money to trade for the stuff necessary to build a top tier deck like MegaZone or ReshiBoar, or whatever the schtick you guys play these days. I play BelloWile, and I like it.

(You are free to offer constructive criticism if you like, because I am hoping to improve this a bit.)

2 Bellossom UD
2 Gloom UD
2 Oddish UD
1 Forretress UD (holo)
1 Forretress UD (rare)
3 Pineco UD
2 Mawile UD
1 Honchkrow UD
2 Murkrow UD
1 Flareon UD
2 Eevee UD (I currently have one of each of the Eevee UD, but I would rather run 2#48)
1 Cleffa HGSS
2 Pidgey TR

2 Cheerleader's Cheer
1 Cheren
1 Emcee's Chatter
2 Energy Returner
1 Flower Shop Lady
2 Interviewer's Questions
1 Judge
2 Pokemon Communication
2 Sage's Training
1 Super Rod
2 Twins

2 Prism Energy
1 Darkness Energy (special)
1 Darkness Energy (basic)
2 Metal Energy (special)
2 Metal Energy (basic)
7 Fire Energy
6 Grass Energy

So like I said, don't be too harsh with the replies, but if you have any "beginners" tips, they would be greatly appreciated!
~Aggro

 

[AggroAmpharos]

Bumpskies.

 

[Emperor]

Yeah i'm not seeing alot of hope for this deck. You're playing alot of random pokemon that don't benefit each other. It would seem you truly lack alot of legal pokemon so you just threw in whatever you had, huh? The best thing you can do is just play a 3-3-3 Bellosom line with a 3-3 Forretress with a 3rd Mawile and remove everything else apart from the Pidgey and Cleffa and focus on some kind of bomerang, "hit 'n run" style deck with a bit of healing. (all you Forretress should be the Gyro Ball Forretress) It won't yield alot of damage but it's the best i can think of with what i can see. If you want to then you can add some grass energy to use Bellosom as an attacker. but i advise against it as you could end up flipping zero or just one head and deal pitiful damage and put Bellosom to sleep.

EDIT: Another idea. This one would require you to obtain 3 more of the "Everybody Explode now" Forretress, 4 Defenders and some Pokemon Center. Want you want is Forretress set up with any combination of 3 Pineco and/or Forretress on the bench. Use Everybody Explode Now and deal 120 damage. Bellosom, Pokemon Center and Defender helps soften the recoil around the field.

 

[AggroAmpharos]

Thanks for the actual tips there Emperor, and yeah, for the record this was built purely out of legal cards, with little to no focus on a certain play style. I'll credit that to my just having got back into the game about 6 months ago.. So having little to work with, little knowledge of the competitive game, and not reading the cards all factors in... But I will try to make this a little more functional, I just wanted to have the groundwork critiqued!