Writing Mysterys of Zetroh

~Magma King~

~Magma King~

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I have decided to make a new fan fiction,based in the zetroh region.
I also need characters,so just fill the form and I may put them in:
Name:
Good/Bad:
Favourite pokemon:
Favourite type(Optional):
Description:
Any other background notes:
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Here is the list of the first few chapters:
0-Prologue
1-Catastrophe
2-Stranded...
3-A nightmare to remember
4-Mystery of the regis(P1)-a cruel power.
4-Mystery of the regis(P2)-Ultimate battle!Regigigas v dark regirock!
5-Friend or foe?
6-Team nightmare's Grand plan-The ressurection
7-Team nightmare's grand plan-Jirachi's unwanted wish
8-Team nightmare's grand plan-Team nightmare's nightmare
9-Trouble at pine HQ
10-Mt frosticle's inferno age
11-there's a TIME and SPACE for everything
12-Arceus' worst fear
13-The bloodthirsty battle
14-Deefloat and the lord of the sea
15-The pokemon league(Part 1)
16-The pokemon league(part 2)
17-The pokemon league(part 3)
18-The pokemon league(part 4)
19-Orlight
20-Team nightmares last resort
21-Ordim
22-Triggering the end
23-Battle at the worlds end
24-The end of the world(part 1)
25-The end of the world(Part 2)
26-Memorys

Prologue
The blood raced through him.No??time to wipe the sweat from his face.
He had one emotion left.Fear.He had lost all courage,his sense of leadership,his strength in battle.He had to run.Would it really end like this?Had his grand plan fallen,into nothing?The stairs.He didn't breath. Instead he just ran,stumbling over his feet.But he suddenly realised.It was a dead end.At the open roof.A blinding light covered the plaza,as he looked up,he realised it was over."STOP,JUST DON'T MOVE!!"came the blury voice of the megaphone.More helicopters came.The police advancing forward on him.Each time he stepped backwards.He stepped back.Suddenly,he lost his grip.As he stepped back,he stumbled fearfully,and trripped.He fell,plumetting down in the midnight darkness.The policed man knelt down and looked over the ledge.It wasn't so scary in the dark.He couldn't see a man fall to his death...

Chapter 1-Catastrophe
...."wake up"....
*Blink*
....."Its a crisis wake up!"
"Good day sir,a bottle,you shouldn't of".....Came the sleepy voice.
"Don't you remember?!Pokemon police?!Hariyama on the railway!"
....no responce....

Meanwhile,as to our main story:
a boy called luke,only 10,was lying down on the train.Quite bored though.Having great pokemon wasn't all that.He was bored.No adventure,his Rampardos could have beaten the league as much times as he wanted,but it was too easy.as he mumbled,he wished about leaving hoenn.He sat up,and rubbed his badges lazily.

...."Mum,five more-
"I'm not your mum!You're a pokemon police officer!Urgh!Said the other officer,in a desperate atempt,He threw a bucket of water at the sleeping policeman."Ug!*COUGH*"
"Just get there!What is the matter with you?!"Instead of answering, the officer just lied down in his bed,and turned over.It revealed a map,
and with it an oddly shaped machine part...

Luke stared out the window.About to put his head down,he suddenly heard:
"Help!!Break!!"Every body looked out the window in panic.A Hariyama stood in the way,its hand in front of it.Everyone started screaming!
"Stop!"Cried luke,but his voice was drowned in the screams and cries of the passengers.After a huge stop.There was a sudden jerk.The Hariyama thrust its arm,,and the train was sent flying through the air. The deafening screams flooded the train.But it didn't drop.It just kept going up.Luke,Regardless of his pokeballs or case,Opened the door.He took a huge breath,and then jumped.Then he saw nothing.Only blackness,and the sound of explosion.

But back in the police station,the officer woke.With a sudden jolt of fear,he jumped out his bed.But he knew by the look in the other officers face,He knew it was already too late....

