Overall Spoiler Competition!!!!!

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I'll give it a go...

Hitmonchan (Fighting)
70 hp

(F)Straight Punch 10
This attack does 10 damage to one of your opponent's bench pokemon(don't apply weakness and resistance).

(F) (F) (*) Slit Spiral Punch 30
Flip a coin.If heads the defending pokemon is now confused.

Weakness : Psychic
Resistance:
Retreat Cost: (*)
 
Entry is now closed.
Round 1: Create a Stage 1 card (non-Delta; non-ex; please...)
Due: May 26 9:00 p.m. (GMT +8)
 
My entry:
Quilava
70HP
Type: [R]
STAGE 1

Weakness: [W]
Resistance: -
Retreat Cost: [C]

Poké-BODY: Whirlwind of dancing flames
Quilava can't be Burned. If Quilava is your Active Pokemon and is damaged by an opponent's attack (even if Quilava is Knocked Out), the Attacking Pokemon is now Burned.

[RC] Burning wall of fire - 20
Each Defending Pokémon is now Burned.

[RRC] One hundred degrees Celsius - 40+
If the Defending Pokémon is Burned, remove 1 damage counter from Quilava. If the Defending Pokémon is [W], this attack does 40 damage plus 10 more damage.
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For any ignorant people out there (=P), 100 degrees Celsius is boiling point, therefore water evaporates. Cookie to whoever knows who inspired the first attack and Pokebody's name.

I just realised that 70HP is suddenly ridiculously fragile... screw Dustox and Shiftry ex D:
 
RE:  Overall Spoiler Competition!!!!!

Here's my stage 1 Pokémon...

Togetic
70 HP
Normal
Stage 1 Pokémon (Evolves from Togepi)

Poké-Body: Fairy Veil
As long as Togetic is in play, each of your Active Pokémon can't be affected by any Special Conditions.

( CC ) Replay 20
You may return an energy card attached to Togetic to your hand. If you do, the Defending Pokémon must use the same attack it used the turn before. This attack can't be used if the Defending Pokémon didn't use an attack.

( CCC ) Aerial Ace 50
This attack is not affected by resistance.

Weakness: Lightning
Resistance: Fighting
Retreat Cost: 1
 
here's my 1st stage pokemon

Hypno
80 HP
Psychic
Stage 1 Pokémon (Evolves from Drowzee)

Poké-Body: Sleepy Aura
As long as Hypno is your Active pokemon,Your opponent has to flip two coins for their active pokemon to be awaken.

( C ) Pendulum Swing
The defending pokemon is now asleep.

( PCC ) Dream Eater 50
Hypno can only use this attack if the defending pokemon is asleep.

Weakness: Psychic
Resistance:
Retreat Cost: 1
 
Light Venusaur said:
Mine:
May's Flareon
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It was a little under-broken...so I went back & fixed it up!
 

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Ursaring 80 HP ( C )

Stage 1 Pokémon (Evolves from Teddiursa).

( C )( C )Bear Hug 30
Before doing damage, your opponent may remove 1 damage counter from the defending Pokémon.

( C )( C )( C )Slash 50

( C )( C )( C )( C )Ring 'Em Out 50
Put up to 3 damage counters on your opponent's benched Pokémon in any way you like. If you put exactly 1 damage counter, draw 3 cards. If you put exactly 2 damage counters, draw 2 cards. If you put exactly 3 damage counters, draw a card.

Weakness ( C ) Resistance (None) Retreat Cost ( C )( C )( C )



I can't help but think that there's a better wording for Ring 'Em Out...
 
Sorry, i forgot to post the scores:
PikaFlash: 92
bass_forte: 89
StiffMyster: 88
Pimpwalkin' Mateo Johnson: 86
FireMeowth: 83
Pokefan4000: 83
Rain Dancer: 79
Light Venusaur: 72

Marking was VERY tough... so yeah... and Light Venusaur, im sorry; but im not going to grade your second one. StiffMyster will get a penalty of -2 for reminding u. Gotta be tough... That's actually cheating, StiffMyster. No offense.
 
^I'm not questioning your marking or anything, but if possible, could you post up the actual grading? It'd be nice to know how to improve, after all.
 
Raticate - 80 HP - C

Poké-Power: Hoard
Once during your turn (before your attack), if Raticate is on your Bench, you may search your deck for a basic Energy card and attach it to Raticate. Shuffle your deck afterward. You can't use more than 1 Hoard Poké-Power a turn.

CC - Collect
Draw 2 cards. If Raticate has any React Energy attached to it, draw 3 cards instead.

CCC - Hyper Fang - 40+
If the Defending Pokémon is Pokémon-ex, this attack does 40 damage plus 40 more damage.

WK: F / RS: None / RC: C
 
RE:  Overall Spoiler Competition!!!!!

FireMeowth said:
( C )( C )( C )( C )Ring 'Em Out 50
Put up to 3 damage counters on your opponent's benched Pokémon in any way you like. If you put exactly 1 damage counter, draw 3 cards. If you put exactly 2 damage counters, draw 2 cards. If you put exactly 3 damage counters, draw a card.

...I can't help but think that there's a better wording for Ring 'Em Out...
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Your wording is correct. Capitalize the B in Benched and you're good to go :D
 
Politoad 90 HP ( W )

Stage 2 Pokémon.

( W )( C )Frog Jump 20
Put 1 damage counter on 1 of your opponent's Benched Pokémon.

( W )( W )( C )Hydro Smash 40+
Flip a coin. If heads, this attack does 40 damage plus 30 more damage and put 1 damage counter on Politoad.

Weakness ( L ) Resistance (None) Retreat Cost ( C )( C )( C )
 
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