Finished MLP:FiM-Friendship Divided (A raging windstorm)

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"Uh no thanks." Love said walking away. 'Pinkie is not going to make me tickle ponies no matter what.'
 
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OOC: Looks like you need some more persuading :p

IC: Another pony runs up and starts beating Love with his hooves. "CLOWNS...YOU WON'T GET ME CLOWN." He yells as he hits love.

"Hurry use this." Pinkie says as she hands Love a feather.

OOC: CLOWNS :O
 
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OoC: Whats odd is that I'm horrified of clowns.

IC: "Ow, no ow I'm not ow tickling this ow pony!" she manged to say.
 
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"Now I'm sore, ow. Thanks Pinkie." Love said. She then walked away. "But I'm still not tickling ponies! Thats just awkward!"
 
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"Hee at least try this." Pinkie said as she caught up with Love. She handed her a big gun. "♪It's fuuuullllll of FEEEEAAAAAATHERS♪" She sang out.

OOC: FEATHER CANNON FTW :D
 
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"Have you lost your mind? I said I'm not involved in this shananagin. So tah-tah." She said. "And nothing will change my mind." Love walked away. But she toke the big gun full of feathers, just in case.
 
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Dec watched as the ponies, her friends, started running around with feathers, tickling those in their hallucinated state. Dec looked in her immediate area, but there were no feathers around her. Sadly, she sat down. She looked around, and couldn't see her friends. They were all off somewhere else. There was nopony in sight. Suddenly, Dec began to feel lightheaded, and had to lie down. Then, without provocation, she blacked out.

Dec awoke in a strange place. As her eyes couldn't adjust very well, she tried to look around. There seemed to be some mixture of white and blue, and some brown blobs moving around. As her eyes came into focus, she saw what was happening more clearly. She was back in her hometown, Cloudsdale. The clouds were still white and full of fluffy joy, a welcome change from the dilapidated state of the current Cloudsdale. However, as she looked, things got worse. Much worse. She saw the remains of one of her inventions off in the distance. A mangled tuba, with huge dents, in a blackened mess, with the pipes and valves sticking out in all the wrong directions sat next to a pile of apples, or more like applesauce, from the way it was pulped. A hammer, with the handle a good distance from the head, and with the head all distorted from heat, sat next to the mangled disaster. A huge whole with black, charred clouds lining sat in the middle of Cloudsdale. It seemed that it had hit the town square, and sending numerous houses in the surrounding area down into the empty sky, too. The mayor's house was also at the end of the town, which, was no longer there. That still wasn't the worst. Several ponies lay in the blast zone, with their bodies scarred, charred, and twisted. One in particular caught Dec's eye. It had no mane left, and it's cutie mark was barely visible through the blackened flank. What appeared to be a leg sat off to one side? However, Dec could make out the pony: The mayor. It can't be…! Dec thought in horror. But it was. This was the incident that had gotten her exiled from Cloudsdale. Forever.

Almost magically, Shade walked out from behind one of the buildings. "Shade!" She cried in relief. Sh flew over to him, and landed in front of him. "I'm so glad to see you!" Shade looked at her and said, pointing at the mess that Dec had made, "Did you do this?" Dec, rather sheepishly, said, "Um, yes, yes I did, Shade…" He, with an air of authority, pulled out a Radio and said, "We need all units here. Quickly!" Dec, in momentary confusion, watched as Shade lunged at her with a pair of hoof-cuffs. "Shade, what are you–" She was cut off by another lunge from Shade.

To Dec's horror, she watched as around a dozen giant spiders with wings crawled up behind Shade. Shade gave the order. "Now, get her!" The spiders, and Shade, took to the air, with quick speed and agility. Dec tried to fly away, but she found her wings were as useless as they were before she found Rainbow Dash. She hovered in the air for a few seconds, but hobbled in a most counter-productive way, and found herself back on the ground within a matter of moments. She found that running was going to be faster than flying in this situation. She ran away, with tears in her eyes, as Shade and the army of flying spiders flew after her as speeds she couldn't outrun. "Why would you do this to me, Shade? Why?!" She called out, with her voice choked with tears.

In Ponyville, Dec stood up. Then, with condensed pupils, she ran around, yelling, in a mad craze, "Why would you do this to me, Shade? Why?!"


OoC: I thought it would be cool for the RPers to get a look inside the mind of an actual victim. (And, I really an afraid of spiders, so that was creepy to write)
 
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OOC: ? I'm really confused. I may just read that like 4 times before I actually get it.
 
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"There's no time to be sitting around!" White exclaimed, he grabbed a feather with his mouth and rushed towards the crazed ponies.

Finding one, he somehow managed to pin the fidgety pony to the ground and tickled it like crazy.

"Tickle tickle tickle." he said, rubbing the feather on the ponies' stomach.
 
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Love walked by ponies that were crazy. But she ignored them and continued. "Too many crazy ponies. I wonder what got into them?" She saw everything messed up. "Tickling one pony at a time will take forever. So lets hope the other ponies can take care of this. Because I'm so not helping." Love saw Dec running around in circles saying 'Why would you do this to me Shade? Why?' "Uh yeah." She just passed Dec and continued walking.
 
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catutie said:
OOC: ? I'm really confused. I may just read that like 4 times before I actually get it.

I don't blame you, catutie. It was confusing, but it it was meant to be, in a way. Basically, Dec turned into a crazy pony. Most of it was her nightmare, which was why everything was a little bit jumbled together; a mixture of Dec's (and my) fears. A little bit showed her time in Ponyville, before and after she turned crazy. It was a lot longer than it looked when I was typing it. But it was just so fun to write! :3

By the way, sorry if that messed up any story plans…
 
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Love stopped and walked back to where Dec was. "Dec, are you okay?" she asked.
 