Chapter 2-stranded
.....Luke woke up.He remained lying on the floor,eyes tight shut.But slowly he opened them.He saw the sky,plain and normal as ever.But something wasn't right.He tried to sit up,but quickly fell back down in agony.He was stranded.He couldn't move."Quick!Help him up!Lucky I have these"....It was a proffessor,with weird twisted blong hair,and a lab cloak."Ok,this will sting but-"
"No dont'!"
"Look you ca-"
"I said..."Luke suddenly realised.He had beaten the league champion, and was yet crying about someone spraying him.While in thought, there was a quick "TSSSHHHHH!" Followed by a cringe.He gasped but still lay there.The pain stopped."Well,these are ment to be for poke-"
"WHAT?!"Gasped luke.
"Ahahaah!Not really!Let me introduce myself.I am proffessor pine.I know its confusing but stay calm.I think mabye you will remember this
....Proffessor pine threw a pokeball.Out jumped a cute Blue and red worm pokemon with large pincers."I've never seen one",replied luke.
"A foreigner?How'd you get here?"
"Lets say,by train",smiled luke.
"Well,I'll have to show you into my lab,if you just-
*BOOOOOM!*...

Chapter 3-A nightmare to remember
Luke pulled himself up,as the proffessor dragged him to the lab.Inside, the end wall had been smashed.a woman in a white suit with long shiny black hair that split into two stood with 2 men in dull white cloaks and purple hair."Good morning",the woman said without even looking."What are you doing?!"Shouted proffessor pine.
"Taking your pokemon"She cheerfully replied.
"Stop!I'll have to...."
"Building an empire,need no distraction."Luke desperatleylooked for something he could do.He grabbed one of the pokeballs."Go,whatever you are,I need you!"A green splodgy pokemon with cute eyes and large arms splitting into vines burst out its pokeball."A pokemon battle?
You need not bother but,if you insist,I accept!"The woman threw her pokeball.Out came a light green gas pokemon,very small with 2 cute eyes.It had 2 smaller heads of gas floating around it too.
"The pokemon is a chloroseed!It knows tackle and leer at the moment. You can do it!"Shouted proffessor pine.
"Ok,chloroseed use tackle!".Chloroseeds hand turned into a fist and pounded chogas."You can take that chogas!Use posion gas!"Chogas swiftly circled chloroseed,and left him clutching his mouth.
"Leer,and then tackle while he's looking!"Chogas loomed over chogas and chogas started up petrified.At that moment,chloroseed dived down into another tackle.This time chogas plummeted down and spread over the field.It gathered itself back.But it swayed,then fell back down.The woman pulled out a large gune with lots of pipes and an ammo holder."Do you know what this is?"Said the woman.
"No"Whispered luke.
"Its a pokegun,And boys,get ready."As she spoke,the other two men pulled out pokeguns too."Fire!"She cried,as the pokeguns rapidly fired pokeballs in all directions."Pound,chloroseed!Knock the pokeballs away!
"Chloroseed deflected the pokeballs into every corner.Meanwhile,Luke ran towards one of the men,and wrestled them to the floor.still shocke
-d,the man couldn't resist,and fell to the floor.Luke grabbed his gun and fired a pokeball in the other mans chest.The pokeballs being fired had decreased.Chloroseed pounded at the woman,and took the pokeball gun.Chloroseed and Luke threw the guns in the corner.With no weapon,the woman stepped back."Ok,I give up."She said,"but during all this fighting,I never introduced myself",she pointed to the two men,"I,Susan,and my associates,are fellow members of team nightmare,I being one of the best agents.We have a grand plan,and we don't need you to intefere!"With that susan ran out the lab,and jumped into a large van.
"Well",said proffessor pine,still confused,"Welcome to zetroh"....

Chapter 4-mystery of the regis(Part 1)
After some hard training,and a tyring day,luke returns to proffesor pines lab.As now,his home:
"Hey proffessor",said Luke,"What are you doing?"
"Rumors",said Prof pine,"rumors of a very rare pokemon.You've heard of regirock before havn't you?"
"Definitely."Replied Luke.
"In a town called Stonewood,just through the forest,want to go?"
"You bet!"Said luke,with a quick nod....

"Like the place?!"Laughed Prof pine.The desert village seamed to be blurred by a raging sandstorm."Ok",said pine,"Odd but I'll try it,use strength on the shiny rock."

