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OK, you can be Grimer, chapter 3.5 up in about an hour. Chapter 4 and chapter 6 will have more action than the previous ones.
Come on, it was like, Christmas and stuff 
. I'll try and do it today.
. I'll try and do it today.
OK, I'm making no more promises, I'll try, but I may not be able to.
Chapter 3.5-Gargoff
"You'd hope something interesting would happen", Said Magby, "because so far we've been walking for hours".
"I could look through my magic book", Panted Len.
"Oh fine, just let me read it". Without a chance to reply Magby snatched it and skimmed through the pages.
"Ressurect the dead, Kill everybody in 5 miles, GARGOFF, HAHAHAHHAHAHAHHA!!!"
"What?"Said Len.
"Gargoff!"
"Oh, thats sooo funny"
"Shut up, just watch", He said as a huge ring of fire appeared around them. In the middle, stood a 2.4 metre tall rainbow coloured Gargoyle. Alongside him was a short, fat businessman in a slug suit. "Hey, it is quite funny actually", Said len.
"SILENCE!", Said the Gargoyle, "You have free'd me from my prison and-Wait a minute, you're", Gargoff Paused.
"I'm", Said Magby.
"You are my arch nemesis!! Do you not remember me?!"Magby was bewildered.
"Not at all"
"But you're my ARCH NEMESIS you must know me!"Gargoff looked desperate.
"Sorry, I don't know you-
"You lie! YOU LIE!" Gargoff leapt into the air and flew away, carrying the man in a slug suit, Chanting "The fire will kill you".
The fire didn't kill them though. Unfortunately, there was no explanation for this. At least, no sensible one. magby released Ackmed, and they carried on until they could bare it no longer. "Oh come on, give me some sign of an enemy base!"Pleaded Magby.
"Well", said Len, "Theres one right there". It read:
"SUPER EVIL TOP SECRET BASE PLEASE NO INTRUDERS"
"Classical", Smiled Magby, "Hey look, its Hoppip!"
"Hoppip?! You mean, the Hoppip?!" Said Ackmed. All three Started running at supersonic speeds.
The three heros started listening in on the conversations held in the office. "And then, we launch the Nuclear bomb and DETONATE the Gem!! KABOOM!"
"No", came a second voice, much more calm and mature, with a little tint of evilness, "That involves destroying he highway too. Get out. Next please".
"Hi, I'd like to go next", Said Magby.
"What?! Magby?"Said the voice.
"What I thought you could do, was give me the Hoppip on your desk and hault the bomb altogether"
"You think", The man smiled, "That I would do that?"
"Well, a bit of forcing could do the trick"...
Chapter 4-Timebomb- Coming at some point. This will be the most exciting chapter so far, followed by a tension building one and then a huge one. And no, Gargoff is coming back.
"You'd hope something interesting would happen", Said Magby, "because so far we've been walking for hours".
"I could look through my magic book", Panted Len.
"Oh fine, just let me read it". Without a chance to reply Magby snatched it and skimmed through the pages.
"Ressurect the dead, Kill everybody in 5 miles, GARGOFF, HAHAHAHHAHAHAHHA!!!"
"What?"Said Len.
"Gargoff!"
"Oh, thats sooo funny"
"Shut up, just watch", He said as a huge ring of fire appeared around them. In the middle, stood a 2.4 metre tall rainbow coloured Gargoyle. Alongside him was a short, fat businessman in a slug suit. "Hey, it is quite funny actually", Said len.
"SILENCE!", Said the Gargoyle, "You have free'd me from my prison and-Wait a minute, you're", Gargoff Paused.
"I'm", Said Magby.
"You are my arch nemesis!! Do you not remember me?!"Magby was bewildered.
"Not at all"
"But you're my ARCH NEMESIS you must know me!"Gargoff looked desperate.
"Sorry, I don't know you-
"You lie! YOU LIE!" Gargoff leapt into the air and flew away, carrying the man in a slug suit, Chanting "The fire will kill you".
The fire didn't kill them though. Unfortunately, there was no explanation for this. At least, no sensible one. magby released Ackmed, and they carried on until they could bare it no longer. "Oh come on, give me some sign of an enemy base!"Pleaded Magby.
