He is still in his dull volcano sleeping again.Bed time again,but on saturday I will do alot.
Writing Mysterys of Zetroh
- Thread starter ~Magma King~
- Start date
a cutting end for that chapter.. lol
Name:Watery
Good/Bad:Good and Kind
Favourite pokemon:Charizard
Favourite type(Optional):Fire, Water, and Poison
Description:Has Black hair and wears pants and nice clothes.Ran away from home to play and train with pokemon and is always thinking of his family.He always remembers the good tiems and sometimes regrets he picked pokemon instead of them.
Any other background notes:Has a friend called Trent
Anything else Important:Nothing
Good/Bad:Good and Kind
Favourite pokemon:Charizard
Favourite type(Optional):Fire, Water, and Poison
Description:Has Black hair and wears pants and nice clothes.Ran away from home to play and train with pokemon and is always thinking of his family.He always remembers the good tiems and sometimes regrets he picked pokemon instead of them.
Any other background notes:Has a friend called Trent
Anything else Important:Nothing
Ok he will be in.I will update soon,but you may have to wait a chapter or 2.
Can I join?I just found this.
Name:Asira
Good/Bad:Nice especially to pokemon.
Favourite pokemon:Skitty
Favourite type(Optional):Normal
Description:Shy person.Loves pokemon.Plants berries daily.Wears white in the daytime and black at nighttime.Scarcely wears other colors.
Any other background notes:Trains.A lot.
Anything else Important:A girl!
Name:Asira
Good/Bad:Nice especially to pokemon.
Favourite pokemon:Skitty
Favourite type(Optional):Normal
Description:Shy person.Loves pokemon.Plants berries daily.Wears white in the daytime and black at nighttime.Scarcely wears other colors.
Any other background notes:Trains.A lot.
Anything else Important:A girl!
Chapter 13-the bloodthirsty battle
Giratina quickly dissappeared with shadow drive.The arceus' all charged into battle.Suddenly, Giratina reappeared and landed on arceus.Arceus tried to retaliate,but it couldn't get up. Giratina was far too heavy.Palkia,dialga and darkrai also battled.I should help,thought Luke, as he sent in chloroking salamence aquoink mantalord luxray and Rhyperior.They all attacked the demon arceus'."Arceus!"Cried pine as he saw what had happened,and he sent out tremtenple fearow and scorpire.Luke was suddenly picked up by palkia.But in intention of capturing it Neptune threw a galactic bomb on it.This made it angry,and it tossed away Luke and picked up neptune."This is all your fault!"Shouted Luke,as Neptune was drawn near to Palkia's mouth,then obliverated by a spacial rend.Luke was horror struck.He had no clue of what to do.He returned his pokemon.The psychic Arceus talked to him."The door.Finish the challenge,only you can save me",it said.Luke still worried about Arceus,ran out the door. There stood Giratina and Angrail.Shadowy mist envelopped Giratina and it dissappeared. Angrail and Luke were on a small platform.Suddenly,the walls turned to space.They were zooming across the universe!Angrail tried to hit Luke,but he sent out salamence and flew off.
Angrail jumped onto salamence's tail and grabbed it.Salamence growled.Luke tried to kick him off,but he held on."Full speed!"Luke commanded,and Angrail couldn't hold.He fell,but Luke saw
Nothing else.Palkia appeared in the space,wings outspread flying next to them.As they heard Angrail shout,lazers spread everywhere,and the area returned to normal,and a door came in front of them.Palkia dissappeared.Luke flew through the door.Now they were in a white illuminatred room.Angrail appeared out of Nowhere.He teleported around the room,and then hit Luke.Then the area changed.They were going back in time!Eventually,they were at Pitch Blackness.All he could see was an egg.It was glowing with power.He touched it,and he could hear whispers."Hatch me.Free us.I can save you.Hatch the egg,take me.He touched it again,
but his hand thrust back.Dialga landed in front of him,with Angrail.Luke picked up the egg. Then he quickly dodged Dialga's roar of time.He grabbed Angrail and used him as a sheild.He was gone,with the same flash of lazers.Dialga also dissappeared,and the room was normal again.There were more whispers."Hatch us.May we originate,the time is wrong.We will help, keep me closer.Touch us."Luke ran into the next room with the egg.There was Darkrai,its eyes facing Luke.It beckoned for Luke to hand over the egg."Touch me!"The whisper was loud and it rang in Lukes ears.Luke touched it,and Out came Arceus.From him,came Mesprit, Uxie and Azelf."Protect them."Arceus said.