"Here we are!"Said pine proudly,"Ok here it goes,Tremtenple,go!"A huge Rocky cube,with an open roof and wrecked sides,small legs and arms,and a pile of sand with red eyes at the bottom burst out its ball.
"Tremtenple,strength!"Tremtenple lifted the shiny rock,and revealed a huge hole.Prof pine returned Tremtenple."I'm not too sure about this one",said Luke,and he threw a pebble down."No sound",he said.
"Then its the perfect place for you guys then aint it!!"Came a rough voice.Suddenly they felt themselves being pushed down.Luke clung on,as prof pine fell."Don't do this!"Screamed Luke.A tall man with very ragged clothes and scarred all over looked feircly at Luke."Exactly what I said to my mother!But she didn't listen,so why should I!!"Luke noticed a Tear run down his face as he said it.
"Gagh!"Luke's hand slipped.He clung onto the mans hand.Allthough trying to resist,they were both pulled down...

"Are you all right?"asked Pine.They all seemed unhurt.
"Of course!"Said the man with an evil grin,"I must introduce myself.I am Lertech,and this is my aim",he looked around,"Now I can catch the three regis!I'll be able to take revenge on the world for what its done to me!"He pulled out a pokeball."This,is a dark ball!The key to my plan!" Suddenly,shining braille appeared on the wall.A huge blast of colours filled the room.Afterwards,stood there regirock."My chance"said
Lertech.He threw the pokeball.As it opened,dark energy flowed into regirock.It was captured."Go regirock!"Shouted Lertech.Regirock was darker,its braille into a red.Then there was a rumble.With a chanting of robotic language,entered regice and registeel.And then,a giant.A huge monster of a regi."Regigigas"whispered pine.
"You weren't in the legends!"Shouted Lertech."Very well Regigigas,I challenge you with regirock!"...
 
RE: A new fan fiction in zetroh

Name:Lertech
Good/Bad:Evil!!!!!!
Favourite pokemon:Gallade
Description: I really really bad guy. He had a bad childhood and now he wants to exact revenge for his pain on the world!!!!!
Any other background notes:he is 20 and he is pretty tall and loves to hurt those below him!
 
RE: A new fan fiction in zetroh

Ok,change tyranitar because of conflicts,but otherwise he's in.By the way,chapter three is finished.
Edit:Chapter 4 finished.

Chapter 5-mystery of the regis(Part 2-Ultimate battle!Dark regirock v regigigas!)
Regigigas advanced towards regirock.But Lertech already knew."Battle?
!Fine,but you'll regret it you giant freak!"
"Come on regigigas!"Cheered luke.
"Regirock,superpower!"Regirock launched itself and knocked regigigas.
And regigigas panicked.It ran around,not attacking.
"Slow start",moaned pine and Luke.
"Haha!Superpower regirock!"Again it launched himself onto regigigas.
But now regice and registeel deflected."All of you?!"Said Lertech sarcastically,"Hah!Regirock,earth power!"Regice and registeel toppled over sideways."Regirock,Superpower!"Yet again,it smacked regigigas on its face."Mabye he needs help",said Luke,"Go!Chloroseed!"
"Hah!Thats all you got?!Regirock,rock throw!"
"Dodge!"Shouted luke,and chloroseed slurped round the arena.
"Again!"Roared Lertech.This time chloroseed was hit.But something was happening."He's evolving!"Cried luke.After the shiny light dissappeared,A humanoid pokemon,with a very thin structure and huge fists,and a kind of helmet for its face stood where chloroseed once was."OK!Chloroyal,comet punch!"Chloroyal smacked regirocks arm off!"Just earth power!"lertech shouted.Chloroyal was thrust from the floor,and landed on the floor,out cold."You did good chloroyal." Whispered Luke.Something changed in regigigas.Now it seemed full of power.With a striking fist it knocked regirock away.Regirock pulled a huge boulder from the wall and used it as its arm.Regigigas now did a superpower,and made a huge crater in the floor.
"Of course",said pine,"Superpower lowers attack and defence.
"No!"Shouted Lertech,"I won't lose!Regirock!Explosion!"regirock started to shake.
"Idiot!"Shouted Luke,"You'll kill us all!"
"Thats the main idea!!!"Lertech shouted far louder than before.And Luke noticed he was crying too.
"Why did you do it?!"Said Luke in a quiter voice.
"Why live anymore?!I never got anything I wanted!I was always!-"
"I lost everything!I-I"Luke felt himself dissapear.So was pine,but not Lertech."Lertech!"Screamed Luke,as He felt himself be carried away from the hole.
 