"Well", said Len, "Theres one right there". It read:
"SUPER EVIL TOP SECRET BASE PLEASE NO INTRUDERS"
"Classical", Smiled Magby, "Hey look, its Hoppip!"
"Hoppip?! You mean, the Hoppip?!" Said Ackmed. All three Started running at supersonic speeds.
The three heros started listening in on the conversations held in the office. "And then, we launch the Nuclear bomb and DETONATE the Gem!! KABOOM!"
"No", came a second voice, much more calm and mature, with a little tint of evilness, "That involves destroying he highway too. Get out. Next please".
"Hi, I'd like to go next", Said Magby.
"What?! Magby?"Said the voice.
"What I thought you could do, was give me the Hoppip on your desk and hault the bomb altogether"
"You think", The man smiled, "That I would do that?"
"Well, a bit of forcing could do the trick"...
Chapter 4-Timebomb- Coming at some point. This will be the most exciting chapter so far, followed by a tension building one and then a huge one. And no, Gargoff is coming back.
Chapter 4-Timebomb
"I'm most concerned that you will need forcing", He said. He stood up. His eyes were peircing and cold, his black hair long and neat, which didn't go to well with white face paint. He wore a business suit, and also black boots and rubber gloves. "I think, that we have captured Pikachu", Smiled the man.
"Do what you like, I've never liked him", Said Magby. Soonly after Pikachu was shot and thrown away.
"What about.... Mudkip?"
Lots of swearing. Mudkip shot.
"Burmy?"
"No"
"ELEKID?!"
"Absolutely *@!$ not". The floor was stained in blood and rotting bodies. There was silence. A flicker. The lights whent out in a dash. Magby Lept towards the switch and turned it on. Len was safely, or in fact quite the opposite, in the mans hands. Magby shivered.
"So, here is your decision. You either attempt to save your friend, and be shot. Or, you can attempt to stop the timebomb, which also Involves shooting", The man grinned in an evil fashion.
"Wait!" Said Ackmed, "Stop! Take me instead!"
"Why?" Said the man.
"I'm juicy"
"Bugger off"
"Oh for heavens sake!" Ackmed Launched himself onto The man, hit him a few times, a few more, then threw him into the wall. "Magby, Stop the bomb!"
"Y-You got it sir!"
"Len, you Finish this guy off!"
"Right away!"
"And I shall Dispose of the leftover weapons and troops!" Ackmed advanced towards the door.
"Wait", Said Hoppip.
"What? You can talk?"
"No, you're the only person that can understand me". Ackmed was Bewildered. "You're courage has impressed me much. The reason you can understand me is that I have a gift for you".
"Gift, What like?"
"You must take the form of me, you were destined to do it"
"Destined since when?"
"I dunno, 6 and a half weeks ago".
"Great, err, thanks!"
"Don't worry. You also get psychic powers and stuff", It said, and with those words, dissappeared. Ackmed, looked around. Taking down the HaP would be alot easier.
Magby gritted his teeth. He pulled at a wire, and sparks flew into the air, Along with a "TZZZAAP". Magby was confused; He'd never seen a spark say TZZZAAP. He opened a twitchy eye. He pulled again. The time changed from 1:00 to 0:30. He had half an hour to stop it. "Oh great, I'm stuffed". He picked up the bomb and sighed.
Len on the other hand was already bleeding to death on the floor of the room. The man grinned his devilish grin, now used 3 times in under 1 chapter. He left the room chuckling an equally devilish Chuckle. As he was leaving, Len slowly got up. Using his last heave of strength, he threw a conveniently placed firebomb. The man burst into flames. The flames attempted to burst into the man, but was killed for breaking the laws of physics. Len got up, he slowly trudged away, but suddenly became giddy. His vision blurred, he lost control of his muscles. His vision darkened. Len could not resist. The more he tried to fight it, more surges of pain and halucinations came. It was too late. He blacked out.
"Magby!" Shouted Ackmed, gasping for breath after much fighting.
"Hoppip?"
"Its me, Ackmed".
