Writing Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Author Address - August 14)

RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Intro, Part 1)

I'm splitting my NaNo writing between this and my other story, Crimson Road. However, my posts will be more based on "is this a good part to stop and post" rather than just posting whatever I've written for the day. For example, I actually wrote about half of another section to this story yesterday, but didn't get to a good "stopping point" in that section, so I only posted to the end of the previous section. Longer chapters might be a few days between posts, for example if I don't write enough in a single day to finish a battle, I'll just wait for the next day to finish it.

So, I guess, technically I am updating every day (either to this or to CR), the results just may or may not be posted the same day.

PS: Thanks for picking up on my word dyslexia. Sometimes it's hard to catch them all, especially since they're never caught by the software.
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Intro, Part 1)

Introduction, Part 2, for your enjoyment.

William walked across the deck of the ship, mentally calling himself five kinds of fool. He wasn’t sure what angered him more, the fact that he himself hadn’t noticed the hologram inset in the invitation, or the fact that the punk in the red leather had.

Either way, it was precious time lost investigating this Diamant Industries. He’d certainly never heard of the company before now, if it was even real. He had done a quick search with his PokéEtch on the beach, but nothing had come up, and now both that device and his laptop had been confiscated by the strange woman attendant. He, of course, had other devices hidden among his baggage, but he would have to wait for private quarters before he’d be able to use them without anyone knowing.

In the meantime, he had other things to investigate.

The common area of the ship was a large room towards the center, partially protected by the elements with a ceiling and four walls, but large open doorways at each corner opening onto the deck. A half set of stairs led down from each doorway to the recessed room which was furnished elegantly for a sea-going vessel. The walls were tastefully appointed; the only thing standing out awkwardly was a projector screen taking up one wall. The couches and chairs were made of plush, soft leather, and tables positioned intermittently offered tantalizing snacks and drinks.

A larger table in the middle held something more interesting: a bowl filled with small, electronic devices. William walked over and picked one up. It was a slim device, similar to the Holo Casters popular in the Kalos region. These were thinner and lighter than a Holo Caster, however, little more than a piece of glass or plastic with metal caps around the corners.

As his thumb pressed onto the glass, it left a glowing blue fingerprint behind, and a cheerful female voice said, “Acknowledging.” William stared at the screen for a moment as a series of lights ran over the screen, eventually forming a glowing diamond shape. A short, brilliant flash caused him to blink and flinch away.

“Welcome, William Conor,” the device announced as he looked back at the device. “Accessing apps and contacts.” The diamond disappeared and was replaced with a series of names and faces, his own appearing alphabetically after “Lisa M. Callimede” and before “Idalia Fisher.” His picture – a surprised, half-blinking face – was likely taken just moments before when the device flashed. The other faces identified the other contestants that had already picked up their own gadgets, with a few faces missing.

On a whim, William pressed the name of one of the contests, Ririka E. Knighton, a pretty blond girl he remembered seeing on the beach. She must have figured out how to set the photograph setting since, unlike most of the others, her picture was actually posed for with a smile and a victory symbol. As he touched the name, her photo expanded to fill the entire screen, and then a larger, almost full-size, holo projection appeared above the screen, showing Ririka against a background of the sea and sky.

“Oh, hello. You must be William.” Ririka smiled and waved. “Aren’t these new Holo Casters just brilliant? I do hope we’ll get to keep them after the tournament.”

William smiled. “I guess this must be what that woman meant when she said we’d get alternate communicators.”

“Yes, indeed, and a shame they’re limited to radio communications. Kayla and I have been playing around with the features, and they’re very sophistic– oh, guess it’s time to go.”

The device trilled softly once as Ririka hung up and the holo dissolved. When William raised his head, he saw why she had hung up. The ramp was now removed from the dock, and the woman in the suit was standing at the top of one of the entranceways, waiting patiently. Ririka and two others, a boy and a girl, all came down from the top deck, bringing all 17 contestants into lounge area.

Once everyone was seated, the woman stepped forward and peered into the bowl. “Oh, good, it looks like you all have received your communicators.”

“His isn’t working,” A young woman in a lab coat called from her spot, perched on the armrest of a chair near the back. Based on the picture on the phone, William knew that her name was Juliet. She was pointing towards a young teenager with an orange and a white cap. Most people were looking at the youngster in question, so it was likely that only William noticed the look of surprise and recognition on the face of the young, rich girl that had been late earlier, one Terra Reynolds.