RE: A new fan fiction in zetroh

Sounds like fun.
Name: Madrid
Good/Bad: Neither/Both
Favorite Pokemon: Glalie
Favorite Type: Ice
Description: A complete mystery. Though he begins his journey fighting on the side of good, he continuesly switches sides depending on what's best for him.
Other Notes: He's been adopted 26 times in his life and knows that no one really likes him. Due to these expeirences, he'd sell out his comrades in a heartbeat. Despite this he disagrees with the criminal motif
 
RE: A new fan fiction in zetroh

Very good,That gave me an idea!
Chapter 6-friend or foe?
As we now follow the story,an important note is this is 2 years later.
Great,thought luke.He was stuck.A huge wall blocked his way entirely.He would never get into Moonlight cavern if he couldn't pass this.Stuck in a team nightmare infested cavern. Great,he thought."Hey!"whispered a voice.
"What?"Replied luke.
"I can get this out the way."
"Really?!Please help!"
"Sure,just watch.By the way,I'm Madrid."He didn't even bother to look at him.He pulled out an item,and shoved it in the wall.It opened to a secret door.
"Wow thanks!"Said Luke.
"No problem.Mabye,we could be friends?"
"Sure."Replied luke,and they entered through the door.
"Security gone"Whistled Madrid,as he continuously opened the doors.
"Your an expert at this,how do you do it?"Asked Luke.Madrid stopped.He seemed deeply in thought.After a long silence,he said:"Ok.Better get you through this place."He continued to open the doors.But Luke thought.He had agreed to be a friend,but he sensed something wasn't right."Here",said Madrid,"We need two hands,get ready,one,two,three,done!-
"Stop!"2 team nightmare grunts were guarding the way.Along with a haunter and a dusclops. One of them grabbed Luke."Ok",said one,"Either let us take him,or your fired,madrid."Madrid stared at the floor."You know them?!"Said Luke with a strike of horror.
"Yes,I'm afraid,and I'm so sorry.You've ben tricked.Take him."Said Madrid with a tinge of sympathy."Madrid!"Shouted luke,"Tell them not to!!Tell them....."

Great,thought Luke.Now he's in a cell.No chance of escape.He's trapped again.He felt angry, but even more embarrassed.He had made a friend with his enemy.Who was he?...
"Pssst!"came a whisper.
"Why do I need you?!"Sobbed Luke.
"I came to save you."
"But why?!"
"Because we're friends,remember?"
"Apparently you didn't."
"They were the only people I ever-ever-liked really."
"But what about me?"
"But you'll just bugger off and get on with your great journey afterwards."
"You could-
"Never mind that,Glalie,Ice beam!"A glalie quickly came to Madrids heel and fired an Ice beam at the cell bars.Madrid quickly did a karate kick and broke the bars.
"You are amazing."said luke.The two quickly rushed down the stairs.The nightmare grunts guarded the bottom.
"We can take 'em,both of us!"Said Madrid,as he sent out Glalie.
"Ok.Go,Chloroking!"
"Ice beam!"
"Hammer arm!"Dusclops and haunter were knocked out straight away.
"Traitor!"Shouted One of the team nightmare grunts.
"Liar!"Shouted the other.Madrid suddenly stopped.He felt lonely,again.Luke tried to comfort him."Don't worry",said Madrid,"Its just...how I am."
"Good evening children",A man in a black suit,with a visor,a red cape and purple shiny hair was next to a large control box."Would you like to witness,the grand project?"...
 