"What the-
"No time to explain, we must get Len!". Hoppip beckoned Magby to a great monsterous machine, revealing many Cogs and steal rope."This is my kind of vehicle!" Said Magby. Still holding the Bomb, he Bulldozed all objects in his way. At full speed Magby charged through each room, until coming across Len. The two stood in silence. Slowly and carerfully, they took Len into the vehicle. "He is suffering major blood loss, we need help Immediately!" Said Ackmed. Magby pressed the teleport button. "Where would you like to travel sir?"
"Biggest ocean you can find!-
"What?!" Said Ackmed. "You'd better know what you're doing". Magby did not answer. They teleported.
"I'll be one minute", said Magby. The bomb read 00:05. Magby thrust it into the ocean. There was a hault. KABLAM!!! Magby clapped his hands. "See, no harm caused at all", smiled Magby. The machine left... A few seconds later, 5 miles of dead Sealife rose above the ocean.
Chapter 5-The past is behind us- Coming soon! Everybody else who signed up WILL BE in this chapter.
"I'm most concerned that you will need forcing", He said. He stood up. His eyes were peircing and cold, his black hair long and neat, which didn't go to well with white face paint. He wore a business suit, and also black boots and rubber gloves. "I think, that we have captured Pikachu", Smiled the man.
"Do what you like, I've never liked him", Said Magby. Soonly after Pikachu was shot and thrown away.
"What about.... Mudkip?"
Lots of swearing. Mudkip shot.
"Burmy?"
"No"
"ELEKID?!"
"Absolutely *@!$ not". The floor was stained in blood and rotting bodies. There was silence. A flicker. The lights whent out in a dash. Magby Lept towards the switch and turned it on. Len was safely, or in fact quite the opposite, in the mans hands. Magby shivered.
"So, here is your decision. You either attempt to save your friend, and be shot. Or, you can attempt to stop the timebomb, which also Involves shooting", The man grinned in an evil fashion.
"Wait!" Said Ackmed, "Stop! Take me instead!"
"Why?" Said the man.
"I'm juicy"
"Bugger off"
"Oh for heavens sake!" Ackmed Launched himself onto The man, hit him a few times, a few more, then threw him into the wall. "Magby, Stop the bomb!"
"Y-You got it sir!"
"Len, you Finish this guy off!"
"Right away!"
"And I shall Dispose of the leftover weapons and troops!" Ackmed advanced towards the door.
"Wait", Said Hoppip.
"What? You can talk?"
"No, you're the only person that can understand me". Ackmed was Bewildered. "You're courage has impressed me much. The reason you can understand me is that I have a gift for you".
"Gift, What like?"
"You must take the form of me, you were destined to do it"
"Destined since when?"
"I dunno, 6 and a half weeks ago".
"Great, err, thanks!"
"Don't worry. You also get psychic powers and stuff", It said, and with those words, dissappeared. Ackmed, looked around. Taking down the HaP would be alot easier.
Magby gritted his teeth. He pulled at a wire, and sparks flew into the air, Along with a "TZZZAAP". Magby was confused; He'd never seen a spark say TZZZAAP. He opened a twitchy eye. He pulled again. The time changed from 1:00 to 0:30. He had half an hour to stop it. "Oh great, I'm stuffed". He picked up the bomb and sighed.
Len on the other hand was already bleeding to death on the floor of the room. The man grinned his devilish grin, now used 3 times in under 1 chapter. He left the room chuckling an equally devilish Chuckle. As he was leaving, Len slowly got up. Using his last heave of strength, he threw a conveniently placed firebomb. The man burst into flames. The flames attempted to burst into the man, but was killed for breaking the laws of physics. Len got up, he slowly trudged away, but suddenly became giddy. His vision blurred, he lost control of his muscles. His vision darkened. Len could not resist. The more he tried to fight it, more surges of pain and halucinations came. It was too late. He blacked out.
"Magby!" Shouted Ackmed, gasping for breath after much fighting.
"Hoppip?"
"Its me, Ackmed".
