Writing naruto ninja wars:the begining of the end

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Chapter two 3/3

Naruto and Wolveoro ran at each other engaging in battle. All of the other's just stared at the two fighting jonin. Naruto used shadow clone jutsu. Wolveoro used a summoning jutsu so summon a giant snake. The snake crushed most of the clones. There were two Naruto's left. The real Naruto used a summoning jutsu to summon the chief frog. The two giants clashed together. “So this is you summoned me eh Naruto”. “Precisely”. Naruto said. Down below a complete battle had broken out. Kankuran and Uribaki were battling. Kankuran had his sharingan which was proving quiet effective. Uribaki was really mad for two reasons he had a kunai in his leg and the other reason was that he was losing to someone younger than him. He finally got so mad he used he best technique.” Summoning jutsu!!”. He had summand the great Pharaoh of the hidden leaf village. Uribaki started to chuckle. “You genin really think you can win?”. “Yes we can.” Kioni and Bizoku were standing right behind Kankuran. “You guys take down Uribaki I will handle the Pharaoh.” Kioni and Bizoku nodded and jumped after Uribaki.

I will finish the battle in the next chapter enjoy!!! :)
 
ok i will take story line suggestions now too. And i need more feedback before i make many more chapters....
 
linkex said:
im not gonna post a chapter today i will post 2 tommarow though.ok:)

where is it huhhhhhhhhhh??

(lol hurry up bud cant wait to long :D)

oh and dont forget to pm me the "script" ;)
 
Chapter three 1/3

The battle with Nauto and Wolveoro were still fighting. Kankuran and the Pharaoh. Kioni and Bizoku were battling Uribaki. In general the leaf village ninja were losing. When they had given up hope on winning and getting there comrades back something really amazing happened three snow ninja had shown up and were helping the battle!!!! “We are snow ninja sent on an A ranked mission to help some leaf village ninja to get there comrades back”……. There was a really awkward silence. “Are you those ninja??” The tallest ninja said…. “I am Nemaru Riashashi”. He had a sword on his back and was dressed in standard snow ninja clothes. “Thank you” Naruto jumped to the ground. The sound ninja seeing the new ninja were intimidated. “Come” Wolveoro said sadly.

sorry i could not post..... enjoy:)
 
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