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Dec was running through Cloudsdale and managed to lose Shade and his army of giant flying spiders. She cautiously looked around every corner before she turned, making sure that she souldn't be ambushed. As she was walking, she ran right into a pony. She stumbled down, shook her head, and looked up. The pony had a long light blue mane, with a violet body. Its wings were large and majestic, looking very powerful, capable of very fast and efficient flying. Dec knew this pony: Flierune. Flierune was one of her best friends. They had known each other since they were little fillies. Flierune, confused, asked, "Dec, are you okay?" Dec, out of breath, replied, "I can't talk now, Flierune, I have to get out of here! Shade is after me!" Tears welled in her eyes again as she took a last glimpse of her friend before she darted down another dark alleyway and lost her friend forever.

In Ponyville, Dec cocked her head, looking at Love with a lost look. "I can't talk now, Flierune, I have to get out of here! Shade is after me!" Then, tears started falling from Dec's cheek, hitting the ground with a loud splash, as Dec darted off into an alleyway, disappearing from Love's view.
 
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"I'll go follow her and see if I can set her right." White said to Love, following Dec.

"Dec, are you sure you're not imaging this?" White asked, "I'm sure Shade wouldn't do such a thing if he really cares for you. These images you saw of the giant spiders may be an illusion cast by the black smoke."

"Please, I'm here to help you."
 
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Sweet Dawn Berlitz said:
"There's no time to be sitting around!" White exclaimed, he grabbed a feather with his mouth and rushed towards the crazed ponies.

Finding one, he somehow managed to pin the fidgety pony to the ground and tickled it like crazy.

"Tickle tickle tickle." he said, rubbing the feather on the ponies' stomach.

OOC: White has the right idea :D I think we have our Manehatten plans so...ya just some buffing and it should be good.

Decmaster said:
I don't blame you, catutie. It was confusing, but it it was meant to be, in a way. Basically, Dec turned into a crazy pony. Most of it was her nightmare, which was why everything was a little bit jumbled together; a mixture of Dec's (and my) fears. A little bit showed her time in Ponyville, before and after she turned crazy. It was a lot longer than it looked when I was typing it. But it was just so fun to write! :3

By the way, sorry if that messed up any story plans…

OOC: No you didn't ruin any plans...but you gave me an idea.

IC: A loud boom was heard and a frantic pony was nailed with a large mass of feathers. "And stay...down HEEHEE *snort*"

"Run fer yer lives" A small voice yelled.

"Oh hey Apple Bloom, looks like your all bett-" Pinkie said till she was hit with a wave of bunnies. (YESH....MOAR BUNNEHS)

The bunnies swamped the whole town and there fur tickled everyone

"Bunnies? HEEHEE HA That is more HEE HAHAHAHA random than me HEEHEEHEEHEE" Pinkie said as she was laughing from the tickling.
 
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Just as fast as it arrived the bunnies were gone. Everyone was finally back to normal. Pony's started looking around trying to figure out what happened and where they were. A pony that had diamond saddles and a jewel filled dress walked up to White. "MMM I NEEEEEEEEEED MS. RARITY"

OOC: Sapphire Shores....CA you need to do the accents from now on...
 
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Dec turned a corner, and trotted nervously into a narrow alleyway. As she walked along it cautiously, a spider, smaller, and without wings, jumped out from behind some object shrouded in darkness. As she turned around to run, another spider turned around the corner, leaving her with no escape plan. As the spiders closed in, she then realized that she had wings. Unstable, but they would do. She took off into the air and clumsily flew up, without knowledge of what was above her.

As she flew into the skies of Cloudsdale, she came level into Shade and his posse of spiders, who immediately formed a sphere around Dec. "Escape now." Shade sneered. With nothing else to do, Dec charged at one of the spiders. The spider prepared for it's prey. However, at the last second, Dec's faulty wings flew her off to the right, catching the spider by surprise and letting Dec veer out of the sphere. "Fool!" Shade yelled angrily. "I'll deal with you later. For now, get her!" The spiders flew at unnatural speeds towards Dec. Her spastic flight pattern confused the spiders, allowing Dec some freedom to try to get away.

In Ponyville, Dec suddenly took to the air as the bunnies invaded. She started flying in spastic patterns similar to a hot air balloon in a hurricane. "Gotta… get… away…" Dec repeated over and over.

Dec flew frantically away from the spiders relentlessly pursuing her. She could feel her wings tiring, like the life was being drained from her. She could see, as she looked back, Shade chasing after her, with a triumphant smile on his face and an evil glint in his eye. "Why, Shade?" She was crying openly now. She couldn't see where she was going, but that didn't matter. All that mattered was escaping. As she flew, she attempted looking back, and could barely see the cloud that held Cloudsdale. Have… I flown… that far… already? She wondered in dismay.

Without provocation, her wings stopped. She felt herself start to fall, slowly at first, but then faster, as gravity did it's work. She looked back, with the world spiraling out of control, and could see, very faintly, Shade, talking into a radio, saying something about her and exile, and then flying back towards Cloudsdale. Then, she shut her eyes and braced for impact.

Back in Ponyville, Dec suddenly started plummeting from the sky. She was very high up, and she fell with no indication that she was even alive. She hit the ground with massive force, right on her back. The impact jarred her from her dream, but also took her consciousness from her, too. She didn't have a second in the real world before it faded to black.

She awoke to find a bunny on her chest, looking her right in the eye. Dec quickly scrambled away from it. "No, no! I didn't do anything!" Then, as she looked around, she found that she was back in Ponyville. Did… did I land here? But Cloudsdale isn't over Ponyville… Dec thought, confused.
 
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"Uhh...we don't know where Rarity is, ma'am." White said nervously, "We're setting out to go find her."
 
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