"What the-
"No time to explain, we must get Len!". Hoppip beckoned Magby to a great monsterous machine, revealing many Cogs and steal rope."This is my kind of vehicle!" Said Magby. Still holding the Bomb, he Bulldozed all objects in his way. At full speed Magby charged through each room, until coming across Len. The two stood in silence. Slowly and carerfully, they took Len into the vehicle. "He is suffering major blood loss, we need help Immediately!" Said Ackmed. Magby pressed the teleport button. "Where would you like to travel sir?"
"Biggest ocean you can find!-
"What?!" Said Ackmed. "You'd better know what you're doing". Magby did not answer. They teleported.
"I'll be one minute", said Magby. The bomb read 00:05. Magby thrust it into the ocean. There was a hault. KABLAM!!! Magby clapped his hands. "See, no harm caused at all", smiled Magby. The machine left... A few seconds later, 5 miles of dead Sealife rose above the ocean.
Chapter 5-The past is behind us- Coming soon! Everybody else who signed up WILL BE in this chapter.
Cool! The only thing that I can comment on is that you dont exactly what happens. When hoppip is swiched to Achmed you just had Hoppip say it was going to happen. You should describe it happening or somehting like that. Im no good at examples...
O well Cant wait for the next chapter!
O well Cant wait for the next chapter!
Thats because its not really important how it happenned, it'd be irrelevant to add it.
Thanks Muckster, By the way you and Thingy are in Chapter 5.
Thanks Muckster, By the way you and Thingy are in Chapter 5.
Chapter 5-the past is behind us
"Bloody hell!" Roared the man as he fell off a building. Magby frowned. He wasn't used to anybody roaring around him. He usually started swearing at them and they'd quiten down. But they didn't stop. They kept going, and a pile of bodies towered until people could no longer jump because they'd hit it. Magby frowned again. Len frowned. Ackmed frowned. Everybody seemed to frown this time. People and pokemon alike came out of their houses to stop, look, frown a bit more, frown again, and look. Magby was very dissapointed; He did not know why they were all frowning. Magby Looked a second time. He frowned again. But he kept it. A giant chair hovered over the street. Inside it was a man dressed like a preist in pink robes. His chair, a metalic one, lowered down blowing away many leaves and people. "Greetings, pokemon", He giggled, childishly but as if it were more of a cackle. "All of you pathetic little creatures are now worthless too us. We will not let the gem take over. I am looking for a certain one of you. And unfortunately I shall KILL every last one of you to find him!!" The man screamed a horrible, deafening scream, then whipped out two rifles. The pokemon gasped. Magby gasped even more. He started firing at random, screaming a bit more. Magby jumped into the chair and wrestled the man to the floor of the chair. He groaned, then grinned, and Slugged a huge punch at Magby. Letting loose a painful wail, Magby was sent like a fly into the floor of the street. Len focused. He looked sternly, then leapt into the air and Thrusted the chair. The chair span crazily, doing small robotic spasms at the same time. The chair when out of course and the Man fell onto the floor. Somebody felt as if he should be with the other dead bodies, but daren't ask. "That, was a government official. We're going", Magby beckoned the other two to follow.
Magby of course, hadn't a clue where he was going, but instead walked around the town in fun little triangles. "Where should we be going?"Pondered Ackmed.
"He's right, we've been doing this for three months", Replied Len. Magby stopped and thought. A cloud of smoke puffed from one of his ears. "We are going, to the gem", He replied. They were going to ask about the triangles. But they did not. Magby was in a foul, awful mood, with black lining under his eyes, and a very short temper. They said nothing. Magby thought, hit somebody, took their car and left.
The cavern wasn't pretty this time, it seemed instead forbidden and unmerciful. Huge stalagmites and terrifying bugs haunted the area. It was not long before they came across the gem. "Thou hast found I?" Spoke the gem in a loud, Booming royal voice.
"Umm, yeah. We need some answers about the big human extinction thing".
"And how hast you found thy plan name?"Magby stared bewildered. The gem continued, "All humans shall be pokemon. But that is only a few weeks away. The humans are going to destroy me if...", He stopped, "The war is near. Humans against Pokemon. If we lose, we are all doomed. But now, you must leave and join your army team. We are all fighting this, including you", The gem turned black. Horrifying streeks of Inky purple slivered down Its surface. Magby nodded. "Come on guys, we're going".