"Why?Can't they fight."
"The lakes are not here.The legend cannot redo itself.They don't have any powers." Luke was stunned.He had to finish it,or he would be in a time before everything,unable to return to home.Arceus Attacked Darkrai.Then appeared Angrail.His eyes were red,his mouth open, revealing sharp blood stained teath.He was a dark grey colour and his hair was flowing backwards."You will fall into an endless sleap.You will fall into a deathening sleep!"Angrail lunged at Luke.Arceus quickly turned and hit him away.Then it attacked Darkrai again. Luke picked up Angrail while he couldn't attack,and threw him away.He dissintergrated into lazers again and Darkrai dissappeared.Arceus came to Luke.Luke opened the next door.They were in Giratina's world.It was empty.The next door was open."What door is that?"Asked Luke.
"To the hall of begginning.My dimension.The worlds beggining."They entered.Giratina stood with the demon Arceus' accompanying it.Giratina turned round.Giratina was stunned.He couldn't find the egg."It hatched",said Luke,"Go back."With that Arceus Sealed Giratina in his dimension,locking the door.Then the demon Arceus cried,as they broke into lazers.The other Arceus' approached and lept inside Arceus.Then came Dialga and Palkia."Its been a fun day", Said Luke nervously,"But I'd like to go home."Dialga,Arceus and Palkia smiled.He felt himself lift,and teleport away.As ghe returned home,he found a ticket near the lab."Free ride on a Deefloat,explore the worlds ocean!"It read,and with one look,Luke set off.
Giratina quickly dissappeared with shadow drive.The arceus' all charged into battle.Suddenly, Giratina reappeared and landed on arceus.Arceus tried to retaliate,but it couldn't get up. Giratina was far too heavy.Palkia,dialga and darkrai also battled.I should help,thought Luke, as he sent in chloroking salamence aquoink mantalord luxray and Rhyperior.They all attacked the demon arceus'."Arceus!"Cried pine as he saw what had happened,and he sent out tremtenple fearow and scorpire.Luke was suddenly picked up by palkia.But in intention of capturing it Neptune threw a galactic bomb on it.This made it angry,and it tossed away Luke and picked up neptune."This is all your fault!"Shouted Luke,as Neptune was drawn near to Palkia's mouth,then obliverated by a spacial rend.Luke was horror struck.He had no clue of what to do.He returned his pokemon.The psychic Arceus talked to him."The door.Finish the challenge,only you can save me",it said.Luke still worried about Arceus,ran out the door. There stood Giratina and Angrail.Shadowy mist envelopped Giratina and it dissappeared. Angrail and Luke were on a small platform.Suddenly,the walls turned to space.They were zooming across the universe!Angrail tried to hit Luke,but he sent out salamence and flew off.
Angrail jumped onto salamence's tail and grabbed it.Salamence growled.Luke tried to kick him off,but he held on."Full speed!"Luke commanded,and Angrail couldn't hold.He fell,but Luke saw
Nothing else.Palkia appeared in the space,wings outspread flying next to them.As they heard Angrail shout,lazers spread everywhere,and the area returned to normal,and a door came in front of them.Palkia dissappeared.Luke flew through the door.Now they were in a white illuminatred room.Angrail appeared out of Nowhere.He teleported around the room,and then hit Luke.Then the area changed.They were going back in time!Eventually,they were at Pitch Blackness.All he could see was an egg.It was glowing with power.He touched it,and he could hear whispers."Hatch me.Free us.I can save you.Hatch the egg,take me.He touched it again,
but his hand thrust back.Dialga landed in front of him,with Angrail.Luke picked up the egg. Then he quickly dodged Dialga's roar of time.He grabbed Angrail and used him as a sheild.He was gone,with the same flash of lazers.Dialga also dissappeared,and the room was normal again.There were more whispers."Hatch us.May we originate,the time is wrong.We will help, keep me closer.Touch us."Luke ran into the next room with the egg.There was Darkrai,its eyes facing Luke.It beckoned for Luke to hand over the egg."Touch me!"The whisper was loud and it rang in Lukes ears.Luke touched it,and Out came Arceus.From him,came Mesprit, Uxie and Azelf."Protect them."Arceus said.
"Why?Can't they fight."