RE: A new fan fiction in zetroh

chapter 7-Team nightmare's grand plan-the ressurection
"Who are you?"Asked Luke.
"Scarlets the name.Team nightmares top admin."
"So wheres the boss?"
"The boss...Died.Jumped off the rooftop of his own HQ.So I'm in charge."
"Or did he really?..."The hard,menacing voice struck lukes spine with an icy spear.But neadless to say,it seemed scarlet had got the most of it.
"B-Boss?"Cowered Scarlet.
"Thats right,boss."Angrail walked into the room.He had short black hair tied into a ponytail, spiky pads on his shoulder,an armour like costume and a longt trailing black cloak.
"B-But B-boss y-yourrr d-d-dead?!"
"Seemingly so....I lived Scarlet."Luke and scarlet turned round and noticed the blood stains and the scars on his face."And now,care to let me do the honour of activating the wish vortex?"His voice seemed so calm.
"Y-yes ssssir!"Said Scarlet.Angrail activated a small glass box.A sudden glow appeared in the middle of the room."Jirachi",said Angrail,"I wish for you to ressurect Orlight,the source of my plan!
 
chapter 8-Team nightmare's grand plan-jirachi's unwanted wish
Jirachi appeared in front of them.As it pulled a tag off his head,he wrote on it.A huge beast about 20 ft,with no face but 2 mask like eyes,a huge rocky shell with craters,taloned legs and feet and a lava mane,formed out of the note.Quickly jirachi rapidly blinked.Orlight advanced towards jirachi."Go ahead",said Angrail,"I don't need it anymore".Orlight launched a huge beam at jirachi.Jirachi used protect and it made no effect."Uh oh!"Said Luke,seeing the battle,"Chloroking go!".
"I want to help out!"Yelled Madrid,"Go Glalie!"
"Lets try to even this out Madrid,Tyrannitar go!"
Scarlet pulled out a pokeball."Jirachi,Boss got the wish but I get the capture.Come on out Dragolia!"

"Chloroking use frenzy plant!"Orlight stumbled as it was hit by a frenzy of vines.Suddenly Luke realised.Team nightmare had a fault.
"Orlight!"Shouted luke,"I won't hurt you!".Orlight looked at him deeply."I'll help get you out only if you help me!"Orlight had a look of understanding.Orlight launched a huge orange blast around the battlefield."Great orlight!"shouted Luke.

"Madrid my dear boy,why did it have to end like this?"Said Angrail.
"I never liked you!And you never liked me!"Shouted Madrid.
"We could have been companions!Rulers of this wretched world!"Angrail smiled.Madrid suddenly felt weak.He couldn't command his Glalie to attack."Make that a promise",said Angrail in a half meaningfull voice."I accept."Said madrid with a grin.
"Very good",said Angrail.
"Look we even have help.Oh wait,thats for me,not you."Madrid grinned.A huge orange beam struck tyranitar in the chest.

"Why can't you just let yourself be caught like a good jirachi?!"Snapped Scarlet...Scarlet saw Angrail."Boss,I'm coming,hold on!"As Scarlet ran,dragolia followed.Luke whent up to jirachi...

"We could have been rulers!Kings!"
"We could have been friends!You just used me for my equipment!"
"I don't need you anymore!"Snarled Angrail,"I think I can manage without your pestering!" Angrail flung Madrid into the rocky cave wall.Another orange blast.Thist time,Angrail was off his feet.Luke purpossley spoke so Angrail could hear."Jirachi,before i destroy this machine,I propose for one wish."Angrail looked up in fear."Jirachi,I wish you could make something,that is powerful enough to give team nightmare nightmares!"Angrail gasped.Scarlet gulped.Orlight released one huge bast....
 
Chapter 9-Team nightmare's grand plan-Team nightmare's nightmare
Nobody else would ever know what it was.Nobody spoke of it.But Scarlet was already long gone.The whole cave had burst into flames.But it made them leave.A pitch black pokemon with ribbonsn trailing off,a set of red teeth like items round its kneck,with cyber blue eyes and a flowing white mane.It had done exactly what jirachi had proposed.It had given them nightmares.Luke and Madrid decided to get out.As they left,they both thought."Madrid?", asked luke."What?",He replied.
"Where you going after this?"
"The pokemon league,I guess."
"Hey!I'm goi-Lukes phone vibrated.
"Errrr,luke",It was prof pine,"I need your help at the lab,urgently."Luke sighed.Quickly,he sent out his fearow and flew away.

