This one would definitely be game-changing, I reckon. In the XY era, it would basically prevent you from being able to retrieve certain cards with VS Seeker or Puzzle of Time, or Dowsing Machine if we go further back to BW. That in and of itself vastly changes how one plays the game and even how one builds a deck.
Do I like the mechanic? I think I do. It’s interesting, sure, and unlike anything PCL has ever really done before. Creativity points for that. I’m hesitant because it’s just
so out there that you actually need quite a few clauses to prevent weird ruling things from coming up, and would clearly have quite the impact on a metagame. But yeah, I applaud the creativity, and so I reckon I do like the card.
Wording errors:
- Need a clause specifying whether all Trainer cards are put in the Lost Zone
when you play them or
any time you would discard one, such as through the effect of Professor Sycamore or Ultra Ball. [-3 points]
- A Stadium card addresses both players equally–– “Each player”, not “you and your opponent”. [-2 points]
- “trainers” -> “Trainer cards” [-2 points]
- Don’t need “now”, because the Stadium isn’t a single-use thing. [-1 point]
- Capitalize Lost Zone. [-1 point]
- “discarded” -> “discarding” [-1 point]
Fonts and Placement errors:
- Card name is weirdly off in terms of placement––should be all the way on the left, and vertically centered in the name bar. [-2 points]
- Margins for effect text aren’t wide enough. [-2 points]
- All bottom text (Illus, etc) is off in both font and placement. [-3 points]
Creativity/Originality: 12/15
(Cool new design space.)
Wording: 5/15
(Quite a few errors.)
Fonts and Placement: 3/10
(Looks eyeballed.)
Believability/Playability: 4/5
(Cautious point docked for the effect being kinda out-there.)
Aesthetics: 3/5
(Seems fine.)
Total: 27/50