"The lakes are not here.The legend cannot redo itself.They don't have any powers." Luke was stunned.He had to finish it,or he would be in a time before everything,unable to return to home.Arceus Attacked Darkrai.Then appeared Angrail.His eyes were red,his mouth open, revealing sharp blood stained teath.He was a dark grey colour and his hair was flowing backwards."You will fall into an endless sleap.You will fall into a deathening sleep!"Angrail lunged at Luke.Arceus quickly turned and hit him away.Then it attacked Darkrai again. Luke picked up Angrail while he couldn't attack,and threw him away.He dissintergrated into lazers again and Darkrai dissappeared.Arceus came to Luke.Luke opened the next door.They were in Giratina's world.It was empty.The next door was open."What door is that?"Asked Luke.
"To the hall of begginning.My dimension.The worlds beggining."They entered.Giratina stood with the demon Arceus' accompanying it.Giratina turned round.Giratina was stunned.He couldn't find the egg."It hatched",said Luke,"Go back."With that Arceus Sealed Giratina in his dimension,locking the door.Then the demon Arceus cried,as they broke into lazers.The other Arceus' approached and lept inside Arceus.Then came Dialga and Palkia."Its been a fun day", Said Luke nervously,"But I'd like to go home."Dialga,Arceus and Palkia smiled.He felt himself lift,and teleport away.As ghe returned home,he found a ticket near the lab."Free ride on a Deefloat,explore the worlds ocean!"It read,and with one look,Luke set off.
thanks,your people will be in the next chapter,which will be soon.
good! that was a great plan! giratina got sealed! you're getting better with fanfics.
off topic: what's going on with MK? Has anyone seen him alive?
Sorry,I had problems with getting on here,I've been very busy.
Chapter 15-Draining the water!
Luke hurriedly arrived at the small area Known as the canyon lakefront.On arrival,he noticed a huge gathering of boys and girls.He rushed towards the manager."Hello!Get with your partner quickly!"Partner,thought Luke.He was confused."Dad?Mum?"Asked the man.Luke paused,and for the first time in the past two years he actually thought."Ahhh,I see",the manager beckoned towards a man."You!Come look after this fine young lad!"
"But I'm already looking aft-
"Not to worry!The children are getting in two's!"The man sighed,and beckoned Luke into the boat.Along with Luke,was a girl around the age of 10.They all sat in silence,until finaly the man spoke."So....why don't we introduce ourselves?I'm watery."
"I'm Asira",Said the girl.She had a skitty with her.
"I'm,errr,Luke"
"All set out!3!2!1!Go!!"The manager shouted.
"Go?!"Asked Luke.
"Its a race.Come on!"They rowed on for around 5 minutes.Suddenly there was a"PTSSSHH!" and The boat started to sink."I think we have a flat-
"PSHHHHHHHHHHH!"The boat was thrust over and into the air.They all fell into the water......
Asira climbed back onto the boat,soaking wet,along with skitty.On the other side Luke climbed up,and they both waited.Then Watery climbed up."Just a flat tire",Said watery cheerfully.
"What?!"Said Luke,as the words smashed his expression.
"Huh?!"Asira was completely puzzled.
"Come on,we'll lose if we don't hurry."
"But a flat Tire dosn't send the boat ten metres in the air"....Asira trailed off.
"Wwellll.Come on I think we need some help."Luke threw his pokeball.A giant Blue kite pokemon filled the sky."Mantalord,take us!"Luke attached some string to Mantalord.They didn't need to row,as they were being pulled along quickly."Luke."Whispered Asira.
"Huh?"He replied
"Don't you think...he",Asira pointed to Watery,"A bit weird.
"I thought I was the only one who noticed."
"Noticed what?"
"What you said and the fact that we can't see the other people anymore." Luke returned Mantalord."Why'd you do that?!"Asked Asira.Luke pointed straight ahead.There was a huge cave with stalagmites and pillars."Watery!"Cried Luke.Watery took no notice however. They were inside the cave.Quickly the entrance and exit slammed shut."What are you doing?!"Asira cried out loudly.Her voice echoed around the cave.Watery smirked. Suddenly she wished that she had never said it.The fear rose to her face and she grew very hot."Getting you where you belong!"Watery pointed at Luke.
"Me?!"
"Yes you!Ruining our operation completely!"Watery staggered towards Luke."mmmmm!Help!"The cry came from the bottom of the ship.
"Watery?"Whispered Asira,"Luke,you go get him!I'll deal with this guy!" Luke hurried to the Hull.