Chapter 9-trouble at pine HQ!
"Pine,what happenned here",Said Luke fearfully.
"This pokemon.I think it was called Sicona,its been messing around in the lab,its in the basement."Thats easy",said Luke,"I can catch it without a pokeball".Luke dashed down the stairs.He saw a peach pokemon cothered by a cloak with a round head with Coral like spikes potruding from it."Just come here,come one",called Luke.Sicona quickly darted away."Gagh!" Shouted Luke,leading to an endless chase.Eventually,Sicona found a large machine.It jumped up and twisted a nob.Suddenly there were huge flashes inside the machine."Ooh", said Sicona.It jumped inside the machine,waving and smiling at Luke.But he couldn't do anything.He just watched.The machine turned off,and sicona's peach had turned to blue. Suddenly,it stopped and turned into a sunflora!"I can do this,fearow go!"Fearow burst out its ball.But sicona ran away.Luke realised he'd been beaten.With a sigh,he suddenly looked up. A celebi floated in the air before him."Bee!"It cried,and luke began to glow.

Sorry,2 very short chapters there,promise the next one will be longer.
 
This story is much better than the last one!!! Oh, and thanks for using scarlet! --->
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And dragolia--->
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Chapter 10-Mt frosticles inferno age
"I love exploring",said Luke.As he spoke,Pine was shivering.Pine's hair had stuck up in a silly way."Arrrrr w-we t-thhhh-there y-yet?"Said Pine.
"Oh please,your acting like the child now."
"Well I didn't want to go here.We'll catch frostbite before we actually achieve anything."
"I'll prove you wrong.Theres a wooden door there."
"But its covered in ice."Pine moaned.
"No problem.Chloroking,hammer arm!"Chloroking burst out his pokeball and smashed his hand against the wall.It instantly broke.
"Ok,Chlorok-"Chloroking quickly cut him off."Ok chloroking,this way!"The three went through the door."Think again about,frost bite,*Pant*,this is just,*Pant* boiling.Luke whiped some sweat from his face.Chloroking pointed further down.This definitely wasn't a mountain.It was seemingly a volcano.But chloroking pointed again.There was a shady figure."Hello?"Luke shouted.He heard murmuring."Say,I recognise that voice",The man said,"and not in a good way!"He stepped up to Luke."Luke M'Boy!"He said,It was Lertech."Though I'm afraid I'm going to have to kill you."Luke gasped.
"Why?"
"Because you can't mess me plans up this time.I won't let you."
"Any fair way we can settle this?"Said Luke.Realising the Chloroking,Lertech said:
"...mmmm,Yes.Cards.Pokemon cards.Winner of the match proceds.The other gets out."
"I don't have any though"
"Then we do six each."Lertech dealed them out on the hard stone floor.Instantly they turned them over.Luke had:
Charmander
Charmander
Charmander
Charmander
Charmander
Charmander
Lertech had:
Blastoise
kingdra
Blastoise ex
Diglett
Steelix
Squirtle.
After 2 easy minutes,Lertech had plainly one."BUt thats impossible!"luke said.
"I never said I had to deal them fairly",Lertech smerked,"Get out".
"Well this way Nobody can cheat!I challenge you to a pokemon battle!Single,2 pokemon each!"
"Fine"Said Lertech,"When you left me,I decided on training pokemon.With that,I got here!", He said,"Gallade,go!"
"Chloroking,go!"Luke cried.
"Gallade!Fire punch!"Gallade leaped at Chloroking.
"Dodge!"Commanded Luke.Chloroking dodged,but Gallade was so quick it jumped back and struck Chloroking.It toppled over and fainted."Chloroking",whispered Luke,"I havn't always had much faith in you,but nows the time,Aquoink go!"A fat Blue Pig with small ears and a fin tail snorted as it came out of its great ball."Swords dance!"Said Lertech.
"Hydro pump!"Said Luke.Gallade was blasted into the wall.
"He can't reach you!"Cried Lertech,"Psychic!"Gallade fired a pink beam at Aquoink."Mirror coat!"Said Luke.Another psychic hit Gallade,though far stronger.Gallade couldn't recover from the blow,and his eyes turned dizzy."Gallade return!"Said Lertech,"This is the final round.Go, Steelix!"
"Aquoink,use Hydro pump!"Said Luke.Steelix cringed in pain.
"Steelix,rock polish!"Steelix got alot faster.
"Bulk up,Aquoink!"Aquoink's size greatly rose.
"Double-edge steelix!"As of its speed,it shot into Aquoink.
"Giga impact Aquoink!"Aquoink pranced around,but never caught steelix.Steelix repeatedly used Double-edge.After a while,Aquoink stopped,exhausted."Can't win now",Said Lertech,"Forfeit."
"But your wrong.Aquoink,Aqua jet!"
"Steelix,Double edge!"Steelix swayed aside to dodge,But aquoink struck him even so."STEEEEEE!!"Steelix cried in pain and then fainted.
"Well",said Lertech,"I guess you-....Suddenly There was a huge quake.
"Run,Kraytor!"Shouted Pine.The three quickly backed to a wall.Another quake,this time followed by a beam of lava on the floor under Pines feet.Luke drabbed him and jumped sideways.The Floor was smashed instantly.Lertech,Pine,and Luke All jumped on the wall.Each time a beam hit the wall,They all jumped aside.They saw a dragons head in the shape of a flame with lava dripping down it Smashed through the corner.The rest of its magnificent red body,soaked in lava with Flame shapes protruding from it was now visible."Its Kraytor,we're doomed now!"Said Pine.
"Not true,we can do it!"Luke shouted.
"Escape rope!"Lertech jetted upwards.Luke grabbed on to his leg,and pine grabbed on to luke's leg."Get off!"Lertech swore.
"I can't!!"Screamed Luke.
"I'll kill you you *********!"Lertech Pulled a gun from his pocket.
"Helpp!!!!!!"Luke and Pine screamed.
"Shut the **** up!!"Lertech had the gun in his teeth.Quickly, Chloroking dashed towards Lertech and smacked him with his hammer arm.With a Strangling cry Lertech let go of the rope in pain.Quickly, They all heard the gun fire.The sound ringed in their ears,and the proffessor Made a sound like a cross between a moan and a cry.His hand loosened on the rope and he fell.With an urgent scream Luke grabbed Pine by the hand.With his foot still tied on the rope,He quickly climbed up and took the proffessor's hand.When they were both on the ground the Proffessor immediately collapsed.
"You ok?"Asked luke.
"He shot me"The proffessor was panting and gasping in pain.
"Where?"
"Just the leg.But I can't move."
"And we can't call the ambulance.Jump on salamence."The proffessor hesitated."Come on",said Luke,as he pulled the proffessor onto salamence.As they arrived back,He called the ambulance immediatley. It was lucky he was so rich,thought Luke.But it didn't matter.He had a metal leg,and would be recovered soon.But Luke couldn't wait.He set out on his own adventure.
 
