Finished MLP:FiM-Friendship Divided (A raging windstorm)

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White's rage built.

"Rainbow's gone...and without her...this is what I've become...a monster..." White said, tears streaming down his face. He then flew up into the sky.

"YOU WILL ALL SUFFER MY WRATH!" White exclaimed, as his anger spawned another wicked thunderstorm overhead.

Rain came pouring down in sheets and thunder and lightning streaked across the sky.
 
"White, you need to calm down. Rainbow is not dead. Now relax, please." Cool Dash tried his best to talk in a calm voice.

Love took action. She flew into White, rain pouring down on her.
 
"Without her...I'm nothing..." White said, crying, "She's my whole world! And right now, my world is crushed."

White flew down resting at his love's unconcious body.

"Please Rainbow!" White exclaimed, "Please be alright! You mean so much to me, I can't possibly think about living without you in my life and by my side!"

Tears streamed down White's face falling down onto Rainbow's body.
 
Love sighed. She flew over to White dodging lightning. She landed next to him.

"Don't worry she'll be fine."
 
Lightning and rain came down on the 4 objects. Nothing happened to Rocky and Sir Lintsalot. (You can't shock a rock...) Lightning struck Mr Turnip making electricity run through his bucket. A sudden explosion happened to Mr Turnip from all the electricity stored in his bucket. "NONONONONONONONONONONO" *BOOM* was the last thing heard by him.

Madam la Flour ran around in circles avoiding the lightning striking all around. The sack of flour was helpless, the lightning finally struck it and Madam la Flour burst into flames. "HELP ME AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" She yelled running in circles on fire. A pile of flour lay on the ground in a matter of seconds.

Pinkie was struck and flew into a tree. She wasn't hurt and got right back up. "If you die they will have no chance of stopping me." The voice says. Pinkie suddenly came to her senses.

"WOAH...you guys are smiling." She says as her hair inflates again. "Hey...I feel funny is there something going on?" She asks as she rises into the air. Twilight's shadow returns and has Pinkie in a magical hold. Pinkie begins slamming against the ground. "WEEEEE, OUCH, WEEEEEE, OUCH, WEEEEE, OUCH." Pinkie yells as she hits the ground over and over.

"WHY ARE YOU ENJOYING THIS?!" The voice yells confused.

"It's like OUCH a roller OUCH coaster but OUCH it hurts HEHE *snort* OUCH." Pinkie says giggling.

OOC: So...either you punch a rock...or lint...or a shadow...I'm not sure which is worse.
 
Love looks so confused. She flew into the shadow with Cool Dash behind.

"This is weird." Love said.
 
"This shadow is going to keep interfering with us," White said, "We seriously need to destroy it once and for all."
 
Shade couldn't think straight. What should I do?! "White!? What can I do to help?!" Shade asked him as Pinkie Pie came right at him. He ducked just in time. But she slaped against a rock. Ouch! I literaly felt that one! He thought in disgust. But she seemed to not have any scratches on her pink coat as she was hurled again. Dang... She's like... Made of stone or somethin'!
 
"Pinkie Pie..." White said, "She's not your normal pony...she's has a higher pain threshold than other ponies."

"What you can do, is help us," White continued, "Help us defeat the shadow in any way possible!"
 
OOC: Alright...I seriously want your opinions on this...should I

1. Skip some parts and get straight to the finale

2. Try to cram all of the stuff planned into 1 week

3. Hope that this thing stays and just go as normal

4. Keep going as normal and just see how far we get and then just write the end based on your characters attitudes and how they act. (If I do this option I may actually kill of characters :p. Ya know...for dramatic effect.)

Please...PLEASE let me know which on you guys want

IC: "As you wish" The voice said and the shadow released Pinkie and disappeared into thin air. (I slowly have been thinking up a plan for this shadow.)

Love and Cool Dash land on the ground missing the shadow by a small second. White's bolt follows and shocks both of them. Rocky flies at Cool Dash and hits him in the flank.

Sir Lintsalot flew at Dec and started biting her with it's new sharp teeth.

OOC: I'm gonna try and dedicate today to writing.
 
"Uh... Great. Now we have to kill objects made up from weird Pinkie Pie's imagination!"
Shade paused as an idea slowly came to his head. "Pinkie! Call off your pets!" Was all shade could say. He didn't know what to call Rocky and Sir Lintalot. Animals? Objects?
It was as if they actually real...
OOC: I would go for... Honestly... i really want to do...GAH! I don't know!!! :(
Uhh....
Erm...
#...4. NO! 1! NOOO 4!! Yes...4 i go for 4. I wanna see what you'll do to my character. Anything really. And i don't even care if the killing of Shade is bad.
 
BrOkenICE said:
"I agree."
Stormy walked from the crowd to join the conversation.
"I'm Stormy. I think he's a notable person."
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OOC: Reading this from the begining...will let me point out all of your mistakes :p. Person?! He's a pony silly.