"Go!Glaceon!"Asira sent in a proud and majestic Glaceon.
"Nitrode!"A green gas pokemon swamped over Glaceon.It seemed to be forming a technique."Blizzard!"Shouted Asira.Nitrode was gone and there was an empty ice cube.
"Luke?"Watery was shivvering.
"Watery?"Luke was astonished.
"I thought you would have noticed I'd changed clothes first!"Watery laughed,but he quickly changed his tone of voice again."They claim themselves to be team Nightmare.I managed to beat one,but Charizard couldn't take the other."Watery stood up."Lets get back on top."
The ice cube started to fill up green.Eventually,Asira saw the eyes of Nitrode."Headbutt!!"Commanded Asira.the huge Ice cupe fell into the water.The fake Watery returned him.He threw off his clothes revealing a white cloak and costume.He had purple hair and a huge black "N" on his shirt.Luke and Watery rushed to the top."Team Nightmare?!"Asked Luke."You won't escape though!"Said the Nightmare Grunt as he Pulled out a huge pistol and fired it at the roof.He jetpacked out."We're stuck",said Luke.
"W-well."Asira shivered,"Mum said to use this in an emergency...I guess this classifies as an emergency."She pulled out a large purple berry.With that,they waited.The berry started to shine,and everything around them exploded."Boat trip goes boom for me!"Said Watery as he sent out his Charizard and flew away."Yeah,same",said Asira,and she flew away on Pidgeot.But Luke thought.The pokemon league was waiting...
Chapter 15-Draining the water!
Luke hurriedly arrived at the small area Known as the canyon lakefront.On arrival,he noticed a huge gathering of boys and girls.He rushed towards the manager."Hello!Get with your partner quickly!"Partner,thought Luke.He was confused."Dad?Mum?"Asked the man.Luke paused,and for the first time in the past two years he actually thought."Ahhh,I see",the manager beckoned towards a man."You!Come look after this fine young lad!"
"But I'm already looking aft-
"Not to worry!The children are getting in two's!"The man sighed,and beckoned Luke into the boat.Along with Luke,was a girl around the age of 10.They all sat in silence,until finaly the man spoke."So....why don't we introduce ourselves?I'm watery."
"I'm Asira",Said the girl.She had a skitty with her.
"I'm,errr,Luke"
"All set out!3!2!1!Go!!"The manager shouted.
"Go?!"Asked Luke.
"Its a race.Come on!"They rowed on for around 5 minutes.Suddenly there was a"PTSSSHH!" and The boat started to sink."I think we have a flat-
"PSHHHHHHHHHHH!"The boat was thrust over and into the air.They all fell into the water......
Asira climbed back onto the boat,soaking wet,along with skitty.On the other side Luke climbed up,and they both waited.Then Watery climbed up."Just a flat tire",Said watery cheerfully.
"What?!"Said Luke,as the words smashed his expression.
"Huh?!"Asira was completely puzzled.
"Come on,we'll lose if we don't hurry."
"But a flat Tire dosn't send the boat ten metres in the air"....Asira trailed off.
"Wwellll.Come on I think we need some help."Luke threw his pokeball.A giant Blue kite pokemon filled the sky."Mantalord,take us!"Luke attached some string to Mantalord.They didn't need to row,as they were being pulled along quickly."Luke."Whispered Asira.
"Huh?"He replied
"Don't you think...he",Asira pointed to Watery,"A bit weird.
"I thought I was the only one who noticed."
"Noticed what?"
"What you said and the fact that we can't see the other people anymore." Luke returned Mantalord."Why'd you do that?!"Asked Asira.Luke pointed straight ahead.There was a huge cave with stalagmites and pillars."Watery!"Cried Luke.Watery took no notice however. They were inside the cave.Quickly the entrance and exit slammed shut."What are you doing?!"Asira cried out loudly.Her voice echoed around the cave.Watery smirked. Suddenly she wished that she had never said it.The fear rose to her face and she grew very hot."Getting you where you belong!"Watery pointed at Luke.
"Me?!"
"Yes you!Ruining our operation completely!"Watery staggered towards Luke."mmmmm!Help!"The cry came from the bottom of the ship.
"Watery?"Whispered Asira,"Luke,you go get him!I'll deal with this guy!" Luke hurried to the Hull.
"Go!Glaceon!"Asira sent in a proud and majestic Glaceon.
"Nitrode!"A green gas pokemon swamped over Glaceon.It seemed to be forming a technique."Blizzard!"Shouted Asira.Nitrode was gone and there was an empty ice cube.