Chapter 11-Theres a TIME and SPACE for everything.
"Woa!"Shouted Luke,as a huge earthquake shook the ground.And it didn't stop.The world was definitely shaking.Luke fell on the floor and looked up.The earth grinded to a hault.in the sky,there was a huge Portal.The sky was filled by it."Stop there citizen!"A weird man in a white and grey suit with stylish boots and a yellow G on his shirt had rushed to the occasion.
"Whats happening?!"Asked Luke.
"Its a Galactic war.Palkia and Dialga must have some trouble.Now we are in this area,were safe.But not for long.Earth is drifting.Our big moment."
"OUR big moment?"Luke emphasized the our.
"Yes.Team Galactic.We caused it,the new galactic bomb is excellent."
"So you?..."
"Dumped a Galactic bomb in Dialga's world,blames it on palkia,war rages here and creates a new world."
"In power of team Galactic?"
"Precisely.Palkia first,we must have him first,then we can create the world before time flows."
"And who might you be?"Asked Luke.
"I am Neptune.A commander of team Galactic."Neptune didn't even let Luke have a chance to speak,"Here he is,Palkia!"The large pinkish-whitish humanoid monster dropped from the portal."Dialga",said Neptune.The 4 legged Dark blue monster also appeared.Along with it,came
Darkrai,and Giratina."He wasn't in the legend!"For once Neptune didn't sound in control."He's for us,right guys?"Scarlet Appeared out of nowhere.Along with him were 2 grunts."Get him", Scarlet pointed to Neptune.The two grunts pinned him down.But neptune thrust his legs upwards and Tossed them away.Scarlet's visor cracked.The earth shook horribly.Darkrai, Giratina,palkia and dialga were all battling.Neptune thought."I suppose boss didn't tell me how to actually get palkia."Neptune was worried.He pulled out his walkie talkie.But it broke instantly."Guys",Scarlet spoke to the two grunts."Guys I can't see without-
"Never mind that!"Said Luke,"Look up.The portal was still whirling ferociously,and the two grunts were sucked into it."We go to four dimensions",Said neptune,"We can cross through them,And probably find each other."Scarlet frowned."We need to stick together now. Unfortunately we can't stick to the grou!!!!-"Neptune was sucked from the floor into the portal."Luke",said Scarlet,"If we do live we-"They were both sucked into the portal.