The boy in the cap blushed beat red, and William was instantly suspicious. No tech problem should cause that amount of embarrassment. “It won’t take my fingerprint, Miss."

The young woman who had come down with Ririka, Kayla according to William's list, had been playing around with her phone device during the conversation, and she suddenly looked up. “You must be Justin Ryder, right? That’s the only name without a face.”

“Er, yeah, that’s me, though most people just call me by my nickname, Leon.”

“Well, let’s see if we can take care of your problem, Mr. Leon.” The woman in blue walked over to Leon’s seat and bent forward, grabbing his arm with one strong hand. With the other, she pressed the tip of her index finger against his, and Leon yelped sharply. Before Leon’s cry was even finished, the woman pressed his index finger against the screen of the device, which lit up instantly with a flash.

“Welcome, Justin Ryder. Accessing apps and contacts.”

Leon’s face was flushed and sweating, but he looked at the woman with gratitude. “Thank you.”

The woman nodded then walked to the side of the room with a projector screen. “Please take a moment to listen to a message from your sponsor, Mr. Diamant.” She pressed a button on the side of the screen and the lights in the vessel shut off as the projector came to life.

On the screen was a man of indiscernible age. His hair was pure white and fell to his shoulders, but his face and posture were not that of an old man. Indeed, his face was almost as blemish-free as the woman’s, though William instantly wrote it off as plastic surgery. His clothing was of a fashionable cut, white material decorated with silver trim and adornments. In short, he looked like one of the foppish nobility of Kalos, albeit one with more style than most, and with a foppish smirk that looked out of place on his face.

“Welcome, contestants, to my vessel and to the wonderful opportunities that await you,” he announced, spreading his arms wide. “Within the hour you will be transported to my island, the Isle of Tajna, where the tournament will occur.”

As Mr. Diamant spoke, a photograph of the island appeared behind him on the screen, a rocky, tree-filled place with cliffs for coasts. No scale was given, but based on context William guessed that the island was relatively small, smaller than Jubilife City at least. He didn’t have much time to focus on the map, though, as Mr. Diamont continued his exposition.

“For the next hour, my assistant, Safiri, will provide refreshments for you and your Pokémon, to help you relax while you still can. Once you reach the island, we will show you the tournament bracket, and the tournament will begin immediately.”

“What?!” Several people called out at once. Drinks were spilled and jimmies rustled as the surprised contestants turned to each other and the woman, now known to be the mentioned Safiri, for confirmation. Safiri merely bowed her head and gestured back towards the projector screen.

“After a battle to warm everyone up, we will take dinner, followed by another battle by starlight, then you will be shown to your rooms for this evening.” On screen, Diamant tilted his head and smiled. “I know the schedule seems tight, but there is little sightseeing to be done on the island, and I’m sure you’re all anxious to receive your prize money and get back to your lives.”

Diamant blew a kiss towards the audience and bowed deeply. “I shall see you soon, on the Isle of Tajna.”

The video disappeared as the light turned back and the contestants were left in a daze. “Oh dear, I hope we’re not fighting first, I haven’t even had a chance to brush Oshawott’s fur!” one girl exclaimed, rushing out of the room with a Pokéball clenched in her hand. The other trainers similarly started fussing and preparing their Pokémon, none of them paying the slightest bit of attention to Safiri, the food, or anyone else.

None of them except William, that is. He grabbed his communicator and walked out onto the deck of the ship, trying to find a place with a bit of privacy. Settling for a lifeboat near the stern of the ship, he hunched over and studied the communicator, memorizing the names and faces of the other contestants. After all, it was possible that one of them was the person he was here to find, the person he’d dedicated his life to catching.

As he scrolled through the names and faces, he immediately wrote most of them off. While he himself was proof that a youthful face could disguise something deeper, he couldn’t believe that any of the young teenage kids in the group could have been a part of something so terrible when they were so young. The only one of real interest was the Justin/Leon kid, but whatever strangeness that kid was involved in was likely something unrelated.

There were a number of older contestants, though. Two women, Lisa and Shirley according to the phone, seemed to know each other and had spent most of their time chatting to one another. They also looked vaguely familiar to him in some way that he just couldn’t spot. The hobo guy, James, was also old enough to be involved, as was the dark-haired Idalia.

