Writing Mewtwo Using Chidori

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Chapter 1: A uhm. Pleasent day..

Oneday Mewtwo was out enjoying himself, while walking around Kanto.
He did not intend on "killing" anything that day but he's strong and there are a lot of weak Pokemon out there. So a couple of baby Ratatta attacked him and he then destroyed them with a psywave.After that a few Pikachu approached him and shot lighting at him, he then used Psychic and threw the lighting right back at them, however while the lighting was heading at the three apmitys of Pokemon the lighting picked up speed shot right threw them. Seeing that he had made a mess, he threw there lifless bodies into an ocean(he hadn't planned that someone would be watching the whole thing).
 

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Chapter2: A mysterious wierdo.

After the events of chapter one Mewtwo decided i would be a good idea to start disquiseing himself as a little Chimeco, since everything had been trying to kill him for XP. So he put the little costume on and started "floating" about Kanto again.. After about 10-20 minutes of "floating" he was approched by a more or less , freak.
The mysterious figure said,"hay", and Mewtwo said,"hay is for horses",
and the mysterious figure said,"... anyway my name is Sasuke Uchiha".
Mewtwo then said,"my name is Mew-two", Sasuke then said,"nice to meet you kind sir", and so Mewtwo said,"what do you want?"
and Sasuke said this,"My family's been slaughtered and i have no real life, im eaisly corrupted and tormented by my older brother and i am mean to everyone because im insecure about my life" Mewtwo stared at Sasuke as if he where on fire. Mewtwo then said," look i get that your like wierd and stuff but, why are you pelting me with complaints about your life while im constanly getting attacked other Pokemon who want to kill me for XP." Sasuke then said,"my point is this im heading over to the Akatsuki's place to attemp to get revenge on the Akatsuki, and if i die, which i probaly will i wan't to teach someone the....." "yes?" Mewtwo said "the Chidori..." Mewtwo then said "if only i knew what was..." "It's a lighting-like ball of Chackra" Sasuke said Mewtwo then asked," Is Chackra anything like Poke-Power?" Sasuke then said, " Kinda... anyway i will now teach you how to use, first hold out your hand" "okay" Mewtwo said
"then pretend all of your telekinitic power is a liquid and push it to your palm.."
Well something happended.. i wet myself."
Mewtwo said then Sasuke said,"Wow that's too bad, just make sure you don't get me wet kay?" "okay" "anyway.. Try as hard as you can to focus your abilities in your palm.." "somethings happening.. Oh my gosh! somethings forming in my hand.." Mewtwo said "yes now pretend that your a steel wall and you have been releasing a little bit of your power every second. now destroy that wall in a flash of fury and release it from your palm."
" My palm's tingling" It was then obvious somthing powerfull was forming in Mewtwo's hand. Mewtwo then said, "I-it's getting bigger!" Lighting began flying everywhere and a chirping sounding like a thousand Pidgey started and Sasuke shouted over the noise and said, "Release now with all your power into a tree!!!!" Mewtwo ran towards a tree and time seemed as if it were slowing, and within the blink of an eye the tree
was gone and all that remained was a large crater....
 
we all love grammar. And spelling :D

anyway lulz at mewtwo meeting naruto characters! i wanna see that on TV :p
 
LoneTyranitar said:
"My family's been slaughtered and I have no real life, im eaisly corrupted and tormented by my older brother and I am mean to everyone because im insecure about my life"
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Hilarious!
pretty good so far.
 
i don't really like mixed stories, but whatever, generally it looks good enough :p

and yeah, the quote's hilarious XD
 
Lol i did my best but im still working on my writing skills since i keep forgetting things while im writing, like the whole time i was writing i kept saying to myself, "make sure to get that Chimeco suit off,make sure to get that Chimeco suit off". So i will probaly have to write a bonus chapter called, "20-30 minutes of floating".
 
Chapter3: The Aftermath of Chidori..

Mewtwo stared at the crater where the tree was, it was a very large crater probaly the size of a average persons room, although it wasn't quite as big as it would have been if Mewtwo had just used Psychic, picked up a rock, and bashed it into the ground.
Sasuke's chin hit the ground, he though to himself "(Not only did he instantly destroy a tree the size of a larve van, he also made a huge crater.. I have been using Chidori for 4-5 years now and have not been able to destroy anything short of a small boulder.)" "Hmm.. That move wasn't too bad wierdo, i mean Sasuke. That was my first use and i was not quite focusing all my Poke-power in my palm so maybe in a couple of uses it will gey better:)". Sasuke nearly fell over. " You know i think i might try my Chidori now actually" Sasuke said " Let her rip" Mewtwo yelled. So after about 30-40 seconds of charging(since Sasuke wasn't using his curse mark)the chirping Pidgey noise started and the blue lighting formed Sasuke charged another tree(probaly a little bigger than Mewtwo's).. At first it appeared as if the tree was completly unscathed, but then the tree fell over leaving a large stump. " I will admit your Childori or whatever is a little cleaner than mine but mine's more of a pop or bang of that blue electricty stuff, maybe like a lighting strike but not quite electricty." Mewtwo said "(i think mines cooler)" Sasuke said under his breath, " Anyway im of too go kill all Akatsukis and like i said before im probaly going to die so goodbye forever" Sasuke said "Yaa cya im going to practice my Chidori over there.." Mewtwo said.
Sasuke than started running in his cool ninja-like way, with the wind blowing in his hair and the sun shinging on his face, he then tripped bashing his face into a rock, he quickly got up and shouted," Im okay!!!"
Though to Mewtwo it was obviuos(SP?) he had a bloody nose and was crying..
 
Sorry everyone for the lack of updates, i keep managing to get my comp taken away.... Anyway the chapter can be expected soon, like in the next three days or so. And if you got bored while reading my fic read
Rykeus's, his is a lot longer(and better IMO).
 
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