Originally I was going to comment on most of the points in the review of my card, but it ended up far too long on the Word document!
Instead I'll just summarise it in a series of phrases:
"I need to stop making silly errors!"
"D-did I just seriously slip up on my english!?"
"I felt the clause had to be included as this attack's effect carries over to the opponent's turn, and wanted to clarify when and when it doesn't 'stay' in effect."
"At least the mechanic behind the attack sounds workable!"
"I just left an infinite loop (even...two in fact), that's horrendous - how did I overlook that (them)?"
"The owner rule would be broken if it were the same for all of the owner's Pokémon, I agree! And of course, need to fix wording."
The final verdict stung! I'll have my vengeance, Heavenly Spoon! By not... doing as badly in March. Maybe. No promises. Fingers crossed.
On a different note, I was merely saying that in jest BigfootAUS
, I'm still making those cards. Speaking of which, I need to get to the illustrations soon, the spoilers themselves already done.
The full-art cards are awesome as usual - I already commented about it on your profile but it bears repeating here that I love the mew card you made for me, from concept to execution.
It was a fun round, congrats to the winners!
EDIT:
Heavenly Spoon said:
If there were an artwork criteria PMJ & Athena would just win every time, you don't want to live in that world.
Ah that's not so bad, even if they are consistent in that aspect it's still worth mentioning how good the art on their cards are. Right? Right?