Oh, don’t worry, I’m not forgetting about you, pal. William smiled grimly as he looked at the awkward photo of Edward Hughs, the smug, smirking guy in the red leather jacket that had pointed out the logo hidden in the invitation to everyone on the beach. Although William hated to assign suspicion so early on in a case, he couldn’t deny that he thought of Edward as his top suspect, even higher than the mysterious, fake-looking Mr. Diamant.

As he walked back towards the lounge area to grab a soda and some chips, he couldn’t help but notice Edward standing at the bow of the ship, hand raised to keep the glare out of his eyes as he looked ahead toward their destination.

***

Forty minutes later, Lisa leaned against a wall towards the front of the ship, watching idly as they pulled into a small cove on the north side of the island. On the deck in front of her, Shirley was working up a sweat, practicing moves with her Purugly and paying little attention to their surroundings.

“We’re almost there, y’know,” Lisa said, her eyes still focused on the island they were approaching. With huge cliffs on all sides, this small bay seemed the only way on or off the island, and she didn’t like entering somewhere without an escape route in mind. Her gaze scanned the beach leading up to the giant rock formations that surrounded the narrow entrance to the cove, then dropped to the crystal clear water beneath them. At worse, they could swim for it if the need arose; it wouldn’t be a pleasant trip, but they would survive.

“Are you sure you don’t want to get any practice in before we land?” Shirley asked, breaking Lisa out of her contemplation.

“Oh, nah, I’ll be fine. You were always more serious about this sort of thing than me anyway.” Lisa took a moment to take a nice good look at her friend and former partner. In the nearly three years since Team Galactic was brought down, Shirley had really begun to come into her own. Her eyes burned with a spirit and determination that she’d never had while fighting for Cyrus, and both her and her Purugly were in top-fighting form.

But the best thing, in Lisa’s eyes, was that she smiled more often. She had never seen her friend smile as much as she had since they met up on the beach, and she shared with Lisa the adventures she’d had while traveling through Unova and beating the league. Her face broke into a wide grin and shined with the pride of herself and her Pokémon. Hearing everything she’d accomplished, Lisa couldn’t blame her for being as happy as she was. She deserved every bit of it.

“Well, I may work hard,” Shirley joked, punching her friend playfully in the arm, “but you’ve got all the intuition. It takes me days to formulate strategies that you could think up on the spot.”

Lisa smirked. “You’re giving me far too much credit. In any event, I didn’t come here to win.”

Shirley’s smile drooped and she cocked her head in confusion. “You didn’t? Then why’d you bother coming?”

“Don’t you think all this,” Lisa waved her hands around, indicating the boat, the island, their surroundings, “is a bit much? I mean, seriously, one hundred million dollars for a tournament? Even for trainers like you, I mean, don’t get me wrong, you’re good, but there’s no entrance fee, no publicity, nada. So why’s the guy doing it? What’s in it for him?”

Shirley looked at her friend skeptically and raised an eyebrow. “Maybe you spent too much time with Cyrus after all. Not everyone does things just so they can get something in return, you know. The world isn’t inherently selfish.”

“Maybe not all of it, but most of it,” Lisa shot back. “You don’t see rich f**ks like that Diamant constantly throwing money around just for the hell of it, do you?”

“Not usually, no.”

“In fact, I’ve never even heard of this guy, nor his company. Usually these rich guys, the ones that give money out to causes and sh*t, they’re all over the news like; newspaper people can’t get enough of ‘em.” As Lisa talked, she realized she was getting so worked up that her east-side city accent was starting to come through, and she forced herself to calm her speech. “I just think something might be up is all. That’s why I came, plain and simple. If anything bad is going on, I want to put a stop to it.”

“You think this guy might be another Cyrus?” Shirley asked soberly.

“I dunno who he is, but I’m going to find out.”

While the two friends were having their conversation, the boat eased onto a dock located at the mouth of a narrow river that flowed into the cove. Safiri, the unsettling woman designated as Diamant’s assistant, clapped her hands to get everyone’s attention. Most of the other contestants were already on the port side of the ship, waiting to disembark, and Shirley quickly recalled Purugly and grabbed the small luggage she had brought. “Are you coming?”

Lisa nodded and grabbed her own duffel bag, following behind Shirley. The two were the last to disembark, and as Lisa stepped onto the ramp, Safiri followed closely behind her. The presence of the woman made Lisa anxious for reasons she couldn’t quite understand, and so she almost jumped out of her skin when the woman clamped a cold, heavy arm on her shoulder.