"Luke?"Watery was shivvering.
"Watery?"Luke was astonished.
"I thought you would have noticed I'd changed clothes first!"Watery laughed,but he quickly changed his tone of voice again."They claim themselves to be team Nightmare.I managed to beat one,but Charizard couldn't take the other."Watery stood up."Lets get back on top."
The ice cube started to fill up green.Eventually,Asira saw the eyes of Nitrode."Headbutt!!"Commanded Asira.the huge Ice cupe fell into the water.The fake Watery returned him.He threw off his clothes revealing a white cloak and costume.He had purple hair and a huge black "N" on his shirt.Luke and Watery rushed to the top."Team Nightmare?!"Asked Luke."You won't escape though!"Said the Nightmare Grunt as he Pulled out a huge pistol and fired it at the roof.He jetpacked out."We're stuck",said Luke.
"W-well."Asira shivered,"Mum said to use this in an emergency...I guess this classifies as an emergency."She pulled out a large purple berry.With that,they waited.The berry started to shine,and everything around them exploded."Boat trip goes boom for me!"Said Watery as he sent out his Charizard and flew away."Yeah,same",said Asira,and she flew away on Pidgeot.But Luke thought.The pokemon league was waiting...
Name: Oren (Favorite Name Ever! Not my real name though!)
Good/Bad: Good
Favourite pokemon: Ampharos
Favourite type(Optional): Electric/Lightning/Thunder
Description: A 15 year old kid who always follows the rules. He became a police officer at the age of 14 and also a pokemon trainer. He has learned his pokemon knowledge from his father Lance.
Any other background notes: He always wanted the pokemon ampharos but he never had a pokemon. His parents dont think he is responsible enough! He sees a bunch of other kids with pokemon that are much younger than him and that frustrates him. Maybe he is not that good after all?
Anything else Important: NOne
Good/Bad: Good
Favourite pokemon: Ampharos
Favourite type(Optional): Electric/Lightning/Thunder
Description: A 15 year old kid who always follows the rules. He became a police officer at the age of 14 and also a pokemon trainer. He has learned his pokemon knowledge from his father Lance.
Any other background notes: He always wanted the pokemon ampharos but he never had a pokemon. His parents dont think he is responsible enough! He sees a bunch of other kids with pokemon that are much younger than him and that frustrates him. Maybe he is not that good after all?
Anything else Important: NOne
chapter 16-The pokemon league(Part 1)
"And your name?"Asked Nurse joy.
"Madrid.Just Madrid",said the boy.
"Very well,proceed."Said Nurse joy with a grin.Urgh,thought Luke,this is taking SOOO long.
"L-L-Lert-tech!Lertech Sumon",it was a shivering man,now in a wheelchair and completely scarred.
"mmmmmm,ok!"Nurse joy said again.
"Samson Joseph Yarnmouth,but I prefer sam."Said the boy with a smile.He wore a blue sports jacket,lots of jewelry and long trousers.He had thick brown hair and eyes."Oh sam!"Cried Nurse joy gleefully,"Proceed straight away!" As many more people registered,it was finally Lukes turn.
"Luke.Luke williams."He said Nervously.
"MmmmmmmmmOK!"He entered the crowd and seated himself.
"Entry no.4 and Number 6!"Shouted the ref.Luke was ready for a battle.And alot more.
"And your name?"Asked Nurse joy.
"Madrid.Just Madrid",said the boy.
"Very well,proceed."Said Nurse joy with a grin.Urgh,thought Luke,this is taking SOOO long.
"L-L-Lert-tech!Lertech Sumon",it was a shivering man,now in a wheelchair and completely scarred.
"mmmmmm,ok!"Nurse joy said again.
"Samson Joseph Yarnmouth,but I prefer sam."Said the boy with a smile.He wore a blue sports jacket,lots of jewelry and long trousers.He had thick brown hair and eyes."Oh sam!"Cried Nurse joy gleefully,"Proceed straight away!" As many more people registered,it was finally Lukes turn.
"Luke.Luke williams."He said Nervously.
"MmmmmmmmmOK!"He entered the crowd and seated himself.
"Entry no.4 and Number 6!"Shouted the ref.Luke was ready for a battle.And alot more.
Be patient, there are many characters, he can't add all of them at the same time. About the chapters, very good! but I couldn't understand some things in chapter 15. Maybe it's just me.