It was a dark gloomy cavern. In the small room were Magby, Len, Ackmed, a Grimer and Glaceon. "So, I guess this is the rest of our squad!" Said Grimer, welcoming the three. They all shook hands, then looked infront of them. "HaP forces are coming closer", Moaned Grimer, "this is our turn. Come on my fellow warriors, charge!" Grimer rushed in. Glaceon next. Ackmed, then Len. Magby stopped. He didn't plan any of this. Finally, he gritted his teeth, then rushed in.
Chapter 6-The eternal war-Coming soonish! This is it, and the gap between this world and the story afterwards.
"Bloody hell!" Roared the man as he fell off a building. Magby frowned. He wasn't used to anybody roaring around him. He usually started swearing at them and they'd quiten down. But they didn't stop. They kept going, and a pile of bodies towered until people could no longer jump because they'd hit it. Magby frowned again. Len frowned. Ackmed frowned. Everybody seemed to frown this time. People and pokemon alike came out of their houses to stop, look, frown a bit more, frown again, and look. Magby was very dissapointed; He did not know why they were all frowning. Magby Looked a second time. He frowned again. But he kept it. A giant chair hovered over the street. Inside it was a man dressed like a preist in pink robes. His chair, a metalic one, lowered down blowing away many leaves and people. "Greetings, pokemon", He giggled, childishly but as if it were more of a cackle. "All of you pathetic little creatures are now worthless too us. We will not let the gem take over. I am looking for a certain one of you. And unfortunately I shall KILL every last one of you to find him!!" The man screamed a horrible, deafening scream, then whipped out two rifles. The pokemon gasped. Magby gasped even more. He started firing at random, screaming a bit more. Magby jumped into the chair and wrestled the man to the floor of the chair. He groaned, then grinned, and Slugged a huge punch at Magby. Letting loose a painful wail, Magby was sent like a fly into the floor of the street. Len focused. He looked sternly, then leapt into the air and Thrusted the chair. The chair span crazily, doing small robotic spasms at the same time. The chair when out of course and the Man fell onto the floor. Somebody felt as if he should be with the other dead bodies, but daren't ask. "That, was a government official. We're going", Magby beckoned the other two to follow.
Magby of course, hadn't a clue where he was going, but instead walked around the town in fun little triangles. "Where should we be going?"Pondered Ackmed.
"He's right, we've been doing this for three months", Replied Len. Magby stopped and thought. A cloud of smoke puffed from one of his ears. "We are going, to the gem", He replied. They were going to ask about the triangles. But they did not. Magby was in a foul, awful mood, with black lining under his eyes, and a very short temper. They said nothing. Magby thought, hit somebody, took their car and left.
The cavern wasn't pretty this time, it seemed instead forbidden and unmerciful. Huge stalagmites and terrifying bugs haunted the area. It was not long before they came across the gem. "Thou hast found I?" Spoke the gem in a loud, Booming royal voice.
"Umm, yeah. We need some answers about the big human extinction thing".
"And how hast you found thy plan name?"Magby stared bewildered. The gem continued, "All humans shall be pokemon. But that is only a few weeks away. The humans are going to destroy me if...", He stopped, "The war is near. Humans against Pokemon. If we lose, we are all doomed. But now, you must leave and join your army team. We are all fighting this, including you", The gem turned black. Horrifying streeks of Inky purple slivered down Its surface. Magby nodded. "Come on guys, we're going".
It was a dark gloomy cavern. In the small room were Magby, Len, Ackmed, a Grimer and Glaceon. "So, I guess this is the rest of our squad!" Said Grimer, welcoming the three. They all shook hands, then looked infront of them. "HaP forces are coming closer", Moaned Grimer, "this is our turn. Come on my fellow warriors, charge!" Grimer rushed in. Glaceon next. Ackmed, then Len. Magby stopped. He didn't plan any of this. Finally, he gritted his teeth, then rushed in.
Chapter 6-The eternal war-Coming soonish! This is it, and the gap between this world and the story afterwards.
He's in the next chapter more .
The next might take longer to write, but I'll be onto it quicker, so just bare with me for about 5 days.
.The next might take longer to write, but I'll be onto it quicker, so just bare with me for about 5 days.