“I assure you,” Safiri said in a flat, dead tone and they descended the ramp, “that my master’s motives are most sincere. You would do well to focus your thoughts on success, rather than leaning towards useless conjecture.”

“Yes, ma’am,” Lisa replied, still shaken from the sudden touch. Safiri removed her arm as they stepped out onto the coast and quickly walked to the head of the group, leading them onward through the sand to what appeared to be a cave entrance in the rock ahead. It wasn’t a far walk, but one of the other contestants was struggling with her luggage until a young man in a red jacket helped her by grabbing two of them.

Three suitcases for a tournament that won’t last longer than a couple days. Lisa choked back a snicker as she hefted her duffel bag on her back, following the others into the entranceway.

What appeared to be a cave entrance was actually a concealed glass door. A small camera popped out of a crevice and scanned Safiri’s eyes before the doorway slide open, revealing a cool white interior. The hallway they entered felt like it belonged more in a hospital than a tournament hall, with bright fluorescent lighting and swing doors to either side, but Safiri led them purposefully straight forward about a hundred meters to another set of closed glass doors.

Another retina scan later, the contestants all entered into a large, circular room about the same size as the main train station hall in Lumiose City. The walls were filled with display screens about a story tall, circumnavigating the entire room. The only other feature of the room was a white, circular station in the exact center, with white countertops and glass walls and a ceiling, keeping the station separate from the rest of the room.

Exiting from a barely visible door in the side of the central station was Mr. Diamant himself, just as handsome and radiant as he’d appeared in the short video they’d seen of him on the boat. Lisa flushed for a moment, wondering if his body was as perfect under his clothes as he looked in them. As he neared the group he smiled with teeth so white they just about glinted off the lights.

“Welcome, welcome to the Isle of Tajna!” He called out to them in a loud, soothing voice. “Here is the place where you shall compete in the tournament of your dreams, myself only the humble specter and benefactor,” he completed with a flourished bow and Lisa choked back a laugh, thinking him anything but humble.

“If you will join me, please.” Diamant raised a hand and beckoned them forward before turning and walking back toward the station. Sitting inside was a woman who looked similar to Safiri, but not quite the same; sisters, but not twins. This one’s hair was a fiery red, so bright it could give Shirley a contest, and she chewed bubblegum as she sat, typing at some kind of computer terminal.

“This is the machine that will decide your fates,” Diamant explained cryptically, leaning against the glass wall of the station. “It is a randomizer that will assign the contestants for our tournament. The first round will consist of eight matches, single elimination. The first two matches will be tonight, and I hope to finish the round tomorrow, with the matches spread throughout the day. Those that remain will enter into the second round on day three.”

He smiled charmingly. “So, who’s ready to see their match?”

Without waiting for a reply, he gestured at the red-haired woman who nodded back and typed furiously at the computer for a moment. Diamant then turned his attention towards the screen surrounding them on the walls, and all the contestants turned as one, waiting to see the results.

The walls, previously showing a flowing image of water, had now faded to black, all except one right above the door they had entered through. This screen showed shots of all of their faces, the same photos stored in their communicators, matched with their names, and the text “Calculating Challengers” underneath. Lisa grimaced at the sight of her candid shot up on the big screen; she’d have to figure out how to take a new picture soon.

Within a few moments, the screen had changed, the faces and names rearranging themselves into a tournament bracket pattern. Lisa held her breath as she searched for her name among the list.

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There she was, second-to-last match, fighting someone named Terra. Lisa pulled her communicator out of her pocket and scrolled through the names until she came to Terra Reynolds, the girl with the massive quantities of luggage. Well, I guess that won’t be a difficult match. She looked over at Terra and was surprised by the look of fierce determination the young girl gave back. It was a face that said the teenage trainer was more than she looked like, and Lisa thought for a moment of throwing the match in the girls favour.

As soon as the word’s entered her brain, she happened to glance over at Safiri only to find Safiri staring right back. The strange woman’s words came back to her, “You would do well to focus your thoughts on success.” Maybe I shouldn’t think of giving up so easily after all…

“Now, if you’ll all follow me,” Diamant called from behind them, already heading in the opposite direction towards a large pair of doors on the other side of the room, “it’s time for our first match!”

The next update will be: Round 1, Match 1: Juliet vs. Idalia!
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Intro, Part 2)

The hobo guy, JamesSimian, was also old enough to be involved, as was the dark-haired Idalia.

