Mario LP

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Urusai Urusai Urusai
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It's my first LP from a long time ago. Used iPhone Delight tutorial. Please Cn'C :3

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I'm not sure about this one Soul...at first glance it looks nice and amazing as always but then I saw that IMO there is too much black space around mario and the glowing lines in some places seem off.


Anyways nice job...way better than I'll ever make.
 
I really like the Mario and effects added around him.....however, the text dosent fit at all with the picture as a whole, and has no effects around it whatsoever.

If you took the text out, I'd be a happy camper :p

-Black Rayquaza
 
Honestly I like it, very well done, but as a perfectionist something really bugs me about this. The effects you used around Mario, the ones placed on top of him seem to look a little out of place. I mean I think I understand that it's because he's turning, but they seem a little strong. Also I would just take the text out all together, I didn't even notice it when I first glanced at it, then when I saw it, it just looked bad. So otherwise great job! Well done!
 
Wow! Great job Soul Seeker. It looks really cool. I love how you combined Mario and the Wii Wheel with the space and colorful background. They fit really well together in my opinion. :D
WP
 
Thanks for all your comments I'll update this tonight!

@ Kingdra King:
Well I saw this one or two weeks ago on www.gfxresource.com so checkout their tut part ;)
 
I like it a lot. Here is my critique:
The Text:
It doesn't really match the theme. It would look better with no text.

The outline on the right side:
This doesn't match at all. It would look good if your were doing something else with mario.

The rest:
Looks wonderful! I think it is very detailed. It must have taken a while!

Overall 9.2/10
Great Job!

(If you are wondering where the .2 comes from, don't ask. Because I don't know either.)
 
The text is actually pretty nice, for once :b. I just think that it should say something else though. The C4D's are great too man, except for the one white one that's really bright, it looks like cylinders or tubes or something, instead of those explosion like lines.
 
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