"Gugh",Neptune whiped her forehead.She looked around at the diamond walls."Dialga's dimension,I bet.I'll have a look around."

"Blast!"Said the Nightmare grunt.As he looked around he instantly saw pearls."But this could make a good present,lets check it out."

"Bingo!!"the nightmare grunt looked around.Darkness."Great!I'll own a fortune!!!"With that, the Nightmare grunt fainted.

Scariest and most horrible of all was the last dimension.Luke and Scarlet sat down bewildered
and very tired.As they saw creepy cave walls encrusted with opals,Scarlet had a horrible feeling."What?"Said luke.
"Look",Scarlet put his hand through the wall.
"Were ghosts",whispered Luke.
"Were dead",Scarlet said grimly.Suddenly a dusknoir whent into the room.He dropped a dead body inside."Boss?"Said Scarlet,and with a streak of fear,he realised that Angrail really was dead this time.
 
It must happen,only ONE huy actually died,as he through himself off a building.Then he was stuck in a burning cave.Need to go to bed,can't update today but will tommorow!
 
Chapter 12-Arceus' worst fear
"I can get out of this no sweat!"Said Scarlet,"Dragolia,go!"
"I'll help out!Come on out,Aquoink!"Said Luke.The two searched around the area.There was an exit apparently,and as they opened the door,The room was infested with shadows.Dark black and purple mist swept through the room,soon engulfing Scarlet and Luke.Before them, stood Giratina,The shadows around it,smiling.Angrail rose from the floor."Agghhh!"He screamed.He Inspected himself panicingly.Then his expression of shock turned to an evil smerk.His face was grey,Scarred completely,his spine sticking out partly."It was your fault wasn't it?!"He Laughed Mockingly at Luke.But then he frowned horribly."I'd better be leaving, I'm not staying with you 2.I must regain Myself."He started to advance towards Giratina.
"Don't!"Screamed Luke.Angrail trurned round confused."I read a book,"Luke began,"If you leave the selected dimension you".....Luke broke off.But Angrail wasn' listening,not to Luke, But a chanting voice."Leave and die,Repel from the borders,the tormented,Leave and die,Repel from the borders,the tormented,Leave and die,Repel from the borders,the tormented,"The voice taunted Angrail.Giratina continued to smile.But Angrail stepped passed Giratina.Suddenly,he let out a low moan.But the moan quickly changed into a screaming sound,but not normally screaming,a ripping,A deafening screech.And the torment changed to laughing,and giratina's eyes appeared for the first time.Scarlet and Luke crept through the door.They were now in the diamond room."Its too late,"said Neptune.
"Already?!"Said Luke with a look of horror.The walls Broke down.Palkia burst through in a huge portal.Dialga also in the same way.Darkrai appeared out of nothingness.Giratina was in the front though.He talked with harsh whispers which were not understandable.Angrail was in front of giratina.While giratina whispered,Angrail translated in an emotionless voice. He said like this."It is formed.There is no hope.The dimensions are one.The world must cease. In this rule.Under my command.It has started already.You are already lost."Luke was horrified and confused at the same time.He couldn't make it out.He felt helpless,as if he was already gone.His thoughts were interrupted,as he heard a battle cry.Palkia,Dialga,Darkrai and Giratina all turned their heads.There,stood Arceus,His head lifted,its mane flowing magnificently.And behind Arceus it wasn't dark.Angrail spoke."You cannot save it Original one.It has formed.We are superior."Arceus lifted his head further.All arceus' of every type galloped next to the normal one.Giratina laughed again.An army of arceus,far darker than the others with purple eyes and red hooves approached behind giratina.It was war.
 
wow, the first part was confusing, but the last part was excellent! it's sure better than the iolite one.
BTW: What happened with kraytor?
 
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