I'm not a hobo :p

Also, wasn't expecting what you would do with the whole Justin/Leon thing. Interesting.
 
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Hey, you're seeing through other people's eyes, and he *is* homeless. :p

The name thing was actually on purpose and will be explained in due time, promise. :3
 
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Awesome introduction! I can't wait to see the first match.

So my character Kayla got matched up with Alex, Twiggy's character. Was kind of hoping to see Alex with Tony, but I guess that's all right. :p
 
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Even so, I'm sure it'll be a great battle! I'll just have to make one between the two of them in the future.
 
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Looks like my character's got a hobo to take down. :p Although of course they're the last match... The anticipation is going to kill me!

But anyway, the story seems to be coming along very well already. You've got some excellent writing skills, Artemis!
 
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>Skuntank vs Magnezone

Boy am I glad matches are decided by coin flips or I would be screwed
 
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PMJ said:
Boy am I glad matches are decided by coin flips or I would be screwed

Same. One does not simply take on Charizard with Breloom.
Of course, with my luck, my character will lose R1 anyway. :p
 
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I'm kind of surprised that nobody made a character with a legendary or anything. I was really kind of hoping for the aforementioned Arceus/Caterpie scenario.
 
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Artemis said:
I'm kind of surprised that nobody made a character with a legendary or anything. I was really kind of hoping for the aforementioned Arceus/Caterpie scenario.

I think we were all hoping for it. But to be completely honest, after reading your submission into the QSSC or whatever it is, I wanted to be amerced in the world you could create with my character, which used Chesnaught, because Chespin is my favourite pokemon... And I'm an idiot for not realising that its dice roll when making Leon...

Well, I like Simisage over Pansage so... Simian is ok!/ramble

(I still love this story)
 
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Well, glad you're enjoying it. :p

I did think about making *my* entered character have a legendary, but then I would have felt silly being the only one, so I just used Idalia instead (who was a character from an old RPG I was a part of).

Also, for the record, except the next update sometime on Monday, probably (maybe Tuesday depending on how much I get done). Today is CR writing, and I don't have the time to devote to writing much over the weekends (especially since tomorrow is KITTY DAY).
 
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Artemis said:
I'm kind of surprised that nobody made a character with a legendary or anything. I was really kind of hoping for the aforementioned Arceus/Caterpie scenario.

Legendary 'mons are overrated anyway.
#TeamBreloom
 
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Will updates consist of only one match?
 
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Yeah, each update will be either a match, or something happening between/during the match. Even if a match is rather short (not having written a Pokémon battle before, I'm not entirely sure how long they'll end up), it'll still get posted separately, since it's a nice breaking point. There will usually be things happening between/during the matches anyway, especially as more and more people get eliminated.
 
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I love xous

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This is why there's nothing listed in Shirley's appearance, I forgot I was going to ask Xous to draw her for me when I posted it. But here she is, Commander Mars in street clothes B]
 
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Awesome, thanks for sharing! And here I was thinking you'd left the appearance line blank on purpose. :p
 
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Terra <3

I'm sorry PMJ, but I really hope Terra wins. ;)

But yeah! I am really enjoying this! You've drawn Terra out to be the character I imagined her to be, and I am loving the hilarious mix of Justin and Ed. Speaking of Ed, I have never really thought about a Sableye versus a Kecleon. I am really looking forward on how that would work, especially since Kecleon has a bunch of priority moves and Sableye is only good with Prankster and Sableye is an interesting Pokemon in general. I am wondering, though, if anyone else has made the observation that the Safiri and Mr. Diamont were both named after Pokemon Games, Diamond and Sapphire, respectively, and if the theme will continue... But don't tell me! I want to find out myself! WOOO

Gettin' hype!

EDIT: Say, I wonder if the OP should be updated not only with the names of the characters, but their respective profiles? That might be interesting.
 
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Well, I'd be interested in seeing Edward's Kecleon and Jeremy's Sableye battle it out as well, but they're on opposite sides of the bracket, so they probably won't be fighting. (Although if they did, and both made it to the finals, I certainly wouldn't mind.)

On a side note, I probably check this thread for an update about every four hours. I have way too much free time.
 
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Chapter 1 – Round 1, Match 1: Juliet vs. Idalia

Looking at her name up on the boards, Juliet Sycamore broke into a cold sweat. She was the very first match, the one that would be starting any minute now. She took a moment to grab her communicator and match a face to the name of her competitor Idalia. She was a woman, and one of the oldest in the group. Her Pokémon, a Bellsprout, didn’t even stay in a Pokéball. Juliet groaned. The woman must have tonnes of battling experience; she didn’t stand a chance.