SDB...what is your pick between the 4? I like the idea of 4 but I want to have you guys actually see what the real enemy is instead of me just writing it out...

IC: Pinkie ran over to Sir Lintsalot. "Hey you better cut it out, STOP I SAY." Pinkie said trying to reason with the piece of lint.

White hit the piece of lint while Pinkie was still yelling at it. The lint floated down peacefully and then sprung up again. Pinkie looked back and saw Rainbow's body was gone. "Hey...where is Rainbow..." Pinkie said scratching her head.

OOC: Uhhhhh yaaaaaaaa Dec is only being eaten alive...no need to like...do anything :p
 
If it's 4, please don't kill of any characters. We've gone so far together, doing that would be stupid.

"Rainbow...Rainbow's unconscious." White said, tears streaming down his face, "She's just clinging onto life..."

White then glowed a pitch black before attacking the rock pile with a crushing Super Kick.
 
IC: "Dec!" He didn't realise that she was crying in pain by...! Lint? "What the heck... Whatever!" He pushed through the leaves to get close to Dec. As if the thing had a nose and smelled him comming, The ball of lint jumped off of dec and bit on Shade's nose. "AHH! Get off you stupid piece of manuer!" He punched the thing off of his snout and it fell harmlessly on the ground. " Ugg... little blood... But I can manage!" Shade walked over to Dec. "Are..Are you ok Dec?"

catutie said:
OOC: Reading this from the begining...will let me point out all of your mistakes :p. Person?! He's a pony silly.

I like the idea of 4 but I want to have you guys actually see what the real enemy is instead of me just writing it out...

OOC: Uhhhhh yaaaaaaaa Dec is only being eaten alive...no need to like...do anything :p
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OOC: First, I don't think I ever made mistakes here exept for...1.
Second, You can tell us how the enemy forms and the type it all out when the Fourm Games and More closes. (Hopefully NOT!)
Third, I noticed Dec being bit by that ball of lint, But Shade let it slide for some reason... He's like me. Forgets things most of the time... ;)
 
ShayminTails said:
"Please to meet you all" said Rainbow Heart "I'm Rainbow Heart, my goal is to one day be a guardian for Princess Celestia" said Rainbow Heart.
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OOC: Well...he obviously didn't do a good job of keeping his goal as Celestia is gone...

Sweet Dawn Berlitz said:
If it's 4, please don't kill of any characters. We've gone so far together, doing that would be stupid.

"Rainbow...Rainbow's unconscious." White said, tears streaming down his face, "She's just clinging onto life..."

White then glowed a pitch black before attacking the rock pile with a crushing Super Kick.
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>_> This is a poll...pick one from the options 1-4...and if we do 4 I will make the death honorable and for the good of the team...this has been a bitter sweet RPG so far. You may have killed Onyx but you also killed 8 rebels trying to help you out. You may have gotten AJ but you also destroyed the buffalo tribe by starting the war. You may have killed Windstorm but it took the sacrifice of Crash's life. Nothing comes without a price :p

Rainbow is safe in my hands...wait where did she go? Oh I found her HEY PUT THAT KNIFE DOWN RAINBOW, OH GOD DOESN'T THAT HURT?! See...safe with me :D

shiny umbreon said:
IC: "Dec!" He didn't realise that she was crying in pain by...! Lint? "What the heck... Whatever!" He pushed through the leaves to get close to Dec. As if the thing had a nose and smelled him comming, The ball of lint jumped off of dec and bit on Shade's nose. "AHH! Get off you stupid piece of manuer!" He punched the thing off of his snout and it fell harmlessly on the ground. " Ugg... little blood... But I can manage!" Shade walked over to Dec. "Are..Are you ok Dec?"

OOC: First, I don't think I ever made mistakes here exept for...1.
Second, You can tell us how the enemy forms and the type it all out when the Fourm Games and More closes. (Hopefully NOT!)
Third, I noticed Dec being bit by that ball of lint, But Shade let it slide for some reason... He's like me. Forgets things most of the time... ;)
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1? What 1?...

Ummm it's a little more complicated than that. I wrote a prologue as I said. It explains a little of where this thing started and you may be able to figure it out from there...thus I kind of don't want to show it to you guys right now...well I guess it will tell you guys where you need to go...*cough* THE RUINS *cough*

Nice...forgetting to help your girlfriend out :p. Like a true gentlemen :p

IC: Rocky takes the kick and one of his 3 rocks shatters into bits. The rock frowned for once and screamed in pain. Rocky then split in 2 and each piece grew a mouth.

Sir Lintsalot headed toward Love teeth ready to bite into her flesh.
 
OOC: Writing takes a long time...

IC: White misses the rocks as he lets his anger get to him. You hear a soft sound off in the distance.
 
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