Juliet barely heard Diamant’s words as he led them through another pair of doors on the other side of the room. Clutching her Pokéball tight, she followed behind the others as they left the strange chamber walking as if in a daze. She idly wondered if they would have time to practice or change before the battle, but then shook her head at the thought. They had been told on the ship that there would be battle right away; that was their warning. She had used the time to grab a new scarf – her lucky scarf, a deep grey-blue that had been given to her by her brother for her birthday last year – and do a bit of warm-up practice with Mewliet. She smiled, remembering how alike she and Mews looked when she was wearing the lucky scarf, both Trainer and Pokémon wearing the same blue over white.

The doorway led to another corridor, similar to the first they had entered to, but shorter, and with no alternate passages, just one empty hallway leading slightly uphill to yet another set of sliding doors. These doors were opaque, unlike the earlier doors into the complex, but still required a retina scan, this time from Diamant.

As the doors slid open, bright sunlight shined into the hallway from the afternoon sun. Juliet winced at the glare as she stepped through the doors and out into one of the large Pokémon tournament fields she had ever seen. It was easily the size of the fields at the Pokémon League, if not larger, with enough seating for thousands upon thousands of fans to watch the matches. However, the stands were all empty aside from a small group of women in the first row off to one side. The stadium itself was rather unremarkable, similar to others of its type. Juliet recognized the control machines off to the side that could be used to switch the ground of the stadium to different types. It was currently in its default mode, a regular field of grass with boundaries lines marked in white.

“This is the stadium where you will be competing,” Diamant announced, forcing Juliet to turn her attention back to the strange, striking man. “We have several preset stadium varieties for you to compete on, depending on the choices of your viewers.”

He turned around at pointed at one of the other contestants, a thin young man that Juliet recognized as Jeremy. “You, what would you like the stage’s theme to be for the first battle?”

“Oh, hmm,” Jeremy thought for a bit, pushing up his glasses, “how about ice?”

“Wonderful!” Diamant clapped his hands and Jeremy beamed at the praise. “Now, those of you who are not competing in the first match, please follow Safiri to your seats.”

Juliet watched the other contestants follow Safiri up a set of stairs to the same row of seats the women were occupying. All fourteen took their seats, with different levels of resolve, ambition, interest, and hope in their faces. She wondered if any one of them was cheering for her, though she doubted it. She hadn’t tried to make any friends on the ship, and likely not a single one of them cared about her any more than seeing how much of a threat she would be if they had to face her in a later round.

Juliet snuck a glance at her competitor and was surprised at the level of boredom present on Idalia’s face. The older woman stood calmly by, arms crossed, while her Bellsprout hopped and danced around her. For as much emotion as Idalia showed, her Pokémon seemed to be more lifelike than she was. And this is the woman I’m supposed to face, this stoic, unreachable person who hasn’t reacted to the slightest thing so far on this trip.

Though to be fair, Juliet admitted, she herself had been trying to keep a calm façade as well. It was the only way to stop from cracking up. For the fifth time since she left Lumiose City, she wondered why she even accepted this invitation in the first place. Her brother had seemed so calm and so cool about the whole thing, she had just naturally accepted, but the reality was already turning out to be much weirder than she had expected.

And she couldn’t neglect the unnatural fear that coursed through her veins the moment she set foot on this island.

Trying to stay calm and cheerful, working to channel her brother’s good nature and charm, Juliet walked up to Idalia and extended her hand. “Hey, I’m Juliet, Joules to my friends. Good luck on the match.”

Idalia turned towards Juliet, a look of surprise on her face that she quickly masked with a smile. “And you must know I’m Idalia, then. It’s a pleasure to meet you, Joules.”

As they shook hands, Juliet could feel that her hand was warm and tough. It was like shaking hands with a baker, or one of her brother’s other assistants, the one that was always out hunting for fossils. The woman had called her by her nickname, too, which surprised her, but then she had blurted out her nickname herself like a fool anyway.

Before she had any more time to berate herself for her actions, Diamant came over and stood in front of both of them. Up close, he seemed much taller, so tall that be blocked the sight of the setting sun. “Each of you will go to opposite sides of the tournament field before we begin the match. You each get one Pokémon only, and the person whose Pokémon is knocked out first will be eliminated from the tournament. I look forward to seeing your progress.”

Juliet opened her mouth to respond, but then Diamant was gone, heading towards a separate stairway that led towards a closed-in box on the other side of the stadium.

“I guess this is it then.” Idalia nodded at Juliet then headed towards the west side of the field, her Bellsprout jumping along behind her.

Juliet made her own way along the edge of the stadium, heading towards the painted semi-circle of the Trainer’s station. She would not be able to leave that spot until either Mews or the Bellsprout was knocked-out and the battle was over. With a deep breath, she stepped across the line and faced the other side, squinting in the light of the setting sun.

As soon as she stepped into place, she heard a deep rumbling coming from beneath and around her as the field configured itself to the Ice settings. A small protective fence enclosed the Trainer’s station as it rose into the air, becoming a platform that rose three meters before standing still. Down below, the grass field was pulling apart as a shiny ice rink rose from below. The surface looked as smooth as glass, and Juliet suddenly realized that the field gave her something of an advantage since Idalia’s Bellsprout would be weak to the ice.

With newfound hope, Juliet pulled her Pokéball out of her lab coat’s pocket and released Mews out into the field. The Meowstic landed gracefully, then slid off to one side, got tangled up in its own feet, and crashed miserably to the ground. Juliet hid her face in embarrassment as she blushed a bright red. Of course, Mews and I are used to lab settings, so I guess we’re not all too well-equipped to deal with this field either. Maybe it’s not as much of a blessing as I thought…

Across the field, Idalia’s Bellsprout was also having a tough time adjusting to the course, slipping and sliding on its skinny feet as it tried to gain its balance. Watching it slide around, Juliet wracked her brain to recall what she knew about Bellsprouts. In a way, it was lucky that her first opponent was using a Pokémon from her own home region. She knew that Bellsprout was both Grass- and Poison-type, and was also weak to Psychic attacks, giving her another advantage. They were generally better at attacking than defending and weren’t particularly strong, especially when unevolved, but Juliet knew better than to underestimated the strength of a Pokémon that belonged to such a confident trainer. There was something she was forgetting, but in her anxiety, it was hard to recall every detail of her studies.

Once both Pokémon had their feet, a large screen displayed on the south side of the arena showing camera views of both trainers and both Pokémon. Juliet hadn’t seen any cameras, but knowing what she did about the technology of the communicators they had each received, she wasn’t surprised that the cameras in the stadium were out of sight.

A female voice came over a loudspeaker. “The match will begin… now.”

Hoping to possibly get in a swift attack and end the battle quickly, Juliet hastily called out, “Mews, use Psyshock!”

Before the words were even fully out of her mouth, Mews had already begun gathering power, creating a blob of glowing light blue and hurling it across the stage at the opposing Bellsprout, which was still wobbling around on the ice. Juliet leaned forward, watching with crossed fingers, hoping against hope that the battle could be decided so quickly.

She was unprepared for the speed and agility the Bellsprout displayed in dodging the attack, dancing to one side and the gliding around on the ice almost like a ice skater. Juliet watched with an open mouth, unable to believe her eyes. The Bellsprout wasn’t hindered by the ice in the slightest! Indeed, it seemed to use the slippery condition to its advantage, skating around to increase its speed.

So fascinated she was by the Bellsprout’s movements, she almost missed the call from the other side of the field as Idalia commanded, “Alec, use Toxic!”

Status conditions! That was what she had forgotten about Bellsprout. Like many other dual-type Grass and Poison Pokémon, Bellsprout was fond of using various status-changing moves to disable an opponent, finishing it off as its leisure. Juliet hastily called Mews to dodge towards the other side of the field, and the Pokémon obeyed without question, narrowly avoiding the dangerous poison by sliding on its belly towards the south side of the field.

“Mews, Misty Terrain!” Juliet smiled, glad she had thought to teach her Pokémon the attack before the tournament. Within moments, a thick, pink haze had settled around the field like fog made out of cotton candy. It wouldn’t last for long, but so long as it did, none of Bellsprout’s status-changing attacks would work, buying some time for Mews to get in a clean shot.

It wasn’t long before Idalia was trying to get back in control of the situation, though. She called out to Bellsprout an attack that Juliet hadn’t even know the small Pokémon could learn: Sunny Day. The afternoon sun began to glow even brighter, almost blinding Juliet with its glare. She raised a hand to protect her eyes from the sun and looked down on the battlefield. The strong sunlight made it easier to see through the Misty Terrain effect, but it hadn’t cancelled it out. Mews would be able to avoid being poisoned a bit longer.

“Mews, try another Psyshock!” Juliet called, but it was a bit to soon for another targeted attack. Mews, still dizzy from its earlier spin across the ice, sent the attack flying wide, missing Bellsprout by a large margin. The energy ball flew towards the stands, but was repelled by an energy field, dissipating harmlessly into the air.

“Alec, use SolarBeam!”

Juliet stared in astonishment as the Bellsprout sucked in sunlight and spat it back out in the direction of Mews, a huge, glowing stream of energy that hit the Meowstic like a sack of bricks. Mews cried out as the attack hit, flipping end over end as it was knocked across the stadium, eventually crashing into the platform below Juliet.

“Mews, are you okay?” Juliet called down, relieved beyond belief when she saw the Pokémon get back up to its feet, shaky but still in fighting condition. “Use another Psyshock!”

With the pole of the Trainer station supporting its back, Mews created and flung another ball of blue energy, this time catching the Bellsprout square in the belly. The Bellsprout squealed and fipped end over end, landing on its feet on the ice, but still badly bruised and shaken. Both Pokémon stopped for a moment, staring at each other as they caught their breaths, pink fog swirling around them with beams of golden sunlight.

That Bellsprout isn’t going to go down as easily as I thought, Juliet mused. I’m not going to end this quickly; I’ll have to play the long game.

“Mews, put up a Light Screen!” she shouted.

Sadly, she was just a bit too late. Across the field, Idalia was similarly calling out to her Alec to use a Sludge Bomb. As Mews was working on building the defensive screen, the Bellsprout hurled a sticky ball of poison, smacking the Meowstic right in the face. Mews was knocked backwards, the sludge ball sinking into her fur. She pawed at the goo covering her face, but was unable to remove it.

Juliet bit her lip. She knew the Misty Terrain would keep Mews from getting poisoned, but how much longer would that protection last? As Mews finished building the defensive barrier, the pink mist was already beginning to thin out, but so was the sunlight. Bellsprout’s Sunny Day was also beginning to wane, which would give them a bit more time before it could unleash another devastating solar attack.

“Mews, use Psychic!”

The Meowstick sent a blast of Psychic energy in the direction of Bellsprout, but the flower Pokémon nimbly dodged, skating out of the way of the attack. Mews dropped to its knees as the mist faded away completely, allowing the poison of the sludge still all over its face to seep into its body.

Taking advantage of Mews’s weakness, Idalia quickly yelled out to her Pokémon. “Alec, finish it off with Venoshock!”

“NO!” Juliet fell to knees, helpless as the Bellsprout sprayed its poisonous liquid across the field at Mews, reacting with the poison to take the last of the fight out of Mews. The Meowstic trembled, then collapsed to the ice, curled up in a ball.

“No, no, no…” Forgetting entirely about losing the match, Juliet quickly climbed down the platform, sliding a bit on the ice as she ventured out to pick up her Pokémon. Mews’s eyes were glazed over from the poison, but she was still alive, just knocked-out.

Suddenly, Safiri was at her side, her hand resting on her shoulder. “Please, come with me, we’ll make sure your Pokémon is healed and taken care of.”

“Thank you.” Juliet wiped her nose on her sleeve, not even realizing that she’d started crying the moment she had seen the poison had started to seep into Mews’s system. Cradling Mews in her arms, she turned around and followed Safiri towards a door behind the platform, not even caring as the others starting cheering for Idalia’s win.

In a way, she was glad that she hadn’t won. The anxiety of the tournament was gone, so she could rest in peace. Sure, she wouldn’t get the prize money, but she hadn’t expected to win the whole tournament anyway, just to get some good, serious battle experience with Mews, outside of the lab environment.

And yet, as she walked into the dark hallway with Safiri, she couldn’t help but feel that same unknown fear, still clutching desperately at her belly, the same as she clutched Mews tightly to herself. The door to the tournament field swung shut behind them.

Stay tuned for the next section, Intermission 1: Dinner at the Isle of Tajna, to come later this week.


Ah, you silly blokes, posting while I'm writing!

The links to the profiles in the OP is a cool idea; I'll probably do that tomorrow at some point. For now, I just barely squeaked by finishing this and doing a quick scan-over before dinner.

Next update will probably be Wednesday/Thursday.
 
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